Angels Quest

by G-man2010

Rating: everyone
Tags: Original Character, Comedy, Adventure, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Angel
Length: 1602

Angel goes on an adventure to save the queen of Bunny town

While Fluttershy is on a friendship mission. Angel gets the cottage to himself. when he gets the paper through the door. he sees that queen whiskers, the ruler of his home town Bunny town had been kidnapped. since Fluttershy has been gone for a day, Angel decides to return to his home town to save the queen

since my last fic did not do as great. i wanted to make this one. hopefully this will fix the mistakes the potion did. and you guys like this.

Published 2024-08-27 19:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2024-08-27 19:00:01 UTC

The big journey

Author's Note

I made Angel and the oc's talk because it would be kind of boring if they did not say anything

The big journey

Angel has the cottage to himself since Fluttershy is on a friendship mission with the rest of the Mane 6. He was relaxing on the couch because he had nothing else to do. "I hope Fluttershy will be back home soon." he said.

Then Angel heard something slide through the door and decided to go see what it was. It was the paper. Since Fluttershy was not home, he decided to see what it was for himself. And then gasps. "Oh no!" he said. What was in the paper was a news article stating that Queen Whiskers the ruler of Angels home town Bunny town had been captured.

"What do i do?" Angel asked himself. He then realizes since Fluttershy is gone, she won't notice he is missing. so he then goes out to save the queen.

when he arrives, he sees there are two guards standing on the fence of the queens castle. Of course they were bunnies since this was Bunny town. "Excuse me," Angel spoke up to the guards. "My name is Angel and i have come to save the queen." "I see." said one of the guards. "You want to save the queen?" "Yes." Angel replied.

"Saving the queen will not be an easy task." said the second guard. "You have to be brave and strong in order to do that." "I'm strong and brave." Angel tells the guards. "Well in that case, my name is Nigel." said the first guard. "And that's Simba. "Pleasure to meet you." Simba added.

"So since we met..." Angel started to speak. "Why don't you come with me. we can be a team and save Queen Whiskers together. "Sounds good." Nigel said. Agreeing to Angels offer. "What about you Simba?" "Lets do this!!!" said Simba. Nigel tells Angel that they have to go to Prince Edward's lair.

Prince Edward is an evil dragon who was the one that kidnapped Queen Whiskers and is holding her there. To get there, they have to go through the desert, and the arctic in order to make it to Prince Edward and save Queen Whiskers. They started heading out and then made it to the desert.

"Be careful." Simba said. "The dessert is full of rattle snakes. "I hate rattle snakes." Angel said. "Well lets watch out." Nigel added. the Three headed out through the desert with great success. Until they came across a rattle snake. Angel screamed in fear until the snake began to speak.

"Oh. sorry i startled you." The snake said. Angel paused to realize that the snake doesn't want to hurt them at all. "Are you sure?" Angel asked. "I'm sure." the snake replied. "My name is Gary and I am one of the friendly snakes here." "Well it's nice to meet you Gary." Nigel said.

Nigel and Simba introduced themselves towards Gary and then Angel asked if he wanted to come with them to save Queen Whiskers. "I would love to come." Gary said. "But I can't sorry." "Well why?" Angel asked. "The other snakes need me in the desert. but thanks for the offer."

"You're welcome Gary." Simba said. "By the way, can you tell us where the arctic is? Because we have to go through there in order to save the queen. "Yes i can." Gary replied. He showed them the way to the arctic and said their goodbyes. Gary waved at them with is tail and then they left.

It had been hours but the trio then made it to the arctic. "We know a polar bear that can help us get the Prince Edwards lair. Nigel said. "He lives in that cabin right there. "Okay let's go." Angel said. the trio made there way to the cabin and knocked on the door.

The door then opened with the polar bear answering it. "Hello Nigel, Hello Simba. said the polar bear. "Hello!!!" the two said. "And who is this?" the polar bear said looking down at Angel. "Well i'm Angel bunny." Angel said introducing himself. "Who are you?" "Well I'm Fredrick." the polar bear said. "Come inside."

The trio walked into Fredrick's cabin and got comfy. Fredrick gave them mugs of hot chocolate to drink. since it was cold. Angel then spoke up. "We came here so you can help us save Queen Whiskers." Angel said after taking a sip of his hot chocolate. "Oh, i see." Fredrick replied." "Can you tell us the closest way to getting to Prince Edwards lair?" Simba asked

Fredrick told them the way to get to Prince Edwards lair to save Queen Whiskers. "Thanks Fredrick." Angel said. "You are most welcome." Fredrick replied. "But before you go i want to give you these." The friendly polar bear gave them some metal swords and a bottle.

"The bottle is for capturing Prince Edward once he gets weak." "Got it!" Angel said. Angel then hands over a sword to Nigel and another to Simba and then Fredrick gives them a bag to put the bottle in." "Good luck out there!!!" Fredrick said giving them good luck.

The trio made it their way out of the arctic. It was difficult because of the cold. But they made it. And then at last, they made it to Prince Edwards castle. The three then looked around to see if they could find the queen. finding some guards in the process. But they did not stand a chance against the three. and got defeated.

Angel then finds a metal door. "This must be where the queen is being held." He said. The three then opened the door and there he was. Prince Edward the dragon. "You've come to take her back." He said. "Heck yeah we did!" Angel replied. "Well if you want her back, you have to get through me." Prince Edward said back cackling afterwards.

The three pulled out their swords and started charging at the dragon. The prince roared and charged them as well. "You are going down Prince Edward!!!" Angel shouted as he was battling the dragon. "We will see about that." He replied. Prince Edward then breathed fire towards the three but did not do any damage.

Then the three charged at the dragon using their swords to attack in the process. It was a good battle and while they were attacking, Prince Edward started to groan. "He's getting weak, keep going!!!" Angel shouted. the three kept attacking the prince as he was getting weak and then they stopped as Prince Edward fell onto the ground.

"Angel, the bottle!!!" Nigel and Simba shouted. Angel grabbed the bottle out of the bag and opened it up. A bright light flashed bright as it went towards Prince Edward. "NO!!!" The prince shouted. "It can't end like this!!!" Then the dragon faded into the bottle and Angel closed it up.

"Well he's taken care of." He said. "That's for sure. Nigel replied. "Now we have to find the queen." The three looked around for any other doors. But did not find any. Until Angel found a lever. "Hey guys I found a lever." He called. Nigel and Simba then came to see what kind of lever Angel found.

"Well what are you waiting for? Pull it" Simba said. Angel then pulled the lever and looked at the floor which was opening. They saw a cage coming out of it with a bunny inside. "Queen Whiskers!!!" The three shouted. "Nigel, Simba, is that you?" The queen asked. "Yes it's us and a new friend of ours." Nigel said. They opened the cage and let Queen Whiskers out.

"Who are you?" she asked looking at Angel. I'm Angel bunny." He said. "I'm the one who wanted to rescue you in the first place." "Well thank you Angel." Queen Whiskers said. She gave Angel a kiss on the cheek and hopped into his arms. Angel's cheeks began to blush red as he carried the Queen out with Nigel and Simba by his side.

When they made it back to Bunny town. everyone there saw their queen home and cheered for Angel, Nigel, and Simba. They had a party, cake and even their faces got into the paper. While Angel was partying with Queen whiskers. He hears a familiar voice call out his name.

Angel searched but didn't know what it was until she came up. It was Twilight Sparkle. "There you are. Fluttershy has been worrying where you were." she said. "c'mon, lets go home." Angel then hopped onto Twilight and said his goodbyes to Queen Whiskers, Nigel and Simba before he returned to Ponyville.

Twilight opened the door to Fluttershys cottage where the rest of the Mane 6 were and put Angel down. "Angel!!!" Fluttershy says running towards her little bunny and hugging him. "I was so worried. thank goodness your home. i came home an hour ago but i never saw you and we looked everywhere."

"Then we saw you in the paper when it was delivered." Twilight said. "So i went to bunny town and what do you know? We found you." "I still can't believe you saved a queen." Pinkie said. It must've been hard." Angel nodded before Fluttershy let go.

"Come with us Angel." Fluttershy said. "We all have a special treat planned for you." Angel then hopped onto Fluttershy and they all went out to go get carrot sundaes. Angel was super proud for what he had done. And Fluttershy and the others were too.