Crystal Prison: The Dazzling Song of Retribution

by HeirofHades
Dusk Shine rested, barely holding on after the Games. Retribution blazed his soul. He can't allow them to simply walk from it all. His loved ones feared what he's becoming while other enjoyed it. Two paths lay before Dusk Shine. What will he pick?

Rage fueled Dusk Shine's soul after the Games as he rested. A choice must be made. Leave CPA & start anew at CHS, or take his revenge. It's a simple answer. New and familiar faces appeared leaving his morals conflicted and blazing hot. Lies will be told. Bonds broken. Hidden secrets are revealed for all to witness. For what? To hear that sweet siren song of retribution

Welcome to part 2. The first story was rough which I'll take full accountability for. Hopefully I can go back and rework some of those earlier chapters.

Now I can clear a few plot-holes and expand on various concepts and dynamics. As the title implies, we're meeting in THE DAZZLINGS. Other minor characters will appear and have a prominent role but you'll have to win and see for yourself

Teen
Incomplete
Profanity
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Alternate Universe
Human
Romance
Drama
Equestria Girls
Violence
 
TDSP

23332 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

4 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 2024-08-08 13:32:52 UTC
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  2. Chapter 2 2024-09-02 15:33:35 UTC
  3. Chapter 3 2024-10-25 10:41:07 UTC
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  4. Chapter 4 2025-02-13 23:09:52 UTC
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