The cruel monster of Everfree
Unexpected arrivals
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I arched my wings, tensed my muscles, and dove into a perfect spiral. The wind roared in my ears, and I grinned. Just one more twist, a quick cloud-split to cap it off—
“RAINBOW DASH!”
Before I could react, a blur of feathers and claws slammed into me. I let out a yelp as we collided, tumbling tail over mane before landing with a poof on the fluffy cloud I'd parked for a quick nap earlier.
For once, I was grateful for my lazy habits. The cloud cushioned the fall, but my pride? That took a nosedive.
“Gilda? What the hay?!” I shot up, wings flared in annoyance. “Why are you dive-bombing me? If you wanted to race, you could’ve just said so! I was kinda busy being awesome, you know.”
But Gilda wasn’t her usual cocky self. Her feathers were ruffled—not in the cool way—and her golden eyes darted around like she was being hunted.
“Dash, I’m not here to race!” Her voice cracked, something I’d never heard from her before. “I need your help. Have you seen another griffon? His name is Gustav. Smaller than me, black feathers, white beak?”
“What? No, Gilda, you’re the only griffon cool enough to show up in Ponyville unannounced.” I squinted at her, trying to figure out what was going on. “Why? What’s—”
She cut me off with a growl, clutching her head feathers and pacing in frantic circles. “This is bad. This is really, really bad.” Her voice shook. “Dash, I messed up. I really messed up.”
I blinked. Gilda? Nervous? It didn’t add up.
“Okay, whoa, whoa. Chill for a sec. Start from the top.” I put a hoof on her shoulder, but she grabbed me instead, claws trembling as they dug into my fur.
Her talons were cold and clammy—sweaty, even. That wasn’t normal.
“Dash, I need you to help me find him,” she begged, her voice barely above a whisper. “Please.”
“Uh… sure, yeah. Just give me a sec to clear the skies. It’ll take, like, ten seconds flat.”
She nodded stiffly, and I shot off like a lightning bolt. Clearing clouds was easy, but my gut twisted as I glanced back at her. Gilda wasn’t just upset—she was scared.
Fifteen seconds later, I landed beside her. She was perched at the edge of the cloud, gnawing at her claws and staring toward the Everfree Forest.
“Alright, G. Let’s do this. We’re looking for a smaller griffon, right? Where do we start?”
Her wings drooped. “The Everfree.”
I froze. “Wait, what? Why would he go into there? The place is crawling with monsters!”
“It’s my fault,” she mumbled, her voice cracking again. “I… I told a group of kids about the monster living there. I thought it’d be a funny story. I didn’t think—”
“You what?” My hoof smacked my face as I groaned. “Gilda, you knew that thing wasn’t just some campfire tale! Why would you—”
“I didn’t know it was real!” she snapped, her voice breaking into a shriek. “You just said there was a monster and that’s why you wouldn’t come practice with me! How was I supposed to know?!”
I stared at her, my mouth half-open. How could Gilda, the tough, fearless griffon, look so… small?
“Well, congratulations, G. Now there’s a kid griffon wandering through a forest where a creature might actually crush his head and—”
“Stop!” she yelled, her feathers puffing out as she recoiled. Her breathing turned shallow, and her wings flapped erratically.
“Gilda?”
She didn’t respond. Her eyes were wide, her claws twitching as her chest heaved.
Oh no. She was panicking—bad.
Her wingbeats faltered, and she started to drop. I didn’t even think. I dove after her, grabbing her mid-air.
“Gilda! Snap out of it! If you don’t flap, we’re gonna crash!”
Nothing. Her eyes were glassy, her breaths shallow and rapid.
“Horseapples,” I muttered, angling my wings toward the Everfree’s edge. The thick canopy came up fast, branches scratching at my fur and feathers as we tumbled into the trees.
The fall hurt—my bruised ego, mostly—but I’d had worse. Gilda, though? She lay on the ground, gasping and staring at nothing.
“Gilda!” I knelt beside her, shaking her shoulder. “Hey, you’re okay. Just breathe. Deep breaths. Come on, G. You’re tougher than this!”
But the proud griffon I knew was gone, replaced by someone shaking and scared. My chest tightened as I glanced toward the forest’s shadows. Whatever was out there… we were heading straight for it.
And this time, I wasn’t sure I could pull us out of it.
The branches above still rustled slightly from our chaotic landing, the faint creak of swaying limbs blending with the steady rhythm of Gilda's shallow, panicked breaths. Her wings twitched sporadically, and her claws dug into the soft earth as though trying to anchor herself to something solid. Seeing her like this—a mess of nerves and raw emotion—was enough to make my heart race. Gilda wasn’t supposed to break like this. She was tough, unshakable. She was my friend, my rival. But now? She looked more fragile than a loose feather in a storm.
I paced around her, feeling a gnawing sense of helplessness. What was I supposed to do? Tell her to chill out? No, that wouldn’t cut it this time. Her wide, frantic eyes locked onto nothing, darting back and forth as though searching for an escape. Every shaky exhale from her made my feathers bristle. She was terrified.
"Gilda, Gilda... GILDA!" I called out, my voice cracking as I shook her lightly with my hooves. No response. She just sat there, staring at the ground, her talons clenching and unclenching with jerky, desperate movements. Her chest rose and fell rapidly, and she looked like she was barely holding it together.
“Come on, Gilda! Snap out of it!” I tried again, my voice softer this time. I hated seeing her like this—no, scratch that, it terrified me. Gilda was supposed to be the tough one, the one who laughed at danger and shrugged off bad days like they were nothing. Seeing her this way, so vulnerable and broken, made me feel completely helpless.
Taking a deep breath, I sat beside her and draped a wing over her back. "It’s okay," I said, trying to sound calm and reassuring, even though my heart was pounding. "We’ll figure this out. Gustav’s going to be fine. You and I? We’re unstoppable together, remember? We’ve got this."
Her shivering slowed, and she let out a shaky exhale. Slowly, she turned to look at me, her golden eyes glistening with unshed tears. “Dash...” she croaked, her voice raw. Then, with a shaky paw, she pushed my wing off her back and straightened herself, trying to reclaim a shred of her composure.
“You’re serious, right? About the monster not hurting ponies?” she asked hesitantly.
“Well...” I hesitated. "It hasn’t hurt ponies, but..." My voice faltered, and I braced myself. "The whole thing with painting that foal with blood? That part’s real. It wasn’t pony blood, but it was from some bird."
Her face twisted in horror, and her feathers fluffed out involuntarily. “Dash, what—why didn’t you tell me this sooner?!”
I sighed and rubbed the back of my neck awkwardly. “I didn’t think it mattered! I mean, I thought you’d just blow it off like one of those ghost stories ponies tell to scare each other. I didn’t know you’d go and tell griffons about it!”
Her breathing quickened again, and I could see the panic rising in her eyes. "Dash... I didn’t know it was this bad! I thought it was just... just some silly rumor!" Her claws gripped the ground as she stared at the edge of the forest. "What if Gustav... what if he..."
“He won’t,” I interrupted firmly, stepping in front of her and looking her straight in the eye. "We’ll find him. Together. But we can’t just rush in there without a plan."
Gilda let out a bitter laugh, the sound harsh and devoid of humor. “And what plan, Dash? You don’t even know this forest. You said it yourself—ponies avoid it for a reason. And me? I’m no tracker. I can’t even hunt for myself, let alone find Gustav in this mess!”
Her words hit harder than I expected. She was right. I didn’t know the forest, not like I should if we were going in there. And the thought of facing that monster... I swallowed hard. "Okay, so maybe we don’t have all the answers right now," I admitted. "But we’re not giving up. We’ll figure this out, Gilda."
I was about to cheer Gilda again when she let out a sharp gasp, her claws shooting up to cover her face. And then the tears came. Actual tears. Gilda—Gilda, the coolest griffon I knew—was crying, her voice muffled as she choked out incomprehensible words between sobs.
For a while, the only sound was the wind brushing through the Everfree’s edges. I waited, feeling every agonizing second stretch out. Then, finally, she took a shaky breath and muttered, “I messed up, Dash. Big time.”
“Yeah, I got that part,” I said, trying to keep my tone light, though my stomach churned. "But I can help you, so we're in this together."
She shook her head, standing up and flexing her wings. Her talons dug into the dirt, and for the first time, I saw a spark of determination in her eyes. "No, Dash. I’m not dragging you into this without a real plan. You don’t know the Everfree, and I’m not risking you getting hurt because of my mistakes."
“What are you saying?” I asked, narrowing my eyes.
"I’m saying I’ll go back to Griffonstone," she said firmly. "I’ll bring back real help—trackers, hunters. Griffons who know what they’re doing. You stay here and keep an eye out for Gustav. If he shows up, make sure he doesn’t do anything stupid."
“Gilda, you can’t just—”
“I have to,” she interrupted. “This is my fault, Dash. I screwed up, and I need to fix it. You said it yourself—the monster’s dangerous. I’m not risking your life on my mistake.”
Her words stung, but I could see the guilt and determination written all over her face. For once, Gilda wasn’t thinking about her pride or how she looked to others. She just wanted to make things right.
“Fine,” I muttered, crossing my hooves over my chest. “But you’d better come back fast. I’m not sitting around here forever, and I’m definitely not letting you hog all the glory.”
She smirked faintly, a ghost of her old self shining through. "Don’t worry, Dash. I’ll be back before you know it. Just... don’t do anything reckless, okay?"
Before I could reply, she spread her wings and took off, disappearing into the sky with a powerful beat of her wings. I watched her go, the weight of the situation settling heavily on my shoulders.
I turned back toward the forest, the trees seeming darker and more foreboding than ever. Gustav was out there somewhere, lost and scared, with a monster lurking nearby. And for the first time, I wasn’t sure if being awesome was going to be enough.
“Guess it’s up to me now,” I muttered, my voice sounding far less confident than I’d like.
It was a quiet afternoon in my backyard, nestled at the edge of the Everfree Forest. I had spent most of the morning helping the little rabbits around my cottage find cozy, safe spots for their burrows. The warm sun cast dappled patterns through the trees, and the air was filled with the soft hum of nature. Everything felt peaceful—just the way I liked it.
I was about to guide a tiny bunny family to a particularly nice patch of grass when I noticed something unusual. The bushes near the forest’s edge rustled. My heart skipped a beat, but I took a deep breath, steadying myself. It could just be another critter looking for help. That happened all the time, didn’t it?
Out of the underbrush emerged five rabbits I had never seen before. They were… strange. Unlike the cheerful, playful bunnies I was used to, these ones felt… cold. Their movements were precise, almost mechanical, and their eyes seemed to study everything around them with a dispassionate intensity. I couldn’t quite place it, but something about them made my fur prickle.
Still, they were animals in need, and I wasn’t about to turn them away. “Oh, hello there,” I said softly, trying to keep my voice calm and soothing. “Are you lost? Do you need help?” I began to approach them slowly, careful not to startle them.
As I got closer, I noticed they carried tiny vials strapped to their backs. That was unusual. Most rabbits preferred to hide their belongings inside their fur, but these… they seemed to treat their vials with a seriousness that made me uneasy. What could they possibly need those for?
One of the rabbits stepped forward, his dark eyes locking onto mine. He reached into his fur and pulled out a folded piece of paper, placing it carefully at my hooves. I picked it up gingerly, my wings twitching nervously.
“Oh my,” I murmured, glancing at the paper before looking back at them. “Y-you’re not from around here, are you? Did you come all this way for my help?” The lead rabbit, who introduced himself as Dante, gave a small nod. His voice was absent, of course, but the intensity of his gestures spoke volumes.
Dante explained, in his own silent way, that he and his group came from a settlement deep within the Everfree Forest. A rabbit settlement? That was… wonderful! But also terrifying. The forest was no place for such delicate creatures. How could they possibly survive there? I tried to imagine their lives—dodging timberwolves and other dangerous predators—and my chest tightened.
“You must be so hungry after such a long journey,” I said quickly, not wanting to overwhelm them with questions just yet. “Please, let me prepare something for you.”
I turned to the other rabbits in my backyard, the ones I had been helping, and gently asked them to wait a little while. They didn’t seem to mind; most of them hopped off to explore the garden. With that settled, I rushed into my cottage to gather supplies—a picnic blanket, fresh carrots, cups, and some berry juice.
When I returned, I carefully set up the picnic in the yard. “Here you go,” I said, smiling softly as I gestured for them to sit. “I hope this helps you feel a little better.” They obliged, though their stiff postures made it clear they weren’t here to relax.
“My name is Fluttershy,” I began, my voice barely above a whisper. “But… oh, um, I suppose you already knew that if you came looking for me. Do you… need help with something? Is it your settlement? Is it… in trouble?” My wings tightened against my sides as I spoke. The idea of their home being in danger sent a chill down my spine.
To my surprise, Dante shook his head. He gestured to one of his companions, who unfurled another piece of paper. When I saw what was written there, my heart sank.
“H-herbalism, smithing, m-medicine, mechanics, bows, arrows, e-explosives?” I stammered, my eyes darting between the list and the rabbits. “W-why would you need things like this? Y-you’re just… little bunnies.”
They exchanged glances, clearly uncomfortable with my reaction. Dante’s ears twitched, and his body language became more guarded. “Are you… are you being threatened?” I pressed, my voice trembling. “Is it that creature in the forest? The one the birds have been whispering about?”
They didn’t answer, but their silence spoke louder than words. My mind raced. Could that creature—whatever it was—be hurting them? Forcing them to fight back in ways no rabbit should ever have to?
“I… I can’t just let you leave empty-hooved,” I said, though my voice faltered. “Maybe I can give you some books. J-just basic ones for now, but I’ll need time to gather more. And perhaps Angel and I can visit your settlement to… um, see what’s going on?”
Dante’s ears flattened slightly, and he gave a curt nod. It wasn’t exactly an agreement, but it wasn’t a refusal either. With their permission, I hurried inside to fetch an old veterinary guide. When I returned, they took it with surprising care, and one of them tucking it into its fur before bowing slightly in gratitude.
As the evening wore on, the rabbits settled in my yard, speaking quietly among themselves. From my cottage window, I watched them with a growing unease. They weren’t like any rabbits I had ever seen. Even their moments of affection—a nuzzle here, a gentle paw there—felt calculated, like ponies who had learned to suppress their emotions for survival.
I didn’t know what was happening in that forest, but it was clear these rabbits were caught in something far bigger than themselves. And as much as they unnerved me, I couldn’t ignore their plight. Tomorrow, I would have to decide: should I try to help them further? Or should I convince them to leave that dreadful forest and find safety elsewhere?
For now, though, I could only watch and wonder.
Author's Note
And so, the year begins—better late than never. I want to start by sincerely apologizing for the long delay and hope that these chapters truly meet your expectations.
I know the chapters are somewhat short, but that’s because they were originally part of larger sections. However, I decided to split and organize them for the sake of readability and structure. After all, it’s better to enjoy satisfying portions than to be overwhelmed by an excessive feast.
It seems that the civilization project is progressing well. Not only are they expanding their territory, but they’re also advancing in technology. That relentless human pursuit of power and technological supremacy is making its mark. It appears the human is educating and transforming the rabbits according to his plans.
As always, any questions, suggestions, comments, or constructive criticism are more than welcome, and I’ll be happy to respond. I truly hope the wait was worth it, and I’d love to hear your thoughts!
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