Craving His Brother's Presence
In the Sun's Embrace
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Dont see alot of Brother x Brother FanFics that isnt just Clop, So wanna dive deep into it head first ![]()
Edit - 11/8/2024
Personally I really enjoyed how this story was coming along, I have a thing for simple kinks and wanted to do in a story. I enjoyed writing this till I hit a dead end, I couldn't think or form any more words for this story to give it more character but that wont stop me from writing a different story, I began writing a fanfic between Nerlz and Sombra. Im liking on how its coming to be made but might not be posted if i loose motivation once again, thank you for those who read it and gave a respectful review with a Like or Dislike.
Have a good day/night everypony
In the Sun's Embrace
In a peaceful home, in a quiet village in Ponyville, lived a family of three: Aria Castro, the mother, Sunburst Castro, the eldest son, and the youngest, Nerlz Castro. The brothers were their mother’s pride and joy, embodying the strength of the bond that held the family together. The eldest was gentle, always looking after his younger brother while Aria went out to work at the café that had recently opened up.
As she was about to leave, she called out to the two brothers, who were silently huddled together on the couch while cuddling. This made her chuckle as she said, “Don't open the door for anyone you don't know, and if you get hungry, there's a bag of bits on the table to order food.”
The eldest, Sunburst, quickly replied for both of them, “Okay! Be safe. Love you, Mom!”
He trotted to the door, closing and locking it with his magic, before hurrying back to the couch where his younger brother, Nerlz, sat waiting patiently. Once he got settled in, Sunburst leaned in and planted a kiss on Nerlz’s forehead, making his younger brother flush with embarrassment. Though quieter and more reserved, Nerlz mirrored Sunburst’s kindness in his own way, nuzzling his elder brother to further show the love and support he had for him.
Nerlz grabbed the book his brother had been reading and opened it to where they had left off. Due to Sunburst’s poor eyesight, Nerlz often stepped in to help him read, guiding his brother with a helping hoof and understanding. After a couple of hours of reading aloud to Sunburst, Nerlz nudged his older brother’s neck with his nose, looking up at him and softly asking, “Sunshine… I’m a little hungry and… if you don’t mind, could you p-please order us something to eat?”
Sunburst leaned down and nuzzled Nerlz, saying, “Sure, Nerlzie. I’ll order something for us.”
He grabbed the landline phone and dialed Pizza Hutches their favorite meal: roasted eggplant pizza. Secretly, he had ordered it because it was Nerlz’s favorite, though Sunburst didn’t mind it either. He waited as the line picked up.
“This is Pizza Hutches, how can I help you?” the voice on the other end asked.
“I’d like to order a large roasted eggplant pizza,” Sunburst said.
The pony replied, “This order will be made shortly. The wait time is 20 minutes. Is that okay?”
“mhmm,” Sunburst agreed.
“Is this for delivery or pickup?” the pony asked.
“Delivery,” Sunburst replied while giving his address before hanging up. wrapped his hooves around Nerlz’s shorter frame, hugging him from behind.
After some quiet cuddling, the doorbell rang. Nerlz wanted to get the pizza, so he slipped out of Sunburst’s grasp and trotted toward the door. When he opened it, the delivery pony greeted him. “Eggplant pizza. That’ll be 8 bits.”
Nerlz froze. He didn’t know what to say to the stranger, and he had forgotten to grab the bits from the table. Stammering, he tried to explain, “I f-forgot to grab my bi—”
But before he could finish, Sunburst stepped up behind him, effortlessly becoming his voice. “Here are your 8 bits, and a tip for getting here on time,” Sunburst said, dropping the bits into the pony’s pouch and grabbing the pizza. “Thank you, have a good day,” he called as the delivery pony walked away, closing the door behind him.
The brothers complemented one another perfectly. Their differences strengthened the connection they shared.
Nerlz quickly took the pizza and ran to the coffee table near the couch, eagerly sitting down and placing the box on the table. He waited for Sunburst to return with drinks and plates. When Sunburst came back, he placed the items down, and Nerlz quickly opened the pizza box, revealing his favorite. After taking in the delicious scent, he grabbed a slice. Before taking a bite, he leaned in and gave his big brother a quick peck on the chin.
Sunburst smiled, though he wasn’t very hungry since he had eaten before their mother left. He simply sat back, watching Nerlz enjoy the meal. The sight of his younger brother’s happiness brought him so much joy.
Once Nerlz finished eating, he picked up his plate and the pizza box, carrying them over to the dining table and then to the sink to wash his dishes. After he finished, he walked back to his big brother and sat down, getting cozy once more.
Nerlz glanced down at his hooves, his voice barely a murmur. "I... um, I just wanted to say thank you for saving me back there," he whispered, avoiding Sunburst's eyes. "You didn’t have to, but... it means a lot to me."
He leaned in, resting his head near his brother’s neck, nuzzling him in appreciation. Sunburst returned the affection, leaning down to nuzzle the shorter colt’s head next to his ear before pulling back slightly, though they remained close enough to feel each other's coats as they sat together.
Nerlz picked up the open book from the coffee table and began to read aloud again, so he and his brother could continue the story. After a couple of hours, Nerlz started to feel tired. He closed the book slowly, not before marking their place. “Sunny… I’m getting a little tired. Can we take a nap for a bit?” he asked, levitating the book to the coffee table.
Sunburst nodded, then lifted his younger brother onto his back with his magic. “H-hey! I can walk, you know…” Nerlz said, flushing with embarrassment. He pressed his face into his brother’s reddish-orange mane, breathing in his scent as Sunburst chuckled and trotted toward their shared room.
Once there, Sunburst gently placed Nerlz on his bed, then trotted over to turn off the light. He returned to the bed, getting comfortable beside his younger brother. Wrapping his hooves around Nerlz, Sunburst whispered, “I love you, Nerlz.”
The younger colt whimpered softly, “I love you too, Sunny,” before they both drifted off to sleep.
When their mother returned home, she didn’t see her children right away. “Where did those two go?” she wondered, trotting to their shared room and peeking in. There they were, sleeping on the same bed, Sunburst holding Nerlz in his hooves, both breathing quietly in and out. Smiling softly, she walked away.
The brothers were inseparable—two halves of the same soul, always together, balancing each other in a way that made their love for one another profound and unbreakable.
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