A father's wraith
Second coming
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But that was before the disturbance.
A ripple of energy passed through the town, subtle at first but growing stronger by the second. It felt like a tremor in the fabric of reality itself, setting everypony on edge. Birds scattered from their perches, and a hush fell over the marketplace.
In the middle of the square, light bent and warped, spiraling into a chaotic vortex. Ponies screamed and fled as the anomaly expanded. Then, as suddenly as it appeared, the vortex vanished, leaving behind a single figure.
The figure was tall, bipedal, and unlike anything the ponies had ever seen. His clothes were tattered and covered in a layer of dust, as though he had traveled through countless storms. His face was weathered but kind, his eyes sharp yet confused.
He spoke, his deep voice resonating with a language none could understand. “Onde estou? O que aconteceu?”
Twilight Sparkle arrived moments later, teleporting into the square alongside her friends. She took one look at the stranger and froze. “What… what is that?”
“I don’t know,” Applejack said, stepping forward cautiously. “But it doesn’t look like he means harm… yet.”
The stranger turned to face them, his expression softening as though he recognized their fear. He raised his hands in a placating gesture and spoke again, his tone calm. “Por favor, não tenham medo.”
Rainbow Dash hovered above, glaring. “Yeah, no clue what you’re saying, buddy, but we’re not scared!”
Before Twilight could respond, a sharp pop echoed through the square. A chaotic swirl of energy announced the arrival of Eris, the Spirit of Chaos. Her mismatched wings fluttered as she hovered above the scene, her serpentine body coiling in midair.
“Well, well, what do we have here?” Eris’s voice dripped with playful sarcasm. “I was in the middle of a lovely nap, and then this happened.” Her eyes landed on the stranger, and for the first time, her smirk faltered.
She stared at him, her golden eyes wide. Her usual air of smug confidence was replaced with something raw—shock, disbelief, and a flicker of hope. Slowly, she descended, her paws trembling as they touched the ground.
The stranger turned to her, his brow furrowing. Recognition flashed in his eyes. “Eris?” he said, his voice trembling.
The name was foreign to the ponies, but Eris’s reaction was immediate. Her entire body froze, her breath catching in her throat. Then, with a shaky step forward, she whispered, her voice uncharacteristically soft, “Pai…?”
The stranger’s face softened into a smile, and he opened his arms. “Minha filha…”
With a strangled cry, Eris lunged forward, wrapping her mismatched arms around him. She buried her face in his chest, her body shaking as though holding back sobs. The ponies could only watch in stunned silence as the chaotic spirit, feared and unpredictable, clung to the stranger like a lost child reunited with her parent.
“I thought you were gone,” she whispered, her words halting as though the language had grown unfamiliar on her tongue. “For so long… you were gone.”
He stroked her head gently, his weathered hands steady despite the tremor in his voice. “Eu nunca quis partir. Eu sinto muito.”
Twilight exchanged a glance with her friends. “What’s going on?” she whispered.
“I don’t know,” Fluttershy replied softly, her wide eyes fixed on the scene. “But… I think that’s her father.”
The thought sent chills through the group. Eris, the Spirit of Chaos, had a father?
Eris finally pulled back, her expression a mix of joy and sorrow. “How are you here? How are you alive?”
He looked around, taking in the strange world he had been thrust into. “Não sei. Foi como se o tempo me tivesse engolido e cuspido novamente. Tudo mudou…”
Eris’s eyes narrowed slightly, and she began to translate for herself, mumbling in Equestrian as she pieced the words together. “Time… swallowed you… and spit you out. You’ve been… lost?”
The stranger nodded.
Before she could ask more, Eris turned sharply, glaring at the Mane Six. “You,” she said, her voice regaining its usual sharpness, “stay out of this. This is family business.”
Rainbow Dash bristled. “Hey! We’re not—”
“Quiet!” Eris snapped, her voice echoing with raw power. “This is not the time for your meddling!”
Twilight took a cautious step forward. “Eris, we’re not trying to interfere, but if this affects Equestria, we need to understand what’s happening.”
Eris’s gaze flicked between the ponies and her father. Her lips curled into a humorless smile. “Oh, don’t worry, Princess. You’ll understand soon enough.”
She snapped her fingers, and in an instant, she and the stranger vanished, leaving behind a trembling ripple of chaos magic.
For a moment, no one spoke.
“What,” Applejack finally said, breaking the silence, “the hay just happened?”
Twilight stared at the empty space where the two had been. “I don’t know,” she said grimly. “But we need to find out—fast.”
The chaotic hum of Eris’s magic faded, leaving her and her father standing in her domain—a realm of swirling colors, floating islands, and unpredictable landscapes. It was a world where logic was abandoned, a reflection of the chaos Eris had embraced after her father's disappearance.
Eris stepped back, her mismatched wings drooping slightly as she studied him. “I don’t understand,” she said, her voice shaking. “You were… gone. How can you be here? What happened to you?”
The man—her father—rubbed his temple, his weathered face etched with exhaustion. “Eris,” he began slowly, speaking in his native tongue, “I don’t know how much you’ll understand. The language feels foreign now, even to me.”
“Try,” Eris said, her tone firm despite the tears threatening to spill. She crossed her arms, her eyes searching his face for answers. “I need to know.”
He nodded, taking a deep breath. “The spell that hit me… it wasn’t meant to kill me. It was alicorn magic, raw and unstable. It fractured time itself around me, pulling me from our world and casting me into the future. I don’t know how many years passed—it felt like moments, yet an eternity.”
Eris’s chaotic domain grew eerily still, as though even it was listening to his words. “Four thousand years,” she whispered. “You’ve been gone for four thousand years.”
His eyes widened in shock. “Four thousand…?” He staggered slightly, and Eris caught him, her strength belying her slender frame.
“Yes,” she said, her voice trembling. “Four thousand years of thinking you were dead. Four thousand years of… of fighting to survive without you.” Her tone grew bitter. “And they made sure we never forgot what we lost.”
He frowned. “They?”
“The ponies,” Eris spat. Her claws clenched, sparks of chaos magic flickering around her. “The alicorns, their followers—every last one of them. They hunted us, drove us away, treated us like monsters. Even my sisters…” Her voice broke. “Even they suffered.”
Her father’s gaze darkened, and a cold fire burned in his eyes. “Your sisters? Umbra and Chrysalis—where are they?”
Eris turned away, floating slightly as her emotions swirled. “Umbra hides in shadows, ruling a broken kingdom. Chrysalis… she leads the changelings, a race of outcasts, starving for scraps because of those ponies. They took everything from us, Father. And they didn’t care.”
The silence that followed was heavy, broken only by the faint hum of the chaotic winds. Her father straightened, his kind demeanor tempered by a steely resolve. “This world has forgotten us,” he said quietly. “But I will make them remember.”
Eris’s ears perked up, and a sly smile spread across her face. “Does this mean what I think it means?”
He nodded, placing a hand on her shoulder. “You’ve been alone long enough, my daughter. It’s time to reclaim what’s ours. But we won’t stop there. We’ll ensure no one can harm you or your sisters again.”
Eris’s chaotic laughter filled the realm. “Oh, this is going to be fun,” she said, snapping her fingers. A chessboard appeared, with the figures of Celestia, Luna, and the Mane Six trembling in place. She flicked one of the pieces, sending it tumbling off the board.
Her father smiled, a mixture of warmth and cold determination. “But first, we reunite the family.”
Meanwhile in the Shadows
Far away, in the ruins of the Crystal Empire, Umbra stirred from her throne of darkness. Her crimson eyes narrowed as she felt a ripple of power sweep through the void.
“Impossible,” she whispered, her voice low and sharp.
In her hive, Queen Chrysalis paused mid-sentence, her changelings chittering nervously around her. A strange sensation tugged at her chest, a warmth she hadn’t felt in centuries.
Both sisters spoke the same word at the same time: “Father.”
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