The Potion

by G-man2010

Rating: everyone
Tags: Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Zecora, Drama, Spike, Angel, Horror, Fluttershy
Length: 1496

Angel drinks a potion that makes him a good bunny. what could go wrong???

after a fight between Fluttershy and Angel, Angel overhears Fluttershy wanting a bunny that behaves better. Angel decides to see Zecora to see if she can make him a potion that will make him a good bunny. she does and Angel drinks it, becoming a well behaved rabbit. but then... creepy things start to happen.

since a lot of you liked my first story, i wanted to write another one. i have a lot of good Angel Bunny ideas floating in my head that i want to share with you. and this is one of them. but anyways, enjoy:)

Published 2024-08-19 20:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2024-08-19 20:00:01 UTC

A normal day

It was a peaceful day in the cottage and Fluttershy was trying to feed Angel a new veggie. "Com'on Angel." Fluttershy says to her grumpy bunny. "It's good for you. you like other veggies."

Angel turned his head away. He didn't want to eat it. So he threw the plate at Fluttershy. Making her mad. "That's it Angel!!!" She shouts in rage. "Go and sit in timeout!!!" Angel then walked towards his bed which was also his timeout corner. Then he can hear Fluttershy talking to herself while she was cleaning up the mess

"I can't believe him." Fluttershy says to herself. "*SIGH* Sometimes i wish i had a bunny that behaves better." Angel then started to frown. Fluttershy is loving him less? He then decided to do something about it. but the only thing that comes to his mind is becoming good.

But Angel can't. Because hes not that good at being good. but he will try. 5 minutes went by and then Angel got out of his timeout corner which is also his bed. Then he goes out to see someone. Fluttershy noticed him leaving and hopes he does not get into any trouble.

Angel then reaches Zecoras treehouse and goes inside. "Welcome Angel Bunny." Zecora says in a happy voice. "What brings you here?" Angel told Zecora about what happened and asked if she can make him a potion that will make him good so Fluttershy will love him again.

"Yes, i can do that." Zecora said. she then started making the potion while Angel is playing in a toy corner that Zecora had. Then she gave Angel the finished product. "Before you drink this," Zecora says giving a warning to Angel. "when you drink this. you will be good forever and there's no going back."

Angel understood what Zecora said and took the potion and went out. Angel took one more solid look at the potion. And remembers if he drinks this, he will be good forever and he will never go back to his trouble making ways. Then he Chugged the potion in one go and ran home.

Fluttershy was doing the dishes when Angel came home. "Angel your back." Fluttershy says happily. Then Angel grabs the sponge out of Fluttershys hooves and starts doing the dishes for her. the potion was working. hes becoming a good bunny. "Angel." Fluttershy says in shock. "You're doing the dishes for me. that's so sweet."

After finishing the dishes, Angel cleaned up the whole kitchen including the cupboards. When Fluttershy came in and saw what Angel did she was happy. "Angel, i am so proud of you." Fluttershy says while a smile spreads across her lips. "You earned yourself a treat." Fluttershy got a pack of gummies from the table and gave it to Angel. Angel was pround for what he's doing and thanked himself for drinking that potion.

Disaster strikes

It was the next day and Fluttershy went out to get some food for the house. Angel was still in his bed sleeping. But when he woke up, the other animals started to get scared. Angel had a big creepy smile on his face and he had black eyes that were glowing. His face even began to twitch. And starts talking in a distorded voice.

"Fluttershy will always love me." He said giving the animals a shock. "And i will make sure of it." Angel then pulls out a knife and his head begins to twitch more and then Angel starts to kill all of the animals in the cottage one by one. Fluttershy then returned home and screamed in terror.

"Oh my gosh!!!!" she screamed. Fluttershy then realized that Angel was holding a knife and was covered in blood. "Angel Bunny..." Fluttershy says while getting angry. "Did you do this?" The response that she got was not one that she expected. Angel turned his face to look and Fluttershy. With his creepy smile, black glowing eyes and twitching face.

He then started to chase after Fluttershy and then she started to run and locked the cottage door shut so the bunny won't escape. she then runs to Zecoras treehouse hoping that she knows what happened to Angel. "Welcome Flu-" she was interupted by Fluttershy's anxiety. "Zecora, Angel has gone insane." Fluttershy says stressing out.

"He killed all the animals in my cottage and is trying to kill me and just yesterday he was good and respectful." Zecora realized what she did. "I know why." she says to Fluttershy. "Yesterday he came by and asked me to make him a potion that will make him a good bunny for the rest of his life." "But why would he do that?" Fluttershy asked. "Because he told me you said you wanted a bunny that behaves better."

Fluttershy then realized what Angel thought she said. "He must have misheard me." Fluttershy said. "What i said was-" The lights then went out and then Fluttershy heard a scream. Then the light came back on and she screamed. Because Zecora has a knife stabbed through the back. and then fell down to the ground.

"Found you." Angel said in his distorded voice. Fluttershy then ran out of Zecoras house and then realized that Angel somehow must have escaped. And then decided to run to a place where she knows she will be safe.

The castle

Fluttershy ran to Twilights castle where she knows she will be safe. She runs in to see that all of her friends are there and looking concerned because of how Fluttershy entered.

"Fluttershy whats wrong?" Twilight looked confused as she asked what she asked. "Angel is crazy, he's going to kill everyone including us." Fluttershy said being very scared. Twilight then looked out the window and saw that everything is okay. and that Angel did not kill everypony. "Everything is fine." Twilight said. "I'm sure you were just seeing things."

Twilight then offered Fluttershy a seat at the table where that mane 6 always sits. then there was a knocking on the door. "Spike will you answer that?" Twilight asks the baby dragon. "Okay" Spike replies. "No!!!!" Fluttershy screamed. "Don't answer that." "Com'on Fluttershy." Spike said showing no emotion. "I'm sure Angel is not going to be there." He was wrong.

Spike opened the door to find Angel standing there with his smile, black glowing eyes and... twitching face. Then Angel slices Spikes head off with his knife. "Oh my gosh you're right!!!" Twilight shouts looking at Angel and back at Fluttershy. "Angel has gone insane.

Angel then starts to run towards them and then the two start to run away. "What did i tell you." Fluttershy says while running. the two found a hiding spot that hopefully Angel will not find them. Then they saw Angel walk by their hiding place and they both let out a sigh.

But then Angel finds them and tries to kill them but Fluttershy and Twilight were both too fast for the killer bunny. The two started to run again but then... Twilight trips over a book she forgot to put away. "Twilight!!!" Fluttershy says screaming in terror." "Fluttershy," Twilight says struggling to get up. "You have to run without me."

"No!!!" Fluttershy says not wanting to lose her friend. "I can't do that." "You have to, good luck." Twilight says once more. Then Fluttershy started to run as fast as she could. and then looking back and seeing Angel has already started to kill Twilight. Fluttershy then stops and starts to cry while seeing her friend getting killed.

Angel then makes his way towards Fluttershy. "This is almost too easy." Angel said as he made it towards Fluttershy. He then kicks Fluttershy causing her to land flatly on the ground. "Goodbye Fluttershy." He says once more.

Just a dream

Fluttershy then screamed and realized she is in her bedroom and sweating. "Oh my gosh." She said in relief. "It was just a nightmare." Angel then came into her room and hopped onto the bed and a worried look was on his face. "Oh Angel." Fluttershy says to her worried pet.

"I had a dream where you were killing everypony and you were able to talk and-" Angel put his paw on Fluttershys mouth, telling her there is nothing to be afraid of. "you're right" Fluttershy said as she starts to smile. "It's not real. and by the way." She continues. "Since you're here Angel, can you sleep with me tonight? I don't want to be alone."

Angel nods. He wants to be with his owner for the night since she is pretty scared. He lies down and pulls the blanket closer and scoots next to Fluttershy. "I'm glad you are not evil my little bunny." Fluttershy says as she kisses Angel on the head. "Goodnight, my bunny."

Author's Note

so i know the last chapter is short but hey, at least this story is concluded