Eclipsed birth

by Babycord

Rating: everyone
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Other, Original Character, Horror
Length: 1678

Kept coming back

They died.

Then came back.

Then something else came with them.

Published 2024-08-17 04:10:00 UTC
Last updated 2024-08-17 04:10:00 UTC

Chapter 1

It began with a gift.

I used to think it was a blessing. They called it a second chance—a miraculous way to defy the finality of death. It was offered to us, the four of us: *Rusty*, *Ember*, *Blaze*, and me, *Sable*. We were given the ability to come back from the grave, to return to life no matter how we perished. It was meant to be a divine gift, a miraculous reversal of fate. At first, it was intoxicating. We could die and then we’d return, reborn and renewed.

Rusty was the first to crack.

Rusty’s death was sudden—a car accident, his body crushed and mangled. We found out about it through a call late at night, a sharp ringing that sliced through the silence of my room. I remember stumbling out of bed, disoriented, as my heart pounded in my chest. The news was a gut punch, a cold hand wrapping around my throat. I couldn't breathe, couldn't think. I couldn't process the reality that Rusty, my best friend, was gone. We all felt the weight of it, an oppressive heaviness that seemed to anchor us to the ground.

The next day, we gathered at the hospital. The scene was grim—a sterile room filled with the harsh lights and the beeping of machines. Rusty was gone, his body lifeless and pale. We clung to each other, our grief a tangled mess of shared sorrow. Then came the offer—a chance to reverse what had happened, to bring Rusty back. We hesitated, but the allure of seeing him again, of undoing the cruel twist of fate, was too powerful.

When Rusty came back, he was different. The once vibrant light in his eyes had dimmed, replaced by a haunting vacancy. He looked at us with a vacant expression, as if the Rusty we knew had been replaced by something else entirely. It wasn't long before the cracks started to show. He became more erratic, more distant. He’d talk about whispers in the dark, voices that spoke to him in a language he couldn’t understand. Shadows moved on their own, he’d say, and he saw things that weren’t there. It was as if his return had opened a door to something dark and ancient, something that he couldn’t escape.

His screams would pierce through the silence of the night, filled with terror that we couldn’t comprehend. We tried to comfort him, but it was as if he was already lost, slipping further into a void we could not reach. I remember one night when he came to my door, his eyes wide and panicked, pleading for help. He babbled incoherently about monsters in the dark, about being chased by shadows that threatened to swallow him whole. I tried to calm him, but the fear in his eyes was palpable, and I could do nothing but watch as he deteriorated before us.

Ember’s descent was slower.

Ember, the most composed of us all, was the next to face the unraveling. Her death was less violent—a sickness that had taken her life. She had always been the rock, the steady presence that kept us grounded. When she returned, she was quiet, her demeanor reserved. At first, we thought she was just adjusting, finding her way back into a world that had moved on without her.

But as the days passed, it became clear that something was wrong. Ember started to withdraw from us, her eyes constantly darting around the room as if she was expecting something to emerge from the shadows. Her once warm and comforting presence became a distant memory. She started to see things—eyes peering from dark corners, faces pressed against the glass. Her reality warped, and she became obsessed with the idea that something was watching us, something that wanted to pull us back into the void. Her whispers became a constant drone, an undercurrent of fear that colored everything she said. She would speak of a presence that followed her, a feeling of being watched that never seemed to fade. Despite her attempts to maintain normalcy, she was haunted by a presence she couldn’t escape, a presence that seemed to grow stronger with each return.

We tried to help her, to reassure her that there was nothing to fear. But her paranoia only deepened, and she became increasingly isolated. She would sit alone in darkened rooms, her only company the shadows that she claimed were closing in on her. Her fears began to seep into her interactions with us, turning even the most mundane conversations into discussions about the impending doom she felt. We watched helplessly as Ember’s sanity unraveled, each day bringing a new layer of fear and anxiety.

Blaze’s paranoia grew.

Blaze was the most affected by the changes. His death had been a brutal fall, his body broken and battered. When he returned, he was consumed by paranoia. He began to believe that the world was collapsing in on itself, that everything was a grand illusion designed to entrap him. He’d sit alone in darkened rooms, muttering about how reality was a cage slowly closing in on us. Patterns emerged in his mind, patterns that spoke of doom and destruction. He saw conspiracies where there were none, convinced that the world was conspiring against us.

His paranoia grew more intense as time went on. He would see signs of a grand scheme everywhere, from the flicker of a streetlight to the way people would glance at him on the street. He was convinced that we were all being watched, that every interaction was part of a larger plot to imprison us. Blaze’s mind became a chaotic mess of interconnected fears, each thought feeding into the next. His delusions were relentless, driving him further into isolation. He began to avoid us, believing that we were part of the conspiracy against him. He would lock himself in his room for days on end, his only contact with the outside world the faint whispers he heard from the shadows.

As for me, Sable…

I thought I was immune to the madness. I believed I could handle the gift better than the others. But as the months passed, the sense of dread grew stronger. Each death and return left a mark on my soul, chipping away at my sanity. I started to hear voices, murmurs of forgotten nightmares that clawed at the edges of my mind. My dreams were filled with shadows that whispered my name, urging me to listen to their dark promises. I’d wake up in the dark, my heart pounding, convinced that something was lurking just beyond my sight. The world felt like a distorted reflection of itself, every corner hiding something malevolent.

I tried to maintain my composure, to be the one who held us together. But the more I fought against the darkness, the more it seemed to consume me. The whispers grew louder, more insistent. They spoke of things that I couldn’t understand, promises of power and knowledge that came with a price. The shadows that once seemed distant now felt like they were closing in on me, wrapping around me with an icy grip. My mind became a battleground, torn between the desire to resist the darkness and the lure of its promises.

We were no longer ourselves.

Rusty’s screams echoed through our shared spaces, Ember’s whispered fears became a constant drone, and Blaze’s frantic rants filled the silence with unease. The boundaries between our lives and our deaths blurred until they were indistinguishable. We were trapped in a nightmarish loop where death was no escape and life was a prison of our own making. Our sanity unraveled with each return, each resurrection pulling us further into darkness. The gift that was supposed to be a miracle had become a curse, chaining us to a cycle of suffering and despair.

Rusty’s behavior became increasingly erratic. He would pace the rooms, muttering to himself about visions of grotesque creatures and horrific landscapes. His eyes would dart around as if expecting something to leap out at him from the shadows. Ember’s paranoia became so intense that she would refuse to leave her room, convinced that the world outside was a trap designed to ensnare her. Blaze’s delusions reached a fever pitch, and he began to speak in riddles, convinced that the world was collapsing in on itself.

The end is near.

As I write this, I am consumed by the same dread that plagued my friends. The world outside is a grotesque parody of what it once was. The shadows seem to whisper constantly, their voices a constant reminder of our descent. Every creak, every rustle, feels like a harbinger of something far worse. The echoes of our screams, the visions of our fractured minds—they are all that remains of our sanity. The gift of immortality had turned into a prison from which there was no escape.

The more we returned, the more we lost. We couldn’t remember who we once were, only the endless cycle of fear and despair. The gift of immortality had become a prison from which there was no escape. Each return brought with it a new layer of horror, a deeper plunge into madness. We had become monsters of our own making, twisted and broken by the very thing that was meant to save us. The endless loop of death and rebirth had become our cage, and the darkness that had once been a whisper was now a roar that consumed us entirely.

There is no salvation.

The cycle continues, and I fear that there will be no end to this suffering. The more we die and come back, the more our souls are eroded. The world around us has become a distorted reflection of a reality we can no longer grasp. The echoes of our screams are drowned out by the relentless whispers of shadows that seem to mock us with every passing moment. We are lost, trapped in an eternal nightmare, forever haunted by the gift that was meant to be our salvation.