Harry Potter and the Harmony Kingdom: A Remake

by Cubot

0.5.2

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Twilight was grumbling, practically stomping her way through the library as she examined and devoured book after book, tossing them carelessly onto piles scattered everywhere.

“No... useless... no... why is this even here? No... someone’s getting the rope... no, no, NO!” Her frustration boiled over, and with a sharp cry of anger, she punched the wall. The force rattled the bookshelves, the windows trembling in their frames.

“Ugh! I thought I’d have time to research the Elements of Harmony, but nooooo, silly me! All this ridiculous friend-making nonsense has kept me from it!” She slammed another book shut, nearly splitting the spine. Her voice dropped into a muttering growl as she quoted, “Legend has it that on the longest day of the thousandth year, the stars will aid in her escape, and she will bring about everlasting night.”

Twilight paused for a brief second, her voice softening with unease. “I hope the Princess was right... I hope it really is just an old pony tale...”

Despite her doubts, the unicorn didn’t slow down, tearing through tomes and scrolls at a pace that would make a Wonderbolt dizzy.

Meanwhile, Spike heaved a heavy sigh as he worked to put the scattered books back in their places, his small arms struggling with the growing chaos. His eyes flicked toward the window, noticing the moon hanging high in the sky.

“Twilight,” he called, but she didn’t so much as glance his way.

“Twilight!” Still, she ignored him, her focus entirely consumed by the sea of text.

Spike’s patience snapped. “TWILIGHT SPARKLE!” he roared, his voice carrying an authority that finally broke through her concentration.

“WHAT?!” she bellowed back, her fiery glare locking onto him.

Unfazed, Spike shot back with equal force. “IT’S MIDNIGHT! THE CELEBRATION IS ABOUT TO START!”

“What?! WHY DIDN’T YOU SAY ANYTHING SOONER?!” Twilight screeched, her panic evident as she bolted for the door, practically dragging Spike along in her wake.


“…I don’t like her.” Rainbow Dash crossed her arms, her magenta eyes narrowing as she watched the so-called Twilight Sparkle scurry around like a headless chicken, frantically checking and rechecking everything in sight.

“I don’t enjoy gossiping about anypony,” Rarity said with a prim frown, arms folded elegantly across her chest. “But for someone hailing from the capital, her attitude is positively revolting. So crude and un-ladylike.”

Applejack, leaning lazily against a lamppost, simply shrugged. “Eh, I don’t blame her none. She seems the jumpy type—like a rabbit caught in a coyote’s den. ‘Sides, Ponyville ain’t exactly the calmest place this time o’ year, what with the festival and all. Things are bound to get a mite tense.”

Fluttershy nodded quietly, her brows furrowed in concern as her gaze followed Twilight’s frenetic movements. Her hands were clasped nervously in front of her.

Rarity tilted her head toward the yellow mare, noticing her unusually pensive demeanor. “Something on your mind, dear?”

Fluttershy hesitated, pursing her lips thoughtfully before finally speaking. “She just… seems really stressed.”

Rainbow Dash groaned, throwing her hands up in exasperation. “Yeah, well, maybe focus on the real issue—like the fact that she just YEETED PINKIE OUT A BUCKING WINDOW!”

Applejack took a slow sip of her cider, shrugging again. “Eh, you’d be lyin’ if you said you ain’t thought about doin’ it yourself at least once.” She smirked, her tone casual. “Plus she a earth pony we can take worse and Honestly? It was kinda cathartic.”

The group paused for a moment, exchanging sheepish glances before nodding in reluctant agreement.

As if summoned, Pinkie Pie appeared, bouncing into view with her usual exuberance.

“Isn’t this exciting? Are you excited? ‘Cause I’m excited! I’ve never been so excited—well, except for that one time I saw somepony new in town and went gasp! But I mean really, who can top that?”

The others forced smiles of varying sincerity.

“Y-yes, dear, absolutely,” Rarity replied smoothly. “Actually, why don’t you come with me for a moment? I think you’ve still got a bit of glass in your mane.”

“Oh, good idea!” Pinkie chirped, still beaming. “And maybe while we’re at it, we could—” Her voice trailed off as she followed Rarity to a quieter corner, chatting incessantly all the while.

Applejack watched them go before turning to the others. “How old is Pinks again?”

Rainbow Dash groaned. “Old enough to know better than to talk like that.”

Fluttershy’s voice was soft not really giving her full attention, but her words carried unexpected sass. “Says the one who reads the E+ version of Daring Doo.

Rainbow Dash froze mid-grumble.

Applejack, mid-sip of her cider, performed a spectacular spit take before doubling over in laughter, her hearty cackles echoing through the night.


“Fillies and gentlecolts, as mayor of Ponyville,” Mayor Mare began, “it is my great pleasure to announce the beginning of the Summer Sun Celebration!”

The crowd erupted into cheers, the air thick with anticipation. Few ponies ever had the privilege of seeing their princess in the flesh, and tonight was a rare and treasured event.

The town hall was packed to the brim, its interior dimly lit to enhance the brilliance of the forthcoming sunrise.

“In just a few moments, our town will witness the magic of the sunrise and celebrate this, the longest day of the year!”

Twilight Sparkle stood among the crowd, her stomach twisting with unease. Her eyes drifted to the iridescent moon, glowing serenely in the night sky.

As her gaze lingered, the familiar silhouette of the Mare in the Moon vanished before her eyes.

Her heart plummeted.

“And now,” Mayor Mare continued, her voice brimming with pride, “it is my great honor to introduce to you the ruler of our land, the very pony who gives us the sun and moon each and every day, the good, the wise, the bringer of harmony to all of Equestria…”

A golden banner unfurled, revealing a radiant white silhouette.

“Ready?” Fluttershy whispered to her flock of birds. They chirped their readiness, making her giggle softly.

Twilight, meanwhile, was biting her nails, anxiety mounting. Spike placed a reassuring claw on her leg, grounding her.

“…Princess Celestia!”

The curtains parted, revealing a warm light that spilled into the hall. A regal figure stepped forward, illuminated by the glow.

The birds began their melody.

As the figure approached the podium, everypony in the room dropped to one knee, heads bowed and wings tucked respectfully.

A melodic giggle filled the hall, soft yet commanding. “Please, my little ponies, rise. Today is a joyous day.”

The ponies obeyed, their eyes widening in awe as they beheld their goddess. Taller, grander, and more beautiful than any mortal, she exuded an otherworldly presence. Her mere existence captivated them.

The birds fell silent.

“For today is a day to celebrate…” Celestia’s voice rang with harmony, her eyes warm and kind.

Spike tugged on Twilight’s sleeve, his urgency growing.

“T-Twilight…” he whispered.

“For today marks the beginning of a new millennium…” Celestia’s arms spread wide as though to embrace the entire hall.

“A-Angel?” Fluttershy asked nervously, noticing her bunny glaring daggers at the princess.

Spike’s pulling became frantic. “Twilight!!”

“Not now, Spike,” she muttered, her admiration for her mentor clouding her judgment.

(Maybe I was just paranoid. The princess wouldn’t put us in any kind of danger... right?) Twilight thought as her mentor’s eyes met hers, momentarily reigniting a flicker of doubt.

Celestia chuckled softly.

“Remember this day, my little ponies, for it will be the last of this era! This will be the last time the sun is remembered!”

“Huh?” Rarity whispered in confusion, mirroring the sentiment of the room.

“For tonight will…”

The birds scattered in fright as Celestia’s warm purple eyes morphed into slitted, predatory green ones.

“…be…”

Angel snarled, and Fluttershy barely managed to restrain him before he lunged.

“Twilight… i-is t-that…?” Spike stammered, trembling in terror.

“Yes, Spike.” Twilight’s voice was unsettlingly calm in her panic. “She is.”

“ETERNAL!” Celestia’s once-pristine face twisted into a maniacal grin as a whirlwind of darkness enveloped her.

The sound of unhinged laughter echoed throughout the hall.

Rainbow Dash grabbed Twilight by the collar, her magenta eyes blazing. “What the hay is going on? Who is she, and what did she do to the princess?!”

“She’s an ancient legend,” Twilight began, her voice shaking. “A goddess of the night, the moon, and the stars. Banished for a millennium. She’s only remembered as a foal’s tale… but she’s real. She’s the Mare in the Moon. Princess Celestia’s sister…”

The dark whirlwind subsided, revealing a figure both regal and terrifying.

Her mane shimmered like the night sky, her coat as dark as obsidian. Armor of a metallic blue adorned her form, and her sharp fangs and claws gleamed like a predator’s.

The goddess let out another laugh as storm clouds gathered, the moonlight spilling eerily through the windows.

“…She’s Nightmare Moon.”

A crack of thunder illuminated her sinister grin.

[To be continued…]

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