Shattered

Realized how stupid the ending was when I heard TheRealRainbowBrony's reading of it. So, here it is. The less confusing, more gory ending as my apology for that horrible ending.

Scootaloo played with the severed wing. Then, with all the strength she could muster. She tore the wing in half, right in front of Rainbow's face. She looked in horror at the wing being torn apart and might've passed out. Scootaloo took a piece of the wing and stuffed it in Rainbow's mouth.

      "That should soften the screams."

Rainbow felt the feathery limb in her mouth, she watched as Scootaloo walked back to the table of toys and pulled out what looked like a jagged machete. She took it out and ran her hoof down the blade. She lifted it high and went over to Rainbow's bed, a mad grin on her face.

      "You need to be in 20% more pain!"

Scootaloo hacked off Rainbow's left arm. Blood squirted out like she was a gardening hose. Scootaloo got a cup and filled it with the dark red liquid. She forced Rainbow's mouth open and poured the blood in. forcing her to drink it all down.

      "You don't want to die from blood loss now do you?"

Scootaloo made sure Rainbow drank down everybit of it. She didn't like the taste of blood before and she never did. Scootaloo herself filled up the cup and drank down some of Rainbow's blood. Rainbow stared at her, her single left eye wide with fear.

Rainbow stared as Scootaloo drank the blood down and picked up a rusty looking hook. She didn't waste time in putting it in use. She stabbed it in and pulled with all her might. It flew out and splattered against the wall, Scootaloo walked over and picked it up. She observed and examined it like it was a diamond.

Then, in a heartless cruel move, Scootaloo dropped the tender magenta eyeball and crushed it under her hoof. She stomped on it and continued mashing the little tender eyeball. noticed Rainbow Dash was staring at her, left eye wider than usual.

      "Awwww, you want your eye back?"

Scootaloo picked up the remains of the crushed eyeball and threw it in Rainbow's face. Scootaloo let out an insane laugh and exchanged the hook for a machete.

Scootaloo raised the blade high and down it came, striking her just below the heart. Scootaloo pulled downward and a loud *Riiiiiiiiip!* was heard. Rainbow struggled to hold in the tears. But they came pouring out anyway, Rainbow Dash bit down hard on her little piece of a wing and she felt the blood gush out as she bit down hard.

Scootaloo thrust a hoof in and pulled out the stomach. She emptied it's contents on it's owner, leaving a foul green substance coating Rainbow. Scootaloo reached in once more and pulled her intestines. Rainbow mustered up all the strength she had and tried to escape. But the chains were tight and nothing could change that.

Scootaloo let out yet another insane laugh and equipped herself with a butcher knife. She walked towards Rainbow, studying the knife intently. She turned her head and faced Rainbow, revealing a look of tenacity that not even Iron Will could've matched.

Scootaloo cut the intestines out and she held them high. Scootaloo then proceeded to put the severed intestines around Rainbow Dash's neck. She pulled backwards choking Rainbow. Scootaloo tied the intestines and walked to the front. Rainbow felt the tightened intestines on her neck, she was choking and it wouldn't be long now.

Scootaloo grabbed Rainbow's severed left arm and beat her mercilessly with it. She slapped Rainbow across the face a few times, she ended it by stabbing the severed cyan blue arm into the opening Scootaloo had made with the machete. Scootaloo stepped back and saw a ruined Rainbow Dash, almost completely red from all the blood. An arm sticking out of her mid-section and intestines choking her to death.

Rainbow was on the verge of death. She felt incredibly drowsy. Then, on her last minute on earth, she felt incredibly comfortable, she waited for death to claim her, Scootaloo by now was next to her bed. Butcher knife still in hand.

      "Hush now quiet now it's time to lay your sleepy head,

       Hush now quiet now it's time to go to bed."

Rainbow heard the monster known as Scootaloo let out one more insane laugh before she closed her single left eye and felt the pain leave her body as she herself left the world.