One left.

by Elk1

Chapter 12: Loss

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The sunlight filtered through the hospital window, warm and golden, as if the world outside remained blissfully unaware of the tragedy looming within. Birds chirped faintly in the distance, their melodies punctuating the sterile quiet of the recovery ward. Rainbow Dash stirred, her body aching in ways she hadn’t thought possible. She blinked groggily, her vision swimming as she tried to make sense of her surroundings. The faint antiseptic scent and the steady beep of monitors told her she was in a hospital, but why? How?

The memories hit her like a bolt of lightning. Tirek. The battle. Twilight.

She bolted upright, only for her muscles to betray her. Pain lanced through her body, and she collapsed back onto the bed, groaning. A nurse rushed into the room, alarmed by the sudden movement. “Miss Dash, please stay still. You’ve been through a lot.”

Rainbow ignored her. “Where… where is Twilight?” she croaked, her voice raspy. The nurse hesitated, her expression clouding over. Without answering, she turned on her heel and left the room, leaving Rainbow alone with her spiraling thoughts. Fear churned in her stomach like a storm. Where was Twilight? What had happened to her?

Across the room, Applejack stirred. “Rainbow? What’s goin’ on?” she muttered, rubbing her temples. Her voice was thick with fatigue, her usually strong demeanor dulled by exhaustion.

Rainbow looked over, her heart racing. “AJ, where’s Twilight?” she asked, barely keeping the panic from her voice. Applejack’s brow furrowed as she took in her friend’s desperation.

“I don’t know, sugarcube,” Applejack said softly, her voice laced with unease. “But… I reckon we’ll find out soon.”

The two exchanged a worried glance before scanning the room. Fluttershy lay in the corner, an oxygen mask strapped to her delicate face. Pinkie Pie sat silently in her bed, holding a deflated party cannon. Rarity and Spike huddled together, their faces pale and tear-streaked. None of them looked whole. None of them looked like the ponies they once were.

The door creaked open, and Discord stepped inside. His usual chaotic energy was gone, replaced by a heavy, sorrowful stillness. Rainbow’s eyes narrowed as rage bubbled up inside her.

“You!” she snarled, her voice cutting through the room like a blade. “What are you doing here, you traitor?!”

Discord flinched, his ears drooping. “I… I came to apologize,” he said quietly, his mismatched eyes shimmering with regret. “Not just to Fluttershy, but to all of you.”

Rainbow leapt from her bed, ignoring the pain and the IV tearing from her arm. “Apologies don’t fix anything!” she shouted. “You’re the reason this happened!”

Discord’s gaze dropped to the floor. “You’re right,” he whispered. “And I’ll carry that guilt forever. But… you should check on Twilight. She needs you.”

The room fell silent. Rainbow froze, her heart pounding in her chest. Applejack placed a steadying hoof on her shoulder. “Let’s go,” she said softly.

Together, they made their way down the hall, the others trailing behind them. The air grew heavier with each step, the tension suffocating. When they reached Twilight’s room, they hesitated outside the door. None of them were ready for what awaited them.

Finally, Rainbow pushed it open.

Twilight lay in the center of the room, surrounded by a labyrinth of wires and tubes. The steady beep of the heart monitor was the only sign that life still clung to her battered body. Her chest rose and fell in shallow, uneven breaths. A deep scar marred her face, running across her closed eye. Her once vibrant mane was dull and matted, and her wings hung limply at her sides.

Rainbow’s legs gave out, and she collapsed to the floor. Tears streamed down her face as she stared at her friend, broken and unrecognizable. “Twilight…” she whispered, her voice cracking.

Applejack wiped her eyes with her hat, her usual stoicism shattered. “Oh, Twi,” she murmured. “What have you gone and done?”

The others filed in, each reacting in their own way. Rarity buried her face in Spike’s shoulder, sobbing uncontrollably. Pinkie Pie stood frozen, her usually bright demeanor extinguished. Fluttershy leaned against Discord for support, her tears soaking into his fur. Even he, the spirit of chaos, looked utterly defeated.

At the foot of the bed, Princess Luna stood vigil, her horn glowing softly. She opened her eyes as the group entered, her expression grave. “I’ve been monitoring her dreams,” she said quietly. “They’re… not pleasant.”

Rainbow’s head snapped up. “What do you mean?” she demanded.

Luna’s gaze was somber. “She’s trapped in a nightmare. One where she’s haunted by her guilt and her perceived failures. She believes she’s let you all down.”

Pinkie Pie finally spoke, her voice trembling. “But she didn’t,” she said. “She saved us. She saved Equestria.”

Luna nodded. “She doesn’t see it that way.”

Days turned into weeks. The group visited Twilight every day, speaking to her, hoping against hope that she would wake up. Pinkie Pie brought her flowers and whispered jokes into her ear. Rarity styled her mane, even though Twilight couldn’t see it. Fluttershy sang lullabies, her soft voice filling the room with fragile hope.

But Twilight remained still, her body trapped in the purgatory between life and death.

One night, Rainbow Dash sat alone by Twilight’s bedside. The moonlight streamed through the window, casting a silvery glow over the room. “Hey, egghead,” she said softly. “I know you’re in there. You gotta wake up, Twi. We need you. I need you.”

Her voice broke, and she wiped at her eyes. “You’re the strongest pony I know. You always find a way to fix things. So… fix this. Please.”

Twilight didn’t move.

The following morning, chaos erupted. Twilight’s body began to convulse, her heart monitor beeping wildly. Nurses and doctors flooded the room, pushing the others back as they worked frantically to stabilize her.

Rainbow watched in horror, her breath caught in her throat. “Twilight!” she screamed, her voice raw with desperation.

The heart monitor flatlined.

The room fell silent, save for the shrill, continuous beep. A doctor turned to the group, his face etched with sorrow. “I’m sorry,” he said. “Princess Twilight Sparkle is gone.”

Rarity’s wail of anguish shattered the silence, her cries echoing down the halls. Spike collapsed to his knees, clutching his chest as if his heart had been torn from his body. Pinkie Pie’s mane deflated completely, and she sank to the floor, silent tears streaming down her face. Fluttershy clung to Discord, her sobs shaking her frail body.

Rainbow Dash stood frozen, unable to comprehend the words. Her legs gave out, and she fell to the ground, her body wracked with uncontrollable sobs. Applejack pulled her into a tight embrace, her own tears soaking into Rainbow’s mane.

Luna lowered her head, her wings drooping in grief. “Rest well, Twilight Sparkle,” she whispered. “You gave everything for this world.”

The world outside carried on, oblivious to the loss of its greatest hero. But within the hearts of those who loved her, Twilight’s absence would leave a void that could never be filled.


Author's Note

Chapter 12 done. Gonna post these. Please do say if you want more, cuz I can and want to do more (funeral for poor book horse or expanding Starlights pov)

Update 1/7/24: I am working on 2 or 3 more chapters that will hopefully wrap up Twilights story, and I may make a sequel/prequel that outlines the role Starlight Glimmer plays in this story, and not just a little mention in the story. Also, if you do dislike, I don’t mind, just please tell me why so I can improve later. -Elk

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