Gentle Kicks

by Friendsheriff

Rating: mature
Tags: Apple Bloom, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Angel, Rarity, Romance, Fluttershy, Sex, Big Macintosh, Slice of Life
Length: 1008

An affair with Fluttershy and Big Macintosh takes an unexpected turn.

Fluttershy always seemed like the perfect fit for Big Mac. He was big and brawny, she was frail and weak, and they were both gentle and shy, with a streak of loneliness. This fact is not unknown to them, and the two horses begin seeing each other. However, everything changes when Fluttershy begins feeling gentle kicks inside her.

Published 2012-10-15 11:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-10-15 11:50:01 UTC

Chapter 1

Romance was in the air. Bees began buzzing more slowly. Frogs croaked rhythmically. Fluttershy's small, dainty house set the stage for true love making.
Big Macintosh smiled and lay on his back, exposing his erect member. Fluttershy smiled. "Um..." She couldn't help but be nervous though.
"Nervous, sugarpie?" Big Mac seemed to know exactly what Fluttershy was feeling.
"Uh... um... not... not at all..." Big Mac just smiled at Fluttershy. "Eeyup. My first time, too. Don't worry, we can take this slowly. Just stand over me."
"Oh... okay." Fluttershy did as instructed. "Oh... Big Mac!" Fluttershy gasped. Big Mac was slowly licking Fluttershy's breasts and chest.
"Sorry, am ah goin too fast, baby?"
"N-no." Fluttershy smiled wryly. "You're going too slow." Fluttershy hunched her head down, beginning to thrust her mouth over Big Mac's penis.
"Oh... eeyup!" Big Mac gasped. Fluttershy began to go faster and faster. Soon, her lips dripped with precum. She removed her mouth, now on her haunches, exposing her glistening vagina.
"Well?" She said impatiently. "Don't mind if I do." Big Mac was all too eager.
"Oh... Oh!" Fluttershy cried in pleasure as Big Mac thrust into her. He began humping faster and faster. Fluttershy could feel his warm cock rubbing against her insides. Soon, it was joined by warm seed.
The two collapsed onto the bed, panting. Suddenly, Big Mac stood up. "Your turn."
Fluttershy whinnied and lay down on her back, legs spread apart. Big Mac lowered his snout into her moist marehood. "C'mon, big boy." Fluttershy neighed.
"Eeyup." Big Mac began licking her clitoris, his large, rough tongue stimulating it.
"Oh... OH!" Fluttershy had never felt such pleasure. Her body tensed up, and an orgasm pulsed from her clitoris. "Ohhhhh...." Fluttershy moaned. Big Mac removed his snout and smiled.
After their love-making session, they both seemed to be back to themselves, shy and less bold.
Fluttershy and Big Mac met outside of Fluttershy's house after they had clean themselves up. A long silence ensued, until it was finally broken by Fluttershy. "Uh... um... you said you... um... wanted a dog." Fluttershy glided off, then came back momentarily holding an ugly, scruffy puppy. "This is R-rex. He's very loyal." Big Mac smiled. "Eeyup. He's perfect. Here's that pie you wanted." Big Mac pulled a pie out of his saddle bag. "I always carry one with me." The two horses looked each other in the eye, and smiled. They closed in for a long, passionate kiss.
They didn't even notice when Rex began eating the pie.

Big Mac arrived at Sweet Apple Acres the next morning. He was greeted by an irritated Applejack. "Big Mac! Where've ya been all night? It's applebuck season! Ya can't jus leave for 7 hours and come back whenever ya feel like! We got work ta do! What were ya doin, anyway?" Big Mac sighed. "Ah was at Fluttershy's house." "Fluttershy's?" "Eeyup." "Now what in tarnation were ya doin at Fluttershy's?" "Gettin' a dog. See?"Big Mac pulled Rex out of his saddle bag. Applejack flinched at the puppy's strange looks. "Well, how come it took ya all night and most a this mornin?" "Ah kina got more 'n a puppy." Big Mac smirked. "Now what is that sposed ta mean, mister?" "Ah, nothin. Nyope. Nothin at all, sis. Gotta go buck some apples. Bye now." Big Mac ran out the door. Applejack sighed.
The clop of Appleblooms excited hoofsteps could be heard by Applejack. "Sis!" Applebloom called out to Applejack. "What's this ah hear bout a puppy?" "Oh, nothin. Big Mac just spent the whole night at Fluttershy's trying tp get this ugly thing, ah guess... Applebloom?" Applebloom didn't hear her sister's words. She was too busy getting her face washed by Rex. "He's such a cutie, doncha think, sis?" Applejack rolled her eyes. "I'm gonna go buck some apples."

Fluttershy happily galloped through the backroads. Unbeknownst to her, Rainbow Dash was in a cloud right above her. "Fluttershy? You look awfully happy today." Fluttershy smiled. "Oh, it's nothing... well, I just have a new coltfriend, is all." Rainbow Dash started to laugh. "you? A coltfriend? Don't push it, Fluttershy." "Well, it's true!" "Oh yeah? Who is it?"
"Applejack's brother. Big... big..." Rainbow Dash's eyes widened. "Mac?" A long silence ensued,

Prologue

Fluttershy nudged the wilting flower with her muzzle. This earned her a petal on the ground. Fluttershy tried to hold back tears. She had tried everything to keep it healthy, and, yet, it still stood droopy and dying. Fluttershy sighed. "I can't do anything right."

Big Macintosh could feel a throbbing ache in his hooves. He popped down under a tree, rubbing his sore back hooves and observing the work he had done... about 40 trees... in 40 hours. "Goddamn it! This is too slow!" Big Macintosh sighed. "I can't do anything right."

"... and that's why I'm so upset... um... Rainbow?" Fluttershy nudged Rainbow Dash awake.
"Hunh...? Oh, right, Fluttershy. Just buy a pie from Sweet Apple Acres. Sweets make everything right. Now, quit bugging me."
Fluttershy began to fly towards her house. A pie? Rainbow Dash obviously hadn't listened to a word she had said. But, while it wouldn/t make things right, a pie sure would mack her feel better. Fluttershy switched directions, heading towards Sweet Apple Acres.

"Ah jus don't know what I'm gonna do, Granny! ...Granny?" Big Mac tapped Granny Smith's wrinkled head with his hoof.
"Hu- Wha? Oh, sorry dearie. You know, my ma and pa got me a puppy once. You should get a puppy. Applejack's little yellow friend has some." Big Mac scratched his head. "Fluttershy?" Granny Smith nodded. "Yes, Flittershut sounds about right.... wha?" Big Mac sighed and stepped outside. Had Granny even listened to him? He figured she hadn't. However, a dog would probably listen to every word that he had to say, even if Big Mac wasn't a big talker. It was just a trot to Fluttershy's house, after all.

Two ponies, on an intersecting path, would soon be on common ground.