The one question that changed everything

by Xeltosh

Rating: mature
Tags: Sweetie Belle, Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Sad, Romance, Spike, Rarity, Tragedy
Length: 1612

What happened to Spike? Looking heartbroken after a date-weekend with Rarity?

What happened to Spike? Looking heartbroken after a date-weekend with Rarity? Twilight asks herself and she is desperate to solve this case for her crushed little dragon.

Heavily inspired by the two stories "Like Fine Wine" from SleeplessBrony and "Purely Scientific Interes" from CarcinoGeneticist. This is a continuation story for those two stories, so read "like fine wine" and after that "purely scientific interest first to understand my ambition. Could be read, if both stories are unknown.

Rated mature for the two previously mentioned stories(clop) and maybe clop on my side in later chapters

pls leave comments

Also it´s my first real story I´ve ever written and i´m a german, so it could be, that you find some spelling or grammatical errors.^^

Published 2012-10-15 11:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-10-16 21:12:37 UTC

A sad evening to begin hibernation

Note: I really like Sparity and love the two stories „Like Fine Wine“ from SleeplessBrony and „Purely Scientific Interest“ from CarcinoGeneticist as a continuation story. So i decided(hope they don´t mind) to continue this establishment and hope, I will be doing a good job.
Also it´s my first real story I´ve ever written and i´m a german, so it could be, that you find some spelling or grammatical errors.

5 months have passed, since the „incident“ between Rarity, Twilight and Spike and everything went more or less on as they used to in that time. Though when Twilight hadn´t had any job to do, Spike was nowhere to be seen in the Magic Academy in Canterlot. He spent his time instead with his love Rarity.

At first Twilight was displeased about his absent time but began to understand that they love each other and let him be, as long as he would still do his duties.
On the other hand, Spike couldn´t be more happy, to be with his lifelong love and that Twilight is accepting it.

They were doing all great, until the day before his yearly hibernation.

Twilight was standing in the library of the Magic Academy studying books as usual in her spare time and awaited the return of her #1 assistant for their traditional dinner they held the day before hibernation to make this time of the year a little more bearable for both of them.

Spike entered the library, looking broken.

„Ah, Spike welcome back. How was your day?“

„Ok....I guess...“ This was far away from his usual answer after a date with Rarity and the somehow sad tone in his voice made her forget her books and turning instantly to her little dragon.

„What´s wrong, Spike. I haven´t seen you like this since the day we left Ponyville. What happened?“ she worriedly asked

„Nothing.....I don´t wanna talk about it.“ She wanted to press him further but didn´t as she saw the sad look on his face just before he averted her gaze.

„Well...Ok then. Could you please make yourself ready then? I don´t want you to miss our special dinner. It should be in my Tower in about one hour, so you don´t have to hurry things, just be there in time please.“ she tried to comfort him with a loving smile, but he somehow couldn´t bring up the strenght to smile back, or even to look at her.

„I will.“ he said and he went outside heading to the royal bathhouse, the only place in Canterlot where he wanted to be right now so he could relax his muscles after the flight back.

While arriving he quickly shot a glance in the open ancient looking bathouse to be sure, he could be alone. After confirming that there was nopony else, he landed and went right into the magically heated water.

The warm water was just what he needed in a moment like that. Winter was coming so it got chillier over the passed few weeks and the cold got somehow into his muscles and bones on the flight back, something that never occured before, considering the fire in his chest.

„Did I do something wrong....?“ he thought to himself

After arround half an hour in the pool he gazed up to the royal tower and the balcony he could see from his angle, where both princesses were standing right now to lower the sun and raising the moon and watched the show they did while performing the natural circle of day and night.

Sighing he got out of the pool and flew directly to the smaller tower where Twilights chambers are located.

„Ah you´re here Spike, even 10 minutes earlier than needed.“ she beamed happily, forgetting about his state.

„You know, i would never dare miss that dinner.“ he said with a little smile also forgetting his misery from before.

They ate their dinner, came right out of the royal kitchen, in total silence, much against the curiosity of Twilight but she didn´t want to aks, because he seemed calm and a little happy at the moment 'He will tell me if he want to. But i really want to know, what has upset him so much, that he looked like this sad right after a date with Rarity. I bet something happened between them, but i hope it´s nothing bad.' she though to herself.

Spike knew that Twilight was curious„You know...“ Twilights ears perked up „....I think I kinda screwed up yesterday...“ she watched him, as he spoke „I asked Rarity if she wants to marry me...“
She nearly spat her dinner all over the table and swallowed hard „YOU DID WHAT?“

„Yeah I know it was stupid...“ he looked sad again
'Oh no Twilight, look what you did! He looks more miserably than before. Do something!' „No Spike, it was not stupid“ „But then why did you nearly spread half of your meal on the table?“ „Well,.....I was surprised“ she chuckled „What did she say?“

„Excactly that is the problem. She looked at me and my handcrafted ring and said nothing!“ he growled „ She said NOTHING. She looked several times at me and the ring and then just left. It was the perfect setting. I found a nice little restaurant in Ponyville and we had a nice evening date, really romantic with candles and i could even bring the staff to get us our own butler and organised her favourite wine for that dinner.“ Twilight saw that a tear was running down his cheeks. „After paying the restaurant i flew to the boutique and knocked at the door, i shouted her name. I knew she was there but she didn´t respond. I just don´t know what I did wrong.“ Now he cried. Twilight went to him and tried to reassure him „ Shh, my little #1 assistant. I think she had a reason why she ditched you. I will talk to her while you hibernate, maybe it´s just a misunderstanding „I hope so Twilight“ he sniffled 'I hope so to, for her sake' Twilight thought.

Somewhat heartbroken Spike released himself out of Twilight´s embrace and said „I hope you don´t mind but I will retreat myself for hibernation sooner than planned.“ „Yeah it´s ok. See you next spring.“ right when he was about to leave, Twilight said „Spike, I love you.“ she said in a motherly tone.

„Yeah, I know“ A weak smile left his face and then he went. He hadn´t have to fly long. His cave was in the mountain where Canterlot was build only a little above the castle, so he could see everything but no one could see him there.

'Just what did I do wrong....?' He asked himself before starting his hibernation.

The note to her

The next day, after not sleeping that well, Twilight made herself ready for a long-distance teleport right to the Carousel-Boutique.

'Alright Rarity, here I come!'

In a flash of light, Twilight appeared right in front of the boutique. 'You´ve still got it in you Twi' she thought to herself, haven´t used this ability for quite a while.

*Knock, Knock*

she thought to herself how she should approach Rarity as the door opened, but Rarity was not standing there, but rather another well known unicorn to her.

„Sweetie Belle, long time no see. Say could I speak to Rarity please? It´s rather important.“

„I don´t know, I came here moments ago to visit her but she hasn´t answered to me yet. All I know is that she locked herself in her room. She doesn´t respond to talking, knocking or even yelling. Have you got any clue why my sis behaves like this? I´m a little worried by now.“

„I only know from Spike.“

Sweetie stepped aside to let Twilight enter the Boutique and Twilight quickly scanned the room to maybe find a clue.

„So you do know, why my sis has locked herself away. What happened?“

*sigh* „As far as I know from Spike, he proposed to her 2 days ago and somehow Rarity fled from him and seperated herself.“

„REALLY, he proposed to her?? Wow, but why is she up there? They seemed deep in love with each other, why that now?“

„I don´t know and that´s the reason why I´m here. I want to solve this problem. You know, Spike is hibernating right now and I promised him to take care of that matter.“

„Hey should I make us some breakfast? I haven´t eaten since I left Manehatten.“

„That would be nice. In the meantime i will try my luck to talk to her.“

As she went upstairs, she thought 'Hmm, why didn´t she respond? Could she has soundproofed her room? Let´s check that first' arriving in front of Rarity´s door she casted a minor detection spell 'Aha, just as i thought, she really soundproofed it, but.....should I cancel the spell and speak to her? No, I try it the polite way first!' A quill and a paper appeared magically right in front of her and she wrote a note which she teleported right into the room. 'When this is not working i will teleport myself in there.'

Dear Rarity

I hope you read this message because I´m worried about you, so does Sweetie Bell. Please let me talk to you, I´m sure you had your reasons to leave, but Spike is really hurt. He´s hibernating right now but I promised him to talk with you. Please come down and have a proper conversation with us.

Your´s truly

Twilight Sparkle

P.S.: Sweetie is making breakfast right now, maybe you want something too.