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Into the Mind of a Simpler Mare

by harrytheneat
These are the progress reports of the experiment to increase Derpy Hooves's thinking power.

I'd like everyone who decides to read this to know that it is an edited version of Flowers for Algernon by Daniel Keyes. Flowers For Algernon is a heartwarming story that I highly suggest you read.
The simple mare, Ditzy Hooves, AKA Derpy, is selected by Twilight Sparkle to be the subject of an experiment that will make Derpy smarter than any common stallion. This leads to amazing knowledge that makes Ditzy rethink her entire life from the way her friends have been treating her and her forgotten childhood to a new feeling towards her teacher, Dr. Whooves. Not related to the wall eyed pegasis mentioned.
I'm a little new to this whole "writing because you're just too bored for anything else" so be gentle. Again, I did not write all of this but merely edited it for the enjoyment of all you readers. Thank Daniel Keyes for the amazing words.
*a little warning* Many Grammar Nazis will shit their pants at the sight of this writing. Please know that the writing style in the beginning is to immense the reader or some crap like that.

Everyone
On Hiatus
Sad
Romance
Tragedy
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
SADTD

23774 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

8 Chapters:

  1. I'm gonna try to be smart 2012-11-01 21:42:10 UTC
    3174
  2. I dont want to make Celeschia angrey 2012-10-24 03:15:44 UTC
    1814
  3. I wish it woud reely work alredy so I coud get smart like evrypony else 2012-10-25 20:28:10 UTC
    4575
  4. That makes me feel bad because I would never of hurt the baby 2012-10-30 01:30:51 UTC
    2097
  5. It's confusing, but I'm going to find out all about my life 2012-10-30 20:18:46 UTC
    2679
  6. We all love Harry 2012-11-01 02:19:19 UTC
    3010
  7. I hate to go home to that lonely room 2012-11-01 21:25:19 UTC
    2986
  8. next time, I'm going to kiss him goodnight 2012-11-03 04:18:05 UTC
    3439