Heavenly Crusaders
4: The Incident
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A year later, as True Heart is making his way to Twilight's new tower residence from her house, he decides to take a shortcut through a section of the city he has never seen yet. Getting turned around after taking a few side streets curiously, he finds himself walking past businesses with names like, 'The Mountain Oyster', 'Clam Shell Buffet', and even 'The Veiled Flank'. While trying to find his way through this new section, a scent in the air causes his member to slip out and eagerly aim forward.
A mare makes her way back home to her husband and daughter from The Veiled Flank's back door for employee's only when she spots a young stallion in front of her heading toward the quarantined section where mares unable to control their urges are placed during their seasonal cycles by the royal guard, hoping that he sees the sign warding off entry.
Seeing a large sign ahead of him, he stops to read it and cocks his head, saying curiously to no one in particular, "Quarantine, huh?" He then continues heading forward, saying, "Perhaps I can do a bit of good here and heal those afflicted. No risk means no reward sometimes."
Stunned and frozen in place by his decision to ignore the warning, the mare sees him about to pass the boundary line. The sight causes her to rush forth and stop him, using her magic to pull him back as she skids to a stop between him and the line of paved stone, shouting with a heavy foreign accent. "NO!"
A mare with a dark orange coat, a slightly long and curly, deep purple mane and tail with a pair of magenta eyes bars his way forward, causing True Heart to cock his head and ask, "Uhm, is there a reason you are impeding my path?"
Staying put, she nods her head, saying in her heavy eastern accent, "Yes, and a good one too. Please heed my warning and go no further, for there are only mares beyond these stones behind me that have lost control of themselves to the season's effects. If you ignore my warning, you would be lucky to be carried out on a stretcher...if the guards find you before the fiery spring cycle ends."
Something in her words click together to make True Heart understand as he slaps himself upside the head with a forehoof, saying, "It is that time already in the spring cycle? No wonder I'm having so many issues around young mares..." Turning to her and putting his hoof down gently, he asks, "Would you be able to show me how to get out of here? I took a shortcut to visit a friend and got lost."
Nodding her head, she can't help but glance at the member the stallion is sporting, saying, "I can show you the way." She then spots other mares making their way across the street as one of them looks at the young stallion's member and goes wide-eyed at the size.
Without warning, he hears a sharp whistle that causes him to turn halfway around when he hears a light grey mare say, "Take a look at what that stud's sporting girls, don't it look like it could split you in half?!"
As other mares turn to look, going wide-eyed as well while some get a lecherous look on their faces, she groans and thinks of a way to get the young stallion to safety before one of them drags him off somewhere and has her way with him, saying, "I can't let them get you, follow me!" then turns and gallops down an alleyway and pauses to look back at him, shouting, "COME ON!"
Spurred into action as True Heart hears hooves galloping towards him, he races after the helpful mare. Catching up to her as she heads down another street, he turns as the pursuing mares call out to the others not to let him escape. Not wanting to find out what they have intended for him, he goes a little faster and follows her around another corner.
After finally losing the mares and hiding out in an unused storage building, the mare turns around and looks the young stallion over, seeing that his member isn't just out...it is rigid and twitching eagerly as he pants heavily. Backing her rear against the wall closest to her, she asks, "A-Are you still yourself, young one?"
Managing to nod his head, he says, "I...I am. For some reason, my body won't listen to me. I don't like the way my body tries to move on its own, do you know of any way to resolve this?"
Letting out a sigh at having no choice but to deal with this, she takes a moment to debate calling out to one of the mares that was chasing him, but shakes her head clear of that idea, thinking, 'No, I can't let myself even consider that, for it might negatively impact this young stallion's life forever. I would never forgive myself if I let that happen, and my family and I might never get the chance to get out of here and open a respectable business...' Turning back to him with renewed resolve, she says, "I do know a way to deal with your predicament, but it isn't something I do for anyone but my husband."
Looking at her, True Heart huffs out and keeps his body still despite it wanting to charge forth and mount her, saying, "I don't want to cause strife between you and your husband, the bonds of marriage are sacred and can't be taken lightly."
She is surprised to hear a young stallion talk so highly like that, striking a chord in her and making her say, "Well then, in that case, shall I call one of the mares chasing after you over here so that she can get what she wants from you and bring a foal into this world?"
Grumbling under his breath and battling his body, he growls out, "No..."
Huffing out in victory, she stands a little taller, saying, "Then you let me worry about my husband, but I cannot let you go out there as you are or you will definitely become a father to more than one foal next year."
While battling it out with his mind and body, he eventually manages to growl out in a frustrated tone, muttering, "Fine... What must I do?"
Preparing herself for what she must do, she says, "Allow your body to walk towards my left side, but stop when your shoulders are even with mine."
As he hesitantly lets his muscles walk slowly forward, he stops beside her with his shoulders even with hers and asks, "What now?"
Unable to reach him, she sidesteps until her shoulder brushes against his, saying, "Now keep your front hooves relatively still and take three big steps to your left with your back hooves, after that...close your eyes."
Stepping to his left as she asked, then making minor adjustments to the placement of his front hooves, he then closes his eyes and wonders what is going to happen when he feels something warm and wet touch the side of his member.
As she wraps her long tongue around his phallus, she realizes just how big he is when she struggles to pull it over to her mouth and loses her hold on it. When it swings away from her, she dips her head down and angles it to avoid her horn brushing against his fur. Slipping her mouth toward his member, she uses her tongue once again to guide it to her mouth. Having to open really wide to squeeze the head into her mouth, her jaw pops as she starts to slide her mouth further down his member.
The tight, warm, and wet sensation causes his hold on his muscles to slip a little when his back arches and his hips thrust forward a little, causing the mare to cough and scold him harshly, hearing her say from under him, "Don't you dare do that when I'm trying to help you! Just stay still and try to ignore the pleasure...your size is enough trouble for me to work with."
Reaffirming his control over his muscles, True Heart says, "I'm sorry, but the sensation caused my grip over my muscles to slip, I will try not to let it happen again."
Taking a moment to recover from having his tip hit the back of her throat, she takes a calming breath, saying, "Try harder." while thinking, 'Maybe this wasn't the best idea after all...'
When he feels the tightness, wetness, and warmth return, he tries to distract himself by thinking of his training thus far. After a few minutes pass with no slips, he smiles and thinks, 'If I can just maintain my hold until the end, that would be great.'
It takes her several minutes to get used to the uncomfortable sensation of her jaw going numb as he continues to twitch in her mouth when she sighs through her nose, thinking, 'Great, he is holding on so tightly that he isn't letting himself release...looks like I will have to put even more effort into getting him to calm down. I sure hope my throat can handle this monstrosity for a few moments...'
His control continues to hold really well as he thinks, 'I feel so close...just a bit further...' All is well until he feels her shift under him and tap his left leg and gestures to lift it and put it on the other side of her neck, doing as she wishes and holds onto her shoulders with his forelegs. When he feels himself enter something far tighter, his control shatters as his body takes over and shifts its forelegs to way behind her shoulders and grips her sides tightly.
The only warning she gets that she is in trouble is when she sees his stance widen and muscles bunch up a little, thinking, 'Oh no, this is not going to end well for me...' Then feels him swiftly thrust forward down her throat, causing it to stretch beyond its limits quite painfully. Unable to even cry out while tears slip down the sides of her face and ruin her makeup, her golden hairband clatters to the ground. Forced to hold on as long as she can, she braces herself for the thrusts and the extra weight when she feels his tip hit a wall and keeps pushing against it, pleading in her mind, 'Please stop, you can't go any further! There's no more room for your ridiculously long member!'
As his body pulls back and thrusts hard again, slamming into the barrier that refuses to yield, his body keeps putting more force behind his thrusts and pulls farther back.
Feeling him getting even thicker in her throat, she tastes something metallic on her tongue, sending a thought through her head, 'Please stop, you're tearing my throat open!' However, she is partially relieved when she feels him nearly pull all the way out of her throat, letting out a silent, agonized scream when he rams it all the way back in and goes in even deeper as her throat surrenders to the assault. Feeling his sheath being driven into her mouth as her jaw attempts to close, a hot warmth blooms inside her stomach as she feels him finally release.
His vision is white as his body continues to release, arching its back to add to the force of it so it goes farther into her body. A few long moments pass when he finally regains control over his own body, hastily climbing off of her and goes to move away from her. The moment his member pops free, she collapses to the ground, which worries him.
When she doesn't move for a moment, he walks up to her and puts his ear in front of her nose and wiggles it back and forth to tickle it. However, when that fails to get a response, he puts it just behind her shoulder to listen for a heartbeat. As he can't hear anything at all, his mind races with thoughts rapidly, thinking, 'Oh no, I killed her! I just took the life of an innocent and a mother! I must do something about this, but what can I do if she's dead?!'
As his mind starts to panic, he thinks back to what he knows about medical treatment. A glimmer of hope appears in his mind's eye as he recalls reading theoretical techniques to help one breathe again, then immediately puts it into practice by pinching her nose closed with his magic and breathing into her mouth.
After doing that for a few moments he moves onto periodically pushing on her chest where her heart should be, which doesn't work after a couple minutes of trying. Having to think of something else, his mind recalls another book regarding medical science theories regarding the body having small charges of electricity running through it regularly. With nothing else to rely on, he decides to experiment with that theory in mind.
Seeing only darkness before her, the mare looks around in confusion, saying, "Hello?" As it echoes out around her, she catches someone out of the corner of her eye and turns to ask where she is. Her eyes go wide as she sees her grandma and grandpa as well as a few other family members she knew as a little filly, overjoyed at seeing them again, she starts galloping towards them. When she sees a stream in between her and her family, she prepares to jump it when something causes her to plant her hooves. Skidding to a stop as a nagging feeling tickles her, she looks behind her to see a white door opening up. Confused, she turns to face it while her family keeps waving her over, asking, "What's that?" As she continues to look at the door, she gets the feeling like she forgot something back there and takes a few steps towards it. The feeling slowly gets stronger and causes her to start trotting when she recalls hearing a voice she heard long ago, eventually picking up her pace when she recalls the face of her special somepony.
More comes back to her as she soon begins to run when she recalls having given birth to a little filly a few hours ago, getting closer to the door when she remembers moving to Canterlot from Saddle Arabia with her husband and daughter.
He tries to shock her once again, saying, "Come on back, you can't leave your husband behind like this..."
The mare's eyes shoot open wide as she gasps in a large breath of air and then drops her head down quickly, letting the breath she took give her the force needed to empty her stomach.
Ignoring the mare vomiting all over his hooves, he stands still and lets her gather herself before saying, "I'm so sorry for doing that to you in the first place, but I couldn't ever forgive myself for robbing a husband of his wife. I leaned on a few theories I read about and tried a few out in the hopes to get your heart beating again." Letting out a sorrowful sigh, he says, "If there's nothing further for me to do, I will find my own way out of this section." then turns and starts walking away.
Coughing roughly, she takes a painful, raspy breath and says hoarsely, "Wait." though he doesn't hear her and continues heading for the door. Taking a deeper breath, she forces herself to shout through the pain in her throat, shouting in a hoarse, barely audible voice, "WAIT!"
Having heard her call out to him, he stops at the door with a sigh, saying, "What aid can I offer you for what I've done?"
Able to see the shame and guilt in his eyes, she returns her band to her head and shakily rises to her hooves and wobbles her way over to him. Taking a few moments to reach him, she opens the door and steps towards it, saying in a hoarse, barely audible tone, "Follow me out of here." then wobbles out the door with determination to fulfill her offer to lead him out.
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Once she guides him out of the shady part of Canterlot, the mare makes her way home to her husband and daughter. As soon as she walks through the door, she makes her way to the washroom and passes by her husband, saying hoarsely while wincing at the pain she feels whenever she tries to talk, "Tough day, going to wash up before Lunch."
Worried for his wife, he follows her up the stairs and asks, "Could you please tell me what happened dear so I can beat whoever hurt you, black and blue?"
Letting out a sigh and a nod, she heads into the the room and closes the door behind her while starting the shower, then turns to the sink to brush her teeth and wash out her mouth. Once she rinses the toothpaste out of her mouth, she puts a bit of mouthwash into her mouth and swishes it around before tilting her head back to gargle it and clean her throat out. However, that turns out to be a mistake as she instantly sprays it over the mirror and coughing while wincing her eyes shut from the pain and holding her hoof to her throat.
When he sees blood hit the mirror, he becomes even angrier and barely keeps his voice down over the shower, saying, "TELL ME WHO DID THAT TO YOU AND I WILL MAKE THEM REGRET IT!"
Getting herself under control again and wiping her mouth clean with a cloth, she places a loving hoof on his withers and looks into his eyes while saying, "Don't do anything rash dear when I tell you this, but you need to listen the full story...because it wasn't the young stallion's fault."
Fuming at hearing that it was a young stallion who hurt his wife, he sits his portly rear on the ground as his wife starts the tail, saying, "Go on then, tell me what happened, dear."
When she finishes her story, she watches her husband pace around the room shaking his head while muttering agitatedly about how young stallions should have more control over themselves and says, "I know you probably don't want to hear this...but I am glad that I did it and helped him get out of the section. Because if I didn't, I fear that the overly eager mares that chased us probably would never be able to bear foals again after being with that young stallion." She starts coughing again after talking so much, which causes some more blood to drip out of her mouth.
At seeing her still coughing up blood, he walks up to his wife and pulls her close to him with a hoof, saying, "Lunch can wait for a bit, we need to take you to a doctor to get your throat looked at."
Upon going to the doctor while bringing their daughter with them, she stays behind in the waiting room with a coloring book while the wife and husband wait for the exam's results. When the elderly nurse comes back in wearing a white nurse's hat with a red cross on the front of it having flared ends, she looks over the results with a furrowed brow, saying, "Well, I can tell you now that you won't be singing any time soon as your vocal chords are badly bruised, along with there being numerous thin tears all through your esophagus. I apologize if you are a singer, but if you want to make a full recovery, you will have to refrain from talking too much and eating solid food for two months." Her curiosity rises as she then turns to her and asks, "Would you care to explain to me how these injuries were incurred?"
Nodding her head, she then starts her story, saying in her hoarse tone, "Well, it all started this morning when I got off from working at The Veiled Flank and saw a stallion about to enter the quarantine zone."
At hearing the mare's description of the stallion causes her eyebrow to rise slightly in recognition, making her listen more intently to her story. When her story is done, her eyes are wide with surprise, asking in disbelief, "This young stallion's member is what caused your injuries?" Calming herself down, she shakes her head, saying, "No stallion should ever be so big as that..." Turning her eyes back to the mare, she says, "Well, I recommend that you take time off to recover. I will talk to a doctor about setting up magic treatments to heal your throat, good day to you both."
When the nurse gets up to leave, the husband then says, "Hold on! We can't afford any magic treatments, rent and food alone take up most of what my wife makes as I watch our daughter."
Stopping at the door, she turns her head to look over her shoulder, saying, "No need to worry about paying for this visit, every so often, we lend aid to those in dire need of assistance free of charge. It also happens that I am an acquaintance to this colt's family, I will be sure to inform them to find someone to tutor him in handling himself as a true gentlestallion should so nothing like this happens again."
With a nod, the husband smiles, saying, "Thank you for being so kind toward us, ma'am."
Once the couple leave, the nurse makes her way over to True Heart's grandfather's home to report the incident to him. When he answers the door with a tired yawn, she says in a serious tone, "Apologies for bothering you, but there has been an incident with one of our own."
Thunder Magic nods and then steps back to let her in, saying, "Come on in, sister."
When he closes the door after her, she then says, "This morning, True Heart was taking a shortcut through the city to visit somepony..."
After hearing the story in full, he shakes his head, saying, "He needs to be disciplined so it never happens again, go to the hall of reflections and wait for him there. Once he arrives, lock him inside the Pillory and slip a ring over his horn to block his magic, then use the leather strap flog on each flank sixteen times for him losing control of himself and taking the sacred life of another soul. Afterwards, leave him in it all night while leaving a small stool to ensure he can't suffocate, then when morning comes, you may heal his wounds enough to form scars as a reminder of his failure and then release him. It seems that I shall have to pay a visit to this mare once she heals and get her to tutor him in the ways of intercourse."
Nodding her head, she leaves his home and make her way to the stronghold to wait for True Heart, thinking, 'At least he is only getting a light discipline after bringing her back to life...'
Two months pass as True Heart stops trying to visit Twilight after being turned away repeatedly due to her studying something important for the princess, heading to the stronghold when three guards confront him as one of them says, "True Heart, you are to come with us. The princess wishes to see you."
Thinking he is in serious trouble, he hangs his head, saying, "Lead the way, guards. Though, if I am to be thrown into a cell, I just hope that it is one with a view..."
One of the guards' eyebrows rise a fraction at his comment, thinking, 'Why would Her Majesty throw him in prison for what he discovered?'
After following the guards to the palace, the guards stationed at the large, double doors and open them for him, saying, "Her Majesty is waiting for you."
Still feeling the sting of the flog used on his still markless flank, he walks in with his head down and kneels down with his head bowed low, asking, "I am sorry for keeping you waiting, Your Majesty. I am willing to face whatever punishment you have for me."
Princess Celestia raises her eyebrow at hearing that and asks, "Why would I punish one of my subjects for making an important discovery in the field of medicine?"
Lifting his head in confusion, he cocks an eyebrow and asks, "Uhm...what discovery would that be, Your Majesty?"
Smiling genuinely, she answers, "Why the ability to use electricity to return one to life after having passed only a few minutes ago." then raises an eyebrow and asks, "Why were you expecting to be punished, my little pony?"
Swallowing nervously, he then looks around the room at the gathered ponies with pads and quills at the ready, saying, "Well...for being the one to have accidentally caused a pony to lose their life."
As the ponies write that all down on their pads furiously, Celestia clears her voice, saying, "I forbid any mention of this stallions name or description from being published in your articles, any violation of my decree shall incur a hefty fine of 500 bits to be paid by the end of the day. Failure to pay it by then shall result in 31 days worth of unpleasant community service." then turns back to the pony she requested brought before her, saying, "Apologies, but would you tell me more?"
Rising to his hooves, True Heart says, "Well, Your Majesty, I was desperate to not want the shame or guilt of taking a life to haunt me all my life, so I thought back to what I studied and just happened to have read a couple books about theoretical techniques to possibly help one breathe again so I decided to give it a try. When that idea failed, I turned to a book I read that contained medical science theories about one's body containing undetermined measures of electricity. I first started out with the smallest measure at being a minor shock created by a build up of static electricity similar to that which can build up when a pony wears certain fabrics, then gradually moved up to what a pegasus might get from a cloud by kicking it."
Not recognizing anything like that to what she has come across, Princess Celestia asks, "Would you be able to show the books to me that these theories came from?"
Unsure of whether he should show the books to her or not, he nods hesitantly and says, "I can, Your Majesty, as I was trying to figure out why one worked when the other failed." then looks back at his saddlebags and pulls out the two books before levitating them towards her carefully, saying, "As far as I know, these might be the only copies in existence."
Taking the books with a curious gaze, she opens one to the front page and almost gasps in surprise when her eyes go wide at seeing that it is a journal written in latin. A look at the other reveals the same thing, forcing her to recover a few moments later as eyes turn to her curiously at her reaction, she says, "These journals are most certainly the only ones in existence, as I recognize the language these are written in. This language hasn't been seen or spoken in at least a dozen centuries, how is it that you are able to understand this, True Heart?"
Not wanting to be caught lying, True Heart simply says, "Well, your majesty, I learned it from a young age at the hands of a thorough teacher."
Handing the books back to him after looking through each page, suspecting that he is not saying everything, Celestia says, "Thank you for granting me the chance to satisfy my curiosity. To return to the important matter at hoof, I wish to give you a reward for your discovery." Turning her gaze to her assistant, she says, "If you would, Raven."
He tucks the books away as a pony approaches him with a pillow containing something small and a sack, wondering, 'What does she intend to reward me with?'
She sees the curiosity in his eyes and then says, "For helping further the medical field by providing truth to an untested theory resulting in bringing the pony back to life who tragically lost their life in an unfortunate accident, I give to you, True Heart, a golden merit and two thousand bits."
When the assistant levitates the two rewards to him, he accepts the silver horseshoe with a gold star in the center of it and bows his head, saying, "I appreciate the golden merit, Your Majesty, but I shall decline the reward and ask instead that it be divided between the Hospital and orphanage instead."
Celestia smiles as she hears his wording, saying, "Very well then, all of Equestria thanks you for your service. You may return to what you were doing earlier, I hope you can enjoy the rest of your day." She then watches him bow again and take his leave after thanking her again, waiting for the other ponies to clear out of the room before turning to her assistant and saying, "Be sure that the bits are given to the hospital, Raven. Did you notice how he said the hospital instead of a hospital?"
Raven looks at her curiously and asks, "I did, Your Majesty. What do you think he meant by that? Was it a slip of the tongue?"
She thinks it over for a moment before saying, "I'm not sure, but with the text being a dead language today with very few having any knowledge of it and him not specifying whether he can understand tongue or text, it does make me curious enough to want to find out more about him. He doesn't act suspicious in any way, so I don't view him as a threat...but I get the feeling he is holding a few secrets that might be important to Equestria's future."
Picking up on what she might be alluding to, the assistant asks, "Am I correct in thinking that you might want somepony to keep watch over him?"
With a smile, Celestia nods, saying, "That would be greatly appreciated Raven, thank you."
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