The Weight of a Feather
The Big Day
Previous ChapterNext ChapterFeather Wisp's front legs tapped impatiently against the kitchen table while her mother bustled about, preparing breakfast. The morning sunlight streamed through the kitchen windows, casting a warm glow in the Wisp residence. Finally, Feather Wisp's mother placed a plate of freshly made pancakes, adorned with pieces of cereal and maple syrup, in front of the eager Pegasus. Without wasting a moment, Feather Wisp tore into the pancakes, leaving them in tattered remnants. As she devoured her breakfast, she felt a slight tug at her left wing.
“Ow!”
“Don’t eat too quickly, Fisp. You’ll get a stomachache.”
“I need to hurry,” Feather Wisp said, her voice filled with urgency.
“Why does it matter if we arrive at school early? I thought the exam was at nine?” her mother asked.
Feather Wisp set her fork down on the now-empty plate and let out a satisfied burp.
“We need to be early so that you can get a front-row seat. I don't want you to end up in a spot where you can't see me,” Feather Wisp said.
Feather Wisp’s mother chuckled warmly.
“You'll be flying through the air, Fisp. I'm sure I'll be able to see you just fine, no matter where I sit.”
Feather Wisp leaped down from her chair and dashed into her room. She swiftly returned to the kitchen, donning a pair of saddlebags on her back.
“You got everything, Mom? We gotta get going,” Feather Wisp said.
“I’m coming, I’m coming.”
Feather Wisp's mother removed her blue and yellow apron and picked up her purse. Making her way toward the front door, she watched as Feather Wisp fastened her horseshoes. With a swift motion, Feather Wisp turned the doorknob and flung the door open. Stepping outside, she stretched her short wings and assumed a stable position, ready for takeoff. Her mother followed suit, spreading her own wings, and together they ascended into the sky, heading toward the heart of Cloudsdale. During their flight, Feather Wisp's mother couldn't help but observe the trail of vibrant orange and white magic that emanated from her daughter. The sight filled her with joy, and a smile graced her face as they soared through the skies.
***
From the fourteenth-floor window, Midnight Lavender gazed out toward the bustling center of Cloudsdale. The streets below were a vibrant tapestry of colors, a blur of diverse creatures moving like brushstrokes on a canvas, creating a scene reminiscent of a pastel-painted stream. Her attention focused on the distant school building, where Pegasi, Hippogryphs, and Griffins flocked from various corners of the city, converging upon the campus grounds. As Midnight Lavender's eyes swept over the scene, she instinctively turned her gaze toward the bedside alarm clock. Its glowing digits displayed the time: “8:34 a.m.” She retrieved her saddlebags and opened the door before stepping into the hallway beyond. The plain, empty corridors felt devoid of life, their monotony contrasting with the anticipation that filled her heart. She knew that today's excitement awaited her elsewhere.
***
Feather Wisp adjusted the flight suit's mask, securing it tightly. It bore a striking resemblance to the iconic design of the Wonderbolts, albeit with slight modifications to avoid copyright issues. Gazing at her reflection in the mirror, Feather Wisp envisioned the genuine Wonderbolt uniform. As she spread her short wings, a wave of worry transformed into bubbling excitement. She longed to showcase the progress she and Midnight Lavender had made, especially to Cloud Glider. With a confident smile and a nod of affirmation, Feather Wisp prepared to embark.
The pale-colored Pegasus trotted down the hallway leading to the school's flight field, drawing a few curious glances from fellow students. However, most were preoccupied with their own concerns, barely sparing her a second glance. Approaching the exit of the hallway, Feather Wisp's gaze fell upon a familiar, yellow-colored Pegasus. Cloud Glider stood at the hallway’s threshold;her attention fixed on a group of Pegasi seated in a distant section of the bleachers. Among them were two elegantly dressed Pegasi, accompanied by a younger male Pegasus whom Feather Wisp recognized as Gale Glider.
As Feather Wisp neared Cloud Glider, the yellow Pegasus turned her head, her expression twisting into a smug grin at the sight of Feather Wisp's approach.
“Well, if it isn’t Shorty Wings. I hope you're planning to put on quite a show. We could all use some entertainment,” Cloud Glider said.
Feather Wisp remained composed, no longer affected by the abrasive mare’s insults.
“I think you’ll be quite surprised,” Feather Wisp said.
Cloud Glider wore a puzzled expression as she processed Feather Wisp's statement. Without uttering another word, the pale-colored Pegasus strode past Cloud Glider. In response, Cloud Glider couldn't help but scoff at Feather Wisp's seemingly indifferent behavior.
“Whatever…” she muttered under her breath.
The sound of a whistle pierced the air, signaling the beginning of the prep period for all the students. Amidst the distant fanfare of bombastic trumpets, the cheers of the spectators drowned out the music. One by one, the students from Feather Wisp's graduating class made their way to the center of the flight field. Each student was given a sheet of paper, bearing a number assigned to them. Feather Wisp's eyes scanned the rows of bleachers, searching for her mother's familiar presence. A teacher approached Feather Wisp and gave her a sheet of paper. To her surprise, the number she received this time was four, instead of fifteen.
“Same as Cloud Glider's number from the mock exam... I wonder if they switched us around,” Feather Wisp mused.
As she affixed the number to her flank, she cast a final glance at the spectators in the bleachers. Among them, her eyes landed on her mother, Aurora Wisp, seated at the edge of the first row. Aurora Wisp engaged in conversation with a Pegasi couple beside her. Feather Wisp's face brightened with a smile at the sight of her mother. Just then, a second whistle pierced the air, emanating from a stage at the center of the flight field. All the students turned to face the Head Instructor and the school's principal. The principal approached the microphone atop a podium and tapped it with her hoof, causing a brief screech to escape the speakers.
“Good morning, everypony. Today is an important day for our aspiring flyers of Cloudsdale. After today, many of you will embark on the next chapter of your lives, taking a step forward in pursuit of your dreams. I want to express my pride in each and every one of you for your unwavering determination and hard work. May all of you give your absolute best during the exam. I will now pass the microphone to the Head Instructor.”
The Head Instructor approached the podium, clearing her throat before addressing the students.
“All right, everypony. The rules for today's exam are similar to those of the mock exam you took a month ago. Focus on completing the exam to the best of your abilities while navigating the obstacle course. However, there is an added opportunity for extra credit. If your completion time ranks among the top three in your student body, you will receive additional credit toward your final grade.”
Tapping her hoof against the podium and adjusting her reading glasses, the Head Instructor continued, “Please note that this extra credit is entirely optional and is not necessary for achieving a perfect score on the exam. The first group will be called in a few minutes. Attend to any urgent matters before the third whistle is blown. Thank you, and good luck.”
Stepping down from the podium, the Head Instructor joined a group of other instructors at the back of the stage. Feather Wisp took a deep breath, realizing the moment had arrived. This is it, she thought, show them how far you've come.
The sound of the third whistle echoed through the air. Feather Wisp tapped her front hooves against the ground and trotted toward the starting line. As she lined up with the other students, she felt a jolt against her side. Turning to face the source of the disturbance, Feather Wisp's heart sank as she locked eyes with Cloud Glider.
“If it isn’t my lucky day. I get to prove how great I am, and how useless Pegasi like you are,” Cloud Glider sneered.
Feather Wisp's gaze darted to Cloud Glider's number sheet, revealing the number “6.” It seemed that fate had placed them both among the first group of students to participate in the exam. Butterflies fluttered in Feather Wisp's stomach, but amidst the nerves, a glimmer of determination emerged. She now had the chance not only to surpass Cloud Glider's time but to outshine her in the race as well.
“Keep your eyes up front, Shorty Wings. You’re about to witness an up-and-coming Wonderbolt in action,” Cloud Glider said.
The students positioned themselves, awaiting the final whistle. An assistant instructor concluded their discussion with the Head Instructor and turned toward the row of eight students. Placing the whistle between his lips, the Assistant Instructor took a deep breath and blew with force. The students burst forward from the starting line. Cloud Glider surged ahead, swiftly maneuvering through the initial set of obstacles.
Feather Wisp engaged in a fierce competition for second place with another Pegasus from her class. The rival Pegasus deftly weaved and dodged through the obstacles, aiming to catch up to Cloud Glider. Yet, Feather Wisp remained hot on their trail. The pale-colored Pegasus concentrated her magic into her wings, flapping them only when necessary to change course or adjust her speed. She felt the flow of magic pulsating through her wings, propelling her forward as it pushed against the surrounding air. As the two Pegasi approached the first set of cloud hoops, Feather Wisp recalled her training sessions with her Unicorn friend.
Midnight Lavender had instilled in Feather Wisp the idea that magic interconnected all things in Equestria. As she and the other Pegasus neared the third set of hoops, Feather Wisp focused on harnessing her magic as a tether. She looped around the last hoop in the set, propelling herself forward with increased velocity. Swiftly, she overtook the other Pegasus and soared into the fourth set of hoops, repeating the technique. As her speed increased, Feather Wisp concentrated on maintaining her flight trajectory to avoid any loss of balance.
In the distance, Feather Wisp spotted Cloud Glider, a trailing stream of blue and yellow light followed behind her. As Feather Wisp approached, Cloud Glider turned her head, her face transforming from shock to anger. The yellow-colored Pegasus accelerated as determination etched across her features. The two Pegasi closed in on the final set of obstacles, a series of strategically placed cloud barriers designed to test their sharp turns and evasion skills. Cloud Glider effortlessly zigzagged through the course, while Feather Wisp kept a close distance. Employing the same technique as before, Feather Wisp used her magic as a tether, swinging around each barrier. With each obstacle surmounted, her speed intensified.
Feather Wisp trailed closely behind Cloud Glider, causing the yellow Pegasus to grow increasingly panicked. As Feather Wisp began to surge ahead, Cloud Glider's frustration erupted.
“Out of my way, Shorty Wings!”
Cloud Glider collided with Feather Wisp, causing the pale-colored Pegasus to crash into a nearby cloud barrier. Breaking through the barrier, Feather Wisp landed on a stray cloud below the obstacle course. With a smug grin, Cloud Glider saluted Feather Wisp and accelerated toward the end of the course. The other students in Feather Wisp's group swiftly maneuvered through the cloud barriers, leaving her behind. Doubt crept into Feather Wisp's mind as she wondered if she could catch up to Cloud Glider again. Panic began to grip her. The pursuit of a perfect score no longer mattered; she wanted to show Cloud Glider that she wasn’t useless.
Feather Wisp turned her head toward the edge of the bleachers, where her mother wore a worried expression, shouting words of encouragement. Beside her mother sat a familiar black Unicorn, signaling for Feather Wisp to catch up with the others. The Unicorn cheered loudly, rooting for her friend's success. Feather Wisp shook off her doubts and assumed a determined stance. She propelled herself from the cloud she stood upon and rejoined the obstacle course.
The pale-colored Pegasus flew through the course with lightning speed. With unwavering focus, she utilized the techniques she had learned to their fullest extent. One by one, she overtook her fellow students. Exiting the last set of obstacles, she entered the final stretch of the race—a long lane flanked by two rows of clouds leading to the finish line. Cloud Glider's silhouette came into view once again. The yellow Pegasus approached the finish line with remarkable speed. Feather Wisp exerted all her strength, but her speed alone was not enough to close the gap.
In that critical moment, the memories of her early training sessions with Midnight Lavender flooded her mind. Feather Wisp took a deep breath, centering herself and focusing on the magic permeating the air. Amidst the ambient magic, she sensed a significant concentration just ahead. The air grew lighter as she entered a faint trail of blue and yellow magic. As she drew closer to Cloud Glider, the stream of magic intensified, becoming more opaque.
As the pale-colored Pegasus approached Cloud Glider, she sensed the air constricting around her body. The finish line loomed just moments away. Feather Wisp felt the surrounding magic exerting pressure on her wings, and as Cloud Glider's magical trail grazed her, she swiftly employed her previous technique of intertwining her own magic with that of Cloud Glider. In a fraction of a second, Feather Wisp zipped past Cloud Glider, leaving both ponies on the other side of the finish line before they even realized it. The compressed air that had enveloped Feather Wisp dissipated as she decelerated.
The pale-colored Pegasus landed on the cloud runway below, sliding to a stop. She sat down on the soft foundation to rest, her breath rapid and heavy from exertion. As the dizziness from the adrenaline subsided, the cheers of the parents and students below grew clearer. Her vision gradually sharpened as she focused on the finish line. Cloud Glider stood near the checkered strip on the cloud runway, huffing and attempting to catch her breath. Her gaze, fixed upon Feather Wisp, held an expression of disbelief the pale-colored Pegasus had never seen before.
The Assistant Instructor from the beginning of the race approached Feather Wisp and reached out a hoof. Feather Wisp grasped it, allowing herself to be pulled up onto her hooves. The Assistant Instructor smiled at her and nodded approvingly.
“Great job, Ms. Wisp,” he said.
The Assistant Instructor then made his way to the table next to the finish line, checking off the names of each student who had completed the exam. Once all the students in the first group had finished, he instructed them to return to the flight field below. As Feather Wisp spread her short wings to descend, she couldn't help but notice that Cloud Glider continued to stare at her.
“You cheated…” Cloud Glider said, her voice laced with frustration.
“Cheated?” Feather Wisp asked.
Cloud Glider stomped closer, scrutinizing the pale-colored Pegasus from head to hoof, searching for any evidence to support her theory.
“There’s no way you beat me. You, of all ponies… How? How did you improve so much in only a month? Tell me!” Cloud Glider demanded.
A serene smile graced Feather Wisp's face.
“Somepony taught me that there’s more than one way to solve a problem.”
Feather Wisp's words only served to further enrage Cloud Glider. Before the situation could escalate, Cloud Glider's brother, Gale Glider, intervened. Landing beside his sister, he gently placed a hoof against her chest.
“Cloud Glider, leave her alone. Let’s head back down to the flight field. I need to talk to you for a minute,” Gale Glider said.
Cloud Glider huffed at Feather Wisp.
“I’ll find out how you cheated, Shorty Wings. It may not be today, or tomorrow, but I will figure it out.”
With a firm tug on Cloud Glider's left wing, Gale Glider persuaded his sister to leave.
“Cloud Glider, let’s go!” he insisted, leading her away from Feather Wisp.
The two siblings descended from the obstacle course, making their way back to the school's flight field. The Assistant Instructor kindly directed Feather Wisp away from the course as the next group of students prepared for their exam.
***
Once all the students in Feather Wisp's graduation class had completed the exam, the Head Instructor returned to the stage. Tapping the microphone on the podium, she cleared her throat to address the young flyers.
“Congratulations on completing your final exam, young flyers," the Head Instructor began. "The exam staff have tallied your scores, and they will now be presented to you on this board.”
Pointing to a large whiteboard positioned next to the stage, she signaled one of the assistant instructors to remove the blue tarp covering it. As the tarp was pulled away, the students could see the names, times, and points of each student meticulously written in black marker on the board's surface. Feather Wisp's heart raced as she scanned the entire scoreboard, searching for her name. However, her name was nowhere to be found, and a sinking feeling began to take hold.
“The top three performers of the exam will now be announced," the Head Instructor continued. "Take note of those who secured the top three spots. Even though most of you have passed, remember that there is always room for improvement. Flying is a crucial skill in the workforce for any winged creature, whether you aspire to greatness or not. Strive to continually enhance your abilities and consider the methods employed by these top three students when reflecting on your own performance.”
An additional whiteboard, bearing the names of the top three flyers, was positioned in front of the main scoreboard. Alongside their names, completion times, and scores, Feather Wisp's eyes eagerly read the results. She had achieved a score of 103, completing the exam only half a second faster than Cloud Glider. Not only had she surpassed Cloud Glider's performance, but she had outshined her entire graduation class.
***
Feather Wisp clasped the framed award in her hooves, her eyes tracing the numerous signatures etched onto its surface. A smile adorned her face as she admired the accolade.
“Your performance was absolutely amazing, Feather Wisp. I had no idea you had learned another technique,” Midnight Lavender said.
Feather Wisp set the framed award on the edge of the kitchen table and took a big bite of the cereal cake in front of her. She then proceeded to speak with her mouth full.
“Well, actually, I kinda learned it during the race with Cloud Glider.”
Midnight Lavender couldn't help but smile at Feather Wisp's less-than-perfect manners. She chuckled and playfully commented, “If this were my family, you'd be sent to your room without dessert for the rest of the week.”
Feather Wisp let out a hearty belch.
“No dessert for the rest of the week? That sounds terrible!”
Midnight Lavender shook her head, amused by Feather Wisp's reaction. Just then, Feather Wisp's mother approached them, enveloping her daughter in a warm and loving hug.
“We are so proud of you, Fisp!” her mother said.
Feather Wisp blushed, slightly embarrassed by the display of affection.
“C’mon, Mom. Not in front of Midnight.”
Midnight Lavender chuckled, joining in the lighthearted moment.
“Did you see the look on Cloud Glider’s face, Feather Wisp? She must have been seething with anger after losing that race.”
Feather Wisp stared at the large bite she had taken from her slice of cereal cake, her expression shifting to one of empathy.
“Yeah, I did. It looked like it was the worst thing she had ever experienced.”
“Hey, don’t start feeling sorry for her now. She needed a slice of humble pie, just as we deserve a slice of this delightful cake you've made, Mrs. Wisp,” Midnight Lavender said.
Aurora Wisp waved a hoof modestly in response to Midnight Lavender's compliment.
“You’re too kind, Midnight Lavender. I’m not that great at baking. You need to go with us some time to visit my sister. She’s a way better cook than me.”
“I’d love to,” Midnight Lavender said.
Feather Wisp continued to gaze at her own slice of cake, lost in thought. Her concentration was broken when her mother affectionately patted her on the back.
“I know your father will be so happy when he hears the news, Fisp,” her mother said.
Feather Wisp savored another bite of her cake before turning to face Midnight Lavender.
“Speaking of which, what are you gonna do about your dad?” Feather Wisp asked.
Midnight Lavender tapped her hoof against her chin, contemplating the question.
“Well, I imagine he's not too thrilled that I ‘borrowed’ the family's air balloon and some money from one of his safes. Knowing him, he'll be more concerned about the loss of assets rather than the fact that I left the mansion to come see you. But I've been thinking about it, and I believe I know how I can regain his favor.”
Midnight Lavender took a bite of her cake, letting out a contented "Mm" as she relished the dessert.
“The day before your exam, my father assigned me the task of learning the ins and outs of the family business. He's opening a branch office in Ponyville and wants me to help manage it. I think that will align with his expectations for my future, and I can use the money I earn to repay what I... borrowed.”
Feather Wisp's face lit up with excitement.
“That sounds awesome! I’ve never been to Ponyville before. I’d love to visit the Princess’ old castle someday,” Feather Wisp said.
“I've never been to Ponyville either. The only issue is, I'm not sure when I'll have the opportunity to spend time with you again, Feather Wisp. I'll likely have my hooves full for a while. I don't even know if I'll be able to dedicate as much time to studying magic as I used to,” Midnight Lavender said, a hint of sadness in her voice.
The two ponies grew somber at the thought of being apart for an extended period. Suddenly, a spark of inspiration ignited in Feather Wisp's eyes. She slammed her hooves onto the kitchen table, causing her mother to jump in surprise.
“I just had the best idea ever! What if I helped you run your father's branch in Ponyville?” she said, her voice filled with enthusiasm.
Feather Wisp turned to her mother.
“I'm going to need a job now that I've finished school, right?” Feather Wisp asked.
Feather Wisp's mother placed a couple of dishes into the sink, her expression reflecting a mix of concern and love. She carefully chose her words.
“That is true. But I would hate for you to be so far away from home, Fisp. I still want to be able to see my little filly regularly.”
“I know, Mom. But now that I can fly fast, the distance between Ponyville and Cloudsdale wouldn't be that much of a journey. And if, for some reason, I couldn't fly, Midnight could always teleport me back home,” Feather Wisp suggested.
Midnight Lavender waved her hooves in a hesitant manner.
“Hold on now, I'm not quite skilled enough with my magic to teleport yet.”
Feather Wisp's eyes gleamed with confidence.
“But you will be,” Feather Wisp said.
Midnight Lavender pondered the idea, considering the implications.
“I would have to discuss it with my father and see how he feels about hiring a new employee so early. However, having a talented Pegasus on the team would greatly assist us with girder and roof work, not to mention we could use a reliable messenger pony.”
Feather Wisp turned once again to face her mother, determination shining in her eyes.
“C’mon, Mom. I’ve always wanted to visit the place where Princess Twilight used to live before her coronation. I promise, I'll make frequent visits to Cloudsdale, at least three times a week, maybe even four,” she pleaded, her excitement palpable.
Feather Wisp's mother chuckled warmly at her daughter's enthusiasm.
“We’ll talk about it in the morning, Fisp. For now, let’s just take one step at a time, okay?”
Feather Wisp nodded, understanding the need for patience.
“One step at a time, got it. Oh, and Midnight?”
“Yes, Feather Wisp?” Midnight Lavender responded, curious about what Feather Wisp had to say.
“Thank you. I couldn’t have passed my exam without you.”
Midnight Lavender blushed at the praise, trying to downplay her contribution. With a dismissive wave of her hoof, she responded, “Oh, don't mention it. Besides, I learned some valuable things about Pegasi flight magic along the way.”
Feather Wisp beamed with gratitude, appreciating Midnight Lavender's humility.
“That, and you gained two new friends in the process,” Feather Wisp said.
Midnight Lavender's gaze shifted to both Feather Wisp and Aurora Wisp, a warm and content smile spreading across her face.
***
Feather Wisp lay on her bed, her gaze fixed on the ceiling, her mind filled with thoughts of the future. She leaned over, observing Midnight Lavender peacefully asleep in her comfortable bedroll. Moonlight streamed through the window, casting a gentle glow upon Feather Wisp's room. The light danced upon the strings of the two guitars resting on their stands. Feather Wisp's attention then turned to the two posters adorning the corner of her room.
A smile graced her lips as she read the words at the bottom of the first poster. Today, she had soared through the skies with potential that could rival that of a Wonderbolt cadet. She knew that if she stayed on this path, she would eventually achieve the goal she had set for herself long ago. Her gaze then shifted to the printed portrait of the Princess. The land of Equestria had changed since the early days of Princess Twilight's reign. Challenges had become more complex, but Feather Wisp remained resolute in her determination to pursue her dreams.
As she closed her eyes and succumbed to sleep, a content smile adorned her face. Feather Wisp envisioned the possibilities that awaited her in the future. The fragile spark that had flickered within her for so long had grown into a radiant flame, illuminating the path forward in her life. And the weight that had pulled her down so many times in the past, had finally been lifted.
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