Shatteredby Slingshot619ChaptersChapter 1: ChangeChapter 2: ShineChapter 3: First BloodChapter 4: Set UpChapter 5: ExecutionChapter 5: Alternate EndingSpin-offSEQUEL IS OUT!Revoking submissionEpilogueChapter 1: ChangeAll her life, Scootaloo has always been Rainbow Dash's number one fan. Through thick and thin, through waters deep and shallow, Scootaloo had always stayed by her side. But somewhere along the way that all changed. Let's delve deeper into the story shall we? It happened one starry night, ten years after Rainbow Dash first joined the "Equestria's Best Young Flyer" competition. Rainbow was becoming a veteran at these things. And today Rainbow was looking to get her tenth win in a row. Scootaloo sat at the stands, anxiously waiting for her hero. A cyan blue pony burst out, Scootaloo cheered along with the crowd upon seeing her idol. Rainbow Dash had practically become a hero here in Cloudsdale. Everypony and everypony knew her. She would get letters from everypony, fan letters, love letters from a few colts once in a while. But of all her fans, Scootaloo had been the most loyal, staying by her side day and night. And Rainbow Dash treated her the same way, Scootaloo was like a little sister to her, and she treated her as such. Rainbow Dash did her barrel rolls and turns, loops and twist. But the real highlight came when she did her signature move, the Triple Sonic Rainboom. Rainbow Dash hit it and three rainbow rings were formed. A trail of rainbows formed behind her lighting up the sky. Scootaloo had seen Rainbow do this move tons of times during practice but it was still amazing to see it on such a grand stage. Rainbow Dash finished her run and landed on a cloud, not breaking a sweat. Scootaloo cheered harder and so did the audience. The Wonderbolts responded by giving her a Wonderbolts suit, making her the newest member. Rainbow Dash was prepared for anything, anything but this. Her eyes shone with excitement and happiness, she had waited all her life for this day, and here it was. She took the suit and flew of with her heroes. The crowd cheered as loud as they could as the ponies took off into the sky. Scootaloo headed home, eager to hang out with Rainbow tomorrow. She flicked on the lights to her mansion. Technically, it was Rainbow's home. But Rainbow had given it to her when she got a larger, grander mansion. Scootaloo made her way to her room and plopped down on the former bed of her idol. Scootaloo wondered what tomorrow would bring for her now Wonderbolt friend. Scootaloo woke up the next morning and flew into town, awaiting her idol. Then, Rainbow Dash came walking through the town, Scootaloo jumped and waved at her. "Hey! Rainbow! You were amazing last night!" Rainbow held her head high and simply walked past the orange pegasus. She faltered for a moment and immediately perked up again. Rainbow must be busy. I'll hang with her later. Scootaloo sped off to go hang out with her two best friends, Sweetie Belle and Applebloom. The three mares met up at their old clubhouse. They went in and remembered the memories they once had in the old tree house. Then they went to a restaurant to have lunch and catch up. "So Scootaloo, how was Rainbow last night?" Sweetie Belle asked Back then Sweetie Belle was a filly that didn't mind getting her hooves dirty. Now she was just as regal as her older sister Rarity. "Yea Scoots, how were y'all last night?" Applebloom had changed quite a bit too. She now had a fit body similar to hers. She still wore her ribbon, no surprise there. "She was awesome! She did a Triple Sonic Rainboom! A TRIPLE SONIC RAINBOOM!" Her friends chuckled upon seeing their friend so ecstatic. They finished up lunch and departed. Scootaloo headed to Rainbow's usual practicing spot and found her doing her usual high risk maneuvers. Scootaloo cheered her on and immediately faltered when she went through a cloud and came crashing down. Scootaloo looked on as a very angry looking Rainbow Dash walked towards her. "That was awesome!" Rainbow Dash looked at her, she looked quite mad. "Awesome? AWESOME? That's nowhere near the Wonderbolts level! I need complete perfection! And you are in the way! I need complete concentration! So, if you don't mind......" Rainbow took off again as a sad looking orange Pegasus watched her. Scootaloo couldn't believe her ears. Her Idol, her sister, had just yelled and scolded her, this was a pegasus pony that had taught her to fly. She tried to process it but there was simply one reason. Rainbow Dash simply didn't care for her. She had more important friends than plain old Scootaloo. Scootaloo stared at the ground in sadness as tears streamed down her cheeks and splashed down on the grass. The crying stopped eventually. Scootaloo looked up, she was burning with hatred upon replaying the words Rainbow Dash had once yelled at her. "So, I'm not important enough huh? I'll show you." Scootaloo turned tail and headed for the one pony who could help aid her in her quest for vengeance. Scootaloo found herself at Sugarcube Corner. She went in and found Pinkie Pie behind the counter. "Hiya Scootaloo!" Scootaloo had no time to exchange a greeting. "Pinkie, I need help." "What kind of help?" Scootaloo looked up, eyes glowing with anger. "I need help getting revenge." Pinkie's smile faded as she shifted uncomfortably. "Scootaloo, I don't think you should do that. I mean, the mean old pony will apologize sooner or later." Scootaloo rolled her eyes in annoyance. "Pinkie, I want revenge. And I want it now." Pinkie's hair immediately went straight as she went into "Pinkamena Diane Pie" mode, an evil grin formed on her face. "First off, you'll need to get yourself some new gear. You don't look menacing enough." Pinkie tossed her a leather jacket. Scootaloo put it on. It felt kind of tight at first, but it loosened up after a few steps. "I think you're missing something." Pinkie rummaged and brought out two small metal rings and a metal collar. "Put these on." Scootaloo put them on and looked into the mirror. She didn't see a little fan girl anymore, instead she saw a pegasus pony that looked ready to kill. "Second, you have to beat him or her at their own game! Destroy her reputation and her pride. When you're done, I'll give you further instructions." Scootaloo felt a grin tug at her lips as she thanked Pinkie and flew off. Chapter 2: ShineScootaloo spent the next few days training while Rainbow Dash would go off to fly with the Wonderbolts. Scootaloo had practiced up until the point that she could perfect every single move in the book. She was confident that her plan would get her under Rainbow's skin. It was only a matter of time. The young pegasus waited for a perfect opportunity to strike, and came forth that day. The Wonderbolts were coming to Ponyville to stay for a few days, Scootaloo knew that Rainbow Dash would be there, showing off her new found stardom. Scootaloo had everything planned out, except that she didn't have the skills to do a Triple Sonic Rainboom. Scootaloo had only come across this stalemate just before they came. The Wonderbolts were coming to town and she was running out of time. She decided to wing it and just go out there. Scootaloo waited for them to arrive. When the Wonderbolts arrived there may as well have been a riot. Ponies of all species charged forward to greet them, they kept their distance though. The photographers seemed intent on taking photos of one pony and one pony only. The newest member of the group, Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash strutted her stuff and posed for every camera there was. "Hey Rainbow! How do you keep that body in such good looking shape?" "Nothing a little dedication can't handle." "Hey Dash! What did it feel like when you did your Sonic Rainboom for the first time?" "It was nothing really. Just another new trick." "Could you do a Triple Sonic Rainboom? The media would love it!" "Anything for a fan." She prepared to take off, before she could, an orange pegasus zipped by, barely missing them all. The fans turned their attention to the speeding maniac known as Scootaloo. Scootaloo did barrel rolls, corkscrews, twist and turns that impressed even Spitfire. Scootaloo stopped for a moment and prepared to do her signature move. She dove downwards as fast as she could, and before she knew it, three rose red rings of light lit up the night sky. Everyone could only gawk at Scootaloo's handiwork. It was beautiful, far more impressive than a Sonic Rainboom. Scootaloo headed for the crowd below, leaving a trail of rose red light behind her. She landed right in front of the The Wonderbolts, kicking up some sparks as she did. Rainbow Dash shook out of her daze and placed an arm around Scootaloo. "This is my student and sister, Scootaloo. I taught her all that. Say, you look different. Did you get your mane cut?" Scootaloo shoved Rainbow Dash off her as gasps were heard from the press. "I'm sorry, you must have mistaken me for somebody else." "C'mon Scoots, this is your sister! Rainbow Dash! Remember?" Scootaloo looked back at RD in dead seriousness. "If you were my sister, you wouldn't have yelled at me." Scootaloo turned and took off for her home, leaving Rainbow to gawk at her, she was both angry and shocked. She clenched her teeth and turned back to her fans. But they had turned their attention to the orange pegasus that was long gone. The next morning, Scootaloo woke up and found a newspaper on her porch. The headline was: Local celebrity Rainbow Dash has family spat. Last night, what was supposed to be a huge night for Ponyville's one and only Rainbow Dash, turned into a disaster as her supposed sibling Scootaloo, showed up and stole the show with her incredible performance. Upon being interviewed, a very upset Rainbow Dash simply ignored our crew, refusing to talk. Turn to page 5 for more info Scootaloo felt a grin tug at her lips as she read the article. She tossed it on her couch and headed out to Sugarcube Corner. She entered and found Pinkie by the counter as usual. "How's it going?" Scootaloo flashed her a grin. "Nice job out there, you ready for the next step?" "Sure." "Okay" "Eliminate her" "What!?" Scootaloo stared at Pinkie for a moment before realizing she was dead serious. "Um, Pinkie, no offence, but I don't think Rainbow Dash deserves to die. I just wanted to get back at her, not murder her." "Okey dokey lokey! But if you change your mind you know where to look for me." "Thanks Pinkie." Scootaloo headed for the exit and almost immediately, Rainbow Dash drops down. "So, you think you can outshine me?" Scootaloo's only response was a growl as she stared into the eyes of Rainbow Dash. She was mad, Scootaloo could tell that last night's plan had gotten under her skin. "If you know what's best for you, you WON'T show up tonight, you got that?" And with that, Rainbow takes off again leaving a very angry Scootaloo alone. "So, you want war? Then, if it's war you want, IT'S WAR YOU'LL GET!" Scootaloo prepares to blast off, before a familiar voice calls out. "Scootaloo!" She turns to find her friends Applebloom and Sweetie Belle standing there. "My my, I didn't think you were one that liked to dress up." Sweetie Belle says "Yea Scoots, where'd y'all get the new gear?" "Pinkie Pie gave it to me." "I dare say, this is a good look for you." "Hey! Y'all wanna hang out? Me and Sweetie here gots nothing do anyways." Scootaloo stared at her clearly ecstatic friends for a while before deciding. "Sorry gals. I can't. Kinda busy." Scootaloo took off before they could answer. She felt the wind in her face as she practiced even more, she was going to need something that would make yesterday's performance look like nothing. She needed to blow them all away. "I'll show you. I'll show you all." Scootaloo muttered to herself as she headed to her usual practice area. She already had a few moves in mind, but they could've seriously injured her. Her quest for vengeance fueled her as she prepared to do one of the most dangerous moves of all time. The basic idea of her new move was, that she would first do her three rose red rings of light first, then she would go even faster. So fast that she would turn into a fireball. When she did, she would dive towards the crowd and pull up at the last moment. As mentioned before, very dangerous. But Scootaloo didn't have a care in the world. Nothing was going to stop her from getting revenge. Chapter 3: First BloodHUGE Thanks to all you guys for your support! Woke up and found the story in the "What's Hot" section just before "The Return Of Nightmare Moon". You guys have truly made my day. Another thing is the recent outrage that there simply wasn't enough to make Scootaloo snap, this has really been getting on my nerves lately, well I will say this for one more last time. I will be releasing a prequel, I will get to work as soon as I'm done with this okay? The starry night came eventually, as The Wonderbolts headed out to town, Rainbow Dash couldn't help but stare into the sky once in a while to make sure that Scootaloo was not coming. Rainbow Dash had been treating Scootaloo like a sister ever since she met her, why would she snap like this? Well, there was that one time at her birthday party, then there was my fifth Young Flyer's competition...... Rainbow Dash relayed the past over and over in her head. She had been kind of a jerk, but she didn't think her selfish actions were going to go so far as to break Scootaloo's respect and loyalty for her. In the inside, Rainbow Dash was sorry, she regretted pushing Scootaloo around, and she was planning to apologize. Rainbow Dash waited for what seemed like forever, until finally, the orange pegasus flew out of nowhere, she was agile and graceful, doing stunts and tricks that only madmen would've agreed to do. Then came the big moment, she flew as fast as she could and the three rose red rings of light materialized once again. But she didn't stop there, she flew as high as she could and dove downwards, the momentum and speed caused her to erupt into a fireball, the crowd gasped as RD looked on in horror. Scootaloo dove towards the ground and pulled up at the last second. She skidded to a stop in front of Rainbow, kicking up sparks as she did. "Hey there kid! I just wanted to say-" "Save it Skittles! You don't have to tell me what I already know! Yes I know you're awesome! I know your better than me! But you don't have to rub it in my face every five seconds!" By now Rainbow Dash had completely abandoned the apology and was thinking more along the lines of murder. Rainbow Dash stomped towards her and came face to face with her former student. "Kid, don't say I didn't warn you." Scootaloo continued staring into the rose red eyes of Rainbow Dash. She was definitely mad, and so was Scootaloo, so much bottled emotions, finally released. The crowd continued watching the two pegasi. They could feel the anger they shared towards each other, this wasn't just a family spat, this was an all out war. Scootaloo stood firm and didn't budge. Rainbow Dash was growing more and more impatient. Then, all Scootaloo could see was a flash of cyan blue as she stumbled backwards and fell, she felt immense pain at her right eye, she looked up and saw Rainbow Dash standing there, still mad. Then Scootaloo noticed something else, she had her right arm enclosed over her right eye. She felt her hoof go warm and wet, she took her hoof off her eye and expected tears, instead she found a shade of dark red on her hoof, the crowd gasped. It was blood. Scootaloo looked at her hoof in shock and disbelief. Rainbow Dash had just punched her in the eye, she looked at Rainbow Dash, she had a look of fear in her eyes, she was turning pale too. Scootaloo continued staring at the blood on her hooves, she eventually got up and stared into the eyes of Rainbow Dash, she was mad, no she was beyond mad. "Scootaloo, I-" Scootaloo turned and stormed away before Rainbow could finish. She turned to find Soarin' and Spitfire shaking their heads in dissapointment as they left. Rainbow sat there in shock, she didn't expect her punch to be that lethal. Scootaloo stormed into the house and burst into her bathroom. She stared into the mirror and observed the damage, her right eye was now bleeding, it still stung a little but other than that she was fine. She could still see fine and all. She looked closer and noticed that her once beautiful pink eye was now blood red. Scootaloo felt a smile tug at her lips as she stared at herself in the mirror. Her right eye was still bleeding, but she felt nothing. Her right eye still felt fine. "I could get used to this." Scootaloo knew what had to be done, it was time. Sorry if this chapter is kinda short. Been feeling frustrated and mad lately, basically I don't fell like writing. But don't worry, I promise the next chapter will be longer. Chapter 4: Set UpBefore we continue the story, again I want to address the critics and haters out there. You say that a simple yelling isn't enough to make sweet little Scootaloo snap. Of course it isn't! That's why i'm releasing the prequel in the first place. Scootaloo woke up the next morning, right eye still bleeding, she found a puddle of blood on her bed made by her right eye. She got up and cleaned the mess. She trudged into the bathroom to check on the bleeding, it had refused to stop, not that Scootaloo wanted it to stop. Scootaloo kicked the doors open and leaped into the air. She dove towards Sugarcube Corner and burst through the door. She found Pinkie sitting behind the counter again. "Hiya there Scoota- WOAH! What happened?" "Just a little brawl. By the way, I'm ready." A evil smile formed on Pinkie's face, she rummaged through a box and brought out a few peculiar items. "This is to hold her down." Pinkie pointed at a bloody pile of chains "And this is when you really want have fun." Pinkie said while holding a hook and knife "OK, so I just stab her in the heart and I'm done right?" "Well, if you really hate her, you have to torture her. A quick death isn't enough." Scootaloo raised an eyebrow, she wondered where Pinkie got all this stuff. Scootaloo thanked Pinkie and left with her sack of dangerous toys. Scootaloo was going to have to get her immobilized, isolated. After hours of thinking, Scootaloo came up with a plan. She would have to get Rainbow in the hospital. But how? The answer was simple. Scootaloo waited for nightfall, and eventually it came. Scootaloo had everything ready, she was sure that RD was going to take off and do a few stunts today, whether she wanted to or not. It was there that Scootaloo would make her move. The only stalemate was speed. Scootaloo wasn't sure if she could catch Rainbow in mid-air. It would be difficult, but she had to try. Scootaloo waited in the shadows, she awaited the cyan blue pegasus to take off, after a few pictures, she did, she took off, and just as quick as it started, it ended. Rainbow flew, the wind blowing in her ears. She was going to do her signature Triple Sonic Rainboom. Rainbow was about to do it, when all of a sudden, she heard a sickening *CRACK* followed by immense pain shooting through her right wing. She immediately stopped and fell from the sky. She landed with a loud crash and found herself in great pain. A few medics came to her attention and immediately put her on a stretcher. Rainbow could only focus on the pain, the immense pain in her wings. Before she could even enter the hospital, she passed out. When Rainbow Dash woke up, she tried to open her wings, her left wing was a little scratched up but fine. Her right wing however was dislocated, almost bent in half. The doctor came in shortly after RD woke up. "Rainbow Dash, you have a-" "I know what's wrong with me, just tell me how long i'm gonna be here." "Two months. Minimum." Rainbow's jaw dropped. Two months? But The Wonderbolts were going to perform in two weeks. She couldn't just stay here and do nothing while they went off flying. Rainbow sighed in dissapointment and crossed her arms. "You should get some sleep." The doctor left, leaving RD in a hospital room. All by herself. Her friends weren't going to visit her, it was midnight. They were probably asleep. Rainbow sighed and tried to get some sleep. Hoping for a quick recovery so she could join her heroes again. When Rainbow woke up again, it was still midnight, she craned her head and saw nopony there. Yet, she could still feel, something, somepony watching her. RD looked around and found a pony sitting just out of the light's reach. Rainbow Dash felt like this pony was somebody she was supposed to know, that familiar orange fur, and that pink eye that shone in the darkness. The pony stepped forward into the light, revealing a a orange pegasus, her left eye was a beautiful pink, but her right eye was blood red, with streams of blood coming out of it to top it off. Rainbow stared in horror at her aggressor. "Scootaloo?" "About time you woke up." RD looked around and found a table that had a ton of nasty looking tools on it. Scootaloo walked over and picked up a bloody hook, observing it in every angle. "Well, you know how the old saying goes, an eye for an eye." Rainbow gulped, she tried to escape, but she felt something hold her back, she raised her arms once again and found chains bound to them. Scootaloo noticed Rainbow's restlessness and put the hook down. "Don't worry, i'm not going to take your eyes. Yet." Scootaloo grabbed a huge, wicked looking blade and slowly walked towards Rainbow Dash. She placed a hoof on Rainbow's belly and slowly made her way to her wings, she spread Rainbow's cyan blue wings and caressed them for a while. "You have strong wings don't you Dashie?" Rainbow felt beads of sweat form on her face as Scootaloo continued examining her wings. "Let's see just how strong they are." Scootaloo raises the huge wicked blade and brings it down upon her, blood splattered as Scootaloo continued hacking at the wing, Rainbow felt jolt after jolt of pain shoot through her body, Finally, Scootaloo tears the wing off and holds it just high enough for RD to see. Rainbow Dash tried to let out a scream, but before she could, Scootaloo pressed a hoof against her mouth. "Shhh, if you be a good girl, I might make this quick." Rainbow stared at her with fear and disbelief in her rose red eyes, she wondered at what point had she failed. What did she do to deserve a fate as cruel as this? Chapter 5: ExecutionThe prequel will be out soon. It'll probably explain how Pinkie got like this. And how Scootaloo also went psycho. So, stay tuned. Scootaloo held the severed wing high, blood still trickled out form the severed joint and formed a puddle on the floor. Rainbow stared at the wing, wide eyed with horror as Scootaloo bent it, twisted it, smashed it, then threw it aside. Scootaloo walked over to the table of tools and held a hook high. She observed it closely, and ran her hoof and the pointed end. "I'm not going to do that just yet......" Scootaloo picked up a machete and made her way towards Rainbow Dash. She raised the blade high and brought it down on her stomach, leaving a deep gash on her torso. Tears streamed down Rainbow's cheeks as she tried to hold back the screams that filled her lungs. "That should be enough, having fun Rainbow my dear?" Rainbow stared at the orange pegasus, this wasn't Scootaloo anymore, this was something else. Scootaloo grabbed the hook from the table and prepared, she had a wicked smile on her face as she held the hook in her hands. Finally, she thrust forward and the hook secured it self in Rainbow's right eye. This time it was too much, Rainbow let out a huge ear piercing scream that was probably heard by all of Equestria. Scootaloo laughed upon hearing Rainbow finally give in. She pulled the hook out, and with a sickening *pop*, the eyeball flew out. Rainbow felt pain, much more intense than when Scootaloo hacked off her wings. Scoots picked the rose red eyeball up and stared at it for a while, she put it into a jar filled with water and closed the lid. Rainbow had her right eyelid closed the whole time. she didn't want to know what would happen if she opened her eyelid without her eyeball, the idea disturbed her greatly. Scootaloo took a knife from her table of killer toys. The knife was small compared to the machete or the hook, but it was still pretty large. "Say goodnight Rainbow!" Scootaloo raised the blade high above Rainbow's heart, she was about to stab, but she allowed Rainbow a few seconds of life. "Any last words?" With all the strength she could muster, Rainbow Dash formed a sentence. "Yea, I do. I always loved you Scoots, and nothing will ever change that, i'm sorry I yelled at you." Rainbow closed her eyes and prepared for impact. Scootaloo stared at the mutilated Rainbow Dash for a while, she gripped the knife and down it went, but it's destination was far from Rainbow's heart. Instead, Scootaloo had stabbed the blade on Rainbow's bed. Barely missing her. Rainbow opened her left eye and found Scootaloo, tears streaming down her face as she collapsed and buried her face in Rainbow's chest. "I'm sorry sis. I don't *sob* know what got into me." Rainbow Dash tried her best to comfort Scootaloo, it wasn't easy considering that she was on the verge of death. Rainbow held her close while she continued sobbing. It was peaceful and calm for a moment. Scootaloo was still crying, Rainbow Dash continued stroking her mane and apologizing, then the door flung open. A pink mare stood at the doorway, she had a long straight pink mane to match her pink fur. She had smile on her face until she saw Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash sharing their sisterly moment. Pinkie's smile immediately turned into a look of dissapointment. "So, you failed to carry out the last step?" Scootaloo backed up and bumped into her tool table. She watched as Pinkie made her way to the foot of Rainbow's bed. "If your not going to kill her, then I WILL!" Scootaloo now had a choice. Either she could make Rainbow's death quick and painless, or she could get killed by Pinkie. Scootaloo gulped and picked up another knife. She held it in her hooves and took one more review on her choices. Behind one door was a sister, a pegasus who had sacrificed so much to teach her all that she knew, a pony who accepted and adopted her as a sister when nobody else would, sure she made some mistakes and was a jerk at sometimes, but she wouldn't be able to live with the fact that she murdered her idol. Behind door two was a psychotic pink pony. Scootaloo was scared of Pinkie, she was more experienced, more skilled than Scootaloo. She would kill her if Scoots didn't kill Dash. Decisions. Scootaloo tensed and with all her might sent the blade flying. The one eyed pony had a look of shock on her face as she felt the blade in her body, she looked at Scootaloo, a look of disbelief and bewilderment in her eyes. Scootaloo tossed another blade and her body went limp. Scootaloo let out a sigh of relief and walked over to Rainbow's bed. She stared at the dead body of Pinkie and pulled the knife out Pinkie's eye. Her accuracy had been impeccable. Scootaloo turned her attention back to the dying Rainbow Dash and cut off her chains, then embraced her in a hug. Scootaloo felt the cold in Rainbow's body as she shivered, Scootaloo had tears streaming down her face as she muttered four simple words. "I love you sis." Chapter 5: Alternate EndingRealized how stupid the ending was when I heard TheRealRainbowBrony's reading of it. So, here it is. The less confusing, more gory ending as my apology for that horrible ending. Scootaloo played with the severed wing. Then, with all the strength she could muster. She tore the wing in half, right in front of Rainbow's face. She looked in horror at the wing being torn apart and might've passed out. Scootaloo took a piece of the wing and stuffed it in Rainbow's mouth. "That should soften the screams." Rainbow felt the feathery limb in her mouth, she watched as Scootaloo walked back to the table of toys and pulled out what looked like a jagged machete. She took it out and ran her hoof down the blade. She lifted it high and went over to Rainbow's bed, a mad grin on her face. "You need to be in 20% more pain!" Scootaloo hacked off Rainbow's left arm. Blood squirted out like she was a gardening hose. Scootaloo got a cup and filled it with the dark red liquid. She forced Rainbow's mouth open and poured the blood in. forcing her to drink it all down. "You don't want to die from blood loss now do you?" Scootaloo made sure Rainbow drank down everybit of it. She didn't like the taste of blood before and she never did. Scootaloo herself filled up the cup and drank down some of Rainbow's blood. Rainbow stared at her, her single left eye wide with fear. Rainbow stared as Scootaloo drank the blood down and picked up a rusty looking hook. She didn't waste time in putting it in use. She stabbed it in and pulled with all her might. It flew out and splattered against the wall, Scootaloo walked over and picked it up. She observed and examined it like it was a diamond. Then, in a heartless cruel move, Scootaloo dropped the tender magenta eyeball and crushed it under her hoof. She stomped on it and continued mashing the little tender eyeball. noticed Rainbow Dash was staring at her, left eye wider than usual. "Awwww, you want your eye back?" Scootaloo picked up the remains of the crushed eyeball and threw it in Rainbow's face. Scootaloo let out an insane laugh and exchanged the hook for a machete. Scootaloo raised the blade high and down it came, striking her just below the heart. Scootaloo pulled downward and a loud *Riiiiiiiiip!* was heard. Rainbow struggled to hold in the tears. But they came pouring out anyway, Rainbow Dash bit down hard on her little piece of a wing and she felt the blood gush out as she bit down hard. Scootaloo thrust a hoof in and pulled out the stomach. She emptied it's contents on it's owner, leaving a foul green substance coating Rainbow. Scootaloo reached in once more and pulled her intestines. Rainbow mustered up all the strength she had and tried to escape. But the chains were tight and nothing could change that. Scootaloo let out yet another insane laugh and equipped herself with a butcher knife. She walked towards Rainbow, studying the knife intently. She turned her head and faced Rainbow, revealing a look of tenacity that not even Iron Will could've matched. Scootaloo cut the intestines out and she held them high. Scootaloo then proceeded to put the severed intestines around Rainbow Dash's neck. She pulled backwards choking Rainbow. Scootaloo tied the intestines and walked to the front. Rainbow felt the tightened intestines on her neck, she was choking and it wouldn't be long now. Scootaloo grabbed Rainbow's severed left arm and beat her mercilessly with it. She slapped Rainbow across the face a few times, she ended it by stabbing the severed cyan blue arm into the opening Scootaloo had made with the machete. Scootaloo stepped back and saw a ruined Rainbow Dash, almost completely red from all the blood. An arm sticking out of her mid-section and intestines choking her to death. Rainbow was on the verge of death. She felt incredibly drowsy. Then, on her last minute on earth, she felt incredibly comfortable, she waited for death to claim her, Scootaloo by now was next to her bed. Butcher knife still in hand. "Hush now quiet now it's time to lay your sleepy head, Hush now quiet now it's time to go to bed." Rainbow heard the monster known as Scootaloo let out one more insane laugh before she closed her single left eye and felt the pain leave her body as she herself left the world. Spin-offHey hey hey! Guess who? So as of late I have switched to a new account where I might post the sequel. But I might not write it at all. Enter Insanitycorps. I have given him my permission to write a better improved version of the story. Complete with backstory, flashbacks, and stuff. Basically speaking he improved my story. A lot. I mean C'mon this guy is a long time Creepypasta writer. He should have the qualifications. I'm not sure when he is going to post it so you guys mine as well just follow him. This guys has poured his heart and soul into this story and it looks really promising. If he is good enough I will place the series into his hands. So, if you wanna see the possible future author of the Shattered series here it is: Insanitycorps If you wanna go to my new account here it is: RainbowWolf BTW I'm not posting anything here anymore. This chapter is the last. SEQUEL IS OUT!FINALLY! I wrote the sequel! Here it is: Shattered: Where Your Loyalties Lie Hope you guys enjoy it! Quality should be better than last time since, well I do learn from my mistakes. RainbowWolf/Slingshot out! Revoking submissionTitle says it all. I'm revoking Shattered. Let me explain. I will be rewriting it. It'll be coming back, better, longer, and hopefully, even more infamous. But it's now happening on this account. Oh nononononono. It's on my new account. Which can be found here So, I will be revoking it's submission by 9th of April. And then I will hopefully release the rewritten version by then. So, just head on over to my account, stalk me, etc etc... you know what to do. EpilogueScootaloo woke up on her bed. Covered in dry blood. She sighed upon thinking about last night. "Bitch had it coming." Scootaloo got out of bed and found a newspaper on her doorstep. She picked it up and read the headlines. Two mares report friend for possible murder Both Sweetie Belle and Applebloom are reporting their friend, Scootaloo, for supposed murder. The two fillies have noticed significant change in their friends behavior and have been very concerned. Officials will arrest the pegasus and interrogate her as soon as possible. Both mares will be under protection, they have moved to a new town and will remain there until Scootaloo can be arrested and thrown in jail or proved innocent. Scootaloo crushed the newspaper and threw it out the window. Scootaloo had rage and anger coursing through her veins. She was hungry for more blood. "Looks like you two don't know where your loyalties lie."
Chapter 1: ChangeAll her life, Scootaloo has always been Rainbow Dash's number one fan. Through thick and thin, through waters deep and shallow, Scootaloo had always stayed by her side. But somewhere along the way that all changed. Let's delve deeper into the story shall we? It happened one starry night, ten years after Rainbow Dash first joined the "Equestria's Best Young Flyer" competition. Rainbow was becoming a veteran at these things. And today Rainbow was looking to get her tenth win in a row. Scootaloo sat at the stands, anxiously waiting for her hero. A cyan blue pony burst out, Scootaloo cheered along with the crowd upon seeing her idol. Rainbow Dash had practically become a hero here in Cloudsdale. Everypony and everypony knew her. She would get letters from everypony, fan letters, love letters from a few colts once in a while. But of all her fans, Scootaloo had been the most loyal, staying by her side day and night. And Rainbow Dash treated her the same way, Scootaloo was like a little sister to her, and she treated her as such. Rainbow Dash did her barrel rolls and turns, loops and twist. But the real highlight came when she did her signature move, the Triple Sonic Rainboom. Rainbow Dash hit it and three rainbow rings were formed. A trail of rainbows formed behind her lighting up the sky. Scootaloo had seen Rainbow do this move tons of times during practice but it was still amazing to see it on such a grand stage. Rainbow Dash finished her run and landed on a cloud, not breaking a sweat. Scootaloo cheered harder and so did the audience. The Wonderbolts responded by giving her a Wonderbolts suit, making her the newest member. Rainbow Dash was prepared for anything, anything but this. Her eyes shone with excitement and happiness, she had waited all her life for this day, and here it was. She took the suit and flew of with her heroes. The crowd cheered as loud as they could as the ponies took off into the sky. Scootaloo headed home, eager to hang out with Rainbow tomorrow. She flicked on the lights to her mansion. Technically, it was Rainbow's home. But Rainbow had given it to her when she got a larger, grander mansion. Scootaloo made her way to her room and plopped down on the former bed of her idol. Scootaloo wondered what tomorrow would bring for her now Wonderbolt friend. Scootaloo woke up the next morning and flew into town, awaiting her idol. Then, Rainbow Dash came walking through the town, Scootaloo jumped and waved at her. "Hey! Rainbow! You were amazing last night!" Rainbow held her head high and simply walked past the orange pegasus. She faltered for a moment and immediately perked up again. Rainbow must be busy. I'll hang with her later. Scootaloo sped off to go hang out with her two best friends, Sweetie Belle and Applebloom. The three mares met up at their old clubhouse. They went in and remembered the memories they once had in the old tree house. Then they went to a restaurant to have lunch and catch up. "So Scootaloo, how was Rainbow last night?" Sweetie Belle asked Back then Sweetie Belle was a filly that didn't mind getting her hooves dirty. Now she was just as regal as her older sister Rarity. "Yea Scoots, how were y'all last night?" Applebloom had changed quite a bit too. She now had a fit body similar to hers. She still wore her ribbon, no surprise there. "She was awesome! She did a Triple Sonic Rainboom! A TRIPLE SONIC RAINBOOM!" Her friends chuckled upon seeing their friend so ecstatic. They finished up lunch and departed. Scootaloo headed to Rainbow's usual practicing spot and found her doing her usual high risk maneuvers. Scootaloo cheered her on and immediately faltered when she went through a cloud and came crashing down. Scootaloo looked on as a very angry looking Rainbow Dash walked towards her. "That was awesome!" Rainbow Dash looked at her, she looked quite mad. "Awesome? AWESOME? That's nowhere near the Wonderbolts level! I need complete perfection! And you are in the way! I need complete concentration! So, if you don't mind......" Rainbow took off again as a sad looking orange Pegasus watched her. Scootaloo couldn't believe her ears. Her Idol, her sister, had just yelled and scolded her, this was a pegasus pony that had taught her to fly. She tried to process it but there was simply one reason. Rainbow Dash simply didn't care for her. She had more important friends than plain old Scootaloo. Scootaloo stared at the ground in sadness as tears streamed down her cheeks and splashed down on the grass. The crying stopped eventually. Scootaloo looked up, she was burning with hatred upon replaying the words Rainbow Dash had once yelled at her. "So, I'm not important enough huh? I'll show you." Scootaloo turned tail and headed for the one pony who could help aid her in her quest for vengeance. Scootaloo found herself at Sugarcube Corner. She went in and found Pinkie Pie behind the counter. "Hiya Scootaloo!" Scootaloo had no time to exchange a greeting. "Pinkie, I need help." "What kind of help?" Scootaloo looked up, eyes glowing with anger. "I need help getting revenge." Pinkie's smile faded as she shifted uncomfortably. "Scootaloo, I don't think you should do that. I mean, the mean old pony will apologize sooner or later." Scootaloo rolled her eyes in annoyance. "Pinkie, I want revenge. And I want it now." Pinkie's hair immediately went straight as she went into "Pinkamena Diane Pie" mode, an evil grin formed on her face. "First off, you'll need to get yourself some new gear. You don't look menacing enough." Pinkie tossed her a leather jacket. Scootaloo put it on. It felt kind of tight at first, but it loosened up after a few steps. "I think you're missing something." Pinkie rummaged and brought out two small metal rings and a metal collar. "Put these on." Scootaloo put them on and looked into the mirror. She didn't see a little fan girl anymore, instead she saw a pegasus pony that looked ready to kill. "Second, you have to beat him or her at their own game! Destroy her reputation and her pride. When you're done, I'll give you further instructions." Scootaloo felt a grin tug at her lips as she thanked Pinkie and flew off.
Chapter 2: ShineScootaloo spent the next few days training while Rainbow Dash would go off to fly with the Wonderbolts. Scootaloo had practiced up until the point that she could perfect every single move in the book. She was confident that her plan would get her under Rainbow's skin. It was only a matter of time. The young pegasus waited for a perfect opportunity to strike, and came forth that day. The Wonderbolts were coming to Ponyville to stay for a few days, Scootaloo knew that Rainbow Dash would be there, showing off her new found stardom. Scootaloo had everything planned out, except that she didn't have the skills to do a Triple Sonic Rainboom. Scootaloo had only come across this stalemate just before they came. The Wonderbolts were coming to town and she was running out of time. She decided to wing it and just go out there. Scootaloo waited for them to arrive. When the Wonderbolts arrived there may as well have been a riot. Ponies of all species charged forward to greet them, they kept their distance though. The photographers seemed intent on taking photos of one pony and one pony only. The newest member of the group, Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash strutted her stuff and posed for every camera there was. "Hey Rainbow! How do you keep that body in such good looking shape?" "Nothing a little dedication can't handle." "Hey Dash! What did it feel like when you did your Sonic Rainboom for the first time?" "It was nothing really. Just another new trick." "Could you do a Triple Sonic Rainboom? The media would love it!" "Anything for a fan." She prepared to take off, before she could, an orange pegasus zipped by, barely missing them all. The fans turned their attention to the speeding maniac known as Scootaloo. Scootaloo did barrel rolls, corkscrews, twist and turns that impressed even Spitfire. Scootaloo stopped for a moment and prepared to do her signature move. She dove downwards as fast as she could, and before she knew it, three rose red rings of light lit up the night sky. Everyone could only gawk at Scootaloo's handiwork. It was beautiful, far more impressive than a Sonic Rainboom. Scootaloo headed for the crowd below, leaving a trail of rose red light behind her. She landed right in front of the The Wonderbolts, kicking up some sparks as she did. Rainbow Dash shook out of her daze and placed an arm around Scootaloo. "This is my student and sister, Scootaloo. I taught her all that. Say, you look different. Did you get your mane cut?" Scootaloo shoved Rainbow Dash off her as gasps were heard from the press. "I'm sorry, you must have mistaken me for somebody else." "C'mon Scoots, this is your sister! Rainbow Dash! Remember?" Scootaloo looked back at RD in dead seriousness. "If you were my sister, you wouldn't have yelled at me." Scootaloo turned and took off for her home, leaving Rainbow to gawk at her, she was both angry and shocked. She clenched her teeth and turned back to her fans. But they had turned their attention to the orange pegasus that was long gone. The next morning, Scootaloo woke up and found a newspaper on her porch. The headline was: Local celebrity Rainbow Dash has family spat. Last night, what was supposed to be a huge night for Ponyville's one and only Rainbow Dash, turned into a disaster as her supposed sibling Scootaloo, showed up and stole the show with her incredible performance. Upon being interviewed, a very upset Rainbow Dash simply ignored our crew, refusing to talk. Turn to page 5 for more info Scootaloo felt a grin tug at her lips as she read the article. She tossed it on her couch and headed out to Sugarcube Corner. She entered and found Pinkie by the counter as usual. "How's it going?" Scootaloo flashed her a grin. "Nice job out there, you ready for the next step?" "Sure." "Okay" "Eliminate her" "What!?" Scootaloo stared at Pinkie for a moment before realizing she was dead serious. "Um, Pinkie, no offence, but I don't think Rainbow Dash deserves to die. I just wanted to get back at her, not murder her." "Okey dokey lokey! But if you change your mind you know where to look for me." "Thanks Pinkie." Scootaloo headed for the exit and almost immediately, Rainbow Dash drops down. "So, you think you can outshine me?" Scootaloo's only response was a growl as she stared into the eyes of Rainbow Dash. She was mad, Scootaloo could tell that last night's plan had gotten under her skin. "If you know what's best for you, you WON'T show up tonight, you got that?" And with that, Rainbow takes off again leaving a very angry Scootaloo alone. "So, you want war? Then, if it's war you want, IT'S WAR YOU'LL GET!" Scootaloo prepares to blast off, before a familiar voice calls out. "Scootaloo!" She turns to find her friends Applebloom and Sweetie Belle standing there. "My my, I didn't think you were one that liked to dress up." Sweetie Belle says "Yea Scoots, where'd y'all get the new gear?" "Pinkie Pie gave it to me." "I dare say, this is a good look for you." "Hey! Y'all wanna hang out? Me and Sweetie here gots nothing do anyways." Scootaloo stared at her clearly ecstatic friends for a while before deciding. "Sorry gals. I can't. Kinda busy." Scootaloo took off before they could answer. She felt the wind in her face as she practiced even more, she was going to need something that would make yesterday's performance look like nothing. She needed to blow them all away. "I'll show you. I'll show you all." Scootaloo muttered to herself as she headed to her usual practice area. She already had a few moves in mind, but they could've seriously injured her. Her quest for vengeance fueled her as she prepared to do one of the most dangerous moves of all time. The basic idea of her new move was, that she would first do her three rose red rings of light first, then she would go even faster. So fast that she would turn into a fireball. When she did, she would dive towards the crowd and pull up at the last moment. As mentioned before, very dangerous. But Scootaloo didn't have a care in the world. Nothing was going to stop her from getting revenge.
Chapter 3: First BloodHUGE Thanks to all you guys for your support! Woke up and found the story in the "What's Hot" section just before "The Return Of Nightmare Moon". You guys have truly made my day. Another thing is the recent outrage that there simply wasn't enough to make Scootaloo snap, this has really been getting on my nerves lately, well I will say this for one more last time. I will be releasing a prequel, I will get to work as soon as I'm done with this okay? The starry night came eventually, as The Wonderbolts headed out to town, Rainbow Dash couldn't help but stare into the sky once in a while to make sure that Scootaloo was not coming. Rainbow Dash had been treating Scootaloo like a sister ever since she met her, why would she snap like this? Well, there was that one time at her birthday party, then there was my fifth Young Flyer's competition...... Rainbow Dash relayed the past over and over in her head. She had been kind of a jerk, but she didn't think her selfish actions were going to go so far as to break Scootaloo's respect and loyalty for her. In the inside, Rainbow Dash was sorry, she regretted pushing Scootaloo around, and she was planning to apologize. Rainbow Dash waited for what seemed like forever, until finally, the orange pegasus flew out of nowhere, she was agile and graceful, doing stunts and tricks that only madmen would've agreed to do. Then came the big moment, she flew as fast as she could and the three rose red rings of light materialized once again. But she didn't stop there, she flew as high as she could and dove downwards, the momentum and speed caused her to erupt into a fireball, the crowd gasped as RD looked on in horror. Scootaloo dove towards the ground and pulled up at the last second. She skidded to a stop in front of Rainbow, kicking up sparks as she did. "Hey there kid! I just wanted to say-" "Save it Skittles! You don't have to tell me what I already know! Yes I know you're awesome! I know your better than me! But you don't have to rub it in my face every five seconds!" By now Rainbow Dash had completely abandoned the apology and was thinking more along the lines of murder. Rainbow Dash stomped towards her and came face to face with her former student. "Kid, don't say I didn't warn you." Scootaloo continued staring into the rose red eyes of Rainbow Dash. She was definitely mad, and so was Scootaloo, so much bottled emotions, finally released. The crowd continued watching the two pegasi. They could feel the anger they shared towards each other, this wasn't just a family spat, this was an all out war. Scootaloo stood firm and didn't budge. Rainbow Dash was growing more and more impatient. Then, all Scootaloo could see was a flash of cyan blue as she stumbled backwards and fell, she felt immense pain at her right eye, she looked up and saw Rainbow Dash standing there, still mad. Then Scootaloo noticed something else, she had her right arm enclosed over her right eye. She felt her hoof go warm and wet, she took her hoof off her eye and expected tears, instead she found a shade of dark red on her hoof, the crowd gasped. It was blood. Scootaloo looked at her hoof in shock and disbelief. Rainbow Dash had just punched her in the eye, she looked at Rainbow Dash, she had a look of fear in her eyes, she was turning pale too. Scootaloo continued staring at the blood on her hooves, she eventually got up and stared into the eyes of Rainbow Dash, she was mad, no she was beyond mad. "Scootaloo, I-" Scootaloo turned and stormed away before Rainbow could finish. She turned to find Soarin' and Spitfire shaking their heads in dissapointment as they left. Rainbow sat there in shock, she didn't expect her punch to be that lethal. Scootaloo stormed into the house and burst into her bathroom. She stared into the mirror and observed the damage, her right eye was now bleeding, it still stung a little but other than that she was fine. She could still see fine and all. She looked closer and noticed that her once beautiful pink eye was now blood red. Scootaloo felt a smile tug at her lips as she stared at herself in the mirror. Her right eye was still bleeding, but she felt nothing. Her right eye still felt fine. "I could get used to this." Scootaloo knew what had to be done, it was time. Sorry if this chapter is kinda short. Been feeling frustrated and mad lately, basically I don't fell like writing. But don't worry, I promise the next chapter will be longer.
Chapter 4: Set UpBefore we continue the story, again I want to address the critics and haters out there. You say that a simple yelling isn't enough to make sweet little Scootaloo snap. Of course it isn't! That's why i'm releasing the prequel in the first place. Scootaloo woke up the next morning, right eye still bleeding, she found a puddle of blood on her bed made by her right eye. She got up and cleaned the mess. She trudged into the bathroom to check on the bleeding, it had refused to stop, not that Scootaloo wanted it to stop. Scootaloo kicked the doors open and leaped into the air. She dove towards Sugarcube Corner and burst through the door. She found Pinkie sitting behind the counter again. "Hiya there Scoota- WOAH! What happened?" "Just a little brawl. By the way, I'm ready." A evil smile formed on Pinkie's face, she rummaged through a box and brought out a few peculiar items. "This is to hold her down." Pinkie pointed at a bloody pile of chains "And this is when you really want have fun." Pinkie said while holding a hook and knife "OK, so I just stab her in the heart and I'm done right?" "Well, if you really hate her, you have to torture her. A quick death isn't enough." Scootaloo raised an eyebrow, she wondered where Pinkie got all this stuff. Scootaloo thanked Pinkie and left with her sack of dangerous toys. Scootaloo was going to have to get her immobilized, isolated. After hours of thinking, Scootaloo came up with a plan. She would have to get Rainbow in the hospital. But how? The answer was simple. Scootaloo waited for nightfall, and eventually it came. Scootaloo had everything ready, she was sure that RD was going to take off and do a few stunts today, whether she wanted to or not. It was there that Scootaloo would make her move. The only stalemate was speed. Scootaloo wasn't sure if she could catch Rainbow in mid-air. It would be difficult, but she had to try. Scootaloo waited in the shadows, she awaited the cyan blue pegasus to take off, after a few pictures, she did, she took off, and just as quick as it started, it ended. Rainbow flew, the wind blowing in her ears. She was going to do her signature Triple Sonic Rainboom. Rainbow was about to do it, when all of a sudden, she heard a sickening *CRACK* followed by immense pain shooting through her right wing. She immediately stopped and fell from the sky. She landed with a loud crash and found herself in great pain. A few medics came to her attention and immediately put her on a stretcher. Rainbow could only focus on the pain, the immense pain in her wings. Before she could even enter the hospital, she passed out. When Rainbow Dash woke up, she tried to open her wings, her left wing was a little scratched up but fine. Her right wing however was dislocated, almost bent in half. The doctor came in shortly after RD woke up. "Rainbow Dash, you have a-" "I know what's wrong with me, just tell me how long i'm gonna be here." "Two months. Minimum." Rainbow's jaw dropped. Two months? But The Wonderbolts were going to perform in two weeks. She couldn't just stay here and do nothing while they went off flying. Rainbow sighed in dissapointment and crossed her arms. "You should get some sleep." The doctor left, leaving RD in a hospital room. All by herself. Her friends weren't going to visit her, it was midnight. They were probably asleep. Rainbow sighed and tried to get some sleep. Hoping for a quick recovery so she could join her heroes again. When Rainbow woke up again, it was still midnight, she craned her head and saw nopony there. Yet, she could still feel, something, somepony watching her. RD looked around and found a pony sitting just out of the light's reach. Rainbow Dash felt like this pony was somebody she was supposed to know, that familiar orange fur, and that pink eye that shone in the darkness. The pony stepped forward into the light, revealing a a orange pegasus, her left eye was a beautiful pink, but her right eye was blood red, with streams of blood coming out of it to top it off. Rainbow stared in horror at her aggressor. "Scootaloo?" "About time you woke up." RD looked around and found a table that had a ton of nasty looking tools on it. Scootaloo walked over and picked up a bloody hook, observing it in every angle. "Well, you know how the old saying goes, an eye for an eye." Rainbow gulped, she tried to escape, but she felt something hold her back, she raised her arms once again and found chains bound to them. Scootaloo noticed Rainbow's restlessness and put the hook down. "Don't worry, i'm not going to take your eyes. Yet." Scootaloo grabbed a huge, wicked looking blade and slowly walked towards Rainbow Dash. She placed a hoof on Rainbow's belly and slowly made her way to her wings, she spread Rainbow's cyan blue wings and caressed them for a while. "You have strong wings don't you Dashie?" Rainbow felt beads of sweat form on her face as Scootaloo continued examining her wings. "Let's see just how strong they are." Scootaloo raises the huge wicked blade and brings it down upon her, blood splattered as Scootaloo continued hacking at the wing, Rainbow felt jolt after jolt of pain shoot through her body, Finally, Scootaloo tears the wing off and holds it just high enough for RD to see. Rainbow Dash tried to let out a scream, but before she could, Scootaloo pressed a hoof against her mouth. "Shhh, if you be a good girl, I might make this quick." Rainbow stared at her with fear and disbelief in her rose red eyes, she wondered at what point had she failed. What did she do to deserve a fate as cruel as this?
Chapter 5: ExecutionThe prequel will be out soon. It'll probably explain how Pinkie got like this. And how Scootaloo also went psycho. So, stay tuned. Scootaloo held the severed wing high, blood still trickled out form the severed joint and formed a puddle on the floor. Rainbow stared at the wing, wide eyed with horror as Scootaloo bent it, twisted it, smashed it, then threw it aside. Scootaloo walked over to the table of tools and held a hook high. She observed it closely, and ran her hoof and the pointed end. "I'm not going to do that just yet......" Scootaloo picked up a machete and made her way towards Rainbow Dash. She raised the blade high and brought it down on her stomach, leaving a deep gash on her torso. Tears streamed down Rainbow's cheeks as she tried to hold back the screams that filled her lungs. "That should be enough, having fun Rainbow my dear?" Rainbow stared at the orange pegasus, this wasn't Scootaloo anymore, this was something else. Scootaloo grabbed the hook from the table and prepared, she had a wicked smile on her face as she held the hook in her hands. Finally, she thrust forward and the hook secured it self in Rainbow's right eye. This time it was too much, Rainbow let out a huge ear piercing scream that was probably heard by all of Equestria. Scootaloo laughed upon hearing Rainbow finally give in. She pulled the hook out, and with a sickening *pop*, the eyeball flew out. Rainbow felt pain, much more intense than when Scootaloo hacked off her wings. Scoots picked the rose red eyeball up and stared at it for a while, she put it into a jar filled with water and closed the lid. Rainbow had her right eyelid closed the whole time. she didn't want to know what would happen if she opened her eyelid without her eyeball, the idea disturbed her greatly. Scootaloo took a knife from her table of killer toys. The knife was small compared to the machete or the hook, but it was still pretty large. "Say goodnight Rainbow!" Scootaloo raised the blade high above Rainbow's heart, she was about to stab, but she allowed Rainbow a few seconds of life. "Any last words?" With all the strength she could muster, Rainbow Dash formed a sentence. "Yea, I do. I always loved you Scoots, and nothing will ever change that, i'm sorry I yelled at you." Rainbow closed her eyes and prepared for impact. Scootaloo stared at the mutilated Rainbow Dash for a while, she gripped the knife and down it went, but it's destination was far from Rainbow's heart. Instead, Scootaloo had stabbed the blade on Rainbow's bed. Barely missing her. Rainbow opened her left eye and found Scootaloo, tears streaming down her face as she collapsed and buried her face in Rainbow's chest. "I'm sorry sis. I don't *sob* know what got into me." Rainbow Dash tried her best to comfort Scootaloo, it wasn't easy considering that she was on the verge of death. Rainbow held her close while she continued sobbing. It was peaceful and calm for a moment. Scootaloo was still crying, Rainbow Dash continued stroking her mane and apologizing, then the door flung open. A pink mare stood at the doorway, she had a long straight pink mane to match her pink fur. She had smile on her face until she saw Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash sharing their sisterly moment. Pinkie's smile immediately turned into a look of dissapointment. "So, you failed to carry out the last step?" Scootaloo backed up and bumped into her tool table. She watched as Pinkie made her way to the foot of Rainbow's bed. "If your not going to kill her, then I WILL!" Scootaloo now had a choice. Either she could make Rainbow's death quick and painless, or she could get killed by Pinkie. Scootaloo gulped and picked up another knife. She held it in her hooves and took one more review on her choices. Behind one door was a sister, a pegasus who had sacrificed so much to teach her all that she knew, a pony who accepted and adopted her as a sister when nobody else would, sure she made some mistakes and was a jerk at sometimes, but she wouldn't be able to live with the fact that she murdered her idol. Behind door two was a psychotic pink pony. Scootaloo was scared of Pinkie, she was more experienced, more skilled than Scootaloo. She would kill her if Scoots didn't kill Dash. Decisions. Scootaloo tensed and with all her might sent the blade flying. The one eyed pony had a look of shock on her face as she felt the blade in her body, she looked at Scootaloo, a look of disbelief and bewilderment in her eyes. Scootaloo tossed another blade and her body went limp. Scootaloo let out a sigh of relief and walked over to Rainbow's bed. She stared at the dead body of Pinkie and pulled the knife out Pinkie's eye. Her accuracy had been impeccable. Scootaloo turned her attention back to the dying Rainbow Dash and cut off her chains, then embraced her in a hug. Scootaloo felt the cold in Rainbow's body as she shivered, Scootaloo had tears streaming down her face as she muttered four simple words. "I love you sis."
Chapter 5: Alternate EndingRealized how stupid the ending was when I heard TheRealRainbowBrony's reading of it. So, here it is. The less confusing, more gory ending as my apology for that horrible ending. Scootaloo played with the severed wing. Then, with all the strength she could muster. She tore the wing in half, right in front of Rainbow's face. She looked in horror at the wing being torn apart and might've passed out. Scootaloo took a piece of the wing and stuffed it in Rainbow's mouth. "That should soften the screams." Rainbow felt the feathery limb in her mouth, she watched as Scootaloo walked back to the table of toys and pulled out what looked like a jagged machete. She took it out and ran her hoof down the blade. She lifted it high and went over to Rainbow's bed, a mad grin on her face. "You need to be in 20% more pain!" Scootaloo hacked off Rainbow's left arm. Blood squirted out like she was a gardening hose. Scootaloo got a cup and filled it with the dark red liquid. She forced Rainbow's mouth open and poured the blood in. forcing her to drink it all down. "You don't want to die from blood loss now do you?" Scootaloo made sure Rainbow drank down everybit of it. She didn't like the taste of blood before and she never did. Scootaloo herself filled up the cup and drank down some of Rainbow's blood. Rainbow stared at her, her single left eye wide with fear. Rainbow stared as Scootaloo drank the blood down and picked up a rusty looking hook. She didn't waste time in putting it in use. She stabbed it in and pulled with all her might. It flew out and splattered against the wall, Scootaloo walked over and picked it up. She observed and examined it like it was a diamond. Then, in a heartless cruel move, Scootaloo dropped the tender magenta eyeball and crushed it under her hoof. She stomped on it and continued mashing the little tender eyeball. noticed Rainbow Dash was staring at her, left eye wider than usual. "Awwww, you want your eye back?" Scootaloo picked up the remains of the crushed eyeball and threw it in Rainbow's face. Scootaloo let out an insane laugh and exchanged the hook for a machete. Scootaloo raised the blade high and down it came, striking her just below the heart. Scootaloo pulled downward and a loud *Riiiiiiiiip!* was heard. Rainbow struggled to hold in the tears. But they came pouring out anyway, Rainbow Dash bit down hard on her little piece of a wing and she felt the blood gush out as she bit down hard. Scootaloo thrust a hoof in and pulled out the stomach. She emptied it's contents on it's owner, leaving a foul green substance coating Rainbow. Scootaloo reached in once more and pulled her intestines. Rainbow mustered up all the strength she had and tried to escape. But the chains were tight and nothing could change that. Scootaloo let out yet another insane laugh and equipped herself with a butcher knife. She walked towards Rainbow, studying the knife intently. She turned her head and faced Rainbow, revealing a look of tenacity that not even Iron Will could've matched. Scootaloo cut the intestines out and she held them high. Scootaloo then proceeded to put the severed intestines around Rainbow Dash's neck. She pulled backwards choking Rainbow. Scootaloo tied the intestines and walked to the front. Rainbow felt the tightened intestines on her neck, she was choking and it wouldn't be long now. Scootaloo grabbed Rainbow's severed left arm and beat her mercilessly with it. She slapped Rainbow across the face a few times, she ended it by stabbing the severed cyan blue arm into the opening Scootaloo had made with the machete. Scootaloo stepped back and saw a ruined Rainbow Dash, almost completely red from all the blood. An arm sticking out of her mid-section and intestines choking her to death. Rainbow was on the verge of death. She felt incredibly drowsy. Then, on her last minute on earth, she felt incredibly comfortable, she waited for death to claim her, Scootaloo by now was next to her bed. Butcher knife still in hand. "Hush now quiet now it's time to lay your sleepy head, Hush now quiet now it's time to go to bed." Rainbow heard the monster known as Scootaloo let out one more insane laugh before she closed her single left eye and felt the pain leave her body as she herself left the world.
Spin-offHey hey hey! Guess who? So as of late I have switched to a new account where I might post the sequel. But I might not write it at all. Enter Insanitycorps. I have given him my permission to write a better improved version of the story. Complete with backstory, flashbacks, and stuff. Basically speaking he improved my story. A lot. I mean C'mon this guy is a long time Creepypasta writer. He should have the qualifications. I'm not sure when he is going to post it so you guys mine as well just follow him. This guys has poured his heart and soul into this story and it looks really promising. If he is good enough I will place the series into his hands. So, if you wanna see the possible future author of the Shattered series here it is: Insanitycorps If you wanna go to my new account here it is: RainbowWolf BTW I'm not posting anything here anymore. This chapter is the last.
SEQUEL IS OUT!FINALLY! I wrote the sequel! Here it is: Shattered: Where Your Loyalties Lie Hope you guys enjoy it! Quality should be better than last time since, well I do learn from my mistakes. RainbowWolf/Slingshot out!
Revoking submissionTitle says it all. I'm revoking Shattered. Let me explain. I will be rewriting it. It'll be coming back, better, longer, and hopefully, even more infamous. But it's now happening on this account. Oh nononononono. It's on my new account. Which can be found here So, I will be revoking it's submission by 9th of April. And then I will hopefully release the rewritten version by then. So, just head on over to my account, stalk me, etc etc... you know what to do.
EpilogueScootaloo woke up on her bed. Covered in dry blood. She sighed upon thinking about last night. "Bitch had it coming." Scootaloo got out of bed and found a newspaper on her doorstep. She picked it up and read the headlines. Two mares report friend for possible murder Both Sweetie Belle and Applebloom are reporting their friend, Scootaloo, for supposed murder. The two fillies have noticed significant change in their friends behavior and have been very concerned. Officials will arrest the pegasus and interrogate her as soon as possible. Both mares will be under protection, they have moved to a new town and will remain there until Scootaloo can be arrested and thrown in jail or proved innocent. Scootaloo crushed the newspaper and threw it out the window. Scootaloo had rage and anger coursing through her veins. She was hungry for more blood. "Looks like you two don't know where your loyalties lie."
