An Interesting New Life
Chapter Four : Part-Final : Meeting My Magic, The Calm Aftermath, and New Life Ahead (Edited)
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By : The Eternal Star
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"Oh shit, please don't tell me I'm dead again." I stated with a clear tinge of annoyance in my voice as I face hoofed after observing my surroundings for several seconds, which to say the least, definitely were not inside a hospital, the undeniably destroyed medical lab, or even anything that looked similar to both.
Instead, I found myself in a place that eerily looked similar to where I had been reincarnated into the world full of Alicorns where magic reigns supremely, the death realm. Only this time the scenery in my surroundings is ever-changing every few seconds, the color in question flowed like an aurora in the northern sky so one might look blue, but atop it is red.
Of course, as I have stated, the color is ever-changing, which means the blue may turn orange or green or other colors and the same thing applies to red. Alongside those, this place is by no means dark as my surroundings are translucent like crystals and continuously soft glow of various colors.
Another noteworthy thing is that unlike when I was in the dead realm, I still have my own body, with my heart still beating and my respiratory system breathing normally, although wherever this is retained the same level of quietness, as only my heartbeat and breathing could be heard.
After I put my hoof down, I quickly began inspecting and checking every part of my body if anything was of difference, it took me more than several minutes to complete as my testing not only in appearance but also sensory details, as you know some part would require more... ehem stimulation for the sensory data to be valid.
Anyway, when I was done with the last part of my body, I sighed in satisfaction as the feeling of relief washed over me and I licked my lips to gather the juices that were still on my muzzle. I then stood back up on my four hooves from laying on the floor on my back, all the while giddily giggling with a content smile.
"That was certainly pleasurable, I certainly hoped that I would never get used to this so that it would never get bland. As for the sensory data, I can conclude that the result was satisfactory and nothing seemed to be out ordinarily, which is weird considering the place I'm in is nothing normal."
I stated in a joyful tone as I was glad that I would still be able to feel my own body, though now that this question of whether or not something was amiss in my body was answered. Now I can focus my attention on other important questions, like where the heck am I?
I can safely say that this is not the death realm as it is too colorful, bright, and in a sense more lively, which means I'm most likely in someplace new. After several minutes of inspecting my surroundings with my right wing over my chin alongside glancing my head in every direction to see if I could find anything that could give me a hint of where I was.
And only to come up with nothing other than an endless colorful translucent bright horizon, I folded my wing back to my side while shaking my head slightly a few times as a small frown was now on my lips before I stated, "There's seem to be nothing in here or anywhere in the distance my vision can see.
Which meant I most likely have to wait for something to develop and occupy my mind in the meantime- also no, there will be no more masturbating for now so get that thought out of your head -so I might as well see if I could fly around or use my magic in here."
After I concluded my decision, I nodded my head affirmatively and chose to see if I could use my magic first, mostly because it's versatile and in the unlikely chance I have to fight things, I would know just with what I should attack it. I pressed my horn muscle to be on the tip of my horn before I conjured a teleportation spell pattern in my mind.
I then felt the familiar tinge my magic gave me when it flowed along my horn and built up, this brought a pleased smile to my lips as that meant magic was still an available adversary for me. After a few seconds of conjuring, I looked to my left and at somewhere far in the distance.
Once I picked a destination, I conjured up a few movement magical symbols in my mind before I cast my teleportation spell, resulting in a bright crimson light flashing around me and blinding my vision. A split second later my vision returned and it seemed I was teleported directly and accurately to where I wanted.
You might wonder how I can differentiate my position despite there being nothing that can be used to determine my location, the answer to that would be perfect timing. The casting took a few seconds during which I looked at the ground and waited for the color below me to change.
Right when it had changed from purple to blue, I looked to my left and picked a destination where the color below me was not blue. I had chosen somewhere in the distance with the floor color to be red and teleported there, and now when I looked at the ground, I could see that I was directly on top of said red color.
Huh, glad to know that my magic still worked, would be very useful if I had to do some heavy lifting, escape from danger, or blast things to dust if needed. Now, I wonder if I could fly in this place and, " I looked up at the ceiling, or at least I thought it was, "If there's a limit on how high I can get."
After I said that, I looked behind me as I spread out my wings to their fullest and slightly moved them upward in almost V position, I then glanced back up at the sky as I took a deep breath and jumped off the ground quickly followed by my wing flapping. The result was immediate, a sudden surge of air below me pushed my body upward.
I proceeded to quickly align my wing in a straight line as I began flapping my wing up and down repeatedly, I must say, what my mother told me a few days ago about my bigger wingspan would allow my body to generate airlift more at a reduced amount of movement per seconds is certainly correct.
I can feel the difference quite significantly, previously I would need about four flaps in about a second to stay airborne. Now, my wing can comfortably flap itself up and down at a pace of just one flap per second to keep my body afloat. I then angled my wings slightly upward and sped up my wing flaps.
The result was as expected, the positioning of the wings and the increased airlift generated by more flaps caused my body to fly forward at a distant pace comparable to walking. After a few seconds of slowly moving forward, I lowered my head slightly until it was just above my shoulder level and increased my wing's flapping speed to four per second.
The effect was immediate, my body quickly surged through the air like a spear as my eyelids fluttered slightly at the breeze flowing around me. After several more seconds, I repositioned my wings more upward about forty-five degrees, and raised my head slightly to match my wing direction with my forehooves following quickly below my chin.
The change in positioning of the overall body and wings caused me to fly upward to the sky at a slower pace due to going against gravity, I then began counting in my mind from one to ten so that I would know when I should stop going upward and start inspecting the ground below.
After the ten-second count had been reached, I lowered my wings until they reached zero degrees and were in line with my body, my hooves then lowered themselves until it was below my shoulder, and my flanks alongside my head stayed still. I reduced the number of wing flaps per second to two so I would neither move upward nor forward and just hover in place.
Several seconds later, my body had finally stopped moving elsewhere and stayed airborne in the air, I then let out an exasperated sigh as I shook my head slightly a few times before stating, "Huh, even though I had reached up quite high I still didn't hit the limit, which is good. Now let's see what else I can see down below from up here."
Right after that, I glanced down at the ground below me and was slightly disappointed by what I was seeing because there was truly nothing else in there or anywhere I could see in the distance despite the increase in range of view, even when I looked at every direction from left to right and front to back.
After about two more minutes of inspecting, I just sighed and shook my head slightly as I concluded that with nothing else in the vicinity of my position, it would be a waste of energy for me to keep flying. So I angled my wings downward forty-five degrees followed by my head and hooves positioning itself to be in the same direction.
Due to the new position, the continuous flaps of my wings caused my body to head downward at an increasingly faster rate due to gravitational pull. After several seconds and I had gained enough speed, I stopped flapping my wings and instead began to use it to stabilize my gliding to the ground.
Why do I choose to glide my way down? It's because it would make the landings easier as by the time I reached the ground there would be less air and thus less lift, meaning I would be quite slow to the ground and give all four of my hooves easier time to properly grasp the ground before stopping my body.
There are of course high-speed-flight-sudden-stop or rapid-flying-immediate-landing techniques, the kind that most humans back on Earth would call badass or cool action due to the dust or breeze around them after they land, usually accompanied by the ground shattering beneath them.
That kind of landing, however, I have asked about it to my father once, and he answered that Alicorns are more than capable of doing so. However, it would require precise timing and the right circumstances to be done safely, and it would demand high-skill flying level and wing control, both of which I didn't possess.
So yeah, right now I want to play it safe and increase my flight capability first before I try any stunt or pro mid-flight maneuver. I have taken immense risks and possibilities throughout my life, but I know whether or not a risk is suicidal or an impossibility, in this case, trying to rapid-flight stop is outright deadly.
Anyway, it only took me about three minutes until I was gliding along the ground with my hooves slowly beginning to descend as they waited for the right moment to grasp the ground. Several more seconds later, my hooves had found fine purchase on the ground and I folded my wing quickly as my body came to an abrupt halt.
Now that I was on the ground, I sighed and glanced up at my surroundings anymore, searching if anything had changed in the minutes I was gliding down. After a minute and the result was nothing, I sighed again and was about to lay on my back to fall asleep when I heard a feminine voice right behind me.
"Hey there mistress, sorry that I was a bit late to meet you in this realm as there are some things regarding your body that I need to take care of first, you passed out with quite a blast after all. But hey, both of us know that late is better than never am I right?"
As soon as I heard that voice- which I assumed to be her -I immediately turned around with my wings flared out quickly in a fight/flight response while my horn instantly built up magic in preparation to cast offensive spells. I then stared at the intruder behind me with my eyes narrowed in alarm and muzzle growling slightly in apprehension with my fangs bared out.
What I was seeing in front of me was unlike what I had seen before, a fully crimson-coated pony in the shape of a filly that eerily looked very similar to me, she stood out quite easily amidst the ever-changing color of the surroundings. Somehow, she had facial features that resembled my face only if I was all crimson in color.
Seeing my reaction to her presence, she spread out her wings in a surrender motion, her eyes widened in a slight panic as she stepped back slightly before stating in a calming tone, "Wait, wait, wait! Calm down and please don't attack me, I didn't mean harm to you and if I somehow did for any unknown reason, wouldn't even be able to."
As I saw her continue to back off slightly and slowly in a non-threatening manner to put more distance between us, she kept her wing flared out upward where I could see it and forced a reassuring smile on her lips as she tried to de-escalate the tense situation.
After several seconds she stopped her retreat but kept her wings up and a reassuring smile on her face, in response to her attempt my wings folded to my side slowly as I began to diminish and reabsorb the built-up magic on my horn. I also ceased my growl and closed my lips to hide my fangs but kept my narrowed gaze at her.
Both of us continued to stare at each other form for two more minutes to ensure that this crimson mist filly didn't try to make sudden movement, hidden gesture, or otherwise things of suspicion. After that, I cleared my throat as I asked with skepticism in my voice, "So, who are you and why did you sneak up on me?"
Hearing my question, the crimson mist filly sighed in relief as she wiped her forehead off nothing with her hoof and folded her wing slightly. She then shook her head slightly while chuckling in placation before answering in a more relaxed tone, "Oh thank you for sparing me your wrath, mistress. I didn't mean to sneak up or try to ambush you."
My eyebrow raised questioningly at her upon hearing her referring to me as a mistress for the second time, I shook my head slightly at her response before my lips tightened as I growled slightly in warning before stating in a matter-of-fact tone, "That's still don't answer my question, who are you and why did you sneak up on me?"
After hearing my question and warning of what lay behind it if not answered in time, she steadied herself and took several deep breaths with her eyes closed before she opened them back up and replied in a resolved tone, "Sorry for not answering your question first, mistress, I will try not to repeat this in the future.
As for your questions mistress, I'm technically you, or rather the magic that you used every day. I previously remained passive and wasn't able to communicate with you, until your magical surge awakened me and gave me life. I meant to meet you earlier to say my thanks to you mistress, but there are some regards about your body that I found lacking and chose to fix it."
Upon hearing her reply and my mind proceeded to the information, I blinked as my eyes lost their focus and were changed to confused gazes. My head leaned back slightly while tilting to the right slightly as my lips parted before responding in bewilderment.
"Huh, the fuck do you mean that you are my magic? Could you please elaborate on that? And, what do you mean that you remained passive before my magical surge alongside why did you refer to me as your mistress? Also, what regard of my body do you see 'lacking', and what kind of 'fix' you did do to it? Answer by order, it's a command."
The crimson mist filly- I suppose I will just call her Magic now -nodded affirmatively at my question as her lips turned up in a smile as she happily replied, "Of course mistress, as you wish I will answer your questions by order. Just like what I said mistress, I'm your magic that you used extensively every day doing various things.
I previously remained dormant and unaware of my existence, until mistress's magical built-up went over and thus caused a magical surge which gave me life and awareness that I'm your creation and I exist because of you. You are the one with full control of me and my actions. By default, I was bound to you, always be with you, and always follow your orders."
She then took a deep breath to replace the oxygen in her lung before she brought a hoof at her nuzzle as she giggled for a moment, she then brought her hoof down and smiled wider before continuing, "I can't disobey you unless it is order me to do something bad to you and only you, mistress can enforce it but have to do it on her own as my hooves are tied.
As for what regard of mistress's body I saw to be lacking and what repair I did to it. First off, I saw that the cause of mistress inability to control me and stop the magical surge, " She pointed at my horn with her right hoof, "Was because mistress body lacked the natural magical carving and horn size required to handle such enormous magic."
She then brought her hoof down and clapped her wings together while winking her eyes at me, she then opened up her lips and showed her fully white teeth in a friendly smile before continuing in an ecstatic voice, "I decided to add eight lines rifling pattern on mistress's horn, allowing you to have a much more accurate and stable magical flow, thus increasing precision.
Alongside that, I had elongated and widened mistress's horn by a large margin, twice the original length and width, meaning more magic can be built up safely at a much faster rate and increased power. I also saw the magical reserve space management to be inefficient, so I rearranged its inside, and well, now it's increased by half!"
Upon hearing her answer, my eyes twitched with my lips open in disbelief at what I just heard, I slowly closed my muzzle as my eyelid closed slightly alongside my eyebrow furrowing slightly. My lips went in a straight line as I sighed for a moment before asking in an unamused tone, "Magic, at the rate of good changes you did to my body.
I'm starting to become what people back on Earth call 'overpowered oc' and practically becoming a cringe character, could you please refrain from changing my body further and let me grow on my own? Alongside those is there anything else? And... can you change my body however you want without my consent?"
After receiving and processing my response, Magic just shook her head several times with a smile still present on her face as she answered, "I'm sorry mistress, but this is one of the few types of order I can disobey. From my perspective, I saw what mistress body changes to be referred to as 'overpowered oc' and 'cringe character' as nothing worthy of concern.
What I saw when I fixed and changed mistress's body, were advantageous traits that would further enhance mistress's prowess in both physical and magical aspects, so even if mistress didn't like it, I would do and take it regardless of consent or opinion. Don't worry, I couldn't make changes that are unnecessary or dangerous, only able to change if it was beneficial."
She then looked up at the colorful sky with her right hoof on her chin as her lips went straight for a few seconds, she then jerked slightly as if remembering something and put her right hoof down as her lips went up in a smile again before continuing in a delighted tone, "Ah right mistress, now I recall what certain extra changes I did to you.
I'm quite unsatisfied by the less than adequate level of flight and control mistress's wings have, mistress can fly but the last time Mistress flew, your wings suffered from serious injuries and would have taken weeks to heal were it not for sudden magical refinement."
She then spread out her wings in an upward V position as she glanced into my eyes and smiled wider at me before she continued in a cheerful tone, "So I decided that a second pair of wings under the new ones would be beneficial for you, I have to develop some extra biological requirement for it to work and you would need to adjust and train more.
But hey, mistress now can fly faster over long distances with less effort required and maneuver in tight spaces quickly and precisely, because mistress can control her wing to work in both synchronization or independently. I have also increased the wing spans by eight centimeters, just to sum it up you know?"
It was at this moment that I finally succumbed to my automatic response to this and face hoofed loudly to my forehead with a thud as I groaned in frustration for a few seconds, I then put my hoof down slightly as I looked at Magic with my right eyes twitching slightly in disbelief and lips remained straight as I asked, "You've got to be kidding me, what else did you change?"
In response to my question, Magic moved her right wing over to her chin as she stared up at the skies with straightened lips again and let out a continuous hum for several seconds as she recalled her memories. She then folded her wing back to her side as she giggled slightly with her right hoof over her mouth when she saw my unamused expression.
She put her hoof down and smiled up widely at me before answering in an upbeat tone, "Mistress, changes I did to your body are very favorable to you, so mistress should have been overjoyed and not frustrated with it. As for mistress's question, the only other changes I did is for your body to be increased in height and be just right below your brother's forehead."
Hearing her answer only made me want to face hoof again, but I decided not to after some consideration and settled with a sigh of acceptance as I shook my head left and right for several seconds. So be it, if I'm gonna be overpowered then let it be, at least I'm not a Mary Sue as I still need to learn things, this is just a boost to my stats and not my control or mastery.
I then glanced up at her smiling face and looked directly at her eyes as mine narrowed with eyebrow furrowing slightly before asking, "You didn't feel ashamed at what you did, aren't you? Never mind, don't answer that. Instead, " I pointed at her with my right hoof as I growled and bared my fang, "What is this place and how can I confirm that you are indeed my 'Magic'? Answer by the second first."
In response to my question, Magic just nodded affirmatively and lost her smile as she bowed down at me for a few seconds with her eyes closed. She then rose back up with her eyes opened and her cheerful smile returned immediately as she happily replied, "Of course mistress, I can point out some fact that only you know.
First, you are not exactly a reincarnated Alicorn soul but rather a soul from another being on a different planet that died and was reborn in our world. Second, I have your memories that mistress make deal with the death itself, " She smiled wider with her eyes half-lidded, "Mistress, you also have used me continuously to pinch your clitoris while you were busy with lapping your pussy wa-"
Before I could let her continue any further, I rushed forward with a panicked cry and quickly clamped her muzzle with my wings, my eyes widened in surprise as I looked around with a watchful expression and a tinge of red blush on both my cheeks.
After several seconds of inspection to ensure that nopony else was watching, I turned my gaze to face her and saw she had a knowing look on her face alongside a damnable shit-eating grin on her lips, I shook my head slightly in disbelief as I released her muzzle and folded my wings before I stated in an embarrassed tone.
"Alright, alright, alright, I believe that you are indeed my magic now by the time you mentioned that I wasn't a reincarnated Alicorn and I make a deal with the death itself. You don't have to mention that I technically used you during my more... private moments, it's needless and somepony else could be watching you know?"
She just responded with a giggling for several seconds with her right hoof over her muzzle, she put her hoof down as she adopted an innocent look and smile on her face before answering in a jolly tone, "Who else would be watching us, mistress? We are alone in this realm and it's very unlikely that somepony else could enter.
Talking about the realm, now it's time for me to answer your first question, mistress. It's simply, that we are in your head or more specifically your consciousness and mind combined, this is where dreams would happen, memories would be recalled, and where I could meet and interact with you directly."
Now it was upon hearing this that the blush on my cheeks immediately disappeared and was replaced with my lips parting slightly, my head tilting slightly in confusion as my eyebrow raised before I asked, "We're inside my head? My consciousness and mind unified into one? What's the name of this realm and am I in a coma by any chance?"
In response to my question, Magic shook her head a few times with her eyes closed but her smile remained present when she opened up her eyes she replied in a cheerful tone, "Rest assured mistress, you are not in a coma or went unconscious for long, we wouldn't meet in here otherwise as I would be focused on repairing mistress body.
As for the name of this realm, there are many names I have come up with since my existence, but the one I'm very inclined to choose is Mind Paradise, do mistress want to know why?" I give her a nod as an answer, "It's because you could be and do anything you want in here, even together with me like."
She closed her gap with me slowly with each step bouncing her flank around and her tail raised high, her expression turned into one lustful one as her eyes became half-lidded and her smile widened to lustful ones while her head tilted slightly to the right. Before I could ask her what she meant though, she already closed her gap to me and pressed her lips with mine.
Warning! The following part will contain mature and sexual materials not suitable for young audiences! If you want to skip out this part, then scroll down until you find this same warning stating that the mature part is done. You have been warned!
The followings part will contain : Critic playing with her own Magic, tongue to tongue action, filly on filly action, use of magical dildos, having a dual orgasm and the illusion of being bred.
I was surprised by her advance and leaned my head backward instinctively to pull myself away from her face, she however, had another idea and instead wrapped her right wing over my head and neck before pulling me closer to her again. The sudden movement caused my lips to open and she used the opportunity to open her own lips and pressed her tongue against mine.
She then began pressing and moving around her tongue with mine as she closed her eyes and moaned softly into my muzzle, my brain was short-circuited and was unable to respond so the one to take the driver's seat was my biological instinct. I brought my right wing over her neck and pulled her lips closer to mine as I closed my eyes and moaned softly with her.
Our attention was then focused on each other tongues as they danced and exchanged each other saliva together in multiple slides against one another, Magic then took the offensive as she pushed her lips against mine and managed to punch through my tongue defense as it retreated into the confines of my mouth.
Her tongue used the opportunity to explore my mouth's cavern and walls as I moaned softly into her mouth, both of us breathing deeply at one another as our tongues continued to wrestle. After several minutes, I launched a counteroffensive and pushed her lips back, catching her off-guard and allowing my tongue to push her tongue back.
I did not stop in there, my tongue managed to break through her defense and it was my turn to explore her mouth cavern. I graced my tongue gently across her mouth walls as I moaned at the sweet sour cherry taste, she did not just relent and fought me back as she tried to push my tongue away.
As we continued to slide our tongues across one another, both our wings now raised in an almost perfect V capital shape- a wingboner. Our tails were raised highly, uncovering our delicate and aroused pussy as it winked every few seconds in need to be filled, its walls began to be coated with natural lubricants in preparation for intercourse.
After a few more minutes had passed, Magic finally regained her momentum as she pushed my lips back and wrestled my tongue out of her mouth before entering my mouth cavern again. Unlike before though, she didn't stop there and instead took a step forward as she began pushing my body to lay on my back.
A minute later, I lost my hoofing and fell onto my back with my wings sprayed across the floors, her body soon was stacked on top of me as we continued to play on each other tongues. My four hooves wrapped themselves around her body as our pussy touched one another and she began to slide it against one another, causing both of us to moan into each other mouth in pleasure.
After two minutes of sliding our pussy against one another, both of us stopped moving as both of us opened our eyes and pulled her lips away from me, leaving long strands of saliva as we panted and stared at each other blushing face.
We just looked at each other eyes with tenderness and lust for a few minutes before Magic giggled and asked, "So, how does it feel mistress? Certainly very different and much more fun than just masturbating on your own isn't it? Do you want for us to continue or was this enough for now?"
I was left speechless for a few seconds as my mind proceeded to her question and put together an appropriate response, I chuckled slightly with my breath still ragged from the exchange before I replied in an exultant tone, "This is certainly different and is quite fun, I'm gonna have a few questions after this but go on, I want to see what's in your store."
Magic smiled wider at my response as she nodded affirmatively and lit up her horn in crimson magic, after a few seconds a flashing sound could be heard from behind our flanks followed quickly by a crimson flash. She then motioned for me to look behind us and I tilted my head to the right to see what it was.
To my shock and disbelief, I saw what appeared to be two crimson accurately depicted stallionhood dildos complete with their bases and balls the size of an apple, each one identical with about twelve inches or thirty centimeters in length and about five centimeters in girth.
I then heard her chuckle above me upon seeing my shocked expression as I inspected the two dildos behind us with an increasing blush on my cheeks, she then took a deep breath before stating with lecherousness in her voice, "Surprised mistress? Since that time mistress's magical surge gave me an awareness of my undeniable and unyielding bond with you.
I have inspected mistress's memories and I must say, you are quite the imaginative filly and have some rather... interesting thoughts regarding your sexuality and likeness to the idea of being bred by virile, strong, caring, and protective stallions or colts, didn't you? So I decided right now, why don't we use that imagination to satisfy both of us? As your preference is also my preference."
I just turned my head slowly to face her with my lips gaping open in incredulity at what she had just stated, I then glanced up at her eyes and gulped when I saw the lustful gaze she had while looking down at me. After a few seconds of contemplating, I nodded and answered in finality, "Fine, but, is this gonna have a real effect on me or not?"
Magic let out a squee in response as she smiled wider and shook her head for a few seconds before replying, "No, it will not have any effect on your real body whatsoever, but it's gonna be very pleasurable... if a bit painful at first. Now lets the fun begin, " She used her magic to align the dildos perfectly with our respective pussies
In one smooth motion, she plunged both dildos inside into the confines of each of our pussies as she locked her lips with mine and both of us screamed into each other mouths in a sudden surge of pain we felt as our respective hymens were broken.
After plunging the didoes several more centimeters inside, she stopped moving it as both of us softly cried at the pain we felt. Our closed eyes let out tears that fell down our cheeks as we focused each other attention on wrestling and sliding our tongues against one another, trying our best to keep our minds away from the searing pain.
After a few minutes of sobbing softly and wrestling each other tongues, Magic pulled her lips away which left long strands of saliva in our lips as we panted slightly at the feeling of pain from our broken hymens finally dulled. Several more seconds later, she tilted her head at me, silently asking if I wanted to continue or still needed rest first.
I responded with an affirmative nod as the pain I felt had ceased and was changed by a weird- but good -sensation of something lodged deep inside me, she nodded back toward me and proceeded to use her magic to lift the dildoes outward until the tip was almost out.
She then slid the dildoes back fully inside in one smooth motion which made each of us let out a loud moan of pleasure at the sensation we felt, as she slid the dildoes outward again she pushed her lips onto my own, both of us closed our eyes and began making out again.
The dildoes continued to slide in and out of us at a steady pace of one time per second, causing each of us to moan longingly into the other mouth whenever it slid out and gasp in the delight of pleasure whenever it slid inside us.
This continued for several pleasurable minutes before Magic pulled our lips apart from each other as we gazed into each other eyes in bliss and softly moaned out loud at the sensation in our respective pussies, she then giggled upon seeing my blushing and the cute expression I make whenever the dildoes go in and out of me before saying.
"Well, well, well mistress, it's a good feeling to have dicks sliding in and out of you continuously, but do you know how to make it better? " I shook my head in response and gasped when the dildo slid into me again, "By using your imagination to create a scenario, how about you close your eyes and listen to my words carefully? Trust me, you would love it."
I stared at her reassuring eyes and smiled for a few seconds before I sighed and closed my eyes as she asked. With the loss of my vision, my mind and body had to rely on audio and sensory details to determine what was happening around me alongside what is happening to me, causing me to moan out loud more as the pleasure I felt from the dildo going in and out of my pussy intensified.
Unexpectedly, I heard Magic growl lustfully at me as the speed she slid the dildo in and out of my pussy increased twice by the sounds of plap I heard alongside my lips letting moaning and gasping in delight more often by the pleasure I felt, I then heard her growling beside my right ear as she stated in more deep, stallion-like dominating voice.
"Oh yeah, you like that don't you my broodmare? Hmmh, the feeling of my cock sliding in and out of you as I fucked your pussy thoroughly, " I moaned out loud in response and gasped when I felt her muzzle go along my neck while kissing and biting softly, "Oh who am I kidding, just hmmph look at your face, moaning and gasping like a slut."
I bit my lips tightly as I tried to repress more moans and gasps slipping out of my lips, this worked out for several minutes as only a few grunts and pants managed to escape. However, I then heard Magic giggle above me as she asked in a commanding tone, "Are you trying to resist the pleasure I inflict on you? Fine, two can play that game."
Right after she said that, I felt the dildo that had been plunging in and out of me increase its pace exponentially by about thrice its original speed, not only that but I also felt that it was getting longer with every slide in, as now I felt the tip of it touching and kissing an inner barrier within me- which is none other than my cervix -continuously.
With the increased pace and the tip head of the dildo kissing my cervix repeatedly and spontaneously, I find harder and harder by the second to prevent any sounds from leaving my lips, every few seconds a loud moan or gasp would slip out and make it increasing difficult for me to close my lips after it.
She must have seen that I still managed to some extent prevent sounds from leaving my lips, she cooed as though she was seeing something cute and giggled for a few seconds before stating in the same dominating tone. "Hmm, it seems my little broodmare is still resisting accepting her place, isn't it? No matter, I knew a technique that would make you scream out in pleasure."
She then brought her head down on my neck as she licked it up and down with her tongue, making a few moans escape my lips from the pleasure I felt on it. She changed the rhythm of the dildo plunging in and out of me to be slower but each thrust was now more powerful with such force that made me wonder if it would break through my cervix.
Thinking about that is a mistake on my part though, as it filled my mind with arousal and caused my pussy to produce more lubricant which in turn made it easier for Magic to slide the dildo in and out of my pussy. I then felt her breathing down on one part of my neck and kissed it repeatedly, before she lunged forward as she bit down on my neck, hard.
The feeling of pain mixed with pleasure overwhelmed my mind as my lips parted open widely and I screamed to heaven in gratification, my head shaking and moving uncontrollably which caused Magic to growl as she clamped down on my neck harder to ensure it stayed in place.
At the same, she used the opportunity to thrust the dildo in my pussy at such force that it broke through my cervix and entered my inner sanctum, immediately turning my scream to loud hiss and mewl of pleasure with my eyes rolled back slightly at the sensation of having something entering my inner sanctum.
She didn't just stop there though, instead, she pulled her clamp on my neck in random directions as if trying to take a chunk off of it, at the same time she didn't give time for me time to recover from my high as she swiftly continued to plunge the dildo in and out of my womb, continuously breaking through my cervix walls without mercy.
The next few minutes are filled with me letting out screams and shrieks of pleasure, the combined effort of pleasurable pain from the hard bite on my neck and the true satisfaction from having the realistic dildo plunging in and out of my womb, it makes for one heck of a delightful sensation that is impossible for me to contain or proceed properly.
I then felt her ceasing her bite on me as I heard her panting heavily and gasping in pleasure every few seconds, no doubt she had plunged her dildo into her pussy just as hard as the one she slid into me. After a minute she sped up her dildo and thrust into me as she growled dominatingly again and began caressing my belly alongside my flank with her right hoof.
By now, my brain and I had been turned into mush as my mouth opened wide in a silent scream of delight because my body was struggling heavily to replenish the oxygen in my lungs and replace my voice, making me able to only let out loud moans or mewls every few seconds.
As Magic continued sliding her hoof along my right side from belly to flank with her hoof repeatedly, I felt her breath on my neck directly on the spot where she had previously bitten it. She then blew a wind on that spot before licking it and the area around it with her tongue, causing me to groan in bliss.
After a minute, she stopped her licking as I felt the dildo going in and out of my pussy begin to throb, her right hoof began sliding faster across my right side and she brought her muzzle directly beside my left ear as she gently bit on it for a second before asking with clear lust and dominance in her voice.
"You felt that don't you? You felt my cock throbbing as it continued to relentlessly slide itself in and out of you, I'm gonna cum in you and inseminate you soon, isn't that what you want? Having me fill your womb with my seed and make you carry my foals as I make you truly and forever mine, my broodmare."
In response to hearing this, I moaned out loud as my head and body shook slightly in excitement and arousal at the thought of the cum entering my unprotected fertile womb, inseminating me and making me carry foals peaked my lust-filled mind as I replied in an exasperated, small voice, "Yes, yes, yes, breed me with your foals."
Seeing my reaction, Magic giggled lustfully as she grunted from pleasure for a few seconds as the effect of the dildo in her pussy caught up to her. She then growled dominantly at me as she increased the speed the dildo slid in and out our pussies to a breakneck pace and in turn, I screamed in delight at the repeated shiver of pleasure I felt.
"What was that my broodmare? You want me to breed you? To fill you with my foals? Say it loudly and state it to the world." She barked an order at me in a commanding tone as she brought her muzzle closer to the left part of my neck before proceeding to drape her tongue across and along it up and down repeatedly, causing me to let out a gasp at the sensation.
She then somehow increased the space in which the dildoes already jackhammering our pussies up to the point it pierced our cervical walls and entered our womb, now the pace is so fast that it make me unable to muster up a response as my eyes continuously rolled to the back of my head, lips gaping open as it let out streams of pleasured gasps, moans, and a loud shout of delight while I was crying out to heaven.
After a minute of continuous assault of satisfaction, I finally managed to clamp my mouth shut to prevent sounds from slipping out of my lips and I took a deep breath to prepare myself for my announcement to the world, Magic took the opportunity to begin kissing softly along my left necks, making it harder to kept my mouth closed.
Several seconds and a few kisses later, my resolve was broken as I shouted out loud with exasperation, gratification, and pleading clear in my voice, "Yes, yes, yes! Please fill my womb with your seed and breed me with your foals! I want them-AHHHHHHHH!."
And with that, Magic lunged forward and bit my left neck as she replied with a growl, "Then get bred!" Before she brought the dildo almost out of my pussy with the head tip just barely inside the confine, and lunged it forward with extreme speed as it immediately go through my cervical walls and entered my womb.
As a result, my scream of satisfaction intensified significantly as my whole body shook and my head shook uncontrollably due to the very intense orgasm I felt in my pussy. The dildo inside me then throbbed violently as its tip head expanded rapidly and lodged itself inside my womb, ensuring no return until the process was done.
My scream of delight then turned to shriek as I cried out to heaven with my vision turning white when I felt a hot, long, and sticky wave of foal-batter erupt from the dildo as it directly entered the confine of my womb and splashed against its wall, causing my belly to began to bloat and warm up pleasantly.
Waves after waves of foal-batters continued to enter my womb, with the flare blocking any exit, the cum inside my womb began to slush around as my belly continued to expand and the dildo pumped more and more of its seed into me, ensuring that no place in my inner sanctum left untouched and my breeding was imminent.
After less than two minutes, the dildo had stopped pumping more cum into me but it was still lodged deep in my womb, meaning my belly remained bloated as I felt the foal-batter inside me sloshing around whenever I make any movements. It felt very good, the warmth, the pleasure, the feeling of satisfaction my mind rewarded for a biological task well done.
The magic of the pleasure lasted for about three more minutes before my vision returned to being black as I came down from my high, I panted softly as tiredness began to settle into my body as the adrenaline wore off from my body. I felt Magic release her bit on my left neck as she pulled her head and stabilized her breath right above my face.
After a minute, she pressed her lips with mine as both her tongue and I began to wrestle against one another again for about half a minute before she pulled her lips away and left a long strand of saliva between us. I then finally opened up my eyes to see the tired, but happy and blushing cheeks of Magic with her lips curved up in a satisfied smile.
The crimson magic on her horn began to diminish as she ceased her spell casting, followed by the magical dildos in both our pussies wedged deep into our wombs vanishing a few seconds later, leaving behind gallons of cum inside our inner sanctuary alongside a trail of our pussies juices around it.
Due to there no longer something blocking the entrance of our womb, our fillyhood muscles contracted and soon began to expel some of the cum stretching our bellies out, both of us moaned as we felt the still warm cum sliding along our pussies walls before drifting out of our respective snatch.
This is where the mature section ended, now the following will be suitable for readers of all ages including younger audiences.
Thank you for heeding my warning.
As both of us stared into each other eyes for several seconds and stabilized our breath pattern, Magic giggled giddily with her right hoof going over her mouth as she stated with clear satisfaction in her voice, "That's very pleasurable, mistress, I'm glad that we can experiment with each other together, I trust that mistress felt the same about this?"
Hearing her question, I chuckled in contentment for a few seconds as I shook my head several times in amusement, I then tried to muster up a response but was cut off when I began to cough. The coughing lasted for a few seconds before I cleared my throat and replied in a blissful tone.
"Yeah, it's giving me quite a thrill, especially about the scenario and the breeding part at the end, it sounded and played so real, thank you. However I want to ask, is there any particular reason why you tried- and successfully -seduced me and are keen on having sex with me? I can't think of any reason a new mare I met would be like that, even if she was a part of me."
She just draped her right hoof in front of her face as she humbly responded to my thanks by saying, "Think nothing of it, mistress, it's very enjoyable and beneficial to both of us, " She then glanced down at me and frowned was now on her lips with her ears dropped down, "As for your question mistress, is it wrong for me to show my appreciation to the pony who had created me by serving her indefinitely and satisfied her need?"
Seeing her saddened expression as tears started to leave her eyes, I moved my right hoof up to her face and proceeded to turn the frowning lips upward back to the friendly smile I'm now familiar with, I then began caressing her right cheek gently as I replied in comforting and reassuring tone.
"Hey, hey, hey there my Magic, I didn't mean it like that, please keep your smile upward and don't cry my dear loved one. It's just, that this whole situation is already unusual to me and your behavior alongside action certainly didn't give my mind an easier time to comprehend it, I'm sorry about what I asked before."
In response to my reassurance and attempt to comfort her, she wiped the tears off both her eyes with her wings as her lips went further up in a smile with her ears no longer dropped down. She then brought my hoof down from caressing her cheek as she responded in a gladful and understanding tone.
"Don't worry mistress, I knew that you didn't mean to hurt my feelings and I somewhat understand your perspective, must be weird and confusing to find yourself waking up in an unknown place after a magical explosion, then meeting with a conscious and aware part of yourself, before being seduced by her and had successful sex with her."
Both of us then just stared at each other for a few minutes as we both just enjoyed each other embrace in comfortable silence, just like all things though, everything will eventually come to an end as I released my four hooves hold on her body and cleared my throat to gather her attention before asking.
"Umm, Magic, while I very much enjoy the embrace we share against one another in comfortable silence, could you please get off me and lay on your back beside me instead? I don't mind if you said no and stayed in the position we are currently in, but I think that a change in scenery might be beneficial for both of us."
In response to my request, she just giggled for a few seconds before she brought her head forward and kissed me on the lips as she moaned into my mouth for one last time. After that, she pulled her lips away from my face with a wide smile on her expression before replied, "Of course mistress, I understand your point of few and will do as you asked."
She then quickly began to stand up and proceeded to walk over my body so that she would stand directly next to me, she turned her body around so her face would be in the same direction I was facing before she sat down on her flank before leaping backward so that she would lay on her back, wings sprayed out open like me as her right wing went over my left wing.
After that, she got herself closer to my side until she was just right next to me, she shifted her body so that she would lay on her right side and proceeded to wrap her left forehoof and wing over my body to pull me closer to her, a gesture which surprised me quite a bit as I rarely have somepony else as close to me as right now.
She brought her muzzle closer to my right cheek and proceeded to nuzzle it a few times as she began cuddling against my body, when she was done I turned my head to my left to face her with my eyebrow raised questioning as I asked, "Okay, any particular reason why you cuddled me and nuzzled my left cheek?
Also, now that the sex is done and we now lay in a comfortable position, I will have to ask you about two things. First, am I only able to meet and interact with you in this mind paradise realm, or are you gonna be a new presence and voice in my head? Second, how long am I gonna be in here, and when can I wake up? Please, answer by order."
Hearing my barrage of questions fired at her, Magic let out a giggle in response with her eyes closed before she opened it back up and proceeded to kiss my left cheek and forehead with tenderness. She then took a deep breath before replying to my question in a loving tone.
"Silly mistress, you have no problems with me screwing your brains out in an almost sinful display that would make mistress mother gawk in disbelief if she were to ever witness it, yet mistress have problem with me just loving my creator and proceeded to cuddle and kiss her tenderly? Mistress is truly different.
As for your questions mistress, unfortunately, we can only meet each other inside this realm whenever you're sleeping or unconscious so I can't always be at mistress's side actively every time. For your second question, well, " She looked over at the horizon in front of the direction my body was facing, "It shouldn't be too long, the white light of consciousness is already here."
My gaze then moved over to where she was seeing and saw that what she said was indeed right, there's a white light the size of the horizon, and it was closing in on us rapidly, everything it touched vanished instantly behind the almost hypnotizing white translucent light.
In just a few seconds, it was already less than a hundred meters away and was advancing rapidly, seeming to be accelerating the closer it got toward me. Magic left forehoof then proceeded to turn my gaze to meet her face as she quickly kissed and brought her lips to mine attentively for several seconds.
When she was done, she pulled her lips away from mine and curled up into a smile of finality she stared directly into my eyes with affection while stating happily, "Well, it seems the time for you to wake up is closing in on us, mistress. It's been very nice to meet and interact with the one to gave me life and existence, thank you again mistress, and see you later on."
No less than three seconds after she finished her statement, a white light passed over us and blinded my vision for a few seconds, before everything faded to nothingness and it all replaced over with darkness.
I woke up from my slumber with a yawn, at least until that yawn turned to a groan of irritation as I felt soreness and tiredness all over my body, the fact that my forehead and horn were constantly aching just made it worse. I brought my forehooves upward to both sides of my forehead and began to gently rub it in a circular motion, my attempt to try to relieve the headache.
Only about two minutes later when my forehead and horn stopped aching as the feeling there turned to dull able pain, I brought my forehooves down and began opening my eyes. The process was slow as it appeared my eyeballs were also nagging, especially whenever I tried to move it around to see other directions.
This painful action naturally makes my eyes let out a few droplets of tears as they flow out my eyes and slide down my cheeks where I quickly wipe them off with my right wing, my tearful expression is also accompanied by a few sobbings and coughs as now my dry throat makes itself known.
After that, I waited for a minute for my eyes to adjust to my well-lit surroundings, as my visions gradually became clear and focused. It became increasingly obvious that I was inside some sort of hospital when I saw all-white translucent crystal around me, when I said all-white I meant everything from the ceiling, walls, tile floors, and even the double doors that led to this room.
'Well, well, well, it seems I found myself inside a hospital again, and not even a week has passed since then, I can already guess what my mother gonna say to me when she hears that both my brother and I was caught in a huge magical blast that forced us to be immediately be brought to a medical center for treatment.'
I thought in my mind as I sighed and shook my head in annoyance at the circumstances I found myself in, I then recalled what Magic said to me about her doing some changes to my body, let's see the true extent of her meddling on my body in all of its glory and when I was awake.
I got myself to a sitting position first so I could better observe the changes in my body, which proved to be quite a hard thing as my body was depleted of its energies, and took me several seconds until I finally sat on my flank. After that, I glanced down to my right side to see that I had two wings, with my original one several centimeters above the new one.
(Look like this)
I turned my gaze to my left side and saw the same things, instead of one now I had two wings of the same size with the original one several centimeters above the new one. I decided to test out my new muscle and flared out all four of my left and right wings as I moved it around, I watched as all appendages exactly followed my command with no issue.
After several seconds of testing, a thought then came to my mind if I could move all of these wings independently of one another, some contemplating the possibility later, I concluded that the best way to find out the answer is to test it out myself.
I looked at the two wings on my right side and used my muscles to move the upper backward while the lower one forward. To my surprise, delight, and confusion, both of the wings on my right side moved according to how I wanted each of them to be.
I blinked a few times as I used both my forehooves gently to rub my eyes for several seconds before I put them down and looked again at my wings, and saw that they were exactly still in there. I then experimentally moved both my right wings in opposite directions of one another continuously and they heed my command exactly how I wanted them.
I glanced to my left wings and did the same, they both followed exactly how I moved them to without any issue. Soon I found myself turning my gaze left and right as I observed all four of my wings and how they moved independently of one another, after several minutes I decided that I had enough and folded all of my wings simultaneously.
Now with my wings checked, I turned my gaze to look down at my overall body and saw that I had indeed grown up again, the length and width of my hooves were now bigger alongside my body, probably about less than fifty percent but undoubtedly more than thirty percent by my estimates.
My overall appearance, despite having grown quite significantly, still retained its slender form and if anything, made my coat look brighter and smoother alongside my body proportion seemed to be more refined, and attractive if you will.
My mane and tail length had increased quite long with the former reaching my shoulder while the latter I assumed to be only a few centimeters away from sweeping the ground if I were to stand up, their appearance now looked wavy than a straight blonde with strands of colors were now six half eight lines pattern with two lines in different place having the same color.
Overall, if I were to describe my appearance in one word, it would be ravishing. Moving on, now that the inspection of my body was done, my gaze moved upward and glanced around as I went to observe my surroundings to gather some intel about the specifics of the room I was placed in.
First off, I must say that it seems that whoever brought me here- most likely the medical staff -thought of me as an unstable patient who could violently explode in a magical blast of the same force that obliterated the buildings and their surroundings, and decided not to take a risk and did safety precaution by placing me inside a different room away from other patients.
That was not the only safety precaution though, as it's now when I realized that just a meter away from the medical bed I was resting upon, there were not two or three but five layers of violet translucent and almost transparent magical shield encasing me fully in all directions except the ground.
It's certainly smart of them to be cautious and I respect that since I too would do the same thing if there's an unstable filly who could cause mass destruction, if not a little bit more extreme since I would have placed her inside an all-steel solitary confinement with accommodations that support comfortable living, I'm still a pony on the inside you know.
Second off, I will say that the room I was in is quite large, probably somewhere about six by six meters in length and width alongside less than three meters in height. As expected of a hospital, or more specifically a room designed to handle a filly that poses danger to those around her even if it was unintentionally, there are a lot of things in here,
There are huge lockers and cabinets filled with various medicines and potions, and a few tables lay scattered in seemingly random but orderly patterns on top of the different kinds of medical equipment to treat and handle different situations, some of which are pieces of equipment that are unlike what I have ever seen before.
Alongside those, there appeared to be the same icy fire extinguishers I saw back inside my bathroom back in the airship, only this time it was held in containers on each corner of the room with each one containing four of them. In the middle of the room, there's a translucent red crystal table with it continuously flashing a holographic version of me.
I was, to say the least, interested in the magical wonder just about two meters away from me as I focused my attention on it and began my section. The red crystal table is about one meter by one meter in both length and width, with the height being somewhere about half a meter, and it seemed it could be lowered or heightened as I see a level on one of the legs.
The holographic image of me displayed above the table was certainly a unique one, since it's very detailed in every centimeter of my body from my facial appearance, body color, the now longer horn with a unique eight lines rifling pattern, and even includes very detailed look out of my reproductive organs.
Also from my perspective, behind the detailed outward holographic appearance of me, there seems to be another one behind it. Only this one displayed my internal organs, blood vessels, and even nerves on all parts of my body, it's both fascinating and horrifying for me to look at.
The two detailed holographic images of me seemed to be stationary but rotating continuously at the same speed, right on each side of the two appeared to be multiple diagrams with each one seemed to be monitoring one particular aspect of my body with new information being added every time new developments appeared.
The one right in front of my detailed holographic outward appearance, seemed to be monitoring my brain activity and I saw in one of the labels that stated in green color that sometimes shifted to yellow 'Conscious, Awake, Stable, Depleted Magic and Energy Reserve', I'm guessing that the color shifting indicated that while I'm okay, there is something of concern about me that need to be addressed.
As I continued my observation for several more seconds, I heard the sound of the white crystal door opening quickly followed by the familiar clip-clops of somepony's hooves walking in. I then redirected my gaze from the crystal table to the door to see who was coming in, and the two ponies I saw entering were certainly ones I would expect.
The first is a silver-coated Alicorn mare wearing a white doctor uniform with a sizeable hole on each side to allow her wing to come out, and a stethoscope hung on her neck. Her mane is long blonde striped light gold and cyan that falls below her shoulder, and her blonde tail is of the same color and reaches just a few centimeters below her ankle.
Her eyes were deep forest green and was currently looking down at the medical report held in her white magic, her expression was one of shock and interest as her slightly narrowed eyes scanned every bit of writing in it, her lips crossed over in a straight line, but was seen to be parting every few seconds.
The second is a lime-coated Alicorn mare wearing a white nurse uniform with a nurse cap atop her head, her uniform also had a sizeable hole on each side that allowed her wing to come out and fold comfortably. Her mane is wavy and just above her shoulder with the color between four lines of magenta and dark blue, her tail is quite long and almost swept the floor.
Her bright amethyst eyes were also trained on the medical report the doctor was holding, but it was gleaming with relief as they read through the data and her lips went up in a joyful smile. Her eyes then wandered over me and was about to glance back to the report, when she realized that I had woken, her eyes widened in surprise, and her gaze moved to look at me.
Her widened eyes scanned my form with surprise as her lips went agape, before her lips then went back up and her smile widened to one of ecstatic as she tapped the doctor's shoulder beside her with her right wing as she remarked in amazement.
"Doctor Radiance, look, the patient had miraculously awakened much earlier than our earliest prediction and seem had been so for a few minutes. Not only that, but it seems that her body underwent magical refinement because I see some things that aren't consistent with our earlier report, I mean, two pairs of wings?"
Hearing her friend remark, the silver-coated name- who now I know to be Doctor Radiance -glanced up and turned her head to look at her friend's face with a raised eyebrow and confused gaze as she asked, "What do you mean Nurse Lucent? I don't think our assigned patient could wake up so soon and what do you mean she must have undergone magical refinement?"
As they walked closer to me, the lime-coated Alicorn- who now I know to be Nurse Lucent -just pointed her left wing at me as she replied, "Just look in front of us Doctor Radiance, she was just sitting there comfortably, and staring at us. Her body is bigger and taller than before, her horn is longer and now has an eight-line rifling pattern on it."
Doctor Radiance just kept looking at her with incredulous looks for several more seconds until they stopped walking when they were right beside the red crystal table, which she then followed to where her friend was pointing and soon spotted me. She flinched and took a step backward in surprise as her eyes blinked in rapid succession several times in shock.
She then shook her head and rubbed both her eyes gently with her wings before she glanced at me again, her jaw gaping open in disbelief with her eyes widened to its fullest. In response to this, I just waved my right twin wings at her and asked with hesitation in my voice, "Umm hello there doctor and nurse, can I have a drink? My throat feels dry."
That seemed to snap her out of her shocked trance as she blinked before face hoofing as she mumbled, "Ah right, common procedure: hydration upon return from unconsciousness, how could I forget that?" Before she put her hoof down and looked at the medical saddlebag behind her, she used her magic to open it.
After that, she levitated out the familiar crystal bottle filled with glowing green liquid and brought it through the shield toward me, when it was in my hoof range I quickly snatched it with my right and opened the bottle cap. I then brought up the bottle to my muzzle and proceeded to begin drinking its content which immediately began to flow out due to gravity.
When I felt the liquid slide along my tongue, I closed my eyes and moaned softly at the sour taste as I lowered the bottle down slightly so the liquid would flow more slowly, meaning I could savor the lovely taste of it more and play it around my tongue before having to gulp it down my dry throat.
Due to my attempt at prolonging the potion consumption, it took me about a minute before the bottle was empty and the last drop of the sour liquid entered my mouth as it unfortunately went straight to my throat. I put the bottle down on the bed and I licked my lips a few times to pick off any droplets of the liquid still on my muzzle.
I soon felt the bottle I was holding begin to be pulled away from me and I responded by releasing my hoof grip on it, I opened my eyes and glanced up at Doctor Radiance's face with a thankful smile on my lips as I said, "Thank you for the potion doctor, my throat no longer felt dry and overall I'm feeling better right now."
Doctor Radiance safely placed the empty bottle inside her saddlebag first before she glanced at me and replied with a smile of her own as she said, "Think nothing of it, little Review, making other ponies better is my job after all. Anyway, generally how are you feeling right now? Any noticeable pain, weirdness, or otherwise something unusual you felt?"
In response to her question, I looked down at my body and inspected every area of it as best as I could for several seconds, I then glanced back up at her face and shook my head before replying, "I felt nothing was unusual other than my body felt very tired and sore, my horn and the area around it were aching previously but now the pain is ignorable."
She nodded at my response as she stated affirmatively, "Good, the tiredness and soreness you felt is common in a severe case of exhaustion while aching around the horn, and the horn itself is expected in case of magical energy depletion, both symptoms are in line with your case, which is unexpected magical surge resulting in a huge explosion of raw magic.
Patient 328, little Review, I know that you have many questions but for now please lay on the bed comfortably and get yourself rested. There are some things regarding your health and sudden changes we need to inspect through the internal and external scanning table first, now let us work and please do not disturb us unless it's an emergency."
Right after she finished her statement, she turned to her right as she brought her medical report up and flipped up a few pages, then brought out a quill and an ink bottle and dipped the former into it. After that, she looked at the external appearance hologram of me and began writing out any new data or information she read.
Beside her is Nurse Lucent who is currently inspecting my internal lookout hologram thoroughly as she spun it around and wrote out any new data she found within her medical note, I opted to do exactly as they asked and rest on the bed comfortably on my back while still observing them doing their work.
Several minutes of silence later, I heard a gasp from Nurse Lucent as her friend Doctor Radiance quickly turned her face to meet the former's shocked face and asked with concern, "Nurse Lucent, is there something wrong with you or did you discover something worrying about our patient?"
Nurse Lucent just shook her head as she recomposed herself and turned her gaze to meet Doctor Radiance's concerned face, the former still had her eyes widened in shock as she replied with both amazement and disbelief, "No Doctor Radiance, it's just, something about the patient shocked me to the core and fascinate me as it should have been impossible."
Hearing her friend answer, Doctor Radiance sighed in relief as she shook her head a few times while clicking her tongue a few times, she glanced into her friend's eyes with a raised eyebrow and asked, "You got me worried for a few seconds there Nurse Lucent, this hospital is already handling hundreds of patients with extensive injuries due to the magical blast.
So currently we need to preserve all the capable healing hooves we possess at the moment and losing one is gonna be quite problematic, anyway, what's about the patients- besides the obvious -that surprised you and should have been an impossibility?"
In response to her question, Nurse Lucent just motioned with her wing for her colleague to get closer as she pressed the internal hologram of me on the head, resulting in the overall images changing to focusing in great detail on the inside of it. In there, she touched the part of my brain and it zoomed in to provide more detail and outlook of it.
"Just look at the patient's brain, it's constricted twenty-five percent more than average yet it appeared to be functioning normally. If anything, it has significantly higher brain mass, nerve density, and connection than the average adult, resulting in heightened cognitive thinking and processing that is still capable of growth."
After she said that, she swiped away the image to the left and soon it was replaced by a picture of what appeared to be five large vessels that connected to a large lung-like organ as the base. It was unified into a single vessel that connected directly to my horn muscle, the portrait also revealed that the vessels were indeed blocking my eye nerves.
"And now look at the patient magical reserve, it's consumed a fourth of space in her skull that should have been the remaining twenty-five percent of her brain. The vessels connecting the magical reserve and the horn are more than one with each one much larger than the average adult, and then unified into one right before it reaches the horn muscle.
The sheer size of the vessels and their numbers were blocking most of her eye connection, resulting in permanently impaired vision which would explain why she had a vision pendant hung on her neck. This level of magic-related organs shouldn't have been possible by any means, it would have resulted in severe neurodegenerative issues otherwise, and yet."
She was forced to halt her statement as she had to take a few deep breaths to replace the oxygen in her lungs with her eyes closed, after that, she stayed silent for a few more seconds as she reconsidered the words she would use in her explanation.
Then she opened her eyes and was about to continue her statement when Doctor Radiance brought up her left wings to block her friend's muzzle as she nodded affirmatively and stated in both a commanding and bewildered tone, "The patient's cognitive ability or health wasn't affected whatsoever and instead seem to have increased drastically."
She glanced at the magic vessels and down at the magical reserve as she inspected it thoroughly for several seconds before she closed her eyes and groaned in confusion as she rubbed her forehead sides with her wings. Then she opened her eyes back up and continued with wonder in her voice.
"This size of magic vessels and reserve combined with the sizeable horn that had an eight-line rifling pattern, means that our patient here undeniably has exponentially high natural magical affinity and prowess, yet it seems she lacked magical mastery and control for any experienced casters would have to know how to minimize the damage of their magical surge.
Nevertheless, this level of magical prowess and affinity is simply impressive and mind-breaking for such a young four cycles old filly. I mean, she must have been really powerful if during magical refinement her magic saw it fit and was able to do drastic changes such as increased overall body size and height, adding a new set of wings, bigger and more refined magic vessels, and reserve, alongside longer horn with eight lines pattern on it."
Doctor Radiance then chuckled in amusement as a thought came to her mind and turned her gaze to me before she lost her chuckle as her eyes widened and lips grimaced as if she just remembered something dread. She then stared directly at my eyes as she asked with nervousness in her voice.
"Umm, patient number 328 'young Review', are you perhaps by any chance a disguised student of the Imperial Academy and was filly of renown and highly respected powerful Alicorns in the empire? For this level of natural magical prowess is simply too high and the odds are simply too stacked for you to just be any normal Alicorn foals."
The question thrown by Doctor Radiance caught me off-guard as I blinked in surprise, I must be careful of how I should answer this question so that my real identity wouldn't be discovered. I kept a calm appearance as I looked up at the ceiling and closed my eyes with my twin right wings over my muzzle while I thought.
'Hmm, I need to answer this question with a mix of lie and truth as too much lie would make the answer seem far-fetched while too much truth would cause my identity to be revealed, breaking any secrecy that remained. Perhaps I need to lie by admitting that I was indeed a student of Imperial Academy, one who was on break and spending time with her parents.
I will admit that I was a filly from parents of high prowess, but I will change their names to something distinct from their real ones. Alongside that, I will say that my 'real' name was something else and my appearance was disguised with high-type illusion. It's a big gamble, especially with the part of the names, but it's a risk that promises safety if it succeeds so I will take it.
Now knowing how I should answer her question and the specifics, I glanced down at her face as I folded my right wing back to my side and nodded affirmatively before I replied with a chuckle, "Yeah, you caught me, I'm indeed a disguised student of the Imperial Academy but would you please keep that quiet?
It's my only free time in years and where I could interact with my parents again, I don't want that to be ruined by ponies knowing that I'm here. I'm using high-type illusion spells and my real name was Analyze, my parents were indeed highly prestige Alicorns of the empire, and their names were Xion and Fiolin."
Upon hearing my confirmation, Doctor Radiance nodded her head as her lips curved up in an empathetic smile and answered in understanding, "Alright, Nurse Lucent and I would be quiet about this as while neither of our families nor ourselves have ever managed to be enrolled in the Imperial Academy, we knew that it's a very tiring and tasking one.
So we would let you enjoy your break time with your parents, also, Xion and Fiolin? I have heard of them, highly admired and capable end-ranks royal protectors, I'm surprised that they would bring their foals here but I suppose some peace would be needed from arduous works and assignment from the empire."
Hearing her response in which my gamble had worked out effectively, I sighed in relief as I looked at each of them with my smile widening and I responded with thankfulness in my voice, "Thank you Doctor Radiance and Nurse Lucent, both of you didn't know what this meant to me, I don't want my time with my family by ponies asking me questions."
This time Nurse Lucent was the one to respond as she draped her wing in front of her chest and stated in a humble tone, "Think nothing of it 'young Analyze' as it's the best thing we could do for our fellow respected Alicorns who sacrificed themselves for the benefit of Alicornkind, Kinersia know that it's a very strict and stressing but rewarding work."
She then shook her head several times before pointing at my twin wings with her right hoof and asked with curiosity in her voice, "Young Analyze, your magical refinement has done things that are very abnormal and that is adding in another set of wings of exact size a few centimeters below your original one, could you please try to move and feel them?"
In response to her question, I nodded my head agreeably as my gaze turned to face my right twin wings and replied, "Sure, Nurse Lucent, I would try if I could move and feel them, " Before making an appearance as if I was searching for the right muscle on my back for a few seconds until I found it, and thus managed to move my twin wings back and forth in harmony.
Several seconds later, I began moving my wings independently of one another as my gaze went focused and my lips pressed tightly in concentration to make them perceive that I was working hard to do this. My gamble worked as I heard a fascinated murmur coming from both of them until Doctor Radiance stated.
"Hmm, it seems from your inner part hologram here, or more specifically your backside in the wing region, there are several new flexible muscles, blood vessels, and advanced nerves around both sides of your body and the area around the wing joints of both twin pair of wings, your exoskeletons appear to be strengthened beyond your age.
All of this allowed all four of your wings to be able to move in both synchronization and independently, offering speed and lift in the former while offering agility and maneuverability in the latter. Yeah, I can see how these changes might unfold if I were to consider both of your parents' occupations, you can stop moving your wings now."
I stopped moving my wings and folded them back to my sides as I glanced up at Doctor Radiance to see that she was writing down some new information on her medical report, while Nurse Lucent continued to observe my inner structure. After several tens of seconds, the former nodded and put down her quill as she looked at me with a knowing smile before asking.
"Alright, we have done our observation and checking right now, other than magic depletion and energy exhaustion, your body seems to be well in order, everything seems okay. While some new developments aren't in line with our predictions and previous data, it's nothing of concern and just absurdity.
Normally we would have left by now if you were unconscious, but considering you are awake and we had been the one throwing questions at you. Come on, ask us previously unanswered and unspoken questions lingering in your mind, I know you have a lot of it."
After hearing this, I knew that this would be the opportunity for me to gather more intel on the current circumstances I'm in, but I must be careful about what I asked. Hence why I put my twin right wings over my muzzle as I tilted my head slightly before letting out a hmm for several seconds with my eyes closed, I then opened them back up and asked questioningly.
"First off doctor, can you tell me where and in what room my brother is currently being treated? He's a dark violet Alicorn roughly around my height with midnight blue eyes, alongside that, to what extent his injuries are? Second off doctor, I knew that both my brother's and my saddlebags were most likely vaporized, but perhaps are there any items that survived and where are they?
Third off doctor, could you please tell me at what hospital I was currently being treated? I want to know if any of my friends or my brother were in the same building as me. Fourth off doctor, I know that I probably gonna regret asking this but, " I sighed dreadfully, "How many Alicorns are caught in my blast? Any dead casualties and... what will happen to me next?"
Doctor Radiance, in response to the questions I throw at her, chuckled in amusement while shaking her head a few times as if recalling something funny. After that, she cleared her throat and answered, "That's certainly a load of questions you throw at me, but I suppose it makes sense considering I'm the one asking.
As for your first question, fortunately, I was also assigned to handle the colt that matched your description, I think the others nearby him called him 'Terika'? He's the patient I was taking care of before you, he's in room number fifteen G just east of the room you are in and he's still unconscious."
She then looked at the ground with her ears dropped as her form slumped slightly, her lips were frowning before she sighed sorrowfully and glanced back at me and continued, "Unfortunately, he was among the few that are very close to the area of the blast and thus suffered tremendous injuries, and those injuries are as follow."
She took a long and deep breath with her eyes closed for a few seconds before she opened her eyes and continued, " Extensive barotrauma damages, deep cuts, and punctured wounds alongside some bone fractures, then there was TBI (Traumatic Brain Injury) that fortunately didn't damage too much o the brain or the skull.
Several bruises and internal bleeding were caused by blunt force trauma, his entire back region suffered second to third-degree burns. Fortunately, the golden hour had passed very successfully, and thus all of the patient's severe damages have been taken care of, now we just need to maintain stability and let Alicorn's natural healing and regenerative ability do the rest."
Right after she finished stating that, she glanced at her friend beside her who was waiting and watching passively, before her attention was brought to Doctor Radiance when she cleared her throat and gestured with her head at me. Nurse Lucent seemed confused at first as she raised her eyebrow with lips parting slightly and head tilting in confusion.
A few seconds later her eyes widened as if she just realized something and her face hoofed while mumbling, "Oh right, I'm part of the recovery teams, " She put her hoof down, then glanced at me and cleared her throat before she continued where her friend had stopped, "Right, as for your second question about both your belongings.
At the direct explosion's site, neither I nor the other ponies in the recovery teams found anything resembling belongings, not even remnants of it as it's most likely vaporized during the initial blast or buried under countless rubble and debris.
Fortunately, however, we still managed to recover a peculiar blue communication orb hidden under the doorcase of the medical lab alongside other stashes of equipment stored inside a dark violet saddlebag. I can safely rule out that this was your brother's belongings, currently, they are stored in the storage room southeast of here about five corridors away."
She then clapped her wings together as her lips went straight in unsureness for a few seconds before she continued, "You may wondering if you could have it back, the answer to that is complicated. Technically you could request for it to be returned to you since you are his direct sibling, but it's up to the Field Commander in charge to decide whether you can or not."
She then folded her wing back to her side as she stared up at the ceiling for several seconds before she sighed and glanced at me before continuing, "Another option would be to wait until all on-site operations have been completed and recovered items are noted, as after which it will be returned automatically to the corresponding owner or direct relatives.
One of the exceptions to this rule is if the recovered objects in question were crucial or of importance, be it because of physical health and safety or emotional well-being, another reason would be that the patient is underage and wanted to contact their parents to tell them what had happened using the communication tools that remained functional."
Hearing this, I just sighed and face hoofed for a few moments until my mind recalled the other reason why I could have my brother's remaining belongings sent to me. I put my hoof down and stared with a deadpanned expression as I replied in a matter-of-fact tone.
"That's exactly why I wanted to know if any of my brother's or my belongings had survived the blast, or more specifically the communication orb. Because if it were not obvious, both of us were underage and we wanted to contact our parents less both of you wanted them to search every corner and house in the town for us, thinking we are foalnapped or something."
Upon proceeding with my response, both of them gulped with lips grimacing in dread as they no doubt didn't want to be blamed if that were to happen. Doctor Radiance then looked me in the eyes as she chuckled nervously with a weary smile on her face and stated.
"Yeah, I can see that's not gonna be very well for any of us, two high-rank royal protectors barging into houses and buildings searching for their foal relentlessly, we can't stop or hold them responsible for breach of privacy and damages that may occur during the inspections since they are doing what is expected of them and have royal immunity.
Alright then, I will have your brother's belongings returned to you so that you would be able to contact your parents and alert them of what has unfolded, " She glanced right to meet her friend's face, "Nurse Lucent, I want you to please gather and bring young Analyze brother's belongings here, told the guards that the patient wanted to contact their parents."
In response to this, Nurse Lucent nodded affirmatively as she replied, "Understood, I'll be on my way and return soon, " Before she turned around and walked out of the room, then she closed the door behind her with her green magic, the sound of her hoof steps slowly fading away before it faded and leave both of me and Doctor Radiance alone in this room.
Now that Nurse Lucent had left the room, Doctor Radiance turned her gaze to meet my face as we stared into each other eyes in silence for several seconds before she answered the rest of my still unanswered questions, "Alright, Nurse Lucent would be back within minutes with your brother's belongings, in the meantime, I shall answer the rest of your questions.
As for the third question, as stated previously your brother was in the same hospital as you are only in different rooms, I will assume that your friends would be the mixed group of protectors and academicians near your brother's, they are being held in this hospital just in different rooms for each of them."
She stared up to the ceiling with her right wing crossed over her chin as she closed her eyes and tried to recall the name of this hospital for several seconds, then she opened her eyes and glanced down back at me as she continued, "Sorry for the delay, it just Nurse Lucent and I previously was from other hospitals before we were reassigned here just a week ago.
So it takes time for us to recall the name of this hospital, anyway, currently your brothers, friends, and you are being treated at Ciletra Hospital located just about three hundred meters east of the obliterated unified Academy. It's gonna take about two weeks of repair for the unified academy and the buildings around it to be back fully operational."
Before she answered my last question though, she slumped down slightly as she stared at the ground, seeming to be struggling in her mind of how best it would be to answer my last question. I can see her biting her lips with her eyes focused on the spot right below her forehooves, deep in her thoughts as she contemplates how to break the news to me.
After three minutes of silence, she sighed sorrowfully before her eyes glanced at me with a sad frown on her lips as she stated in a mournful tone, "As for casualties... while fortunately there are no dead ponies, there are well over five hundred Alicorns caught in the blast or trapped under fallen buildings, some of them received extreme injuries and are in a coma.
Fortunately, the search and rescue teams managed to find them all and give them medical assistance just to stabilize all of the wounded before transporting them here. You are the 328 survivor to be extracted from the explosion site, at the time, we found you underneath fallen debris with your magic shielding you completely."
Hearing the fact that unintentionally, I had still injured hundreds of Alicorns made me feel a huge tinge of guilt in my heart as my ears dropped down and my lips frowning in forlorn. After a few seconds, tears started to flow out of my eyes as I began to sob and stared down at the bed before I exclaimed with clear anguish and sadness in my voice.
"I... I was never the emotional kind of filly, but... it... it makes me heartbroken to know that my prowess, my magic, was the cause of hundreds of sufferings and pains in others. I... I didn't mean it, I truly didn't mean it, oh Kinersia... please forgive me for what I have done, they didn't deserve this... I... sobs I just... sobs don't know what to sobs say anymore..."
Right after I finished my statement, my tears dam began to crack at a rapid rate until it was broken and my sobbing turned loud cry of remorse as I used my twin wings to cover my shameful face. I tried to stem the tears flowing out of my eyes and cease my crying, but it just made it worse as the regret in my heart increased and my weeping intensified significantly.
Just less than a minute after my lamenting over my mistake began, I heard the sound of magic the glimmering sound of magic being dispelled, and heard hoof steps walking closer to me. Doctor Radiance then stopped right in front of my pathetic form as I felt her wrapping her right wing over my back and pulling me close to her chest.
She then gently used her magic to fold my twin wings and pressed my face closer to her chest, which resulted in my tears wetting her uniform. But it seemed she didn't mind it as she began gently caressing my back and nuzzling my forehead while letting out a soothing, calming tone that sounded pleasant to my ear, comforting my wounded heart.
After several minutes, my cry began to fade slowly until I was left whimpering. When she saw that my cry had ceased, she gently used her left wing to pull my face up to her, she gently wiped the remaining tears from my cheek with it, I saw that her eyes gleamed with kindness as she smiled up at me before she stated with assurance in her voice.
"Young Analyze, at the time you are unable to control your magic, and very unlikely anypony else could control their magical prowess during a magical surge, so you shall not grieve over it, and neither should you feel regret over it. Instead, take this as a lesson for you to put more effort into learning and mastering the arcane art."
Hearing her reassurance, I gathered up the courage to look up at her directly in the eyes with a hopeful gaze as I asked with dread in my voice, "But.. still I decided to do a magical level test which resulted in it triggering my magical surge and resulted in a lot of property damages alongside injured Alicorns.
I... I fear that I will be held responsible for it even though I didn't mean to do it, it... it makes me worry about what would others think of me and if they would reject me from being part of them. But... the one I'm concerned the most is if my parents would still see me as their foal and... if they would still accept me after what I have done."
Seeing that I was about to cry again, she immediately brought my face to her chest as she continued to caress my back and nuzzle my forehead while letting out a calming tone. This time though, after several seconds she brought her neck over with mine and stated with reassurance in her voice.
"Don't cry young Analyze, and fear not of others rejecting you as nopony will blame or hold you responsible for something beyond your control and expectation. Also, if your parents truly loved and cared for you, they would accept and forgive you regardless of what you have done.
If for some crazy reason, your parents reject you and don't see you as their foal, then rest assured for I will take the mantle of being your guardian and parental figure. I can't stand seeing such a kind and heartful soul with a lot of great potential fall into prolonged despair and depression, which lead to the greatest mistake an Alicorn could make, suicide."
After my mind processed what she just said, I blinked in surprise as I gazed up at her with renewed vigor and a smile on my lips as I asked for confirmation, "Really? In the 'I hope will never happen' case of my parents refusing to acknowledge me, you would willingly be the replacement of them?"
In response to my question, Doctor Radiance nodded affirmatively as her smile widened and she said in a supportive tone, "Yes young Analyze, I promise and guarantee that in the 'let just hope to never happen' scenario, I would pledge myself to be your caretaker and the one to raise you to be the great mare I know you would be."
Now that I heard her confirmation and promise, I wiped the last droplets of tears from my cheeks and eyes with my twin wings as I smiled widely in happiness. My lips opened up as I chuckled relievedly before exclaiming in a grateful tone, "Thank you for the promise Doctor Radiance, we never met each other yet you are already willing to make a strong pledge like that."
She smiled wider and nodded at my thankfulness as she released her hug alongside her wing around my back, right after that we heard knocking from the door and both of us looked at the door just in time to see Nurse Lucent walking in. In her green magic hold beside her is a slightly scorched but otherwise intact dark violet saddlebag of my brother.
She then gazed at us and was perplexed when she saw Doctor Radiance inside the magical barrier and was standing right beside me, as she walked closer to us her head tilted to the right slightly as she asked, "Umm, did I miss anything of note in here?"
In response to her friend's question, Doctor Radiance just shook her head with a smile still on her face before she replied in a humble tone, "Nothing to be worried about, young Analyze here is just distraught by the number of ponies that are injured due to her magical surge, so I just do my job as a doctor and comfort her for it's not her fault."
She then glanced at the saddlebag floating beside her friend and her lips went straight in neutral curiosity as she inspected it for a few seconds before she turned her gaze back to her friend's face and asked, "I trust that was young Analyze brother's saddlebag recovered from the site of the explosion?"
Hearing her question, Nurse Lucent nodded her head affirmatively as she brought the saddlebag forward to me with her magic while replying, "Yes Doctor Radiance, the saddlebag is scorched slightly but otherwise seems to be fine. The contents though, at the time we collected this there are several pieces of glasses alongside violet liquid, I assume that was milk."
When the saddlebag was in my range of reach, I lunged forward slightly and grabbed it with all four of my wings before I leaned back and placed it down on the bed. Then I lit my horn in crimson magic as I opened up the saddlebag and searched through its contents for several seconds until I found the blue sphere and picked it up with my right hoof.
After that, I held the sphere with both my hoof as I began to inspect all of its sides for any sign of cracks or if there were pieces of it missing. Several seconds later my checking was done and I smiled up widely as the blue sphere appeared to be intact, only with a slight crack in some areas but otherwise, I believed would be functional.
"Thank you Nurse Lucent, I can confirm that this was indeed the communication sphere our parents gave for each of us, although I'm saddened that my items were completely lost. At least one of us still has most of the stuff alongside the saddlebag intact." I stated as I glanced up at both medical mares with a thankful smile on my lips.
In response to this, both Doctor Radiance and Nurse Lucent nodded with their lips curving up in a welcoming smile as the latter responded, "Think nothing of it young Analyze, it is our jobs after all to recover any belongings that are still salvageable, and return it to their owners."
Right after stating that, both of them glanced at each other faces for several seconds in silence, then nodded in unison with their eyes closed before they turned their gaze toward me and Doctor Radiance stated, "Now if you no longer have any questions for us young Analyze or something else you currently need help with.
Then Nurse Lucent and I have to excuse ourselves as there are other patients we need to attend to, if during our absence you need help with something, press the yellow crystal in the top right corner of your bed, " She pointed behind me at the yellow gem, before it moved left behind me, "If it's urgent then press the red gem and we will come in running, have a nice day."
When she was done stating that, she grabbed her medical report on the table beside her with her wings before she turned around with Nurse Lucent as both of them began making their way out of the room, but not before setting up the shield barrier surrounding me and resetting the configuration on the magical scanner back to default first.
While they were returning the configuration of the magical scanner to default, a question came to my mind that if answered, would play another important thing of note in how my plan of solving this problem would unfold and end. I quickly cleared my throat to gather their attention as I immediately asked.
"Wait, before both of you leave the room, I have one more question to ask, is my brother condition's stable, and recovered enough that home treatment is possible? I mean, I'm sure my parents would preferred to have their foals close to their hooves, especially when they knew that we were injured."
As I had half-expected, the one to turn her head was Doctor Radiance as she pondered my questions in her mind as she looked up at the ceiling with a considering gaze and her right wing over her chin, while Nurse Lucent continued returning both holograms of my internal and external in the magical scanner to default.
After several seconds of contemplating, Doctor Radiance folded her right wing back to her side as she glanced down at me and nodded affirmatively before she replied, "Normally I wouldn't recommend for any patient with injuries of this extent to be allowed to return and continued their recovery through home treatments.
However, considering your parent's occupation which means they no doubt had personal doctors and health consultors of their own, and provided that the proper amount of medical equipment, potions, and medicines were administered. Yeah, I think in your brother's case he could and allowed to be home treated."
When she was done answering my questions, she went back to reconfiguring the magical scanner back to default alongside Nurse Lucent. It took them about another minute before they completed their reconfiguration, and continued making their way out of the room, going through the door with Nurse Lucent closing it gently after they went past it.
I stayed silent for several seconds until I heard the sound of their hoof steps fading away before I let out a relieved sigh and a breath I was again not realizing I was holding, I was starting to notice a pattern here. Anyway, I swiped now my longer mane away from my face before I looked at the sphere orb in front of me and stated with slight exasperation.
"Huh, it takes a lot of effort to do and maintain all of those fake actions, worry, and fear for a prolonged amount of time. But then again, I had been doing this for years before I was inevitably caught by my brother, and the secret was revealed.
Anyway, now with the communication orb in my hooves and both of them having left the room, I needed to make contact with my parents and let them know of the situation my brother and I were in. I'm sure both of them know how to handle undeniably wide breach of secrecy, especially in the case of Doctor Radiance and Nurse Lucent."
After I stated that, I stared at the orb in front of me for several seconds as I tried to recall how does mother showed me how to use this, when my mind finally recalled every step of it. I started by lifting the sphere with my magic to be in line with my face, then lowered my head down until the tip of my horn touched the center of it.
I closed my eyes and started to build my magic from the base of my horn before I pumped it to the orb, which responded in kind by receiving every bit of magic I was giving and I could see even through my closed eyes that the sphere was emitting a soft blue light, glowing brighter the more I pumped my magic into it.
Several seconds later, the sphere gleamed very brightly for several seconds until its light slowly faded and ceased completely. Noticing this, I raised my head back up and opened my eyes to see what had become of the communication orb, now the orb appears translucent and reflective of its surroundings, exactly how it looked like when my mother did it.
Next, I pressed one of my twin right wings to the center of the orb as I focused my attention with my eyes narrowed slightly, brow furrowing, and lips pressed tightly before I brought my face closer to it. The blue sphere responded by emitting increasingly bright blue light for several seconds until a blue wavy line of magic sprouted from the top side of the sphere and attached itself to my horn.
It felt, unique and pleasurable for some reason as I somewhat felt it sucking my magic? Anyway, noticing this I stayed silent for a few moments before I opened up my lips and chanted, "Aeterna and Arcane, communication with both Aeterna and Arcane, " Repeatedly until the blue string attached to my horn disappeared and the orb stopped gleaming.
After which, I released my primary feathers from touching it and waited for something to happen. Soon enough, the orb glowed brightly, and soon the image of my mother growling with an unamused expression on her face appeared on the orb's surface, followed quickly by her asking with irritation in her voice.
"Finally got the time to alert your parents about both of your whereabouts now my filly? I told both you and your brother to return before or in time at five PM yesterday, yet you haven't returned and only responded to our repeated attempts to communicate with both of you now at five in the morning the next day. What do you have to say about this young filly?"
Before I could give a response though, my mother's angered image was soon swiped from the orb and was replaced by my father's portrait with his face showing a displeased look as he shook his head several times while clicking his tongue before he stated.
"I certainly thought better of both of you my filly and colt, Critic and Ethern, yet here we are having this conversation as to why you haven't returned to the airship and didn't contact us the reason why until the very next day. Both of us were worried when our foals didn't return home at the time specific, especially when we heard and saw a huge explosion in the distance."
When my father was finished stating his disappointment over both of us, his image slid away like before only this time the sphere remained clear and translucent, meaning it was my turn to respond to them. I pressed the top right primary feather of my wing on the orb as I smiled and chuckled sheepishly before replying in a nervous tone.
"I'm sorry Mom, and Dad, neither of us meant to make both of you worried over our well-being nor did we mean to make you disappointed in us. It just, along the way we met a joint group of protector trainees and academicians, in short, we befriended them and they led us throughout the town as our tour guides.
After several hours of exploration, visiting various locations and buildings, alongside having lunch at a restaurant then we continued the tour. They invited both of us to enter the unified academy and we agreed, then we asked them several questions and in return, they asked us several questions too."
I pulled away my primary feathers from the sphere and took a deep breath as I waited several seconds for the message to be sent alongside for them to respond, then another image appeared and this time it was my mother who still had an irritated expression on her face but shown to be raising her eyebrow as she asked questioningly.
"Okay, that honestly sounds normal and very kind of them to be willing to be your brother and your tour guides throughout your exploration of the town. Inviting both of you to their combined academy is a bit odd, but not alarming, so I must ask my filly. Where are you going from this, it didn't answer our questions of why both of you are late and your whereabouts."
After she finished her questioning, the image slid away to the left like before but it returned to its gleaming appearance, meaning my father stayed silent this time. This time I pressed my right hoof at the sphere as I cleared my throat before answering in a more resolved tone.
"I was just about to get to that part Mom, after one of the United Academy students named Vian a Wind Alicorn colt, asked my brother and me if both of us knew what our magical levels were. My brother answered his question easily but I just shrugged and stated that I didn't know what my level was since my magic was never tested in a way that it could be measured.
This led to him asking if I would be willing to let him test my magical level and help him finish his last assignment of the day, I turned to my brother to ask his opinion on this, and he told me to go ahead which in turn, I answered yes. We proceeded to get into the medical lab with Vian and I entered the magical level examination chamber, when we began the analyzing thought..."
I released my hoof from the orb as I took a deep breath and calmed down my racing heart, then I waited several seconds for the message to reach them and they gave a response. Soon enough a face appeared in the orb and this time it was my father and he was shown to be raising his eyebrow with his eyes directly focused on me as he asked with warning in his voice.
"Okay... neither your mother nor I see how this contributed, reasoned, or explain why you and your brother didn't return in time and still haven't yet. Choose your next words carefully my filly, otherwise, we will search for both of you and drag you two back to the new airship, screaming if needed before we give each of you punishments for this. Please continue and don't keep us at the expense."
I gulped as I heard my father's warning, my lips grimaced in both dread and weariness, right after my father finished his warning, his image on the orb slid away to the left and returned to its translucent look, meaning it was my turn to speak to them.
After a few more seconds of contemplating internally in my mind, I just sighed in both sorrow and acceptance as my slightly shaking right hoof touched the center of the orb before I told them the full truth, "Alright Dad, I won't keep you either of you in the expense any longer.
Something went catastrophically wrong just less than a minute after the magical level test with a horn ring, the number displayed spiked up drastically dangerous and I lost control of my magic. It triggered a magical surge in me, resulting in my magic continuously pumping itself out of my horn, forming a large mass of powerful unstable magical ball above it."
I closed my eyes as I took a deep breath to calm the increasing worry and hesitation in my heart, I kept my right hoof on the sphere so that the message wouldn't be sent yet. All two twin pairs of my wings began to fidget against each other as I opened my eyes and stared at the orb, unsure of what I should say next.
Several seconds later, I managed to gather up my courage as I sighed once again before I continued with uncertainty in my voice, "It continued to grow and grow bigger by the seconds, until about a few tens of seconds later, it reached its critical level and exploded violently, obliterating the building I was in and knocked me out unconscious."
When I was done, I hesitated in releasing my right forehoof from the orb but decided that it was better to let them know what happened than let them hear from other sources and I pulled away my hoof from the orb. The message was sent and now I can only wait in both fear and weariness plaguing every centimeter of my thought.
After roughly a minute, which for me felt like never-ending hours, I got a response and this time it showed the image of my mother looking at me in both distress and shock. Her eyes widened to their fullest as her wings covered her gaping mouth and her ears dropped down, a split-second later she immediately brought her wings down and asked with panicked concern in her voice.
"Oh, my Kinersia! My filly Critic and my colt Ethern! Are both of you okay and safe right now?! No, that's stupid, both of you are not okay. Are both of you trapped under fallen buildings and are injured? Is your brother's injuries so severe that he hasn't woken up yet or are you two separated?
Please, quickly tell us your location and we will rescue both of you soon! Come on my filly, respond to my question right now! If you are unconscious then please wake up! My filly, please reply to your mother right now... please answer me... oh my Kinersia... don't let me lose any of my beloved foals... sobs sobs please don't..."
By the time she had finished her plea, tears rained down freely from her eyes as she cried loudly in both pain and anguish at the thought of her foal dying while she couldn't do anything to stop it crossed her mind. The image made me feel another tinge of guilt in my heart before I quickly shook my head and recomposed myself to answer the question.
As soon as the image faded away, I pressed my right hoof on the center of the sphere as I sighed and looked down at the bed one last time before I glanced back up as determination filled my mind and I replied to my mother's plea with assurance and admittance in my voice.
"Mother, father, don't worry about both of us. We were rescued by the search and rescue team as soon as the initial explosion stopped and the situation allowed for the evacuation of the wounded to be possible, both of us are currently at Ciletra Hospital three hundred east of the destroyed unified academy.
I only got severe exhaustion and magical depletion as my magic protected me from all manner of damage during my time of absence from consciousness, my brother, however, received extreme injuries and was quickly brought here for surgery and extensive medical treatment."
Before I continued, I took a deep breath to replace the oxygen in my lungs and calmed down my racing heart with my eyes closed for a few seconds, my right hoof was still on the communication orb so that the message wouldn't be sent. I then opened back up my eyes and continued in a now more resolved tone.
"Fortunately, however, two of the doctors and nurses assigned for the treatment of his injuries happened to be also the medical personnel assigned to observe and care for me. They told me that the golden hour had passed successfully and home treatment was possible if the appropriate care, medical equipment, medicines, and potions were available for continuous use until he made a full recovery.
There are other things to worry though, as either of you might expected, this misfortune caused some of the medical staff in this hospital to discover my unique circumstances. I managed to lure them away from discovering my brother's and my true identity by fake cover names and backgrounds, but I think it's only a matter of time until they realize that something was amiss with my admittance."
When I finished my reply, I let go of my right hoof from the orb and waited patiently for them to receive the message before giving me back a response. Two minutes later, the orb shined again and soon I saw the portrait of my mother's relieved expression as she could be seen wiping the tears off her eyes and cheeks with her wings.
Her lips curved up in a grateful smile as she chuckled joyfully for a few seconds before she shook her head and responded with cheerfulness in her voice, "Oh my filly and colt, mother and father here was so, so, so glad that both of you are still alive, and although we are saddened that your brother received extreme injuries and are still unconscious.
It's blissful to know that his golden hour passed very well with all of his immediate and close-to-life-threatening injuries being healed, and that home medical care is possible within reason. I'm more than capable of caring for and healing him until he makes a full recovery, I just need the medical equipment and supplies."
Right after mother finished her response, her image slid away and was replaced by father's face, he appeared to also be happy to hear that my brother and I were okay considering he nodded his head affirmatively with a pleased smile and loving gaze before he stated in both pleased and proudful tone.
"My filly, I'm glad to know that both your brother and you are okay alongside receiving medical attention inside a hospital, I'm also proud of you for managing to hide both of your identities and gathering more than enough intelligence, and information, alongside things of concern so that your mother and I know how we should assess this situation properly.
The breach of secrecy is worrying, but there is not much we can do about it... now that I think about it, there's one thing you could do to mitigate the damage of secrecy. Critic, you don't have to do this but if you think you can, I need you to try to get the medical report of the medical staff assigned for you and your brother."
Right after he finished that one, he took a deep breath with his eyes closed before he opened them back up and continued, "It would be beneficial for you as removing the hard evidence out of the picture meant it's harder for them to track down your real identity. Getting your brother's medical report will help your mother greatly in determining what medical supplies and equipment she needs to buy.
Both your mother and I here will get to the hospital and infiltrate through its hallways to find the room your brother and you are in, it would be preferable by the time we extract both of you out, you already have the medical reports on your hoof my filly. Again, you don't have to do this, but it will help our effort significantly."
Now with his statement completed, his image slid away before the orb's surface returned to its translucent blue appearance. I considered for a few moments what my father asked me to do if he thought I could pull it off, then I sighed before I pressed the orb with my right hoof and replied.
"Alright Mom, Dad, I'll see if I can do what both of you asked fast enough before extraction and be discreet about it. I have received some upgrades and have first-hoof experience in slipping out to 'borrow' things anyway, might as well assume this as a semester final test of my skill.
By the time both of you received this message, I would have already gone off and begun my slipping out, I would use multiple invisibility and illusion spells stacked on top of one another multiple times. Anyway, I would most likely be in my brother's room at number fifteen G and this is your lovely little filly, Critic, signing off."
When I was done stating my reply, I released my hoof from the sphere and immediately began to bring it with my twin wings into the slightly scorched saddlebag as I opened it up with my magic. After the sphere had been secured, I closed the saddlebag before I brought it and placed it just after my neck, then tied the straps below my belly together.
Now that I was done, I got myself to stand up on the bed before hopping onto the floor, after which I turned around and noted that my height was now as tall as the medical bed when it was laid horizontally. I lit up my horn and was about to conjure both invisibility and illusion spell patterns alongside their specifics.
When both spells immediately shot up from my horn and hit my body, immediately began turning my body appearance from purple-oriented colors to instead blue-related colors. I had chosen the specifics of my illusion spells to have my coat turned bluish white, my eyes color turned bright cyan, while my mane and tail colors turned azure, cobalt, and teal.
At the same time, my body began turning invisible starting with my hooves before it slowly raised to my chest and eventually enveloped my head, turning me invisible completely. I just stared at my elongated and patterned horn for several seconds, before I face hoofed and stated in annoyance.
"Of course, I have used infiltration spells like these for a year before I no longer had to because my family discovered my secrets about a week ago. Combine often usage, heightened magical capability, rarely forgetting mind, and the fact that these spells are of a low type, of course, now I would be able to cast it immediately."
After that, I just put my hoof down while shaking my head several times and groaned in irritation, I'm starting to become powerful too fucking fast. Anyway, I cast the same spells and conjured the same specific symbols a few more times, each time as easily as the previous one, and made myself have layers upon layers of the same illusion and invisibility.
When I was done, I did the same with the sound dampener spell and I found that casting the low-type Darkness/Corruption magic is instantaneous for me and I overdid it several times. I had also ensured that the saddlebag had is also invisible alongside me, as I was sure flying scorched dark violet saddlebag would attract all heads it came into view with.
Anyway, now that the invisibility spell was cast on me, it was time for me to put on the illusion of myself sleeping peacefully on the bed with the dark violet saddlebag right in front of my face. For this one, I had to put some effort due to having to cast extra unfamiliar specifics in the process of conjuring the illusion, which make me happy since I like processing.
While my magic immediately coursed up my horn to the tip ready to be used, it still took me about three minutes to prepare the detailed illusion of me resting on the bed peacefully. Once again, I looked so darn cute that I wished I could have hugged myself, but of course, reality will not follow how you want it to go.
Now with the illusion done, I turned myself around and noticed that the magical barriers were blocking my way out of there, I gently banged my right hoof on it to see if it was solid and it made sounds akin to knocking on a brick wall. I put my hoof down and just shook my head several times at the minor inconvenience in front of me.
Why minor inconvenience? Because it only blocks my way out, it doesn't stop me from trying to teleport my way through it which is exactly what I'm doing right now. My horn immediately cast a teleportation spell at the ready upon my will, so I just needed to cast a direction and location-specific patterns on my mind before I disappeared in a crimson flash, and reappeared on the other side after another crimson flash.
I chuckled slightly for a few moments before my lips went to a frown as the thrill of casting the previously hard spell didn't appear inside me, oh well then that means I have to learn harder spells with more complex and long patterns alongside the requirement to cast them.
With the minor inconvenience out of the way, I just walked to the door and put my right ear as I leaned against it, trying to see if I could pick off any clip-clop sounds of hooves walking on the other side. I heard it for a few minutes before it faded into silence for more than half a minute, most likely meaning that nopony was walking or nearby.
I used this short window to pull the left door backward with my magic before I immediately slipped through it as soon as the gap became big enough to fit me, then I swiftly but gently brought the door back closed to ensure that things remained silent. When that was done, I turned my head around and found that my room was placed on a combined crosspoint.
Why, because there are three hallways connected to it, there's the one up front, another one on my right then there is the one on my left. The appearance of each hallway looked the same as the kind of hallways I expected of a hospital, all white from bottom to ceiling with a few rows of seats across each hallway and several plants in each corner.
The only thing worthy of note over here is that, on each top side of the two walls that lead to different directions, there are signs displaying numbers like the one I'm currently facing is thirteen to fourteen, the one on my right is eleven to twelve, while the one on my left is the one I need to remember on because the number is fifteen to sixteen.
Now, I don't exactly know where they are going as I never asked them, but what I did know is that they are going farther away with every step they take from the start. This means if my guess is right, they are going forward at corridors thirteen to fourteen, while it's not the exact location, at least I know where I should be going.
With a direction in mind, I just sighed in annoyance as I shook my head several times and made my way onward before thinking, 'Of course, just like searching for specific books on a wide library section of my mother's previous lab, I need to search one specific room among many others. If everything goes about my luck, it's gonna take several minutes... if I'm lucky obviously.'
As I expected, luck was not on my side today and it took me taking several turns and almost a hundred ward doors checking to see if I could hear the distinct voices of Doctor Radiance and Nurse Lucent, all in all, it take probably almost half an hour until I finally find the room they are in at corridor number seven to eight inside ward number eight C.
Currently, I was gently leaning my right ear against the door as I listened to the conversation that unfolded inside, I must say that the patient inside this medical ward is most likely the protector trainee Aemori, the very honorable, tradition-bound, archaic noble-like speech and act, I'm guessing this because what I heard from both medical mares inside.
"... Doctor Radiance, from the scan over here it seemed that while the patient's armor had certainly prevented major external bleedings, the shockwave of the explosion bent the armor quite significantly that I can say that the previous doctor assigned to him had to manually cut the armor and pull it out of him."
"Hmm, from the looks of it Nurse Lucent, alongside that I suspect that the surgeons had to also deal with severe internal bleeding, if anything from the fractured and missing bones in the chest and region is anything to go by. Poor Aemori, I had known this colt and his family quite well, a bit old-styled, temperamental, and archaic, but otherwise very kind ponies."
I waited several more seconds to see if any more conversation was unfolding, only to hear that they stayed silent as they focused on their work. This meant I had to begin the quite risky part of my plan, which was to get into the room, steal the medical report they were holding, and then get out of there undetected.
I pulled my head away from the door and turned my gaze to face it, I took a deep breath with my eyes closed to calm my racing heart, before I opened my eyes and knocked on the door three times, here goes nothing. After a few seconds, I heard the voice of Doctor Radiance asking in confusion.
"Who could that be Nurse Lucent? We aren't expecting any other medical staff to help us care for the patient right now do we?"
"Wait, let me check the medical report first, " Sound of magic sparkling followed by flipping up a few pages, "Actually, there is other medical personnel that will be assigned to care for him, a blaze Alicorn mare by the name of Aesfer, she's a psychiatrist supposed to care for his mental well being... which didn't make sense since the patient's still unconscious."
"Could it be that it was the patient's parents then? I had known them to be quite fast responding to news that is related to their foals, especially if it was directly such as the destruction of the unified academy and one of their foal not yet returning home in time."
"It's possible Doctor Radiance, I will go ahead and open the door now, let's see who is on the other side."
After Nurse Lucent replied, I heard her walking closer to the door and I took a step back in case she pushed the door forward so I would not get my face hit, that would just ruin the whole plan. Anyway, when she was just standing right before the door, she pulled it backward and looked to see, nothing on the other side.
While she was bust looking around in confusion, I used the opportunity to slip through the gap and entered the room, now I can see the inside is very similar to the room I was in complete with the magical scanner in the middle. There on the medical bed, is none other than Aemori but his whole lower body is covered in bandages and tourniquets.
His wings are held steadily by bandages that are wrapped snuggly and comfortably around his neck, he is resting on his back and I can see that his face is recognizable with only some light cuts and bruises, his forehead is covered in medical wrap though, meaning that his head wasn't safe even though he wears a helmet.
As exactly what both of them stated previously, he's remained unconscious but otherwise fine as his chest rises up and down steadily. Meaning his golden hour has passed as successfully as my brother if I were to believe what Doctor Radiance told me about his condition, I'm glad that Aemori is fine, he's respectful and he didn't deserve to die.
Anyway, I soon spotted the medical report I was looking for on top of the table exactly beside his medical bed, I slowly and quietly made my way past Doctor Radiance who was still focused on the magical scanner. Just as I reached the table and was about to grab the report with my twin right wings, I heard the door behind me closed as Nurse Lucent stated in a perplexed tone.
"Huh, Doctor Radiance, strangely there is nopony else on the other side nor was there even anything near the door or across the hallway. If it was only me I would have thought I was mishearing things, but if you hear it too then who was knocking on the door previously?"
Alright, I can't pick up the medical record yet since they would immediately notice that their report was floating up before it suddenly disappeared inside my invisible saddlebag. Which meant I had to wait until their attention was elsewhere, preferably in the direction that was not facing my form, I chose to stay in my place unmoving and stayed silent."
"That's odd, but I suppose it could be that it was other patient's relatives first thinking it was our room where their injured family was before they looked at the number above the door and realized it was the wrong medical ward. Wouldn't be the first nor be the last time I would hear it."
I heard her yawn sleepily quite loudly for a few seconds before she sighed and stated with tiredness in her voice, "I also wouldn't be surprised if it was actually both of us hallucinating due to being overworked way, way, past our schedule, our shift should have ended yesterday afternoon yet we are forced to work overnight till this day ended.
Nurse Lucent, come here as I want you to continue monitoring and scanning the patient for any other sign of abnormality, I just noticed that his blood was starting to form clotting in some areas, blocking blood from flowing into major organs. I would search through the cabinets for the anticoagulant injections, shouldn't take me too long."
Right after she finished stating that, I heard both her and Nurse Lucent walking to their respective task with the former fortunately walking on the right side of the medical bed, searching through the medical lockers for the syringe they were searching for.
While they were busy, I used the opportunity to quickly grab the medical report on the table with my twin right wings and swiftly opened up my left bag with my left twin wings before securing the medical report inside, making the report disappear inside it.
I then turned around and watched that none of them seemed to have spotted my action, meaning now I had to find my way out of the room undetected. I was pondering about it for a few moments before a break presented itself when I heard Doctor Radiance groan in irritation before she stated with annoyance in her voice.
"Damn my luck, it seemed that the medical lockers and cabinets haven't been yet fully restocked, and the anticoagulants agents' boxes are all empty. Nurse Lucent, I need you to gather several more boxes of it in one of the storage areas, tell the guards that I sent you under my order, should have been enough to let you pass and help you search for it."
As soon as Nurse Lucent heard that, she nodded her head affirmatively and stated, "Of course Doctor Radiance, I'll be back in minutes," Before she began making her to the door while I hastily followed her from behind, I stood right behind her as I waited for her to pull the door backward.
When she did pull the door and walked outside, I followed close by until I passed the door and walked right away from her just in time for the door to be closed. After that I watched her going left through the corridor until she disappeared from my vision when she took a right turn, and her hoof steps faded away in the distance.
I then looked around me and observed if there were no ponies else currently walking around or had the probability of seeing me, when I saw none I immediately cast a teleportation spell and disappeared in a bright crimson until I reappeared back inside my medical ward, after which I sighed in relief and chuckled slightly at another successful slipping out before stating.
"Damn, that was a few quick and intense minutes there, I'm starting to get too good at sneaking out like this and 'borrowing' things from others without them realizing I was even there nor do they know I was the filly borrowing their stuff.
Now with the medical report secured in my saddlebag and I was still undetected, I just needed to meet my parents at the point of extraction, which was inside my brother's room number fifteen G just across the hallway on the left. I hope they are already in there so we can get out of here and return to the new airship."
Right after that, I walked past the door and out of the room before I took a left turn as I began inspecting each sign above each medical war door to search for the one I was searching for. It took me less than a minute until I found a ward on the left side of the hallways that had the sign number I was looking for.
Before I entered it though, I gently put my left ear on it to see if I could somepony else voice that was neither my parents nor my brother's, several seconds later I still heard nothing. I pulled my head away and used my magic to push the door forward as I made my way inside, only to suddenly have a wing grip my neck tightly before it brought my body up and pressed me against the wall beside the door.
I let out a pained yelp when my head bumped into the wall behind me and I began coughing as I struggled to breathe because the wing holding my neck constricted itself, I then looked up to see my father glancing at me with a serious and watchful expression as his eyes narrowed and eyebrow furrowing.
He was wearing some kind of translucent white armor made of some unknown crystal that seemed to be able to turn transparent and camouflaged itself with its surroundings, he wore a twin white saddlebag and his helmet was similar to one of those Roman gladiators, on his left side there's a silver slightly curved sword.
Behind him is my mother who can be seen to be wearing a full white suit that seems to be made of synthetic fabric and enchanted by its translucent appearance, it has the same property as my father's armor because it blends with its surroundings like a chameleon and appears to be transparent.
On her left side is an elongated steel dagger, and her face is covered with a white mask that covers most of her facial features, only her eyes and muzzle can be seen. She immediately closed the door before turning her face to meet me, an amnestic syringe already on her magic, and was ready to embed itself into any ponies unfortunate enough to be the target.
She wore one large white saddlebag on her back that had the same property as her suit, on the left bag was my brother's unconscious form with his head the only thing visible from outside. His forehead and right eye were covered in bandages while his cheek had some light healed gaze and cut on it.
After several seconds, my father realized that he was grabbing something that he couldn't see, his eyes widened in shock as now it came into his mind that he was choking his little filly. He immediately brought me on my four hooves to the ground and released his wing grip around my neck as he quickly apologized.
"Oh my filly, Critic, it's you, sorry about that. It's just my reflex to always keep the one entering the room silent and prevent them from possibly alerting somepony else during an infiltration, I don't choke you too bad now, do I? Anyway, did you have the medical report we asked you to try to take away? Don't worry if you don't have it, we could take it on our own."
Before I responded to his question though, I took several deep breaths to calm my panicked heart and stabilize my ragged breath, then I shook my head a few times before I looked up at him and dispelled my invisibility spell while I replied, "Yes dad, I have managed to gather the medical report you requested."
I opened up my left bag with my magic as I levitated out the medical report and brought it up to my father who quickly snatched it with his wings, he read it briefly for a few seconds before he brought it to my mother who was walking to his side and immediately grabbed the report before she went through the pages, searching for the information.
After that, my father looked down at me and noticed that I was taller than I was before and smiled in satisfaction, before his lips dropped slightly as he tilted his head with his eyebrow raised when he saw that my horn was longer than before, not only that but now it had eight lines rifling pattern on it.
He was about to ask me about that when his eyes dropped down and eyes widened in disbelief when he saw that I had another pair of wings just right below my original one, he rubbed his eyes with his wings before glancing at my face and asked in bewilderment.
"My filly, are those illusions of a rifling pattern I saw on your horn alongside another pair of wings I'm seeing right now below your original set of wings? I mean, this time you underwent another magical refinement and it increased your wing spans, body size, height, and elongated horn. Could you please drop off your illusions, it bothered my eyes a lot now."
In response to this, I let out a giddy giggle as I gave him a nod and dispelled the layer of illusions I placed on myself one by one, it only took me less than half a minute until I was done and my appearance returned back to normal. Now that I was done, I looked up at him and stated with a smile on my lips, "Alright Dad, all illusions have been dispelled,d and here is the real me."
I saw him gawking at me with a puzzled expression on his face before he shook his head and closed his lips as he got closer to me, then he put his right wing on the base of my horn before sliding it up and down, feeling that the pattern on my was very real here. As a result, I let out a slight moan at the pleasurable sensation I felt coming from it.
After a few strokes, my father's right wing then turned to grab my lower right wings as he felt its form and texture on its own, with his eyes getting increasingly wider by the second I thought it gonna pop from his eyes soon. Several seconds later, he let go of my wings as he stated in aghast tone.
"Oh my Kinersia, those extra things are real, isn't it? I know that your innate magic is very powerful, but if it were to the point it could do these beneficial changes very safely... alright, if I have any doubt about the idea of letting your mother home-schooled you before, it ceased now. I can't let you be guided and taught by the wrong hooves, especially ones that would exploit you."
My mother, having finished reading the medical report and had watched the whole thing of father checking that the supposed illusions were real things, took a few hoof steps forward to me before she leaned down at me and nuzzled my forehead before she stated in an awestruck yet amazed tone.
"My filly, the medical report you had collected is indeed the one filled with files and descriptions detailing both your brother and you, now I know the extent of your brother's injuries, how far they had been treated, alongside the medical supplies and equipment required to ensure a full recovery. Also, you had mitigated the damage of secrecy caused by this misfortune.
I'm very proud of you my filly, but after reading the report and seeing the destruction your magic unleashed, I realized just how far the magnitude of your innate magic is. Your magical prowess would be both very useful and dangerous to everypony around you, including yourself my filly."
She then took a deep breath with her eyes closed before she opened them back up and stared directly into my eyes with a stern yet caring gaze for several seconds, before she continued in a more resolved and reassuring voice, "My filly, neither of us will blame you for this misfortune or held you responsible for it, since it clear you had no control over it.
So don't dwell too long on something that has passed and was not your mistake, but it does mean that from now on, I need to teach you how to properly control and master your powerful, wild, and untamed magic. Anyway, your father will teleport all of us out of this hospital and to the hospital pharmacies where I will get all of these medical supplies."
Right after she said that, she stood up and my father touched my mother and I's back with his wings before he lit up his horn as we disappeared in an orange flash of magic. We then reappeared beside the hospital pharmacies in a closed area, my father then folded his wings back to his sides as he stated, "Aeterna, you have the clearance and you know what to do."
In response to my father's statement, my mother nodded affirmatively as she lit up her horn in blue magic and levitated my brother's unconscious form he brought it to my father, who snatched him with his magic before he placed him inside his right bag. While my father was securing my brother, my mother flashed up her horn and changed her current clothes to a white researcher uniform.
Her scientist uniform is very decorated, with various badges and insignia decorating its sides and chest, each one signifying her great achievements and contributions to Alicornkind alongside her prowess and specializations. After my mother was done inspecting her uniform, she glanced down at me with a smile on her lips as she stated.
"My filly, mother here will go over and have talks with medical staff in there for the purchase of medical supplies and equipment your brother needed. They would undoubtedly allow me to purchase these as I'm a well-known and respected researcher who has created many great inventions, I would just tell them that I need those for my next research.
Now be a good filly and wait here with your father alright?" My mother nuzzled my forehead once again and petted my head with her right wing, after that, she began making her way out of the closed area before taking a left turn toward the medical pharmacy to purchase what my brother needed for his full recovery.
It only took her about ten minutes until she returned with both her bags full of the medical supplies we needed, if slightly more than what was required judging by the various bulges I saw throughout each bag. Anyway, now that my mother has returned, she winked her eyes at Dad with a knowing smile.
My father replied with an affirmative nod and an understanding smile on his face as he looked down at me before stating, "My filly, now I'm gonna be performing a very long-range teleport back to the side of our new airship, it may make you feel dizzy a bit so get ready."
He pressed both his wings on my mother and my back as he lit up his horn in orange magic for several seconds with his eyes closed, and then he opened them back up as we disappeared in a bright orange flash.
We then reappeared back to the airship field, only this time a few meters in front of me was not the huge airship my family and I were previously boarding. It's a smaller airship, probably about thirty meters in length and about twenty meters in width, above it is a sizeable cloud that is slightly bigger than the ship and only had in total a dozen openings.
Four openings on the left and right sides of the lower part of the cloud, with two of them on the front and back sides of the cloud, the cloud is shaped similarly to the previous airship only this more smaller and rounded by the looks of it. There is one foldable translucent blue crystal staircase on each side of it.
Several pillars and chains made of cobalt crystals could be seen directly connecting the cloud with the airship below it, with on each side of the walls could be seen four one-by-one meters windows that I'm sure were made of quarts, only polished to the point that it looked as transparent as clean water.
The hulls of the airship were overall made of midnight blue materials that looked like steel, only it was translucent and more reflective of its surroundings as I can see our forms from it. On the middle board, part is where the steer, which looked similar to the one on the larger airship, only has fewer levers.
On the stern side, there's a cabin-like place that has two large double doors that I'm sure would lead to either the engine or machine compartment inside the huge cloud alongside the observation post located above it. I also assumed that it would also have staircases that led deeper into the airships.
There are fences and gates made of orange translucent crystals scattered across the outline of the outboard side of the airship, no doubt those were to prevent ponies from accidentally falling over. The airship cloud, after some more inspection, actually had a single three-meter-tall reinforced glass that stretched horizontally across each side of the cloud.
Overall, this new airship that will be our new home looked more radiant and I suppose lively than the large all-steel airship we were previously boarding, as an extra note, there are also several potted plants throughout the outboard of the airship, which make the vibrant airship have a slight scene of greenery on it.
(Looked similar to this)

I do notice one thing though, and that was the lack of my Uncle Firais and my Aunt Nevalis. I glanced up at my parents and tilted my head before asking them about this, "Mom, Dad, where are Uncle Firais and Aunt Nevalis?"
My father was the one to respond to my question as he glanced down at me and replied in a lightly saddened tone, "My filly, your uncle and aunt returned home yesterday after your mother and I had finally found the airship we were looking for alongside purchasing it.
I'm unsure when they will visit us again as they didn't tell us, but in any way, I'm looking forward to meeting my little brother and his wife again, " My father shook his head and replaced the frown on his lips with a warm smile as he nudged my mother and me to move along with his wings, "Talking about the airship, come on, let's see how this beauty that is our new home fly."
After several seconds of walking closer to the airship, we heard a sound akin to metal clanking and moving followed by the staircase on the side we were on to start unfolding to the ground swiftly. A few seconds later it fully touched the ground and we made our way up the stairs and into the outboard of the airship.
When that was done, we heard the sound of the staircase folding back just as swiftly as it had unfolded, in the meantime, my father made his way toward the steer while my mother and I got ourselves comfortable on one of the wool-padded blue crystal seats and benches.
We then secured our belts just in time for the staircase to finish folding back up and my father was already having his wings on the steer and levers, he glanced toward us and saw that we were already seated safely on one of the benches as we waited for him to start the airship. So having to say no words, he pulled some levers which started the airship engines.
I glanced up and saw that all of the thrusters opened themselves as they shined bright blue light before I could see the burst of winds coming out of it, getting increasingly stronger by the second to the point that the airship started to lift upward, this airship is floating up faster than the large airship as I can felt myself slightly pushed to the ground.
After several seconds, the airship had reached well over three hundred meters in eight and my father pulled some more levers, resulting in the airship stopping going upward and moving forward at a steadily increasing speed instead. When the airship had stabilized itself and was going probably about forty kilometers an hour, my father looked at us and nodded.
We know that his gesture meant that it was safe to release our seatbelts and start wandering around the airship, as soon as my mother finished undoing her seatbelt, she immediately stood up and made her way to my father with a happy smile on her lips.
I, however, had a different idea and when I was done releasing myself from the seatbelt, I stood up and turned around to look down at the Town of Alavis. From up here, I can see that my explosion left one huge scorched crater on the unified academy domains, or what was left of it since its buildings and anything around it were obliterated or destroyed.
Another day in the magical land of Equinera I suppose, where one's prowess no matter how powerful it was, doesn't matter when you didn't have full control and mastery over it. The power that can help everything around you including yourself, could be the same thing that will annihilate those around you alongside yourself, if not used properly.
Author's Note
It seems that Critic's magic has gained sapient of her own, let's see how would it affect her...
All in all, Critic and her brother are safe, and now their family has a new home too, let's see the new life ahead of her...
I... I have nothing to say about the length of this chapter, last week I stated the chapter I was publishing gonna be the longest chapter in the story, and yet here I am, sitting on my chair as I saw the word count in bewilderment as to how it got that much.![]()
In any case, I just hope that my spine won't break when I was editing this one, for it even was longer than the previous one, reaching over 26k words!
This is gonna be a particularly hard one to edit.
I just hope I won't have to deal with back pain, as I already got my upper feet burned, only first degree fortunately, but still gives me quite a problem to walk and have a shower. And I'm still having school tomorrow, such is life I suppose, isn't it?![]()
I'm still unsure of how would next chapter unfold, but next week I'm not gonna publish a chapter, but rather the character's biography and a visual appearance alongside rewriting some of my. less than adequate old chapters. ![]()
So be sure to stick around, as there might be some new things in the rewritten version of my old chapters
Also, if you have any suggestions of how the next chapter gonna unfold, then feel free to PM me directly, as while I already have some things in mind, I open to other ideas and possibilities.
As a closing note, I'm sorry that my uploads of this chapter are quite late but fortunately still on the same day, but you can guess why it took me so long. Anyway, thank you for continuing to read my story everypony and see you all next week with the character biography ![]()
