Harry Potter and the Harmony Kingdom: A Remake

by Cubot

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When Twilight Sparkle woke up she found herself staring at the hooded figure, a shiver racing down her spine. Her lips moved before her mind could catch up.

"R-run! You can't win against her!"

Nightmare Moon's eyes narrowed, her voice dripping with disdain.

"Who art thou to stand before a GOD?"

The hooded figure chuckled, emerald eyes gleaming from the shadows beneath the hood.

"For you, so-called god, I am the blade that will cut you down. And for you, young lass," he glanced briefly at Twilight, his tone softening, "I’m just a fool with a knack for saving people."

(Lass! Name is Harry! If you can hear me I got your mates in a safe place outside this room! Call for help. I keep it distracted!)

The unicorns eyes winded, but prepared herself.

The dark goddess's pupils turned to slits, her anger palpable. The air grew heavy as an icy chill descended upon the room.

Twilight’s breath misted in front of her, her shivers uncontrollable.

"You!" Nightmare Moon roared, her voice reverberating with power. "For such insolence, We shall ensure your suffering spans eternity! Speak thy name, blasphemer, so it may serve as a warning to those who dare defy their Empress!"

The figure, unshaken, let out another low chuckle.

"Lady, that's not the first time I've heard a line like that." He stepped forward, his weapons gleaming in the dim light. "The name’s Harry. Harry James Potter. Now, let’s skip the theatrics and get to the dance, shall we?"

Without another word, he charged, sword and dagger in hand.

The room erupted into chaos as Harry lunged forward, his sword arcing in a silver blur toward Nightmare Moon. The dark goddess sneered, her horn flaring with an ethereal blue light. A crackling barrier of magic sprang into existence, intercepting the blow with a resounding clang that sent shockwaves through the air.

"Foolish mortal," she hissed, the ground trembling with her rage. "Thy toys are meaningless against divine might!"

But Harry was already moving. The moment his blade rebounded, he twisted into a spin, his dagger slicing toward her exposed flank. Nightmare Moon’s form shimmered, dissipating into a wisp of dark mist as the strike passed harmlessly through her. She reappeared behind him, her eyes burning with malice.

Harry barely had time to react before a blast of magic seared toward him. He dove to the side, the beam scorching the floor where he had stood mere moments ago. Rolling to his feet, he flung his dagger with pinpoint accuracy. The blade spun end over end, its enchanted edge glowing faintly as it hurtled toward its target.

Nightmare Moon caught it mid-air with her magic, holding it aloft like a trophy. Her laughter was cold and cruel as she crushed the weapon, a magical construct, into shards with a flick of her horn.

"Is that the best thou can muster?" she taunted, her voice echoing like thunder.

Harry gritted his teeth, his mind racing. He knew he couldn’t overpower her—not directly. But he didn’t need to win; he just had to keep her occupied.

With a flick of his wrist, he drew a small vial from his belt and hurled it at her feet. The glass shattered, releasing a burst of dense, shimmering smoke that filled the chamber. The magical fog swirled and clung to Nightmare Moon, disrupting her vision.

"Childish tricks!" she bellowed, her horn flaring brighter as she unleashed a pulse of energy that cleared the smoke in an instant. But Harry was no longer where he had been.

From above, he struck. Using the room’s architecture, he had vaulted onto a high ledge and leaped down, his sword aimed for her horn. The blade struck true, but instead of cleaving through, it rebounded with a deafening clang as Nightmare Moon’s barrier flared once more.

She snarled, a burst of kinetic force exploding outward and sending Harry hurtling across the room. He slammed into a pillar, the impact knocking the wind out of him. Gasping, he scrambled to his feet, blood trickling from the corner of his mouth.

"You fight valiantly," Nightmare Moon said, her tone almost mocking. "But thy defiance is futile."

"Yeah, well," Harry rasped, wiping the blood away with the back of his hand, "futility's kind of my specialty."

He rushed her again, his movements a blur of feints and strikes. Each time, Nightmare Moon deflected or dodged, her power far outstripping his. Yet for every attack she parried, every spell she cast, precious moments ticked by.

Harry’s heart pounded in his chest as he narrowly avoided another deadly blast. The heat of the magic singed his cloak, but he pressed on, rolling under the beam and retaliating with a slash aimed at her legs. Nightmare Moon leaped back with inhuman grace, her laughter ringing out once more.

"Thou art persistent, mortal. But persistence alone shall not save thee."

Harry’s muscles burned, his breath coming in ragged gasps. He could feel his strength waning, but he refused to falter. With every attack, he forced her to expend energy, to divert her focus.

"Lass!" he shouted, his voice echoing through the chamber. "Now’s the time! Go!"

Twilight hesitated for a heartbeat, torn between her instinct to flee and her desire to help. But Harry’s eyes met hers, fierce and unyielding.

"Run!" he barked, dodging another blast.

Finally, Twilight turned and bolted, her hooves pounding against the stone floor as she disappeared into the corridor beyond.

Nightmare Moon’s gaze snapped toward the fleeing unicorn, her expression darkening. "Thou shalt not escape!"

But Harry was there, slamming his blade against her barrier with all his might. The impact didn’t break the shield, but it forced her to turn her attention back to him.

"Eyes on me, Moonface," he taunted, his grin defiant despite the exhaustion etched across his face. "I’m not done with you yet."

The room trembled as Nightmare Moon roared, her power swelling to new heights. Harry braced himself, knowing the next moments would push him to his absolute limit. But as long as he could keep her here, keep her attention on him, he’d consider it a victory.


Twilight’s hooves echoed loudly against the stone floor as she galloped down the corridor, her breath hitching in panicked gasps. The chilling sound of Nightmare Moon’s roars reverberated through the castle, but she forced herself not to look back. Harry was buying her time, and she couldn’t waste it. Her horn glowed faintly, providing a dim light in the darkened halls as she searched for her friends.

Her mind raced as guilt clawed at her. They should’ve been victorious. The Elements of Harmony were their one chance to stop Nightmare Moon, and they had failed. Was it her fault? Had she misunderstood the ancient texts? Or worse, had she been the weak link in their group? She shook her head, trying to suppress the spiraling thoughts.

"Focus, Twilight," she muttered to herself. "Find the others. Make sure they’re safe."

She skidded to a halt as she entered the grand hall where they had been ambushed. Her heart sank at the sight before her. The aftermath of the battle was evident: shattered furniture, scorch marks on the walls, and her friends lying broken and battered across the room.

Twilight rushed to the closest figure—Rarity. The usually pristine and composed fashionista was crumpled on the floor, her face pale, and bruises in the shape of hands darkened her throat. Twilight knelt beside her, shaking her shoulder gently.

"Rarity! Wake up!" she pleaded, her voice trembling.

Rarity’s eyelids fluttered, and she let out a weak, raspy cough. Her voice was barely a whisper. "Twilight… I… couldn’t… breathe…"

Tears welled in Twilight’s eyes. "It’s okay. You’re safe now. Just try to rest."

Next was Applejack, slumped against a crumbled section of the wall. Her arms and face were battered, her clothes torn and bloodied. Twilight winced as she saw the swelling on Applejack’s knuckles—a testament to her desperate fight. Twilight pressed her fingers gently against Applejack’s neck, relieved to find a pulse.

"Come on, AJ," Twilight whispered, her horn glowing as she used basic healing spells to stabilize her friend. "You’re the strongest of us. You can get through this."

Applejack groaned, her eyes fluttering open for a moment. She mumbled something unintelligible before slipping back into unconsciousness. Twilight swallowed hard, moving to the next friend.

Pinky Pie was huddled in the corner, trembling violently. She was unhurt, but her wide, tear-filled eyes stared at nothing, and her body jerked with every faint sound from the hallway.

"Pinky," Twilight said softly, kneeling beside her. She placed a hand on her shoulder, but Pinky flinched violently.

"Don’t… don’t let her get me…" Pinky whispered, her voice breaking. "I can’t… I can’t…"

Twilight hugged her tightly, stroking her hair. "It’s okay, Pinky. She won’t hurt you anymore. I promise."

Twilight hesitated before pulling away. She didn’t want to leave Pinky like this, but the others needed her.

Her breath caught in her throat as she reached Rainbow Dash. The pegasus’s once-proud wings were a heartbreaking sight. One was twisted at an unnatural angle, and the other… was gone. Blood had dried where the wing should have been, staining Rainbow’s torn shirt. Cuts and bruises covered her face and body, and her breathing was shallow and labored. Twilight’s hands trembled as she gently touched Rainbow’s shoulder.

"Rainbow," she said softly, tears streaming down her face. "Please… Please, stay with me."

Rainbow’s eyes flickered open, and she grimaced. "T-Twilight?" she croaked. "The others… Are they… okay?"

Twilight nodded quickly, her voice cracking. "They’re alive. You’re all alive. But we need to get out of here."

Rainbow let out a weak chuckle that turned into a wince. "Guess… I didn’t… stick the landing… huh?"

"Don’t talk," Twilight said, forcing a shaky smile. "Save your strength."

Finally, Twilight found Fluttershy. The timid healer was crumpled near a fallen pillar, her head resting against the cold stone. Twilight’s heart sank as she saw the gash on her temple and the faint swelling that hinted at a concussion.

"Fluttershy," she whispered, using her magic to gently scan for further injuries. She sighed in relief when she found no signs of internal bleeding. Fluttershy didn’t stir, but her chest rose and fell steadily.

Twilight worked frantically, using what little magic she had left to stabilize her friends. Once she had done all she could, she sat back on her heels, staring at the broken forms of the ponies who had trusted her.

I failed them, she thought bitterly, her head sinking into her hands. The Elements didn’t work because of me. I wasn’t strong enough, or smart enough, to figure it out. Now an innocent pony is risking his life because I couldn’t stop her.

She stood, her legs shaking. Her horn sparked weakly as she conjured a makeshift stretcher for Rainbow Dash. She would need help carrying the others, but for now, she could manage.

As she began to move her friends, her thoughts turned to the fortunate appearing stranger, to Harry.

Please… hang on. Just a little longer.


Harry rolled across the stone floor, narrowly dodging another devastating blast of magic. The heat of Nightmare Moon's attack singed his cloak, but he refused to falter. He lunged forward, his sword flashing in a tight arc toward her chest. The blade struck her barrier again, rebounding violently with a crackle of energy.

Nightmare Moon laughed, her voice cold and echoing in the dark chamber. “Thou art naught but a nuisance, mortal. Thy strength wanes, thy hope fades. Surrender now, and We may yet grant thee a swift end.”

“Apologies, Your Majesty,” Harry said, panting heavily as he adjusted his stance, “but surrender’s never really been my cup of tea.”

Her eyes narrowed, her horn sparking with unrestrained power. “Then thou shalt perish in thy defiance.”

She unleashed another torrent of magic, the raw energy ripping through the air with enough force to shake the entire room. Harry dove behind a shattered pillar, the blast reducing it to rubble around him. He gritted his teeth, clutching his sword tightly. His arms ached, his lungs burned, but he forced himself to stand. He wasn’t going to stop now.

As Harry rose, battered but unbowed, a faint hum began to fill the air. It was subtle at first, just a gentle vibration that seemed to echo within his chest. Neither he nor Nightmare Moon noticed it immediately, too focused on their deadly dance. But as Harry’s resolve burned brighter with every defiant strike and every sharp-witted quip, the hum grew stronger.

"You fight for naught!" Nightmare Moon roared, frustration creeping into her voice. "Thou canst not save thyself, let alone those weaklings thou sought to protect! Thou art alone!"

Harry smirked, his emerald eyes gleaming with unyielding determination. “Alone? That’s rich, comin’ from the likes of you. But here’s the thing—I’ve faced worse odds, and I’m still standin’. You lot always think bein’ untouchable makes you special. Hate to break it to you, but power’s nothin’ without purpose.”

The hum grew louder, resonating through the room. Harry staggered slightly, his sword vibrating in his grip. A soft, golden glow began to seep from the shattered pillars and broken floor tiles, filling the space with an otherworldly light.

“What sorcery is this?” Nightmare Moon demanded, her voice tinged with unease.

Harry didn’t answer. He was too focused on the warmth that began to course through him, dulling his pain, steadying his breathing, and clearing his mind. It wasn’t magic—not like hers, at least. It felt… deeper. Familiar, like an echo of something he’d always known.

As the glow surrounded him, Harry’s memories flooded back—moments of standing firm against impossible odds, not for himself, but for the people who needed him. He saw his friends, his battles, the times he’d thrown himself into danger because no one else could or would.

“It’s not about power,” Harry said, his voice steady as he met Nightmare Moon’s glare. “It’s not about bein’ a god, or bein’ invincible, or scarin’ people into submission. It’s about protectin’ the ones who can’t protect themselves. It’s about standin’ up, even when it hurts, even when you think you’ve got nothin’ left. That’s strength.”

The glow intensified, pulsing with every word. Nightmare Moon stepped back, her confidence faltering as the Elements of Harmony, still dormant, began to react to Harry’s unshakable conviction.

Harry’s mind raced. He didn’t know where the strange power came from, but it wasn’t enough to defeat her outright. He needed a plan—a desperate, insane plan. His thoughts turned to the faint scars on his forearm, reminders of his encounter with the basilisk.

Basilisk venom… It’s still in me. My blood could work. If she’s invulnerable to magic, maybe this anti-magic is exactly what I need.

"You talk a lot about bein’ untouchable," Harry said, his tone turning almost conversational as he sheathed his sword, drawing her attention. "But I reckon you’ve never met someone like me."

Her eyes narrowed, her horn sparking with energy. “What art thou scheming, mortal?”

Harry smirked, stepping closer. “Oh, you’ll see, love.”

He moved fast, closing the gap between them before she could react. Nightmare Moon raised her hand to strike, but Harry’s speed caught her off guard. He grabbed her wrist with one hand and her jaw with the other, forcing her to look directly into his emerald eyes.

“Let’s see how untouchable you really are,” he said with a cheeky grin, and before she could pull away, he leaned in and kissed her.

Nightmare Moon’s eyes widened in shock as Harry’s lips pressed against hers. His blood, tainted with basilisk venom, slipped past her lips, forced into her mouth by the kiss. She jerked back violently, coughing and choking, her hands clawing at her throat.

“What… What hast thou done to Us?!” she screamed, her voice breaking with panic as her body convulsed.

Harry stumbled back, wiping his mouth as he watched the venom take effect. “Basilisk venom,” he said, his voice hoarse. “Anti-magic. Guess even gods have their limits.”

Nightmare Moon staggered, her power faltering as the venom coursed through her, disrupting her magic. Her aura flickered, cracks forming along her barrier. Harry could feel the resonance from the golden glow growing stronger, the Elements reacting to her weakened state.

He collapsed to his knees, exhaustion finally catching up to him. His vision blurred, but he forced himself to stay conscious. The Elements’ power was building, and he had done his part. Now, all he could do was hope that whoever this strange magic was meant for would finish what he had started.

“Right,” he muttered under his breath, smirking faintly despite the pain. “Your move, magick.”

The glow became blinding.


Author's Note

Bonus idea:

Stand User: Lyra Heartstrings

Stand Name: Roll Fallout! (Roll Out the Fallout! - The Chalk Eaters)

Attributes


Stand Description

Roll Fallout! takes the form of a bipedal, humanoid figure clad in futuristic yet weathered and dilapidated armor reminiscent of a post-apocalyptic warrior. Its design features intricate details of wear and tear—rusted metal, dented plates, and faded insignias—hinting at untapped power lying dormant within.

Abilities

  1. "Punchy Ghost" Functionality
    In its current state, Roll Fallout! functions as a classic close-combat Stand, capable of delivering rapid and powerful punches at mid-range. However, this straightforward offensive capability appears secondary to its true, as-yet-unrealized potential.
  2. Dormant Potential
    The Stand’s rusty, incomplete appearance suggests that it has yet to awaken fully. While its exact abilities remain largely unknown, the A rank in Potential implies that Lyra has only scratched the surface of what Roll Fallout! is capable of. Further development or specific conditions may unlock transformative powers, potentially altering its role from a simple combat Stand to something far greater.
  3. Connection to "Heaven"
    Lyra’s awakening of the Stand is tied to a mysterious book she read about "Heaven." This connection hints at a deeper narrative or purpose behind the Stand, possibly linked to existential themes or a grander cosmic force. This element remains shrouded in mystery but suggests a thematic focus on resilience and survival in a decayed or challenging world.

Drawbacks

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