Echoes of Equestria
The Call of Faith
Previous ChapterNext ChapterThe entrance to the Everfree Forest yawned before us, dark and foreboding, like the maw of some slumbering beast. Ancient trees, their trunks gnarled and twisted, arched overhead, their skeletal branches clawing at the dim sky to form a canopy that devoured the light. Just standing there made my skin crawl. The undergrowth was a tangled mass of brambles and thorns, snaking through the base of the trees as if eager to ensnare anything that dared venture too close. It almost felt alive, as though the forest itself could have reached out and dragged me in. The air hung thick and still, laden with a silence that pressed heavily against the ears, as if the whole place was holding its breath. It was far too quiet.
A faint path snaked into the gloom, narrow and overgrown, barely distinguishable amid the chaos of vines and roots. Standing at the threshold, I couldn’t shake the chill that seeped into my bones. Somewhere in the foliage, an unseen creature stirred, its faint rustle sending a fresh wave of unease down my spine. Beyond the entrance, the forest loomed—a wall of shadow and secrets, daring anyone foolish enough to trespass to uncover what lay within.
“Ready?” Twilight asked.
“I’ve changed my mind. You two go. I’ll stay here where I won’t get eaten.”
They giggled as Twilight responded, “I assure you that it’s perfectly safe. You’ve got two full-grown mares to protect you. And, not to sound immodest, one of them is pretty proficient in magic.”
Fluttershy chimed in. “Also, I can usually talk my way out of trouble with most animals.”
I swallowed hard as I observed quietly. “It didn’t seem this forbidding before.”
I could see, as I turned towards Fluttershy, that they had caught on to what I said, but before they could question it, I asked Fluttershy for a ride.
“Of course.” She knelt down, allowing me to climb onto her back. “There. Feeling a little braver now, sweetie?”
I nodded while blushing. “Sorry for the trouble. I’m not usually such a scaredy pony.”
“It’s perfectly understandable,” Twilight chimed in as they began walking. “After all, you used to be an adult. Being reduced to the strength of a foal again would make anypony overly cautious or even afraid. Especially when confronted with this forest.”
I nodded, and then we were suddenly engulfed by darkness. It was pretty jarring. The sudden shift from daytime to nighttime caused my hackles to rise.
Twilight lit her horn, shedding some much-needed light to guide our way.
“Is it always dark like this?” I asked.
Nodding, she replied, “Yes. Always.”
“Didn’t seem that way before,” I muttered under my breath.
Twilight heard it, however, as pony hearing is far more adept than a human’s. “Yes, from outside the entrance, it doesn’t seem like it would be so dark. However, when we pass the threshold, it is quite jarring.”
Note to self. Pony hearing is very acute.
As we continued to press on, my “acute pony hearing” began to pick up the sound of chanting in the distance.
“OK, who’s chanting?”
Smiling, Twilight said, “Oh. That’s just Zecora.”
“The rhyming zebra who crafts potions? That Zecora?” I asked excitedly.
“None other. She lives in the… Hold up.” She turned to look at me with suspicion. “How do you know of Zecora?”
“Oh, um…”
“Some ponies were speaking of her on our walk to here,” Fluttershy interjected. “You didn’t notice?”
Twilight, taken aback, looked to be running the memories of the events leading up to our arrival at the forest through her mind. “Ah. Yes. Daisy was commenting on a potion she had made to help her flowers and repeating some of Zecora’s dialogue.”
I nodded, latching onto this out that the universe once again handed to me. “Yes. That’s when I heard about her.”
Twilight stared at me for a few moments before nodding. “Right then. Well, as it seemed like you were eager to meet her, shall we go?”
I nodded excitedly as Fluttershy, along with Twilight, began to walk around the bend towards the chanting.
And there she was. The rhyming, potion-crafting zebra herself. She looked up from her cauldron, which she had placed outside her hut for some reason, and smiled upon seeing who it was.
“Well, isn’t this a splendid surprise. To see two of my friends before my eyes.”
“Hello, Zecora. Wonderful to see you again.” Fluttershy nodded at her in acknowledgment of the sentiment.
“So, what brings you two to the forest Everfree? Though I would like to think so, I doubt it is just to see me.”
Fluttershy nodded, turning to the side so Zecora could see me on her back.
“Forsooth. Who is this youth?”
“Greetings Zecora, speaker of rhymes and potion crafter. My name is Simon, and it is the Tree of Harmony that we’re after.”
Her eyes twinkling, she replied, “You speak in rhyme? How rare a feat! Such clever words are quite the treat.”
“Back home I liked to rhyme. At least I did some of the time. I had no friends to perfect the craft, and those I tried it on found me quite daft. Or even worse, very annoying, as they found speaking as such, quite cloying. But here it seems my rhymes may stay. Where clever words aren’t brushed away.”
The ponies looked on with big smiles upon their faces, enjoying the exchange between us. Zecora laughed brightly, replying, “Ah, you are, without a doubt, a true wordsmith throughout. Your clever way to turn a phrase will leave me reflecting back for days. If ever again when your business concludes, you find yourself in a rhyming mood, then return again I bid you one day. I promise to never turn you away.”
Nodding happily, I concluded, “This was beyond measure, a true and unique pleasure. Your invitation shall always stay, as I look back at this day, forefront within my mind—when again the mood strikes, you I shall find.”
Chuckling, she concludes, “A pleasure it has been, no fleeting spark, for brief though it was, it left its mark. May your path stay clear and free of muck, as I bid you farewell and wish you good luck.”
Smiling joyfully, I waved from Fluttershy’s back as the ponies continued on their way.
“That was absolutely wonderful,” Fluttershy remarked. “I believe that you’re the first pony to have ever spoken in rhyme to her.”
Nodding, Twilight added, “You’re right, Fluttershy. Everypony else simply responds to her as natural. Though after what I just witnessed, I believe I’ll give it a try next time I speak to her.”
“Yes. You looked to be having such a blast. And it seemed so natural to you. The way you shifted from the way we all speak to rhyming seemed as if you were throwing a switch inside your own mind.”
“I concur. The way you so effortlessly switched gears was a remarkable sight. It’s as if you slipped into another accent.”
Smiling, I responded, “Funny you should say that. To me, it seems that rhyming is its own accent, because it’s another style of speech, just like that.”
“Huh. I never thought of it like that.” Twilight’s face changed from one of thoughtful reflection to delight. “But you’re absolutely right.”
“So, how much further?”
“It’s about another thirty-minute walk before we arrive at the bridge. Then just a short climb down some stairs, and we’re there.”
Nodding, I fell silent as we continued on to our destination.
***
Coming before the bridge, the ponies stopped, allowing me to see the castle on the far side. The Castle of the Two Sisters loomed across the chasm, a shadow of its former majesty. Its jagged towers, half-consumed by ivy and moss, stood defiant against the weight of centuries, their crumbling edges silhouetted against the dim sky. Sunlight filtered through gaps in the ancient stone, casting fractured beams across the weathered bridge stretching before us. The air felt colder here, heavier, as if the ruins themselves held onto the echoes of a thousand years of history.
Standing there, I couldn’t help but feel small. The castle wasn’t just a setting anymore—it was real. The sheer scale of the place, the way time had ravaged yet spared it, sent a chill down my spine. The wind whistled low through the chasm, carrying with it an eerie stillness. Every detail, from the cracks in the stone to the hollow, shadowed archway of the entrance, seemed to whisper of untold stories and secrets. For a moment, all I could do was stare, overwhelmed by the weight of its presence, feeling like I was standing in the shadow of something far greater than myself.
“Quite the sight isn’t it?” Twilight asked as I stared at the foreboding castle.
“Yeah. It’s something all right.”
“My friends and I have been working on restoring it, but as you can see, we’ve a long way to go yet.”
“But why even bother? You’ve got two castles already. Yours and the one I saw hanging off that mountain some distance from Ponyville.”
“That other castle is in Canterlot. It’s our capital. As for mine, it’s a recent addition. Honestly, I’m not sure which one I’ll be using.” Here she became melancholy for a moment before brightening up. “But, to answer your question, we wish to preserve it as it’s a large part of our history.”
I nodded in understanding.
“Well, we’ve sight seen long enough, and we really can’t afford to waste too much time.” And with that, the two ponies began the trek down the stairs built into the side of the cliff.
After that, it was a short walk to the cave entrance leading into where the tree turned club house of the Student Six resided.
Before me stood the reborn Tree of Harmony, a breathtaking vision of light and life. Unlike the rigid, symmetrical form I had seen on screen, this Tree had grown wild and free, its crystalline branches sprawling outward in an organic, unpredictable dance of energy. The gemstones that once represented the shattered Elements of Harmony had become one with the Tree itself, scattered like constellations throughout its translucent limbs. Each one glowed with a kaleidoscope of colors, their light casting shimmering reflections across the cavern walls.
The trunk was thicker now, its surface textured with flowing lines that looked like rivers of magic frozen mid stream. It pulsed gently, exuding a warmth that seemed to reach out and wrap itself around me. At its base, the roots stretched deep into the ground, radiating a soft, nurturing glow that filled the air with a sense of life and renewal. This wasn’t the orderly monument of harmony I had expected—it was something far greater. It was alive, dynamic, and untamed, a testament to unity forged through struggle and growth.
For a long moment, I just stood there, awestruck. It wasn’t just the beauty of the Tree that held me captive—it was what it represented. Harmony wasn’t static or unyielding. It was something that grew, adapted, and thrived even in the face of destruction. And standing here, feeling its energy flow through the cavern, I couldn’t help but feel a flicker of hope take root in my chest. Maybe I could grow too. Maybe I could find my own kind of harmony. Little had I realized how much I was foreshadowing what lay in store for me.
As I stood there in awe, a familiar sound could be heard that was fast approaching, which drew our heads to turn back towards the cave entrance. Sure enough, a moment later, Rainbow Dash came flying through.
“There you are. I’ve been looking all over for you.”
“Dash?” Twilight said in surprise before getting down to business. “What’s wrong? What’s the threat? How much time do we have?”
“Whoa, whoa, relax, egghead,” Dash replied, holding up her hooves. “I just wanted to check on our guest. I went to Fluttershy’s cottage first, since I figured he’d be there, but when nopony was home, I hightailed it to your castle. Spike said you three were heading to the Everfree Forest, so I rushed over as fast as I could, just in case there was some flank that needed kicking.”
Twilight visibly relaxed and stated, “Oh. Well, you can’t blame me for going into action mode when you suddenly show up delivering a line like that.”
“Heh, heh. Sorry. I was just concerned, you know.”
“Concerned about what?”
“Well, not concerned really. I was just curious. Yea… That’s it. I was just curious how our new arrival was doing. You know, after what happened yesterday.”
Oh my gosh! Rainbow Dash was concerned for me! Eeeeeeeeeee! I no doubt had the biggest grin on my face, which was verified when Dash—having taken notice—commented, “What? It’s not like I was worried or anything. I knew you were fine. I just wanted to know how you were adjusting. That’s all.”
Quickly getting a hold of myself, I replied, “Actually, surprisingly, I seem to be adjusting just fine. Huh. You know, now that you bring it up, it’s actually quite surprising that I haven’t been dwelling on my transformation any more than a brief internal monologue I had—my first night here—when I was traveling with Fluttershy to her cottage.”
“I for one do not find it at all surprising,” said a familiar voice with an ethereal quality to it, which drew us to look towards the Tree of Harmony as the sparkly, ethereal form of Twilight manifested before our eyes. “It only proves your strong will and adaptability to an unfamiliar situation. Strengths that shall serve you well on your journey.”
“She looks like me,” Twilight exclaimed.
“Well, duh. It’s how she appeared to the Student Six,” I explained as I walked toward the Spirit of Harmony.
“Wha?”
“So, Spirit of Harmony. From the context I gather that you know why I’m here.”
“Please. No need to be so formal. Harmony will suffice. And yes. I know well of your mission.”
“Then please. I ask of you. Guide me. Tell me why I was brought here. What must I do?”
“Simply place your hand—whoops, I mean your hoof—upon me and all shall be revealed.”
Turning towards the Tree, I raised my hoof and set it against the trunk. Suddenly, I was bombarded with a vast array of images all coming in quick succession: me surrounded by six different colored lights, with the last being more dynamic; a teary farewell from this world as I return to my own; and five human shaped silhouettes—then—blackness.
***
The first sensation I was aware of was touch. I was on something soft and cuddly. The next was sound as I heard a voice fussing over me. Then two other voices, one calm and measured, the other angrily shouting.
“Ugh. Will you please keep it down?”
I heard a soft gasp as I felt myself being shifted, and upon opening my eyes, I saw two familiar teal colored eyes staring back at me. “Oh, thank goodness. You’re awake.”
“See, Dash? I said he’d be fine.”
“Not the point. This thing could have warned him before telling him to touch it.”
“ENOUGH!”
My ears flattened as Twilight used what I could only assume was the RCV.
“Ow, Twilight!” Dash exclaimed in pain. “Since when could you use that ear splitting voice?”
“Honestly, I’m as surprised as you are. But, anyways, my point stands. You’re forgetting that this is the Spirit of Harmony herself. You can’t go accusing her like that.”
“Please. Peace, my friends. I am not offended. Quite the contrary. I applaud Rainbow’s defense of her friend. You are right,” she said, now addressing Dash directly. “I should have warned him that the experience would be intense.”
Dash, now with a smug smile on her face, exclaimed, “See, Twilight? I was right to be angry.”
Rolling her eyes, Twilight chastised her again. “Even so. You could have shown a bit more diplomacy in addressing your grievances.”
“Huh?”
“She means,” I said as Fluttershy set me back down, “that you could have voiced your concerns without raising your voice to a shout.”
“Oh,” Dash said, a blush forming.
Twilight, brimming with excitement, approached me asking, “What did you see?”
“It was a jumble. Images coming at me one after the other. It was hard to make sense of it all. Though I suppose that’s what my little nap was for. I now understand what I was shown. I have to find a way to forge a connection to the elements and return with them to my world.”
Twilight’s eyes widened in fascination. “Amazing. You were pulled across worlds, because your planet needs the power of the Elements of Harmony.”
“No. Not the EoH.”
“What? But you just said…”
“Sorry, but, when I said elements earlier I misspoke. I heard two things during that vision. One was Principles of Unity.”
“Principles of Unity?” Twilight said, her curiosity growing. “Fascinating. They must be another level of the elements. Like Starswirl and his friends’ Pillars.”
“Yes. Clarity, Devotion, Compassion, Abundance, Resilience, and Oneness. These are the core concepts. The very heart of the elements themselves,” Harmony interjected.
Twilight’s eyes got as big as dinner plates. “The very core of the elements? You mean the fundamental principles that they’re based on?”
“Indeed. It will be Simon’s task to discover what the true essence of the Pinnacles of Unity are in order to forge a connection with them.”
“No. NO! I haven’t got time for this!”
“Simon, I know what is weighing on your heart. Therefore a choice you shall be given.”
With that, Harmony pointed toward the cave entrance. As I gazed at it, a portal began to form within. When it completed, I could see my father lying on his bed, as though I were standing in front of the door to our apartment.
“You can return to your father and continue to take care of him, or you can trust that he will be looked after and continue to walk the path before you. The choice is yours.”
Then without another word, she faded from sight, leaving us alone as I faced an impossible choice.
“Well, duh. I mean the choice is obvious,” Dash said.
“No, Dash. This is actually the hardest choice I have had to make in my life.”
Sputtering, Dash exclaimed, “What?! You’re seriously thinking of abandoning your father?”
“No, Dash. I would never do that. But there are larger issues here.”
“Dude. Seriously. You’ve been wanting to get back home to your father from the moment you arrived here. And now that you have a literal door back home, you’re thinking of refusing it?”
“As I said. There’s a larger issue here than what I want.”
Her face fumed as she shouted, “That’s it!” And before I could react, she had me in her grasp and over to the portal. “Either you walk into that thing now or I’m throwing you in.”
“Rainbow Dash!” Fluttershy said in a tone that brooked no argument. “You put him down this instant!”
“B-But—”
“You heard her, Dash,” Twilight said, enveloping both of us and dragging us back to them. “Now!”
She huffed but obeyed. “I can’t believe you’re gonna actually let him abandon his father.”
“Oh? So I should abandon my faith instead? Is that what you’re saying?”
I actually saw the color drain from her face upon hearing those words. I also noticed Twilight and Fluttershy performing some sort of sign with their hooves. Rainbow Dash quickly followed suit.
“I-I’m sorry. I don’t know.”
With a teasing smirk, I asked Dash, “So, despite all your protestations to the contrary, you really were worried about me, weren’t you?”
Dash bristled, shooting back, “Shut up. I was not! I just don’t like anything that doesn’t warn anypony about potential dangers. That’s all!”
The two mares giggled at Dash’s indignant performance, prompting her to glare at them challengingly.
Deciding to move on, Twilight inquired, “Simon, you mentioned hearing two things during your vision. What was the second?”
Nodding, I replied, “The other thing I heard was four simple words. ’Good luck, my son.’”
Author's Note
Hey everyone! Now that Simon’s destiny has started to unfold, I’d love to hear your thoughts. Do you find his journey engaging so far? What do you think of the challenges and the path laid out for him? Are there any moments that stood out to you or things you’re looking forward to?
I also wanted to let you know there might be a bit of a delay before the next chapter, as I’m taking some time to work out the next part of Simon’s journey. Thank you for your patience and support—it means a lot!
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