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The Price of Redemption (Does she even deserve it?)

by chasing the stars
Luna is forced to confront the depth of her past mistakes and the overwhelming burden of her remorse. In this darker take on the episode, Luna’s battle with her inner (?) demons takes a toll that Equestria won’t soon forget.

Luna stared helplessly, her heart wracked with despair as the weight of hundreds of dreams tightened on her horn. How could she forgive herself when the past was an unchangeable testament to her failure? Her thoughts twisted in a spiral of self-recrimination.

Her mistakes loomed large, a shadow she could never outrun.

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Basically the canon:
M6: So, Luna, if the big evil smoke monster feeds off you feeling bad about what your trangressions as a villian, which is all in the past by the way in case you don't know, you just gotta stop feeling bad for what you did! Because we already forgave you!
Luna: Oh goodness gracious, why didn’t I think about that! Okay!

Screw the canon.

Screw cartoon logic. Author decides to deviate from the canon.

This is what really happened.

Teen
Incomplete
Dark
Sad
Drama
Violence
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
PTP

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