Twi Enters The Doodle Realm
The flat realm...
Load Full StoryTwilight had spent the recent weeks going through different dimensions. Like that one time she ended up in a dimension where lizards were the size of houses. Another one being where objects were alive and fought for a prize, and another one where there were people who drew art about the pony world…especially the ponies……*cough* Twilight still is kinda scarred for seeing what people drew her and her own brother doing.
With a flash of her horn she went into another dimension, but this one… Wasn’t like the others…
It was a flat plane for miles, almost like if she were on a piece of paper, the ground, sky, everything was a plane pure white, Twi is certain she is on a piece of paper.
Twilight then dodged out of the way when she saw something big approaching her from the sky. When she stood up she saw a giant pencil with its tip touching the paper, the pencil moved around leaving behind a trail. When the pencil was done it went back in the sky, and what they drew got up and came to life.
WHAT. THE. FU-
What came to life was not what she expected, it looked like a drawing a foal made. It had a circular head with a derpy drawn face with stubby legs and two big arms. It soon began running up to her, but when Twi ducked it stopped and put his hand out to her.
She then looked up at the thing staring back at her with a crudely drawn smile. She then took her hoof out and shook it. She noticed how her hoof appeared different. But when she tried to say hello, nothing came out.
Hold on, I can think but not talk, and why is my hoof…no..I-Is there a mirror?
Almost as if the creature read her mind he pulled a poorly drawn mirror out of his pocket, the mirror was twice the size of him so…how?
When Twi looked in the mirror, a single tear of disbelief exited her eye. She also looked like she was drawn, but VERY poorly. She didn’t have a mouth but she had eyes and her cutie mark was crude and her mane and tail couldn’t move.
So that makes sense…wait…I don’t have a heartbeat…I don't have to breathe, I guess they didn’t draw the anatomy…wait…CAN MY HORN WORK? I CAN’T BE STUCK HERE!
Twi quickly looked at her horn and focused, and it glowed as she picked up the mirror with her magic. A huge sigh of relief happened in her mind while the doodle put a big thumbs up to confirm her question. So she can escape, but..why not try to communicate with the doodle creature. She walked up to it slowly with caution and the thing just kept that crooked smile with his face never changing. She looked in the mirror and even when angry, sad, happy, her face didn’t change.
So..last time he read my mind? Twi thought as she looked at the doodle while the thing gave her a thumbs up.
So you can read my mind?
A nod.
So this is how we can communicate.. Can you bring back that big pencil-
With that the thing put his hand up and snapped his finger and behind him the big pencil appeared and started to draw something else now.
W-What is…it…drawing?
A shrug.
The pencil stopped in front of her as the thing it drew came to life. It looked like another pony, but pink.
The thing quickly came up to her and looked her in the eyes.
Heyya Twilight! It’s me, Pinkie!
Pinkie!? You can hop dimensions too?
Everyone knows I can break the fourth wall.
The what now?
The crudely drawn Pinkie looked in a random direction and waved her hoof then looked back to her.
Isn’t it great!
B-But why did the pencil draw you?
Both Pinky and the other doodle shrugged, Twi’s doodle then had a pouty face, the most emotion she had seen herself do in this world.
Well…we gotta head back home, I bet every pony is worried about me being gone all this time going into these worlds.
Awwwww! But I wanted to stay with this big fella! Pinkie then proceeded to float in the air, turn around, and go on the doodle’s chest as it hugged her with that smile remaining.
Come on! We gotta go home before the pencil thing draws more weird things!
You mean like me?
OHH CELESTIA!
Twilight jumped and fell on the floor at the surprise, she saw the pencil finally go away but a new doodle was there. After focusing a bit on the voice and the bad drawing, she figured out if it was Cadence.
WHY ARE MORE PONIES APPEARING IN THIS REALM!?
Everyone in the plane except her shrugged.
I was just going to Flurry Heart’s room then I felt myself being erased, then I appeared here.
Twilight stood there, her dot eye twitching as a line stuck out from her hair. Her anger and confusion was building.
Hahahaha! Relax Twilight, it’s just fun here, especially with you big fella!” Pinkie sat down and began playing patty cake with the doodle. Cadence chuckled and Twi’s anger boiled up more.
This world is so weird, a big pencil, doodles, and NOW BOTH OF MY FRIENDS ARE HERE?
Twilight had some thin pencil line come out of her nose in frustration.
Come on! Let's go home!
With a flash of her magic, a door appeared that showed their world.
B-But Twi I wanted to bri-
You can’t bring it Pinkie!
Alright…but I'll be back soon for him so don’t question when I disappear again.
Cadence, an angry Twilight, and a sad Pinkie went through the door with the doodle waving goodbye but before they left Pinkie gave it one last sneak hug before finally leaving. The door closed causing the doodle to be alone, then the pencil appeared again and began to draw more doodles..
Author's Note
This all started with me drawing a doodle, laughing at it, then making a story about it.
I also challenged myself to make a story where no one actually talked.
