The cruel monster of Everfree

by Zell998

What a bizarre week, isn't it?

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I was lying on a cloud, taking a small break after a long, tiring day with the weather team. This week has been absolutely crazy, especially with Fluttershy and this whole "Everfree monster" situation. She’s been taking it pretty hard, honestly. I get that she loves all her little critters and stuff, but come on—it’s the Everfree Forest. Weird stuff lives there.

She keeps saying that thing isn’t natural, though. Like, yeah, she knows it's normal for a bear, a fox, or even an eagle to hunt and eat other animals, but she claims this thing is... wrong. Unnatural. The way it smashes nests, uses tools, wears clothes, and crushes heads—that's not normal at all, according to her.

I don’t know what to tell her. I mean, I’m no expert on that stuff. My thing is speed, awesomeness, becoming a Wonderbolt! Someday, I’ll be leading them, and when I am, maybe then we’ll deal with a monster. Now that would be a story.

"Hey Rainbow, how’s the coolest pegasus in all of Equestria?"

I blinked, pulled out of my thoughts by a familiar voice. “Gilda! What’s up? What brings you to Ponyville?” I said, sitting up on my cloud and spotting my friend Gilda—the best griffon in all of Equestria, or maybe the only one that matters, really.

“Nothing much, just thought I’d drop by and see if you wanted to hang out. The other griffons are a total bore.”

Hanging out with Gilda? That would be awesome. “That sounds great, but I can’t right now. I’m doing a favor for a friend, and I kinda need to stick around this area.” I really did want to hang out, but Fluttershy had asked if I could keep an eye on things near her cottage. She’s been terrified of that monster lately, and... well, I couldn’t just say no to her.

“Come on, Dash. Don’t be a snooze! What, are you one of those slow pegasi now, the ones who only care about weather schedules?”

I scoffed, puffing out my chest. “What? Of course not! I’ll never be one of those slowpokes. It’s just... I told you, I’m doing a favor for a friend!”

Gilda raised an eyebrow. “A favor that involves napping on a cloud? Seriously, Dash. Let’s go do something fun!”

I sighed, knowing she wouldn’t let it go. “Look, there’s a monster in the Everfree Forest,” I said, pointing towards the dark, ominous trees. “A giant, head-crushing monster. And no, I’m not making this up. That’s why I’m sticking around here, to protect and keep an eye on the area where my friend lives.”

“A monster in the Everfree, huh? Sounds like some kind of game.”

“It’s not a game, Gilda. I haven’t seen it myself, but there’s been a lot of tension in Ponyville lately because of it. Just give it a week, let everypony calm down, and then we’ll hang out, okay?”

Gilda rolled her eyes but gave a shrug. “Fine, Dash. I’ll head back to Griffonstone for now. Guess I’ll at least return with a juicy rumor. See ya later, Dash.”

And just like that, she flew off, leaving me alone on my cloud again. I let out a breath I didn’t realize I was holding. Gilda always wanted excitement, but I had to stay loyal to Fluttershy. Not just for her, but... honestly, this whole monster thing was starting to get under my feathers too.


I stood in the classroom, a beaming smile on my face as I finally took my place at the front of the room. I had been given the job—finally, I was going to be a teacher! The previous teacher had retired, and when the position opened, I eagerly accepted it. I knew it might be a little strange for the foals to have a new teacher this early in the school year, especially with Nightmare Night right around the corner, but I was determined to make a positive impact.

As the little colts and fillies filed into the room, my heart swelled with joy. This was it—my chance to shape young minds, to be a guiding light for these impressionable foals. The first lesson went well. I introduced myself, and as I spoke with enthusiasm, I could see the curiosity and excitement in their eyes. They weren’t uneasy about having a new teacher, and that made me feel so relieved. The foals of Ponyville are always so welcoming, after all. It's a small town with only one schoolhouse, which meant I was teaching a mixed class with students of different ages. But that’s the charm of a close-knit place like this—everypony learns together, side by side, finding their special path, guided by their cutie marks.

The morning had gone smoothly, and I found myself thinking how lucky I was. The foals were bright, cheerful, and eager to learn. Everything was perfect… or so I thought.

Then, it was time for recess.

I sat on a bench outside, enjoying a light breakfast as I watched the foals play in the schoolyard. The crisp autumn air was refreshing, and for a moment, I felt at peace. But then, my attention was drawn to a small group gathered around one of the younger colts, Safe Camp. He was standing in the middle of the circle, animatedly telling a story. I couldn’t quite hear the details, but from the looks on the other foals’ faces, it was clear he had their full attention.

Curious, I moved a little closer and soon realized what he was talking about. Safe Camp was trying to convince the others that the supposed monster in the Everfree Forest wasn’t bad—that it was, in fact, friendly.

My stomach tightened.

We’d been strictly instructed not to talk about the monster with the children. The events surrounding it had been far too gruesome, too... unnatural. It was a topic no foal should be burdened with, let alone discuss so freely. As I approached, I could feel an uncomfortable knot forming in my chest. I gently interrupted Safe Camp, reminding him that stories like that weren’t appropriate for recess, especially with younger foals around.

He nodded, somewhat reluctantly, and I returned to my bench. But the uneasy feeling lingered.

Not even a minute later, Safe Camp resumed his tale, determined to explain that the monster wasn’t harmful. He even claimed that it had scratched behind his ear and that it felt amazing, but his dad had misinterpreted the whole thing. My ears perked up at the words. Some of the other foals chimed in, arguing with him. They brought up how the creature had been seen carrying a headless bird in its claws, how it was covered in blood, and how it seemed to be crushing things wherever it went.

I felt my heart sink.

The joyful excitement I’d felt earlier began to unravel into worry. These innocent foals, who should be thinking about fun stories and happy endings, were talking about something far darker than any of the usual Nightmare Night tales. These were real fears—fears rooted in something horrifying that had invaded their innocent world. And now, I understood why the previous teacher had left.

How could I possibly explain to them what had happened? How could I tell them about this creature—a being so violent, so different from anything we’d ever known? Even as an adult, I couldn’t make sense of it. Yes, there have always been scary stories—about a bear breaking a unicorn’s horn, or a young foal getting lost in the woods—but those are tales of caution, nothing like this. Nothing like the bloodshed these foals had witnessed or heard about.

We live in a world of harmony, of friendship, where Princess Celestia watches over us all, ensuring peace and safety. But this... this was something else entirely. This monster—this creature—came from a place beyond our understanding, a place without our kindness, without our balance. The very thought of it chilled me to the bone.

I realized, sitting there on that bench, that it would fall to me to help these young ones navigate the fear and confusion they were feeling. I would have to help them understand that the actions of this cruel, bloodthirsty creature were not a reflection of our world, not a part of the Equestria we know.

But how? How do you teach foals that monsters don't exist? How do you reassure them that everything will be alright when even I wasn’t so sure?

I glanced back at the foals, still clustered around Safe Camp. Their innocence was already slipping away, tainted by something they never should have had to encounte


I sat slumped at my desk, staring at the pile of unfinished reports scattered across the surface. The weekly report on Ponyville’s events was due tomorrow, and my mind was stuck in a frustrating fog. Twirling a quill absentmindedly between my hooves, I tried to gather my thoughts. This week had been the most chaotic, bizarre, and utterly exhausting one I had faced in my entire time as mayor.

It had started with the exciting news that Ponyville was selected to host the upcoming Summer Sun Celebration. Princess Celestia herself would be gracing our humble town! It was an incredible honor, but also an enormous burden. Ponyville had to be spotless, perfect—everything had to be absolutely flawless for the princess’s arrival.

And of course, just when we needed everything to run smoothly, that’s when it appeared—the so-called "monster" from the Everfree Forest. Naturally, I expected some hiccups; every now and then, a timberwolf or a stray manticore wanders too close to town. But this... this was something else entirely.

It started with a single report from Mountain Trail. I dismissed it as an isolated incident at first, but then Lyla came in, trembling, describing nearly the same thing: a horrifying creature, drenched in blood, crushing heads. That was when the rumors really began to snowball. More and more ponies came to me, each with increasingly fantastical tales. Some spoke of the creature with wings, glowing red eyes, or even horns. It became difficult to separate fact from foalish fiction.

But the reports from Mountain, Lyla, and Fluttershy were the most alarming—they all aligned disturbingly well. The stories they told weren’t just the stuff of nightmares; they were brutal, violent, and grotesque beyond anything we had ever encountered. Mountain was so shaken, he considered closing his business entirely. Lyla, normally so confident, refused to step hoof near the Everfree, despite her love for the wildflowers that grow there. The other ponies? Well, their lives carried on mostly as normal, but I could sense the fear creeping in.

Adding to the chaos, a researcher from Canterlot University arrived on Monday to study the timberwolves. I had hoped he’d stick to his work, but word spread that he’d returned from the forest pale as a ghost, sprinting back to the train station. If there had been any hope of keeping this whole "monster" affair under wraps, that was gone now.

I sighed deeply, rubbing my temples as my frustration boiled over. It wasn’t enough that we had to prepare for Celestia’s visit, but now this? A bloodthirsty beast threatening to ruin everything? The only option left was to find a way to downplay the creature’s existence, to soften the details for the official report. But how? How could I even begin to explain what this thing might have done?

“Mayor Mare, may I come in?”

The muffled voice of my assistant, Write List, came from outside the door. I straightened up, trying to regain a semblance of professionalism.

“Yes, come in,” I replied, as calmly as I could manage.

Write List stepped inside, a concerned look on her face. “Are you alright? You’ve seemed tense lately.”

“I’m fine,” I said, though I knew I didn’t sound very convincing. “It’s just this report. Normally, it’s easy enough, but with our... recent troublesome visitor, things have become a bit more complicated.”

“I can imagine,” she replied sympathetically. “It must be difficult dealing with something like this. I’m actually surprised you’re not more afraid of the creature.”

“Well, I haven’t seen it myself, so I’m still a bit skeptical. Besides, if I lose my composure in front of everypony, it would only cause panic. I’m trying to stay as calm as Celestia would.”

Write List nodded but hesitated before speaking again. “Actually, Fluttershy gave me some new information about the creature today. And, well... it just keeps getting stranger.”

My patience was wearing thin. “Stranger how? Has it grown horns and wings now?” I asked, exasperated.

“No, nothing like that. You know how Fluttershy is with animals. She told me the birds mentioned something... different about the creature. Something that doesn’t seem possible, especially for a predator.”

I raised an eyebrow, signaling her to continue.

“Apparently, the monster bartered with a rabbit.”

I blinked in confusion. “Bartered? As in… made a trade with a rabbit?”

Write List nodded. “Yes, from what she says, it helped the rabbit cross the river, and afterward, the rabbit returned to its burrow with a sack.”

“For Celestia’s sake... are you sure it’s the same creature?”

“Fluttershy swears it is.”

I sighed deeply, my mind spinning. “So now this bloodthirsty beast is... running errands for bunnies. Fantastic. Do we even know what was in the sack?”

“No, Fluttershy said the birds are too scared to get close to the creature, and the rabbits won’t communicate with them.”

Write List hesitated before adding, “Also, she wants to withdraw her previous warning about the monster. She believes it might be more of a scared, confused creature—intelligent but violent due to fear.”

“Thank you for the update,” I muttered, rubbing my temples again. “It’s getting late. We should both head home.”

With that, I bid Write List goodnight, extinguished the candles, and locked away the papers. As I left the office, my mind was still buzzing with unease. Could this creature really be more than the terrifying beast everypony feared?

I didn’t have much time to ponder before a familiar voice broke my thoughts.

“Good evening, Mayor Mare! Busy week with the Everfree monster, huh?”

I turned to see Pinkie Pie, bouncing happily along the road. “Yes, Pinkie. Very busy,” I said, sighing. Pinkie always had a way of lifting spirits, but right now, I was just too tired.

“Do you mind if I take over the spotlight now?”

I blinked. “Spotlight? What spotlight?”

“You know! The focus, the attention! You’ve had it for long enough. Can I take it from here? Pretty please?”

I sighed again, too tired to even question her logic. “Sure, Pinkie. Take all the attention you want.”

Woohoo! My turn!

I hopped up and down, my pink mane bouncing along with me. Oh, this is gonna be so much fun! I whipped out a cupcake from my mane and handed it to Mayor Mare.

“Here, for your troubles!” I chirped before hopping off toward Sugarcube Corner. I couldn’t wait to get back to my cozy little nook upstairs. It’s been four whole years since I came to Ponyville, and it’s still the most super-duper-riffic place in all of Equestria!

When I first arrived, I was just a young filly, only sixteen, with nothing but a love for parties and a dream of making ponies smile. The Cakes took me in, and I’ve been helping them ever since. It’s kind of like we’re one big, happy family!

I bounced through the door of Sugarcube Corner, where Mrs. Cake was tidying up the bakery. “Evening, Mrs. Cake! Thanks again for letting me stay upstairs!” I called out.

Mrs. Cake chuckled. “Oh, Pinkie, you thank me every day! Just remember to clean up after yourself. Mr. Cake and I are making a nice flower salad for dinner. You’re welcome to join us.”

“Aww, thanks, Mrs. Cake! Is that for the future little Cake foals?”

Mrs. Cake blinked in confusion. “Future foals? What are you talking about?”

I grinned and waved a hoof. “Oh, nothing! Just a hunch! Have a great night!”

I skipped up to my room, excited as always. You see, I’ve got this super special ability! It’s like I can sense things, predict stuff about ponies and creatures and even what’s going to happen next! It’s my Pinkie Sense! Normally, I can feel a twitch or a tingle that tells me what’s coming.

But lately, there’s been something strange... that monster everypony’s talking about? My Pinkie Sense has been completely blank! Like... nothing! Usually, I’d get a little tail twitch or an ear flop, but this time? Zilch, nada, zippo! It’s like there’s nothing to predict at all!

It makes me kinda nervous... and that doesn’t happen often! If this creature ever comes to Ponyville, how am I supposed to know if it needs a Welcome to Ponyville Party or a surprise cupcake attack?

I flopped onto my bed, staring up at the ceiling. Even on the first day I tried to sense it, nothing happened. But then, out of nowhere, I had this random thought about a pony named Twilight Sparkle! I don’t know why, but I just knew we’d meet one day. And, ooh, I even got a craving for a lavender cupcake with sprinkles!

So I know I’m going to meet Twilight, and she’s going to be important somehow. But this monster? It’s like it’s hiding from my Pinkie Sense, and that’s super weird.

But you know what? I’ll figure it out! Whether it’s a monster or just a confused, big, scary creature, I’ll be ready. With cupcakes in hoof and smiles to spare!


The rhythmic clatter of the train beneath me should be soothing, a reminder of civilization pulling me further away from the madness of the Everfree Forest. But no, my heart pounds like a wild drum, and every time I glance at the window, the image of that... thing flashes before my eyes. What was that monstrous creature?

I shift uncomfortably in my seat, the plush velvet doing little to ease my nerves. The usual comfort of Canterlot-bound trains feels alien, detached from the world I just escaped. I can still hear the sickening crunch of wood splitting under its blows, see the black ichor from the timberwolves staining the earth. No pony has ever seen something like that. Not even in my wildest nightmares could I have imagined a beast with that kind of power.

Timberwolves... they are beings bound by magic, with regenerative abilities that make them nearly impervious to most physical attacks. Even a skilled unicorn, one with precision and mastery over powerful spells, would struggle to bring down a single one. And yet, this... this creature—this thing with a bizarre form—tore through not one, but two of them. With its bare limbs!

"How?" I mutter under my breath, staring at my trembling hooves. My voice is a dry whisper in the empty cabin, drowned out by the sound of the train.

The memory of that twisted scene replays itself over and over. The timberwolves had circled the creature, their wooden jaws snapping, their glowing green eyes fixed on their prey. The largest one—a behemoth—charged first. It shattered the creature’s flimsy wooden spear in one bite, and I was certain that would be the end of it.

But no...

The thing, this grotesque creature with its strange upright stance, fought back. Not with magic, nor with any discernible skill. It was... barbaric. It roared—a sound so deep and primal it sent shivers through me even from where I was hiding—and then, using nothing but its limbs, it grabbed chunks of the timberwolf’s body. Somehow, it reached inside the wolf’s core, past its snapping jaws, and pulled. The creature pulled. Like it was tearing apart a loose collection of sticks.

"No magic... just... brute force," I say to myself, almost as if trying to convince my own senses that what I saw wasn't real. Impossible! That defies the very laws of nature!

Outside the train window, the landscape of Equestria rolls by—a beautiful contrast to the horrors I just witnessed. Rolling green fields and picturesque hills. Such peace, such harmony. How could I return to such a world after what I saw? The ponies here have no idea what lurks in that cursed forest. None of us do.

My thoughts swirl, sinking into an ever-growing spiral of confusion and dread. What sort of creature could have done that? Its anatomy was all wrong. It had no hooves, no claws like a manticore. Its limbs were covered in some sort of... appendages—long, thin digits that seemed designed to grasp, to crush. And its face! Its eyes weren’t like those of any predator I'd ever studied. Cold, calculating, but filled with a fire I can't even begin to understand. It wasn't just surviving... it was enjoying it.

I shudder, my breath growing quicker. Am I losing my mind?

The timberwolves, those nightmarish wooden beasts, had fled. Fled from it. I saw them try to escape, but the creature was relentless. It hurled fragments of the first wolf’s shattered body at the others, smashing them to pieces with such precision and force. It stomped on the second one, over and over, laughing—laughing!—until it was nothing more than splinters and black sludge.

What kind of monstrosity laughs while killing timberwolves?

My mind is unraveling. The facts don’t align with anything I’ve ever learned in Canterlot. I—I was going to stay there for a month. A month! What was I thinking? How foolish, how utterly arrogant of me to assume I could study those wolves with impunity. I fancied myself an expert, a scholar of dangerous creatures. But this... this thing? It’s beyond anything in my textbooks, beyond any known magic or creature. What if it had seen me? What if it turned its... those limbs on me? I'd be crushed in seconds.

I grip the seat beneath me, trying to steady myself as the train rattles on, each bump making me jump. Focus. Focus! I need to keep my composure. I’m an academic, a biologist, for Celestia’s sake! I must maintain professionalism. I’ll return to Canterlot, and they’ll... they'll listen to me, won’t they? The university will understand... right?

But... what if they don’t? What if they think I’m mad? I have no proof—no sketches, no samples. I left my camera behind, too terrified to go back for it. All I have is my word. Will they believe me? Or will they think I’ve gone insane, that the forest has twisted my mind like the countless ponies before me who’ve spent too long near the Everfree?

“No! No, I must remain composed! I can’t—”

I catch my reflection in the window—wild-eyed, sweating, my mane a mess. I barely recognize myself. My hooves tremble uncontrollably. Celestia help me, I think. Am I already going mad?

But it’s real. It’s all real. I know it. I saw it. This is the discovery of the century. Perhaps of all time. If I could just get back to Canterlot... if I could tell them, show them... We could capture it, study it. Yes, yes! We’ll be able to control it, find a way to combat the timberwolves!

I’ll be famous! Respected! Revered! “We’ll... we’ll be safe.”

But as the train rattles on, one thought gnaws at me—what if this is only the beginning? If this thing is capable of such violence, of such brutality... how long before it sets its sights on Ponyville? Or worse... on Canterlot?

I clutch the edge of my seat tightly, my breath quickening again.

“No... no... it can’t come to that. It won’t. It won’t.” But the fear lingers.

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