The Darkness

by G-man2010

Rating: everyone
Tags: Angel, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1091

Angel learns to not be a brat

Angel wakes up in a dark void having no idea where he is. Until a mysterious voice starts talking to him. The voice tells Angel that the void he is in is called the darkness. And he tells Angel to stop being a spoiled brat and appreciate all the things Fluttershy does for him. And one day Fluttershy is going to die and Angel will have to go to a different owner who might mistreat him. So Angel starts to listen to what this voice has to say.

Inspired by Endless by Magpiepony.

Art by me

Published 2024-10-11 15:30:00 UTC
Last updated 2024-10-11 15:30:00 UTC

The Darkness

"Where am i?" I said when i woke up. i was in a place i had never been before. "Is anyone there?" I asked. of course i figured no one else would probably be in this void or whatever. "Are you Angel bunny?" Asked a mysterious voice. I froze when i heard this weird voice. "Yes i am. Who are you?" I asked in reply. "I do not have the name." The voice said. "But can you tell me where i am?" I asked. "You are in the darkness." The voice replied. The darkness? What on earth was the darkness? I guess it does make sense for it to be a black void.

"The darkness?" I asked in reply. "Yes. The darkness." The voice replied. "Now i hear you are Fluttershy's pet bunny. Is that right?" The voice asked. "Yes i am." I replied. "Well i see that sometimes you can be a spoiled brat." The voice said. The void shape shifted into a memory of me kicking a bowl away from me. I know that sentence is kind of weird. But just go with it. "This is one of my memories." I said. Finally speaking up. "Indeed it is Angel." The voice said. It then cut back to the darkness afterwards.

"That was really cool." I said. It was insane to see a black void like this one shape shift into memories of your past. "I know." The voice said. "I have the power to shape shift into your memories with you and Fluttershy." "That does make sense." I said. "But that was an example of you being a brat." The voice said. "I know. I can be a little spoiled sometimes." I said. The void then shape shifted again to another one of my memories. Of course it was about me being a spoiled brat. But this time, it was a recent one. It was when i didn't want a bath from Fluttershy. If you do know me, I hate taking baths. I despise them. I watched as i kicked and screamed not wanting to take a bath. And Fluttershy was using all of her love on me. I started to feel bad for what i have done that day as well.

"You know i hate baths right?" I asked the voice. "Well looking at this memory then yes i can see that." The voice replied. The scene then shifted back into the void. "I guess i was being a spoiled brat that time too." I said. Looking down at the ground. "I know you are feeling bad about yourself right now." The voice said. "That's why i brought you here." "To recall some of my memories?" I asked. "Yes indeed." The voice replied. "Do you by any chance remember this?" The voice asked. It then shifted to a memory for when i was younger. I was with my family before i met Fluttershy. We were happy.

"I do remember this." I said. I was with my family and i was even younger at this time." "I'm glad you do." It then shifted to another memory. I didn't really like being in this one. It was the day everything changed. It was when my parents told me they were going out. And they left and never came back. "This was when i was abandoned." I said. Starting to get a little sad. "i can see that." The voice said. It then shifted to another part of that memory. I was looking for my parents until it started to rain. And i found trees to sleep between. "And then i cried myself to sleep." I said. "You did." The voice replied. "But little did you know one day, everything would change." The voice said.

It then shifted to the next day of that memory where Fluttershy found me. "Oh my! A baby bunny!" She said. Her smooth voice really comforted me a bit. I then saw her pick me up and take me inside. "And then that was when Fluttershy found me all soak and wet from the rain." I said. And then it shifted back to the darkness. "So i guess then a started to be braty and not be grateful for a lot of things Fluttershy did for me." I said. "You did start that." The voice said. "Do you want to see your future?" It asked. "Yes i want to see." I replied. I was really wanting to see what happens when i grow up if i treat my owner the same as i do sometimes right now. It then shifted to a dark and cloudy day. I could see myself grieving over a grave. It was Fluttershys. "Fluttershys dead in my future?" I asked. "If you keep being a brat then possibly yes. She would be dead." The voice said.

It then shifted back to the void. "I didn't realize that if i was still a spoiled brat. She would be dead." I said. "I am sure you didn't realize that either." The voice said. "I'm sorry." I said. "Don't be sorry to me, be sorry to Fluttershy." The voice said. I guess you're right i said. "Can we look at my future if i stopped being a brat?" I asked. "Yes" The voice replied. It then shifted to the future if i stopped being a brat. Fluttershy was still alive and we were old together. And she was feeding me carrots and i was being grateful. "Fluttershys still alive. She is feeding me." I said. It then shifted back to the darkness. "I am glad you understand about you being a better bunny Angel." The voice said. "Thanks for teaching me all of this." I said. "You are most welcome Angel." The voice said.

That was when i started fading away.

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"Where am i?" I rose up. I was lying in a hospital bed. Was that all just a dream or what. I was eager to find out. Until Fluttershy came in the room with all of her friends. And the nurse. "Angel!" She said as she was running to me. She hugged me tightly and I hugged her back. "What happened?" I asked. "You ate a rotten carrot and you passed out afterwards. I didn't realize it was bad so i called the pet hospital and they got you here quick as a flash." Fluttershy said. "I'm so glad you are okay my Angel." Fluttershy said as she hugged me again. "Me too." I replied as i hugged her back.