The Warehouse
Chapter 6 - Twilight's Slumber
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I was grateful to Melvin and the golf cart for getting me and Twilight most of the way to my car from the trailer yard. However, climbing down from the back of the golf cart and carrying Twilight in my arms to my car didn’t have the same feel as having carried her to the breakroom yesterday.
A lot had happened in the last 24 hours, and I was far more emotionally attached to her than I felt any right being. Her extremely shallow breathing and complete dead weight haunted me as surely as if I had failed to save her life mere minutes ago, though I honestly was probably still in shock about the whole ordeal. I was hyper focused on the situation and would be until my adrenaline stopped pumping as hard, but I was also now worried about being exhausted from the use of all that adrenaline, especially since I don’t think I can justify sleeping while taking care of her. She would need me to be there in the slightest change of her condition.
Loading Twilight into the backseat of my car felt like loading a sick animal to take home, or to take to the vet. Neither the physical nor emotional sensations felt right to me given the strong feelings I had for her, though I was hesitant to call it love. Her coat was damp from the extreme amount of sweat that she had experienced before passing out and her mane had lost its luster. Her breathing was swallow, but at least seemed even and not in distress.
Saving her life was a miracle given my limited medical training, though part of me wished I could simply take her to a hospital, even though I knew they wouldn’t be able to do much for her other than maybe give her an I.V. Taking her to a veterinary clinic might help her more, but it would be demeaning to treat her like an animal. Equestria had yet to set up Pony Hospitals with Pony Medical Staff, which now, more than ever, felt like a mistake. I would have to try to feed her, give her water and take care of her other needs.
Driving home was the longest 45 minutes of my life, and that was separate from having to tell Sara that Twilight was hurt, or sick. She would be very upset. No less upset than I was, I imagined.
Carrying Twilight from the car felt heavier than before, not just physically but emotionally. The wheelchair ramp on my trailer, usually a reminder of past tenants, now seemed like a godsend. As I navigated up the incline, Twilight's unconscious form cradled against my chest, I couldn't shake the feeling of how fragile she seemed.
Getting through the door was a challenge. For a split second, I considered slinging her over my shoulder like a sack of potatoes, but the thought of treating her so carelessly, even unconsciously, made my stomach turn. I managed to fumble with the lock, my arms straining to keep her secure.
Once inside, I made a beeline for the daybed, laying her down as gently as if she were made of glass. The care I took surprised even me, and I had to take a steadying breath. Grabbing some towels, I placed them strategically under her, my mind already racing with the practicalities of what lay ahead.
I knew what was coming - the unglamorous reality of caring for an unconscious patient. No catheter, no proper medical equipment, just me and my limited knowledge of pony physiology. The thought of dealing with her bodily functions made me wince, not out of disgust, but out of concern for her dignity. She'd be mortified if she knew, but it had to be done.
This was my job now - medic, caretaker, friend.
Maybe something more, a traitorous part of my mind whispered.
I shoved that thought aside. I'd do this with all the respect and professionalism I could muster, even as her closeness and vulnerability stirred feelings I wasn't ready to confront.
This whole situation was like a test I wasn’t ready to take. Under the right conditions, I could be a licensed practitioner nurse, but I had never challenged the test for it that Texas allowed Army medics to apply their practical experience for a competency placement based on experience.
Being a nurse wouldn’t be an easier job, but perhaps more fulfilling since I liked helping people. It would pay more, but also required longer hours which would make it harder to take care of my daughter. It was one of those situations where having a wife would have greatly helped me.
Thinking about it deeper, I think I could be a good nurse, but I wasn’t sure if I could be a good nurse for Twilight. Nurses aren’t supposed to love their patients. There are so many movies about why it’s a bad idea. Just looking at Twilight stirred my heart and brought back all those little moments, the teasing… and then, there was that other elephant in the room. Her ‘implied consent’ and ‘trusting me’, along with her ‘permission’ for me to do anything I wanted. That was dangerous power in the wrong hands.
With all the prep work done, I knew I had to do my first check-up. It felt weird, given the circumstances. My mind kept returning to Twilight's permission about her implied consent while she was out. I used to enjoy initiating sex with my wife while she was asleep, and my wife loved being woken up that way. Twilight being asleep stirred long buried memories that were going to make this harder, not easier.
Trying to stay professional, I carefully lifted her tail to check for any issues. What I saw threw me for a loop. Her mare bits were... pulsing? Like, almost spasming. It was as if just moving her tail had somehow turned her on. I'm no expert on horse anatomy, so I had to look it up.
What I found hit me like a punch to the gut. A few quick searches and cross checking to make sure I wasn’t wrong, confirmed something I’m not sure helped me in any way.
Twilight was in heat. I’m not a pony, so I’m not sure if I’d be able to smell it, if it had a smell. I wasn’t sure if pony pheromones would affect me, though it sure as hell explained why and how I was so attracted to her so quickly. I wouldn’t be able to bathe her while she was asleep, maybe a sponge bath… so that meant these pheromones were going to get stronger the longer she went without a bath.
Between my desire, my loneliness, her permission and her pheromones… would I really be able to resist her? Did I even want to resist her? Blaming her heat, or her pheromones, would be an easy justification to using her implied consent, but it wouldn’t be true. Not entirely true?
I couldn’t do it. No… well, physically, I probably could, but I’d hate myself afterwards. Implied consent or not… I’m not sure Twilight would ever forgive me. The daybed was the right height… I’d just have to pull her flank to edge, lift her tail… and it’s off to the races…
Were her pheromones even a real consideration? I decided to look it up on my phone and discovered that scientifically speaking, pheromones had a scent, but humans couldn’t smell other humans’ pheromones, in most cases. Could I smell Twilight’s pheromones? Could I do a little test, just to see, um, for science?
Needing to know for sure, I gently lifted her tail a second time, and I leaned in close. I could see her mare bits pulsing again with desire, even unconscious, and I leaned close and gently sniffed, seeing if maybe there was a smell I could pick up on.
Her mare bits were moist and smelled sweet, perhaps the sweetest thing I had ever smelled… like the most beautiful flower to have ever existed. I felt my loins stir at the possibility of long withheld satisfaction and I stepped away, breathing hard. Okay, the pheromones are real… I better learn to like cold showers, and quick. That was too close for ethical comfort, God help me.
What the hell is wrong with me… she needs my tender loving care, not my physical love.
My thoughts turned a little darker as I considered the other half of that coin.
She didn't really 'love me' - her body was just screaming at her to mate, and she probably didn't even get it herself. Maybe she hadn't been around stallions much during mating season back home. I mean, I knew she was an 'adult' for her kind, as all of the Equestrian Exchange Workers were adults, but now I was wondering if she was younger than I thought.
I don’t recall her ever telling me her age and guys aren’t supposed to ask. What if this was her first heat? God, that made me feel even worse, like I was taking advantage of some confused kid going through puberty, no matter how old she actually was.
The realization of how little I knew about Equestrian biology forced me to consider deeper implications. What if their maturity rates were completely different from humans? What if Twilight was younger - or older - than I'd assumed? The gaps in my knowledge suddenly felt dangerous, making my attraction to her even more complicated.
I sighed, running a hand through my hair. Honor might be a poor reward for resisting temptation, but it was all I had to cling to right now. The memory of her scent lingered, threatening to overwhelm my resolve. The desire to lean down and partake again was almost impossible to resist, yet I knew that if I didn’t, I would eventually act on it. All that flirting, those sexy little moments - how much was really her, and how much was just biology? Worse still, how much of my teasing was also a reaction to pheromones that I didn’t know I was experiencing?
Texas was hot… like 9 months out of the year, and a lot of male human pheromones are in sweat, which is why it’s described as musky. I also seemed to sweat more than average man, so it left me wondering if Twilight was also reacting to my pheromones? Could we forge a relationship that went past heat/mating season? I sure hoped so… however, it seemed self-evident that her being in season was confusing the issue of whether this was love, or simple lust.
I'd come dangerously close to crossing a line I couldn't uncross. The fact that I'd even considered it, let alone could act on that curiosity, left me shaken. I stood by my experiment… I needed to know, and now I do. Harmless teasing suddenly felt like a slippery slope I was teetering on the edge of.
But you know what? In the end, it didn't change much. She was still my roommate, still my friend, and right now, she needed me. So, I pushed down all those complicated feelings, gritted my teeth, and got to work.
* * *
Tim
I didn’t like the idea of leaving Twilight alone, no more than I thought I’d be able to justify a nap, but I had to go pick up Sara. With me being home early today, there was no need for her to go to daycare, which would at least save me a little money. I went to the school 20 minutes early and explained to the staff that I would be picking up Sara at the end of class for the rest of the week, since I was off from work.
Sara, herself, was confused to see me, but was happy to go straight home rather than go to daycare. I fastened her into her car seat and got back into the car. Sara looked at the front passenger seat and looked confused.
“Can we go to the park? Where’s pony?”
I sighed and rubbed my face. “Sara… Twilight got hurt today. She’s at home asleep. I’m going to have to take care of care for a few days so I’m going to need you on your best behavior, okay?”
Sara teared up as only a 4-year-old could. “Let’s go home!”
The drive home was less than 5 minutes, and we got inside the house. Sara went straight to the daybed and jumped up onto it. She gasped when she saw Twilight asleep on the bed.
Sara looked up at me with wide eyes. “She’s like a princess. Sleeping Beauty. Maybe if you kiss her, she’ll wake up!”
I frowned. “I don’t think it’s going to work like that, Sara…”
Sara bit her lip. “Kiss her, kiss her, kiss her!”
I shushed her, hoping not to overly disturb Twilight’s rest. “Okay, fine. I’ll kiss her.”
Twilight had given me permission to do whatever I wanted, but given what I knew now, it didn’t make me feel any better. I leaned close, my heart racing. The memory of Twilight's pulsing mare bits and the undeniable scent of her pheromones flashed through my mind, making me hesitate.
This wasn't just a fairy tale kiss – it was dangerously close to taking advantage. As my lips touched Twilight's, I felt a jolt of electricity run through me. Her lips were soft, inviting, and it took all my willpower to keep the kiss chaste in front my daughter, who seemed intent to make sure I was doing it correctly. I pulled back, my breath slightly ragged. For a moment, I understood why fairy tale princes always seemed so eager to kiss sleeping princesses. I had to remind myself that this was real life, with real consequences. Either way, I would have to take responsibility, as there was no way I’d be able to blame my daughter for this.
Sara frowned when I pulled back and Twilight didn’t wake up. “That’s not a real kiss. Use tongue.”
I was shocked by my daughter’s words. Sara's insistence on using tongue made me flush. If only she knew how tempting that idea was, and how dangerous. “Sara! Why would you say that!”
Sara grumbled. “You used to use tongue with mommy. Only a real kiss can wake a princess!”
I smirked. “I can’t believe you remember that. Did Prince Charming use tongue on Sleeping Beauty?”
Sara looked away. “No…”
I shook my head, “I’m sorry darling, but sometimes these things have to take their course. Humans don’t have the same magic as the ponies so I’ll just have to do the best I can.”
Sara nodded. “Okay… I guess I’ll play in my room. I hope she gets better soon.”
As Sara walked away, I whispered to myself, “I hope so too, kid.” My eyes lingered on Twilight's form, her chest rising and falling with each breath. The memory of our brief kiss tingled on my lips, a reminder of the fine line I was walking between caretaker and something more.
I knew this was just the beginning. Caring for Twilight was going to test my resolve in ways I hadn't imagined. With her in heat, and me acutely aware of it, every interaction would be charged with unspoken tension.
* * *
Tim
This was the longest Tuesday ever. The house was still. It carried a sadness that was hard to put into words. Sara played for a few hours while I was taking care of Twilight.
To no surprise, Twilight did have a bowel movement that soiled the towels I had put down. Lifting her tail to clean her up with baby wipes proved to be very clinical for me, as it was easier to see her as a patient at this moment instead of as a friend or potential partner. It might not have been the correct mindset, but it certainly made it easier to deal with the emotional toil. I was worried about losing control of my emotions and becoming a crying mess. I cried for weeks after my wife died, though I managed to do so at night when Sara couldn’t see it.
In a way, Twilight being alive made this worse. I had to take care of her, I could do no less. The close contact with her mare bits felt increasingly risky but at least the smell of cleaning her up masked the scent of her pheromones. The plans we made in the car this morning before the accident haunted me. God, was it really just this morning? It felt like a whole week had passed since this morning.
She might still want to go through with it once she recovered but I was unsure if I should. If the accident hadn’t happened, I’d probably be balls deep in her right now… and the thought made me sick to my stomach. I barely knew her, and she would be leaving in 6 months.
I didn’t understand how I could put myself through so much emotional turmoil. How could I fall in love with someone I knew was leaving? All those mare’s touch jokes gave way to a subconscious and lewd admission that I just needed a mare’s bits. I’d probably have to settle for a beer and a cold shower, except that I couldn’t drink while taking care of her.
I tried to shake away both my morbid and displaced sexy thoughts, with limited success. I was pleased that I was able to trample down most of my sexy desires while taking care of her, though a few stray thoughts haunted me.
After careful consideration, I decided that under no circumstances would I have sex with her while she was asleep, implied consent be damned. If there was going to be a first time, I wanted her to be an active player, anything less would be taking advantage of her, and I couldn’t do that.
After replacing the towels and cleaning her up, I checked and was pleased that with triple layering, she didn’t soil the mattress. I kept up that practice of triple layering the towels and wondered if my washing machine could handle hospital style laundry…
I knew that Twilight would have to eat something to recover, so I opted to heat up a pure liquid vegetable broth that was normally used in recipes for stews and spoon fed her. Heating up the broth took no time at all, and I sat beside her with the bowl and a spoon. Coaching her mouth open, I found it easy to position the spoon so that liquid went down her throat without choking her or making her gag and without spilling any of it.
Watching her eat without her waking up had my heart in my throat. I watched her shallow breathing closely, knowing that it would be very easy for her to choke in these early stages of recovery.
Finishing feeding her and looking at the empty bowl, I had to wonder if her suckling reflexes were still intact…
No, bad, you must take care of her, remember?
Oral wasn’t sex, according to Bill Clinton…
No, bad, don’t try to justify it.
This was going to a be long however many days…
Sara came out of her room for dinner, looking over Twilight with a morbid sadness that no 4-year-old should have. I made her another bowl of Mac and Cheese, and she ate quietly. I made my rounds and did chores almost like I was just hoping that I could kill time until time to do the next task.
Sara finished eating and asked me a question. “Can I watch a movie and sleep on the daybed with Twilight?”
I nodded. “I don’t see why not, but you should know that she might have an accident near you. Why do you want sleep near her?”
Sara nodded bravely. “I had accidents too. Twilight doesn't need to feel bad. And... I wanna give her lots of hugs. Hugs make everything better!”
My eyes teared up at the thoughtfulness of my daughter. “Okay darling. We’ll both do our part to help Twilight, okay?
Sara smiled as she climbed beside Twilight and hugged her. “Okay. Let’s watch Moana.”
As the movie played, I felt the weight of exhaustion settling into my bones. My eyes burned, my muscles ached, and my stomach growled, reminding me I hadn't eaten since... when? This morning? I certainly didn’t eat lunch… Time blurred together. But I couldn't sleep. Not now. Not while Twilight needed constant care. I'd have to stay awake, vigilant, ready to respond to any change in her condition.
I settled into the armchair next to the daybed, my body protesting every movement. From here, I could watch both Twilight's shallow breathing and Sara's eventual drift into sleep. My mind raced with worries about the coming days, even weeks. How long would Twilight be like this? What if she didn't wake up? What would I tell her family, her world? And if she did wake up, how would this change things between us?
I shook my head, trying to clear these thoughts. My military training kicked in, reminding me to focus on the mission at hand.
Focus on the now. You saved her and she needs you.
It was both comforting that she needed me and terrified that I couldn’t afford to fail her. But this was going to be one hour at a time. One task at a time. That's how I'd get through this. As Moana's journey unfolded on the screen, I prepared myself for my own long night ahead, armed with coffee and determination. Twilight needed me, and I wouldn't let her down.
* * *
Wednesday
Tim
I stirred from my vigil in the armchair, realizing it was morning with my alarm clock going off at its standard time. I don’t think I fell asleep, but I was at least zoned out. Sara was still curled up next to Twilight on the daybed. I gently shook her shoulder.
“Sara, sweetie, it's time to get ready for school.”
Sara's eyes fluttered open, then immediately filled with worry as she looked at Twilight. “I'm not going,” she stated firmly.
“Sara, honey, you have to…”
“No!” she interrupted, her voice quivering. “What if Twilight wakes up and I'm not here? What if she... what if she doesn't wake up at all?”
I sighed, perching on the edge of the daybed. “Sweetheart, Twilight's condition isn't going to change in just a few hours.”
“You don't know that,” Sara mumbled, clinging to Twilight's mane.
I rubbed my face, feeling the stubble of a missed shave. "Okay, how about this? You can stay home today, but tomorrow you're going back to school. Deal?"
Sara nodded reluctantly. Throughout the day, Sara rarely left Twilight's side, occasionally reading to her or brushing her mane. I focused on Twilight's care, fighting waves of exhaustion.
"Daddy, your eyes are all sleepy," Sara said, watching me change Twilight's towels again. "You look like a zombie."
I managed a weak smile. “Thanks, kiddo. I'm just tired.”
“Why don't you sleep? I can watch Twilight.”
“That's sweet, but it's not your job. I need to be awake in case anything changes.”
Sara frowned. “But what if you get sick too?”
Her words hit hard. I knelt down, meeting her eyes. “I promise I'm being careful. Now, how about you draw Twilight a picture? I'm sure she'd love to see it when she wakes up.”
As Sara busied herself with crayons, still sitting close to Twilight, I checked Twilight's vitals for the umpteenth time.
“You've got to wake up soon,” I whispered. “I don't know how much longer I can do this.”
Sara's voice piped up from her spot next to Twilight. “Daddy? Can we have pizza for dinner?”
I glanced at the clock, surprised to see it was already late afternoon. “Sure, sweetie. Why don't you help me order?”
As we scrolled through toppings on my phone, I felt a moment of normalcy. But Twilight's unconscious form right next to us was a constant reminder that nothing was normal anymore.
“Daddy?” Sara asked as we finished our order. “Is Twilight going to be okay?”
I pulled her into a hug, my own fears bubbling just beneath the surface. “I hope so, sweetheart. I really hope so.”
* * *
Thursday
Tim
Thursday morning arrived with a hazy, dreamlike quality. I hadn't slept in over 48 hours, and the world seemed to blur at the edges. I popped another caffeine pill, washing it down with lukewarm coffee.
“Sara,” I called softly, gently shaking her awake. She was still curled up next to Twilight on the daybed. “Time for school, kiddo.”
Sara's eyes opened, immediately filling with determination. “I'm staying home again.”
I frowned, remembering our deal. “Sara, we agreed you'd go back to school today.”
"I changed my mind," she said stubbornly, clutching Twilight's mane. “What if she needs me?”
I sighed, running a hand through my unwashed hair. “Honey, we talked about this. Twilight's condition…”
“You don't know!” Sara shouted, startling me. “You don't know anything! What if she wakes up and thinks we abandoned her?”
I felt my patience wearing thin, lack of sleep fraying my nerves. I took a deep breath, falling back on my Army training to keep calm.
“Okay, Sara. One more day. But tomorrow, you're going to school, no arguments. Understood?”
Sara nodded, her lower lip trembling.
The day unfolded differently than Wednesday. I focused on deep cleaning the house, hoping the physical activity would help keep me alert. Sara, perhaps sensing my mood, was quieter, alternating between coloring and reading softly to Twilight.
Around midday, I was scrubbing the kitchen floor when Sara's voice broke through my fatigue-induced haze. “Daddy? Can I help?”
I looked up, seeing her standing in the doorway, a determined look on her face. “Sure, sweetie. Want to dry the dishes?”
As we worked side by side, Sara spoke up again. “I'm sorry I yelled earlier.”
I paused, touched by her apology. “It's okay, honey. We're all a little stressed right now.”
“Is that why you're not sleeping?” she asked, her eyes wide with concern.
I nodded, choosing honesty. “Partly. But mainly, I need to stay awake to take care of Twilight. It's what soldiers do - we keep watch when others can't. I don’t want to lose her. You can’t possibly know how it feels to lose someone that you love.”
Sara seemed to mull this over as she carefully dried a plate, but her eyes teared up. “You mean… like how when we lost mommy?”
My breath caught in my throat while I pulled Sara close, trying very hard to hide my tears. “Oh Sara… I guess you do understand. I’m so sorry, baby.”
She sniffled. “I love you, daddy. We will do our best! Can I be a soldier too? To help Twilight?”
I smiled, feeling a surge of pride. “You already are, kiddo. You're being so brave.”
As evening approached, I heated some soup for dinner. Sara insisted on helping feed Twilight, carefully holding the spoon as I guided her hand.
“See?” she said triumphantly. “I can help take care of her too!”
After dinner, as Sara settled in next to Twilight for the night, she looked up at me. “Daddy? Will you tell us a story? Maybe Twilight can hear it too.”
Exhausted as I was, I couldn't refuse. I sat in the armchair, wracking my brain for a suitable tale.
“Once upon a time,” I began, my voice rough with fatigue, “there was a brave little girl and her daddy, who were taking care of a magical pony princess...”
As I wove the story, I watched Sara's eyes grow heavy. Even as she drifted off to sleep, I continued the tale, hoping that somehow, somewhere in her unconscious state, Twilight could hear us too.
* * *
Friday
Tim
Friday dawned, and I felt like I was moving through molasses. My vision blurred; my thoughts scattered. I'd been awake for 72 hours straight, sustained only by caffeine pills, coffee, and sheer willpower.
I shuffled to the daybed, where Sara was already awake, stroking Twilight's mane. “Morning, sweetie. Ready for school?”
To my surprise, Sara nodded. “I made a promise,” she said solemnly.
Pride swelled in my chest, momentarily cutting through the fog of exhaustion. “That's my girl.”
I moved to grab my keys, but as I reached for them, my hand trembled violently. The realization hit me like a bucket of cold water - I was in no condition to drive.
“Sara,” I called, my voice hoarse. “Change of plans. We're both staying home today.”
Sara's brow furrowed. “But you said…”
“I know, honey. But Daddy's too tired to drive safely. We'll try again Monday, okay?”
She nodded, looking relieved and concerned in equal measure.
As I was deciding what to do first, my phone rang. I fished it from the bookshelf where I had placed it last night to charge and I was surprised to see Melvin calling me.
“Hello, boss. What’s up?”
Melvin’s gruff voice answered from the other end of the line. “Just calling to check up on Twilight. How is she?”
I rubbed my face as I sighed. “She’s still sleeping. It’s been nearly 72 hours since the accident. She’s eating and drinking, with my help, and she doesn’t seem to be in pain, but she hasn’t woken up. I might have to call the EWE office and ask for advice in how to care for her or on where to take her if she doesn’t wake up soon. I don’t want to have to report the accident though. I’m not sure how it would affect the company.”
I could hear Melvin’s frown. “Do the best you can for her. If she’s not awake by Monday, we’ll have no choice but to get her more professional help and report the accident. Keep me updated.”
The line went dead before I could say ‘yes, boss’ but it didn’t matter. I had no idea if I could stay up another 3 days and I was afraid to try. Being too tired to take care of her properly might be worse than not taking care of her at all.
The day unfolded in a haze. I focused on quiet, repetitive tasks – folding laundry, organizing drawers – anything to keep my hands busy and my mind alert. Sara, sensing my state, took on the role of little caretaker, bringing me water and reminding me to eat.
In the late evening, after dinner and nearing Sara’s bedtime and getting closer to another sleepless night, I found myself staring blankly at Twilight, my thoughts a jumble.
Sara's voice cut through the fog. “Daddy? Why don't you sing to Twilight? You always sing when you're happy.”
I blinked, surprised by the suggestion. “I'm not sure I remember any songs right now, sweetie.”
“That's okay,” Sara said, patting my hand. “I'll teach you one.” And with that, she launched into a slightly off-key rendition of “You Are My Sunshine.”
Chuckling weakly, I joined in, our voices blending in the quiet room. As we sang, I felt a slight stirring beneath my hand where it rested on Twilight's flank.
My heart leapt. “Sara,” I whispered, “go get me a glass of water, quick.”
As Sara scampered off, I leaned closer to Twilight. “Come on,” I murmured. “Come back to us.”
Sara returned with the water just as Twilight's eyes fluttered open. Relief washed over me, so powerful it nearly knocked me off my feet.
“Hey,” I said softly, helping Twilight take a sip of water. “Welcome back.”
Twilight blinked, her gaze focusing on me. “Tim?” she croaked. “What happened?”
I smiled, exhaustion momentarily forgotten. “It's a long story. But you're okay now. You're safe.”
Sara climbed onto the daybed, wrapping her arms around Twilight's neck. “We missed you so much!”
As Twilight nuzzled Sara, her eyes met mine again. The gratitude and affection in her gaze made my heart swell. In that moment, despite my exhaustion, despite the challenges ahead, I knew everything would be alright.
* * *
Twilight
The sound of off-key singing stirred something within me. In Equestria, we know music as the magic of the soul, born of the desire to spread joy. It's why my friend Pinkie Pie is always singing as she embodies the Element of Laughter. As Tim and Sara's voices reached me, I felt my body absorb that joyful energy, gently pushing me back to consciousness.
I felt as if I had been asleep for longer than I intended, my limbs feeling heavy with disuse. Tim’s immediate offer of water was very appreciated for my parched throat and Sara’s hug was very welcome as I was very fond of the child.
I felt warm and loved. Sara’s hug made me feel giddy. As the warmth of their love washed over me, a chilling memory suddenly surfaced. I panicked as I vaguely remembered thinking that I was having a magic stroke…
Magic Strokes, caused by excessive overuse of magic, were the leading cause of death for unicorns. They primarily affected undertrained magicians attempting complex spells and war mages forced to use magic past normal limits in battle. Of course, neither case applied to my situation here, so what happened?
I stretched stiffly, feeling like I haven’t moved in days, but smiled at Tim. I repeated my question. “What happened?”
Tears streaked down Tim’s face and when he spoke, I found myself stunned by his answer.
“You died. I had to use CPR on you to get you to start breathing again. We nearly lost you.”
My throat went dry as the implications of what had happened sank in. I'd always been confident in my magical abilities, but this... this was different.
“I didn't think the spell would kill me,” I muttered, more to myself than to Tim. “But maybe the density of human metals makes certain spells more dangerous here than in Equestria.”
A chill ran down my spine. I'd have to include a warning about this in my next report home. That is, if I could even send one after depleting my magic so severely. A quick check showed that my magic was working… but how could that be if I depleted it to the point of a Magic Stroke? Unicorns almost never survived that… and yet, Tim saved me…
I looked up at Tim, seeing the worry etched into every line of his face. Guilt washed over me.
“I guess I owe you an apology and a very sincere thank you,” I said softly. “Thank you for saving me, Tim. I mean it.”
Sara, who had been quietly observing, suddenly piped up, “We were so worried, Twilight! I helped take care of you too!”
I smiled at her, touched by her concern. “Thank you, Sara. You're such a brave girl.”
Tim's smile was a pale shadow of his usual grin, exhaustion clear in every movement.
“Twilight...” he began, his voice rough with fatigue, “it's Friday. You've been asleep for 3 days.”
My jaw dropped open, and I stared at him in disbelief. As I really looked at him, I noticed the dark circles under his eyes, the stubble on his chin, the rumpled clothes…
“...And it doesn't look like you've slept in 3 days...” I breathed, realization dawning.
His chuckle was dry, devoid of humor. “I haven't,” he confirmed, running a hand through his unkempt hair. “I had to take care of you, and I couldn't risk what might have happened to you while I was asleep. I was... I was so scared, Twilight. I didn’t want to lose you like I lost my wife.”
My heart swelled at his admission, at the depth of his dedication. Despite my weakened state, I felt a warmth spreading through me that had nothing to do with magic.
Aware of Sara's presence, I kept my tone gentle but meaningful. “You both have been so wonderful. I can't thank you enough.” Then, turning to Sara, I said, “Sweetie, you must be tired after all this excitement. How about you go to bed, and we can have a special day together tomorrow?”
Sara looked hesitant, but Tim backed me up. “That's a great idea. It's past your bedtime, kiddo.”
With a bit more coaxing, we managed to get Sara to her room. I used my magic to tuck her in, just like that first night in Tim's home. I couldn't help but smile at how much had changed since then.
Coming back out into the living room, I felt a new energy coursing through me. My hips swayed as I walked, my tail swishing from side to side in a way I knew would catch Tim's attention. I was feeling frisky, yes, but more than that, I was filled with an overwhelming desire to show Tim just how much his care meant to me. Suddenly, being roommates with benefits was much more appealing and it was time for some serious thanking. I benefited from his care now he could benefit from mine…
I giggled at the thought of being together. I knew I was in heat, and I could smell my own pheromones quite thickly, as it was clear that I hadn’t had a bath in days. To my surprise, I could also smell Tim’s pheromones, as it was likely that he hadn’t showered in as many days as it had been since he had last slept. The scent was musky and deep, like an old book just begging to be held, read and used. I needed that musk. I needed him.
When I emerged from the hallway, my heart full of intentions and desires, I was met with an unexpected sight. Tim was slumped over on the bed, his body finally surrendering to the exhaustion of the past few days. His chest rose and fell with the deep, steady rhythm of sleep, a soft snore escaping his lips.
My initial disappointment at not being able to show my appreciation melted away, replaced by a wave of affection so strong it nearly overwhelmed me. This was my hero, the one who had not only saved my life but had dedicated days to ensuring my recovery. The sight of him, vulnerable and exhausted, made my heart swell with emotions I was only beginning to understand.
Quietly, careful not to wake him, I approached the bed. Using a combination of magic and gentle physical maneuvering, I managed to tuck Tim properly into bed. His face, even in sleep, showed signs of the stress he'd been under, but as I pulled the covers over him, I saw some of that tension ease.
I stood there for a moment, watching him sleep, before making my decision. Gently, I climbed onto the bed and lay down beside him. The warmth of his body next to mine was comforting in a way I couldn't quite describe. I knew we wouldn't be working on Saturday, so there would be time tomorrow to properly thank him, to talk, to figure out what all of this meant for us.
As I settled in, I found myself drawn to him. Leaning over, I placed a soft, chaste kiss on his lips. He stirred slightly but didn't wake. My heart racing, I brought my muzzle close to his ear and whispered words I had never said to anyone outside my family before:
“I love you, Tim.”
The words hung in the air, both thrilling and terrifying. Did I truly understand what I was feeling? Was it too soon? But as I lay there, listening to Tim's steady breathing, feeling the rise and fall of his chest, I knew that whatever this was, it was real and powerful.
With these thoughts swirling in my mind, I closed my eyes, allowing myself to be lulled back to sleep by the rhythm of Tim's breathing and the warmth of his presence. Tomorrow would bring its own challenges, but for now, I was content to simply be here, next to the human who had come to mean so much to me.
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