Serving the fire alicorn

by Huskylover

Rating: everyone
Tags: Human, Opaline, Misty, My Little Pony: A New Generation, Sparky Sparkeroni, Romance, Original Character, Mane 5, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 1859

A human was took in by a fire alicorn

A teenage boy named hawin Smith was enjoying life at college. Until he was teleported to maritime bay in Equestria (right before the first episode of MLP Make Your Mark episode 1, chapter 1) as he was about to ask the ponies for help but they where scared and afraid of him, and ended up custody by Sheriff hitch trailblazer.

While hawin is in the sheriff's office lock up, he was rescued by a blue unicorn mare named Misty. Then she brought him to opaline arcana the fire alicorn and took him in as her own. Opaline offers a deal with hawin: if he's helps her take over Equestria and help misty earn a cutie mark by getting the baby dragon aka sparky in order to restore opaline's fire magic, he'll get the respect that he wants. Join hawin and his new life as opaline arcana and Misty's servent.

Published 2024-10-04 20:40:00 UTC
Last updated 2025-01-21 12:19:18 UTC

Chapter 2

As the dawn broke, hawin saw a castle in front of them.

"So this is where you and your friend live?" He asked

"yep" misty answered

"you wait here, I'll let opaline know that you are here" she added, as hawin got off of misty, she went inside to let her friend know.

10 minutes later

Hawin waited on misty to come back, then misty came back.

"Opaline is waiting for you, she wants to meet you" said misty and he followed her to the castle.

As they at the throne room, there waiting for them, was a huge pony, bigger than misty, she has white mane, green eyes, she has both wings and unicorn horn. Hawin was nervous but he has the courage to speak up.

"Em... Hello, you must be opaline that misty told me about" he said.

"That's right, hawin was it? I heard that those little ponies think you're a threat. Me and misty felt sorry for you because they don't know what a human is" said opaline with symphony.

"Yeah but I'm glad you and misty save me, and I want to thank you for that. If it weren't for you guys, I'll be ended up in prison in zephyr heights" said hawin and he looked at opaline.

"And I'm just curious to ask you, what kind a pony are you?"

"Well I'm a fire alicorn" opaline replied. "I have a proposal for you, if you help us take over Equestria, then you'll have all the respect you want and you can live here with me and misty. Would you like that?"

Hawin thought for a moment, then he made his decision.

"Yes I will" he replied his answer.

"Then bow down to your mistress: lady opaline arcana" said opaline royalty.

Then hawin bow down to his mistress. "I won't let you and misty down, my lady" said hawin.

Soon, hawin has a new home and new friends to relay on.

Author's Note

Part 3 coming soon and part 3 is during MLP Make Your Mark chapter 2, episode 1.

Until then, bluebells forever!

Chapter 1

It was peaceful day in California, a teenage boy named hawin Smith was enjoying his life in his college at university. And it was the end of the day and he was headed to his dorm for the night.

Later that night at 11:59 pm, hawin was sleeping until a flash came through the TV. He realized that it was a portal.

Hawin woke up from the sound of the portal opening. "What...was...that" hawin yawned.

As he came close to the portal, it begin to sucked him in. Hawin tried to hold on but it was too late. He was sucked in.

****

He woke up on a beach, and saw colorful ponies that are bigger than him, staring at him.

A filly was surprised to see him. And I'm sorry to say, the ponies in Equestria never seen a human before.

"Whoa" said the filly amazed,

"hm, excuse me but where am I?" Hawin asked.

But then their was trouble, the filly's mother screamed and get her daughter away from him.

"Ahh! Stay away from my daughter you monster!" She cried.

To make matters worse every pony: earth ponies, unicorns and pegasus begin to panic.

Hawin hurried to a town called maritime bay to find a way back to his world.

"Wait! I don't mean no harm!" Said hawin trying to calm them down but it was no use.

But there was more trouble, as he turned to see a yellow earth pony stallion with green mane coming charging at hawin and he knock him out and now he was unconscious.

****

Hawin slowly waking up and realized that he was in a cell.

"Looks like you awake now" said a voice, as he look to see the same stallion who knocked him out.

"Where am i? What is this place? And why did you lock me up in this cell!?!" Hawin asked demanly.

"You're in the sheriff's office and to answer your last question is because you're threatening everypony in maritime bay, monster... Or whatever you are" the stallion explained.

Hawin was cross. "Then I demand who's in charge in the sheriff's office!"

"You're looking at him right now" said the stallion.

Hawin was shocked, the stallion is the sheriff. "Look officer, it's all a big misunderstanding, I'm not a monster. I'm just lost and scared" Hawin tried to explain but the sheriff wasn't listening.

"You better sleep tonight because you're being transported to zephyr heights dungeon tomorrow morning because you seem as a threat to pony kind".

Hawin was outraged from this News. As the sun as setting the sheriff locked his station for the night. He felt hatred at the ponies, specially the stallion sheriff who locked him up and felt like he was trapped in this world forever and soon he'll ended up in prison for no reason. This is the end of the line for hawin Smith.

****

Later that night, as hawin slept on his bed he hear a unfamiliar voice.

"Hey, are you awake?" Said the voice whispering to him. As he woke up to see the mysterious figure.

"Who are you and what are you doing here?" Hawin asked confusingly. The figure lift it's hood and he was shocked to see a blue unicorn mare with green eyes, dark blue and green hair and a pink belly.

"My name is misty and I'm here to get you out of here" the unicorn mare known as misty explained.

Hawin was confused and surprised that pony is going to rescue him. "But if you are going to get me out of here, they'll send a search party and they'll arrest you for helping me escape"

"Don't worry, I'll take you somewhere that no pony will find you" said misty.

Soon misty quietly get the keys and unlock the cell door. As hawin was free, he hopped on to Misty's back, after all, the ponies are bigger than him. Soon they left the sheriff's office and hurried down the road, but they need to hide behind the building to let pass two nearby ponies.

As they pass, hawin and misty hurried once again on the pathway and escaped maritime bay.

"So where are you taking me?" Hawin asked curiously, "to my home where me and my friend live" misty replied and they forged ahead.

Author's Note

Part 2 coming soon and I hope you like my second story.

Until then, bluebells forever!

Chapter 3

2 weeks later

Hawin enjoying his new life as opaline's second helper. She told him that she need the dragon fire to restore her fire magic, then she'll finished what she has started.

"Hawin, you'll go with misty to spy on the ponies at maritime bay to she what are they up to" said opaline.

"But how can I go there without the ponies seeing me? Hawin asked.

"Don't worry, I got a solution for you" opaline replied. She pulled out from her dresser to have a necklace. "This necklace will blend in" opaline explained.

As hawin tried the necklace on, it transform him to a pony, a blue Pegasus with green mane and tail, a cutie mark shield with a star on his flank, and a blue cowboy hat.

"Wow, I'm looking good, thank you my lady" said hawin thanking her.

"No problem, now go and see what are those ponies up to" said opaline.

"We will opaline" said misty.

Soon both hawin and misty left the castle and head to maritime bay. Hawin getting used to his new body, but he glad that misty is there for him.

As they are at it looks like some sort of lighthouse, that's where he saw the ponies who brought the magic back and the sheriff stallion who locked him up in the cell.

They hid behind the trees to spy on them and hearing everyword they say.

"So these are the sheriff's friends?" Hawin thought.

As he looked, he saw a baby dragon, with them. "Do you see what I just saw?!"

To Be continued...

Author's Note

Chapter 4 coming soon

Chapter 4

Hawin couldn't believe his eyes, there in the hooves of hitch, the one that he got him lock up 3 weeks ago, has the baby dragon like opaline told him about.

"Do you see what I see misty?" Hawin asked whispering.

"Yeah, they have magic" misty replied.

"Not only that, that galloping sausage sheriff, the one you rescued me from has the baby dragon that opaline wants for her restoration of her fire magic" said Hawin talking about hitch.

"Ohh, right" said misty.

"Better contact opaline with that magic mirror to tell her the good news" Hawin subjected.

So they contact opaline from the magic mirror.

"it's true, the magic has returned to equestria like you said" said misty.

"And we got even better news, we found that baby dragon that you are looking for" Hawin added.

"Excellent, we shall proceed with our plan" said opaline.

"Will do my lady" said Hawin.

Soon they followed them to maretime bay.

****

Later, on the bridge in maretime bay, Hawin and misty spying on sunny, Izzy and pipp with hawin's binoculars.

"What are they doing?" Misty asked

"What?" Hawin asked confused.

"I said what are they doing?" Misty repeated her question.

"For the love of Pete, stop asking me that already!" Said Hawin complaining.

"You have binoculars and I can't see anything. Don't complain at me because I not going to just sit up here and looking at the sky all day" misty argued.

"Okay, okay, look. They're just standing there and talking. Okay? That's all they're doing. That's all they ever do, is just stand there and talk. That's what they were doing last week, that's what they were doing when you asked me five minutes ago. So, five minutes from now, when you ask me, "what are they doing?" My answer's gonna be, "they're still just talking, and they're still just standing there!" Any other questions?" Hawin explained.

"Yeah, what are they talking about?" Misty asked.

"You know what, I don't know, how about you put the magic mirror in the orange puffball's smoothie stand while I scout ahead?" said Hawin.

"Sure thing" misty replied.

****

While misty doing here task, Hawin scout ahead as he walked, he hear music.

"What the... What the heck is that music?" Hawin asked.

As he turned to a corner, there was pipp singing "all you need is your beat".

"Looks like princess fantasy pants is singing, I don't do singing" he complained.

Then he headed to the entrance of maretime bay where misty was waiting.

"Did you do it like I said?" Hawin asked.

"Yes I did" misty replied.

"Good, let's head back to opaline's castle, she'll be waiting for us" said Hawin.

"Sounds good to me" misty agreed.

Soon they head back to opaline's castle to report their news.

Author's Note

Do you see a red vs blue reference?

Next story coming soon