A Magic Infestation

by ShopperBrony90

Chapter 5: Flea Madness

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Twilight Sparkle and her friends stepped hoof into Ponyville, only to be met with a chaotic scene. Everypony was scratching like crazy, some even more than Rarity when she had gone insane with frustration. The streets were filled with the sound of groans and cries as ponies desperately tried to relieve the unbearable itching.

Even the Cutie Mark Crusaders—Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo—along with Diamond Tiara and the Cake twins, Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake, were suffering from the relentless itching. Rarity's eyes widened in horror at the sight of her little sister, Sweetie Belle, furiously scratching at her coat. Applejack’s heart sank as she watched Apple Bloom in the same predicament. Pinkie Pie, usually a beacon of joy, felt a deep sadness seeing her baby siblings in such distress.

“Ahhh, I can’t take this itch no more! Applejack’s gotta have some sorta remedy.” Apple Bloom screamed.

“I don’t know if I should use my hooves or a brush or—ow! Maybe just use a mirror.” Sweetie Belle said.

“Scratching’s not helping! We need to think of something fast. Maybe Rainbow Dash has some advice.” Scootaloo shouted, her itching getting worse.

“Daddy’s going to hear about this! I need a solution pronto and I’m not going to scratch. It’s so undignified!” Diamond Tiara whined as she temporarily stopped scratching. Unfortunately, the sensation of itching overtakes her again. She screamed in agony as she scratched away.

Baby Pound Cake and Pumpkin Pie were just crying and throwing a fit as they scratched their tiny bodies, only to find that their misery was getting even worse.

After comforting as many ponies and fillies as they could with creams and ointments, it became clear that nothing was working. The scratching persisted, and soon, the coats of the ponies began to shed, leaving patches of bare skin.


Twilight Sparkle, determined to bring order to the chaos, finally managed to settle down everypony. She then revealed that Rarity was the cause of this mess. Gasps of shock and disgust echoed through the crowd as Rarity hung her head in shame, nodding in agreement.

Fluttershy gently stepped forward to explain what had happened. She recounted their visit to the Everfree Forest the previous day and how, upon their return to Twilight’s castle, Rarity began to feel an itching sensation. Twilight, ever resourceful, had conjured a magic collar to strap on Rarity, hoping to contain whatever was causing the discomfort. She had made similar collars for herself and the rest of her friends, hoping to prevent the spread of the mysterious affliction.

However, Applejack pointed out that the fleas had somehow bitten through those collars. They were more powerful and invincible than anyone had anticipated. When they bit through Rarity’s collar, a wave of magic was released, tearing through the others’ collars as well.

"That wave must've spread all over Ponyville and had hit everypony. Those fleas also must've flown in that wave and landed on you all. It must've also made your bodies completely vulnerable to bites." Twilight explained as everybody started twitching and scratching in pain again.

Twilight, resolute in her quest for a solution, decided to catch one of the fleas in a jar. She knew she needed to take it back to the Everfree Forest to seek the wisdom of Zecora, the zebra known for her extensive knowledge of the forest's flora and fauna. Zecora might be able to shed light on what had caused these fleas to settle on Rarity in the first place.

Leaving her friends in Ponyville to continue calming the townsfolk, Twilight set off towards the Everfree Forest, the jar containing the flea securely fastened in her saddlebag. She was determined to find a cure and bring an end to the itchy nightmare plaguing Ponyville.

To be continued...

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