Echoes of Equestria
The Depths of Loyalty
Previous ChapterNext ChapterIt was another bright, sunny day in the land of Equestria. I found myself speaking with Starlight Glimmer, and our conversation gradually drifted to her views on Twilight Sparkle and her past unhealthy obsession with Princess Celestia.
Starlight reflected on the time when the map called her to solve a friendship problem between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna, a moment that had revealed much about Twilight’s devotion to Celestia. Starlight recalled one of Twilight’s over the top reactions during that event. “I had said something along the lines of, the princesses aren’t the best at something and she was like, ‘I’m sorry, you just said princesses and aren’t the best in the same sentence. And it’s kind of freaking me out!’”
Okay, well, that's not quite right, but it’s actually funnier. Maybe Starlight should have written that episode. “Yeah, that must have been quite a moment, huh? It was clear that Twilight held Princess Celestia in very high esteem.”
Starlight nodded in agreement, adding, “Twilight’s devotion was admirable, but it also became an obsession. She put Princess Celestia on such a high pedestal that it put strain on their relationship and made it challenging for Twilight to view her as an equal or a friend.”
I paused to reflect on her words. So, this must be why I connected with Clarity first. Loyalty untempered by clarity of thought leads to unhealthy obsession. This realization sparked a sense of connection within me as I considered my own experiences.
Starlight continued, her tone thoughtful. “Yeah. And that’s what makes it even more important to recognize and address unhealthy devotion before it spirals out of control. It can cause a lot of harm,” she said, her expression growing serious.
Simon nodded, considering her words. Devotion? That was one of the Pinnacles. I believe it was even the second one mentioned. Let’s see. Clarity, Devotion, Compassion, Abundance, Resilience, and Oneness, if I remember correctly. Maybe I’m meant to learn them in that exact sequence. I wonder why. “You’re right. Unhealthy devotion can indeed cause a lot of harm. It’s like pouring gasoline onto a fire… it starts off small, but it can quickly spiral out of control and burn everything down if left unchecked.”
As I absorbed this, my thoughts drifted to Spike, Twilight’s ever-loyal assistant. “Yeah, Spike’s devotion to Twilight is really something else,” I said, turning to Spike, who had been listening in. “Spike, do you mind sharing your thoughts on your devotion to Twilight?”
Spike looked up, surprised to be called upon. “Uh, sure. What do you wanna know?”
I thought for a moment, then asked, “Do you think your devotion to Twilight is based on healthy or unhealthy principles?”
Spike considered the question for a second before replying thoughtfully, “I’d like to think my devotion to Twilight is based on healthy principles. I mean, sure, she can be difficult and demanding at times, but she’s always had my back when I needed her. And to be honest, I kinda enjoy being her loyal assistant.”
I smiled, observing, “Despite the many slapstick moments we’ve seen with you—a door slamming into you, a book falling on you, etc.”
Spike blinked, a flicker of confusion crossing his face. “Wait, how do you know about all those slapstick moments?”
I froze for a moment, realizing my slip-up. Thinking quickly, I tried to play it off. “Oh, um… I’ve just noticed them happen from time to time, you know? Plus I’ve heard tell of some of them from the others.”
Spike still looked a little skeptical, but he seemed to accept my explanation. “Well, yeah, I guess you have seen some of them. It’s just a hazard of being Twilight’s assistant, I suppose,” he said with a small shrug.
I let out a relieved sigh, glad that Spike didn’t press further. However, the interaction left me thinking about what to do with this knowledge. That’s when I thought of Rainbow Dash and her obsession with the Wonderbolts.
“If you’ll excuse me, guys, I have a certain cerulean Pegasus to track down. Got some questions to ask her.”
“Ah. Figured you’d want to ask the Loyalty expert herself about all of this,” Starlight said. “Well, cya later then. Have fun.”
“Yeah, cya Simon,” Spike added.
With that, I made my way out of Twilight’s school, on the hunt for Rainbow Dash.
***
She wasn’t up in the sky anywhere. I was able to ascertain that not long after I left the school. Plan B then. I headed toward Sugarcube Corner and went inside. Upon entering, I saw that it was Mrs. Cake manning—or should I say ponying—the counter.
“Hello, dear. Pinkie Pie?”
“How’d ya guess?”
“Call it a mare’s intuition. Word travels fast in a small town like Ponyville, you know. Especially with a pony like Pinkie Pie living here,” she chuckled. “She’s up in her room. Second door on the left.”
“Thanks.” I headed upstairs to the door as instructed and rapped on it.
Soon it opened and Pinkie smiled down at me. “Hiya Celestial.”
Quirking an eyebrow I asked, “Celestial?”
“Yeah. I ponified your name. Simon… Celestial. See?”
“Uhh…”
“So, what brings you to my place? Not that I ever turn down company. Oh. Are you here to see me? Is this about the party welcoming you to our World/Ponyville/Pinnacle bearer/Cuteceañera.” Stops. “Wow. I got a lot of parties I have to throw you.”
Laughing in spite of myself—Pinkie always has that effect—I say, “Pinkie, take a breath would ya?”
“Okey dokey lokey.” She inhaled sharply and held it, causing her head to balloon as she floated up to the ceiling. My eyes widened in surprise until I remembered who I was speaking to. Seriously. Why are you surprised by this Simon?
“Pinkie, exhale.” She did and flew around the room before landing on her hooves as if nothing happened. “I swear. One of these days I’m going to know for sure how you keep breaking the laws of physics.”
“Who says they’re the same physics you operate under?” she asked, her cheerful demeanor never wavering.
I started to open my mouth to retort, then abruptly closed it as I fully registered those words. “Whoa. OK. I think that you just blew my mind.”
She giggled, saying, “Hope it didn’t hurt too badly.” Then ended with a giggle-snort.
I shook my head as I finally state my reason for being here. “Do you know where Dash is?”
“Hmm,” she mused, placing a hoof to her chin. “Tuesday, after 1 PM. Weather factory. She’ll be back in Ponyville by three.”
I nodded. “OK then. Thanks. If ya see her before I do…”
“I’ll be sure to tell her that you’re looking for her. Now then, I gotta get down to the party cave. Later Tial.” Then she was gone before I could ask her about that nickname to my ponified name.
“Seriously? How did she get Celestial from Simon?” Chuckling as I shook my head I made my way back out onto the street and just wandered aimlessly, as I started to kill time until Dash returned.
***
I glanced up at the clock tower in the middle of town. Half past two. Only thirty minutes to go before Rainbow Dash would be back from the weather factory. Not much longer now, I thought, stopping at a bench near the fountain.
As I sat there reflecting, my mind kept circling back to that time when Rainbow Dash was obsessed with joining the Wonderbolts. Then came the day she turned in her wings over Lightning Dust’s reckless behavior. She was ready to give up her lifelong dream to protect her friends. Who does that?
And then there was Spitfire, who’d let the danger spiral out of control until Rainbow stepped in. You’d think she’d have grounded Lightning Dust herself the second those stunts started, but it took Rainbow walking away to make things change.
The clock struck three, the chime echoing softly across the square. I stood up, dusting myself off as I headed toward the edge of town. Sure enough, a streak of rainbow blurred across the sky. Rainbow Dash angled her wings and descended landing at the door to her cloud home.
“Got a few questions for you,” I said, keeping my tone light. “Thought you might be the best pony to ask.”
Rainbow Dash tilted her wings slightly, descending from her perch to land beside me with a smooth, confident flair. She folded her wings neatly, her smirk unwavering as she said, “Sure, fire away.”
I hesitated, thinking how best to ask. “You’ve had this big dream of becoming a Wonderbolt pretty much your whole life, right? What was it like, chasing after it?”
Her smirk grew. “Oh, you mean other than awesome? ‘Cause that’s what it was! Yeah, it was a lot of work, but when you’ve got as much natural talent as I do, it’s just a matter of time before you get your shot.”
I nodded. “So, was it always smooth sailing?”
She shrugged. “Not exactly. There were a few bumps, I guess. Like when I joined the Wonderbolt Academy. I was so stoked—finally getting a real shot at my dream. But then I met this pony, Lightning Dust…”
“She was super talented, but reckless. She didn’t care about anyone else, just being the best. At first, I thought, ‘Hey, this pony’s got the same drive as me!’ But then she started pulling stunts that put ponies in danger, and… well, it got out of hoof fast.”
“And Spitfire just… let that slide?” I asked, surprised.
Rainbow scoffed. “Yeah, can you believe it? Spitfire didn’t even blink. She was so focused on results that she didn’t care how Lightning Dust got there. It wasn’t until I stood up and said something that she finally took action.” Rainbow Dash shook her head, her mane bouncing slightly. “It was one of the hardest things I’ve ever done, walking away from the Wonderbolt Academy. I thought it was over for me, like I’d blown my only chance. But I couldn’t stand by and let somepony like Lightning Dust ruin everything.”
“So, did it have you questioning your blind devotion to them?” I asked. “You know, when you stood up to Spitfire at that moment and said you were done?”
Rainbow paused, her gaze meeting mine, and for a second, her bravado seemed to give way to something deeper. “Yeah,” she admitted. “I guess it did. I mean, they were my heroes growing up. I thought they could do no wrong. But when I saw how blind Spitfire was to what was going on? It made me realize they weren’t perfect—and that maybe I’d been putting them on too high of a pedestal.”
She glanced off to the side, as if seeing a memory play out in the sky. “There was another time, too. During the Equestria Games qualifiers, the Wonderbolts wanted me to join their team. One of their flyers got injured, so they came to me. Told me I was their best chance to win. And I’ll admit, I was tempted. But it would’ve meant abandoning my friends—the Ponyville team.”
“So, what did you do?” I asked, leaning in slightly.
“I almost caved,” Rainbow said, shaking her head with a bitter smile. “But then I saw how much it meant to my team, how hard they were trying. And I realized, if I left them hanging like that, I’d be turning my back on everything I stood for. So, I stuck with Ponyville, and… well, we didn’t win. But you know what? I didn’t regret it.”
She chuckled, giving me a playful nudge with her elbow. “And you know what else? Turns out that was a pretty pinnacle moment—considering how it led to that.” She jerked her head toward Twilight’s castle in the distance, her grin widening.
Feigning ignorance, I widened my eyes, raising an eyebrow. “What do you mean? How’d that lead to the castle?”
Rainbow’s grin softened as she launched into the story. “Well, after I stuck with Ponyville, everything just kinda… clicked. We didn’t win, but the way we came together as a team—it was like magic, y’know? And later, when we faced Tirek, it all came full circle. Loyalty, teamwork, everything we’d learned—it all came together and gave us the power to take him down. That’s how the Tree of Harmony created Twilight’s castle.”
I nodded along, careful to seem genuinely curious. More than just adding to the story, her explanation gave me something invaluable: knowledge grounded in their world. If I ever slipped up and mentioned this later, I could always say, “Oh, Rainbow Dash told me about that.” No suspicions. No slip-ups.
As Rainbow finished her story, I couldn’t help but reflect on everything she’d shared. Loyalty, she’d called it. But underneath that, I saw something deeper. It wasn’t just about sticking with her friends or standing up for what was right. It was about devotion—a commitment to something greater than herself, even when it cost her everything.
I nodded slowly, a small smile tugging at the corner of my mouth. I think I understand now. Devotion isn’t blind. It’s knowing what matters most and staying true to it, no matter the cost.
“Thanks for sharing all that,” I said, meeting Rainbow’s gaze. “It really gave me something to think about.”
She smirked, brushing it off with a wave of her hoof. “Hey, no problem. If you ever need a lesson in loyalty, you know who to call.”
I chuckled. “Actually, I was thinking… what if we kept this conversation going? Maybe over tea at Twilight’s castle? You, me, and Twilight—just an informal little get-together. Nothing fancy.”
Rainbow raised an eyebrow, looking intrigued. “Tea, huh? Not exactly my style, but… sure, why not? I’m game.”
“Great,” I said, already forming a plan in my mind. This feels right. I’m one step closer to understanding devotion—and maybe to finding my place in this world.
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