Teenage girl vs Pony

by Huskylover

Rating: everyone
Tags: Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Human, Main 6, Original Character, Spike, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 4179

A rivalry between human and a pony

A teenage girl named Tracy was teleported to equestria and she had a run in with princess celestia's student: twilight sparkle. And they are forced to live together, will they get along and will Tracy find her way back home? All of them have just one goal: is trying to do things better.

This takes place after the crystal empire episode

This contains: violence, fights and etc...

Story based on "maybe ponies ain't so bad..." And inspired by theDawsonator1

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/176287/maybe-ponies-arent-so-bad

Published 2025-01-13 21:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2025-01-17 17:15:04 UTC

Chapter 1: where it all begin

My name is Tracy and I have a rivalry between me and a unicorn named twilight sparkle. How I ended up in this mess? To tell that story we must go back, back to the beginning to where it all begin.

****

A long time ago I enjoy my life in new York. I was on my way home from work, I work at McDonald's and life was good. Later that night, I was getting ready for bed. I was checking the weather news on the tv.

"Tonight we are having a bad thunderstorm" said the weather person.

Looks like we have a bad thunderstorm tonight, soon I was laying down on my bed. It was thunder out and I was fast asleep.

****

As I woke up, I realized two things: one I'm in a different house and two, that I was in chains!

"HELP! SOMEONE HELP ME! I'M BEEN KIDNAPPED! HELP!" I screamed as I tried to move.

"You finally awake" said a voice, sounded like a female.

Coming in the room was a purple unicorn. But that's impossible, unicorns and pegasus do not exist.

"Let me go!" I demanded the unicorn.

"Not until you are harmless" said the unicorn.

"But I am harmless!" I yelled.

"Before I let you go, you can answer me some questions" the unicorn explained.

Then I realized something, everything is look like a cartoon, she's a cartoon and somehow I'm a cartoon.

"Ok, first off who and what are you?" The unicorn asked.

"I'm Tracy and I'm a human" I answered.

"Where are you from?" The unicorn continues.

"Wait, I'm not on earth?" I asked.

I realized that I'm not on my home world, I was in a different world.

"Nope you're in equestria, in the planet Equus" said the unicorn.

I was shocked, I WAS in a new world. A world of unicorns and pegasus.

"Well Mrs..." I began.

"Twilight sparkle" said the unicorn.

Twilight sparkle? Why does that reminds me of a vampire movie Sega? I must find a way to escape. But then, I have a an idea.

"So Mrs.Twilight, what are you?" I asked.

"I'm a pony, a unicorn to be more specific" said twilight.

Then this is my chance, it's time to put my plan into action.

"If can you let me go, I promise I won't cause any problems" I pretend to be friendly.

"Alright, if you say so" said twilight.

At last, she unlocked my chains. Now this is my chance. I got up and accidentally bashed into twilight. But I don't have time to apologize, I started to run and as I about to escape to the door, a big lizard blocked the way.

"You're not going anywhere" it said recon that it was male

I jumped over the lizard and out of the door. As I exit the door, I gasped to see a lot of unicorns, Pegasus and regular ponies.

"What is this place?! Where I'm I?" I asked myself.

As I tried to find a way to escape this place, then I hear a stern voice.

"Hey you!" Yelled a voice.

I've turned around to see a sky blue pegasus and somehow it was very angry.

"Can I help you?" I asked.

"You hurt twilight and I'm going to teach you a lesson" said the Pegasus, I reckon that it was female.

"First of all, she chained me up and probably kidnapped me from my home, so do me a favor and get lost, your friend's the bad guy here" I said angrily.

"No you hurt my friend, you answer to me" said the Pegasus and then she charged at me.

I dodged her attack and I realized that she was fast, faster than Sonic. As she come charging at me, I grab her tail and throw her at a tree.

"Ow... That hurt" she groan in pain.

As I about to run then...

"I got you now!" Yelled a familiar voice.

I turned around to see twilight sparkle and she's not alone, there was a yellow Pegasus, a orange earth pony, a white unicorn and a pink earth pony.

"Oh no, not you again" I groaned

"You're going to pay for this!" She yelled.

"You're are the one who chained me up and probably kidnapped me from my home!" I yelled back.

"That's it! You asked for it!" Twilight grawing.

"That's quite enough" said a heavenly voice.

Then out of nowhere, was a big while pony, she has both wing and horn and mostly a crown.

"Princess celestia!" Twilight cried as she and her friends bow down to her. I think that white pony is in charge of this world.

“My faithful student, this is the Alien you speak of?” asked Celestia, looking at me with a smile.

“Yes” Twilight nodded as Celestia turned towards me.

"I'll handle this" Celestia said simply.

"But-" Twilight started but the Princess interrupted her.

“Allow me to introduce myself to you, I am Princess Celestia, co-ruler of Equestria and the Princess of the Sun” Celestia introduced herself to me.

"I'm Tracy, I never met a royal like you before." I introduced myself.

“Princess, this Alien has been causing trouble for all of us” said the Pegasus pointing her hoof at me.

“I’m not surprised Rainbow Dash, anypony would tend to resort to violence out of fear and misunderstanding even under the best of intentions from both parties” said Celestia wisely.

“But-“ Twilight started before Celestia interrupted her

“Our visitor was chained and naturally scared for her life in a place she’s never been before Twilight, this applies to even the most powerful and calm ponies alive today. I do not think the Alien intentionally caused harm to you, Spike and Miss Dash, it was more of a misunderstanding although your method of dealing with this is not the most wisest of ways.” said Celestia with such wisdom.

“So y’all mean to tell us, that the little varmit was just scared?” asked Applejack.

"Little?" I asked under my breath

“Indeed, I’m sure Miss Fluttershy would think the same if one of her animals were threatened would she not” Celestia said with a casual glance towards Fluttershy’s direction.

Fluttershy did give a nod, showing she agreed, Celestia turned away from her and to Twilight but i was not in the mood for forgiving.

“If you think I’m forgiving Twilight, then you can forget it, Princess” i said flatly, who was giving an angry look towards Twilight's direction.

“I do not expect you to forgive Miss Sparkle at once Tracy, but I do ask you remove any hostility you have against anypony” said Celestia before adding wisely,

“Time is the best healer Tracy, do not wallow in grudges for too long, for they may very well lead you down a very dark path” she added.

“Fine, I’ll humor you Princess, but like I said, I’m not getting all comfy with Twilight or featherbrain over there” I said causing the blue pegasi to get annoyed.

“HEY!” she yelled angrily.

Silence came between everypony for a good minute and a half, until Celestia spoke up once more.

“Now then, what are we going to do with you?” muttered Celestia

“Take her away would be nice, Princess” said the Pegasus, who clearly wanted me far away as possible.

“I know, Tracy, I would like you to live here in Ponyville, under Miss Sparkle’s care and learn the meaning of friendship” said Celestia, deciding on a solution that both me and Twilight did not agree on.

“WHAT?!” yelled the pair of them

“And I shall expect the pair of you to play nice, or I shall intervene myself” added Celestia.

“But, she knocked me out Princess! She can’t be trusted” protested Twilight.

“She chained me up Celestia, You really think she’ll be cozy with me in her madhouse?!” I also protested.

“Indeed I do, a good friendship can form, even from the worst of enemies” said Celestia smiling at the pair.

“You’re mad!” I said in an accusing tone

“I am not mad and if you tried being friendly toward each other, then I’m sure you’ll be good friends. But for now, I must return to Canterlot, farewell my little ponies” Celestia said, but before disappearing she added

"Oh and Tracy, if you do hurt Twilight or any of my subjects intentionally then you will answer to me" princess celestia added.

"I understand" I replied as princess celestia left.

I was not happy with this but the only way to escape this world is to be friends with these ponies. But not twilight, I still don't trust her. Soon our rivalry between me and twilight sparkle as begin.

Chapter 3: forgiving rainbow dash

The next morning, I was reading a book about equestrian creatures like changelings, Yanks and any other creatures. I was thinking about getting something for rainbow dash after I accidentally hurt her, but I don't know what to get her. So I asked spike what does she like.

"She likes daring do books, maybe you can get her one" spike said.

"Maybe I can get one from the bookstore that I saw" I said.

Soon I head to the bookstore and as I found a new daring do book. Soon as I get to the cashier, I give the bookstore owner 4 bits and i was on my way to find rainbow dash.

****

As I looked for rainbow dash, I found her talking to pinkie pie. I hope she likes it.

"Hi rainbow dash, what's up?" I said

"What do you want?" Rainbow dash asked crossly.

"I want to give you something for an apology from the other day." I said apologizing to her.

"Which is?" Rainbow dash asked.

Then I showed her the book and rainbow dash gasped.

"Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh! Is that a new daring do book?" Rainbow dash asked excitedly.

"Yes and we got on the wrong foot... Or hoof so I got you that" I explained as I hand the book to rainbow dash.

"Thank you and I forgive you" said rainbow dash happily.

"You're welcome and are we cool?" I said.

"Yep" rainbow dash replied.

"Tracy 2 twilight 0" I said to myself.

Soon we got along very good, I started to like her and her friends, all except for twilight. She never apologized for what she do to me. But I don't know what twilight was nearby and heard everything.

"Really! She apologized to rainbow dash but not me? Two can play this game" she said crossly.

Epilogue

It's been two days since me and twilight are really friends and got along very well and we worked together to her friends out. The next morning as me and twilight are reading a book together.

"You know twilight, life here in Equestria couldn't be better than this" I said.

"I agree, what could ever go wrong" twilight agreed.

But then, we hear the knock on the door.

"I'll get it, I wonder who's at the door" twilight said.

As twilight was opening the door, to see princess celestia outside the door.

"Princess celestia, what brings you here?" Twilight asked.

"My faithful student, I'm here to tell you the good news, I found a way to bring Tracy back home" princess celestia explained.

I was shocked to hear the good news, but I was upset to leave my friends, including twilight.

"But will I see you girls again?" I asked sadly.

"Someday" said twilight then she give me a picture of me, twilight and her friends to me.

"Thanks twilight" I said, then I pulled out a necklace out of my pocket. "Here, you can have my necklace, I made it when I was 8 years old. I want you to have it"

"Thank you Tracy and I shall never forget you" said twilight when she hugged me.

"Me too" I said and then turned to princess celestia. "I'm ready".

Princess celestia nodded and with her magic, she opened the portal to my home. Before I leave, I turned to twilight for one last time.

"Goodbye, twilight sparkle" I said.

"Goodbye, Tracy fondsworth" said twilight.

Soon I entered the portal to my world.

****

I woke up in my room and I looked in my pocket to see a picture of my new friends, including twilight sparkle. Suddenly the phone was ringing, I answered it, it was my boss.

"Where have you been?" He asked.

"Um... I was sick and I forgot to tell you that, I'll be back tomorrow" I explained promised not to tell anyone that where I'm really at.

"Ok and I'll see you tomorrow too." My boss replied.

I hang up, and rest for the night.

I shall never forget my adventures in equestria, my friends and most of all, my best friend twilight sparkle.

THE END

Chapter 2: this means war!

It's been a day later since the incident, I was getting to know twilight's friends.

The blue pegasi was rainbow dash, one of the fastest flyer in Equestria, the white unicorn was rarity who likes to made dresses for the other ponies. The yellow pegasi was Fluttershy, she maybe shy but she was kind and she has a lot of animals, almost reminds me of mother nature, I really like her. The orange earth pony was Applejack, I realized that she's a cowgirl and speak like a southern accent. The pink pony was pinkie pie, she maybe cheerful but she makes me laugh. And lastly spike, twilight's assistant. But he's is a dragon, not a lizard.

As for twilight, I still don't trust her, not one bit and she doesn't trust me either.

****

As I reading a book, I hear a knock on the door. I opened the door two ponies came to the door.

"Can I help you?" I asked.

"I hate to bother you but what are you? We seen you last night with twilight and her friends" one of the ponies asked.

"What? You never seen a human before?" I asked.

The ponies shaking their heads. I'm not very good at explaining things, but I better get twilight for this.

"Hey Twilight! Can you come here to explain these ponies about me please?!" I called out.

"I'm busy!" Twilight yelled crossly.

"Please! I'll be your best friend!" I begged.

"I said I'M BUSY!" Twilight yelled crossly.

I was annoyed with twilight. But then I have an idea.

"If you don't come down here, I'll tell them about your "incident" that I found in your book" I threated.

"FINE!" Twilight yelled angerly.

Soon twilight came down and explained the two ponies about me.

"Works every time" I said to myself.

You wonder how I find that out about her incident? Is from her diary, it was funny.

"Tracy 1, twilight 0" I said.

"What do you mean by that?" Twilight asked crossly.

"Well, I bump into you yesterday as I tried to escape" I explained.

"Well then, this means war" twilight declared.

Looks like she's going to teach me a lesson or two sooner or later.

****

Me and Twilight are on the way to Applejack's sweet apple acres to help out. As we got there, Applejack was waiting for us.

"Well, you two made it. It's time to get to work." Said Applejack.

Soon we got to work. As I carrying apples, somehow I tripped on a log and dropped the apples.

"Your eyes need checking" twilight laughing as she carrying apples to the cart.

"I'll show that unicorn!" I grawed at her.

****

Soon I put my plan into action. As twilight is feeding the pigs, I pushed her into the mud. Twilight was covered in mud, I laughed at her.

Every time we tried to work on Applejack's apple farm, but we sabotage each other: I cause the apples fall on twilight, twilight pushed me into the chicken pen and twilight pushed me into the mud in pig pen. Soon me and Twilight are in a complete mess and no work has been done.

Applejack was very angry at us because our behavior.

"That's it! I have enough, you both can go home and me and my family have handle the rest!" Said Applejack crossly.

Soon we got back to twilight's home and we take turns to take a bath and that night we went to bed without another word.

Chapter 4: turned into stone

Later that day, I was walking around in Ponyville until Applejack, rarity and rainbow dash came up and they were worried.

"Hey you three, what's wrong?" I asked.

"Our little sisters are lost in the everfree forest, we need your help" rarity explained.

"But why can twilight help?" I asked.

"She's very busy, that's why we need your help" applejack said.

Applejack was right, maybe this is my chance to be a hero and teach twilight that I'm better. So I made my decision.

"Alright, I'll help you girls" I said proudly.

Soon we set off to the everfree forest. As we entered the forest, it was scary but I'm not afraid.

Then we hear the brushes moving. as we braced ourselves for what is coming, we saw who is coming out of the brushes, it was rarity, rainbow dash and Applejack's sisters.

"Applebloom, sweetie belle, scootaloo! Thank hoofness you three are ok" said Applejack relief.

"We are" said applebloom.

Then applebloom, sweetie belle and scootaloo look at me with curiosity.

"Who are you?" Sweetie belle asked.

"I'm Tracy and I'm a human" I said.

*A hoo-man?" Scootaloo asked confused.

"A human, oh nevermind" I corrected her and I was embarrassed.

But then their was trouble, out of the brushes was some sort of a weird chicken like creature, half chicken, half monster tail.

"A cockatrice!" Applebloom cried as they looked away.

"You girls are scared of this little thing? What do you think it's going to do? Peck me to death?" I asked laughing.

But not for long, I looked down to see... that I'm turning into stone! I wasn't laughing now.

"GIRLS, HELP! HELP...!" I screamed as I turned into stone.

"TRACY!" They screamed.

****

I woke up and looked around to see... My bedroom?

"Is it just a dream?" I asked myself.

"Nope, it's not Tracy" said a voice.

"Who said that?" I asked as I looked around.

"I did" said the voice.

Then, out of knowhere was a strange looking creature that I never seen before.

"Who are you?" I asked.

"I am discord the draconequus" said the creature.

"But how do you know my name and where are we?" I asked curiously.

"I'm the lord of chaos, I know every creatures of equestria and to answer your last question, where in a place called "in stone" my dear Tracy" discord explained.

I was shocked. I hope Applejack and her friends go get help and save me from this.

"But why are you here?" I asked.

"I was trapped here because I cause chaos in Ponyville. Some ponies don't have a since of humor." Said discord.

"Well some ponies don't think it's funny but it's not too late to change your ways" I said.

But discord rolled his eyes was annoyed.

"If you say so" said discord annoyed.

But then I was starting to glow all around me.

"What's happening?" I asked scared.

"You're have been revived from stone" discord replied.

"Okay and remember what I said, it's not too late to redeem yourself" I said as I vanished to thin air.

"Looks like I'm all alone again" discord sighed.

****

I woke up to see that I'm back in twilight's house.

"Are you alright Tracy?" Spike asked.

"I'm okay. Thanks twilight, I guess" I said.

"You're welcome and by away twilight 2, Tracy 2" said twilight with a smirk.

"What do you mean?" I asked angrily.

"Well, you didn't listen to my friends warning and you was turned into stone by a cockatrice." Twilight explained.

Well next time, I better listen and twilight is really getting on my nerves.

Chapter 5: fallen out

The next morning, I woke up from my guest room. I got dressed and I thought that I should read a book about dragons. As I was on my way to get a book, I see spike struggling with a book on the bookshelf.

"Do you need help spike?" I asked.

"No, I got it. Just need to..." Spike replied.

But as he pull hard on the top shelf, he slipped and fell. Lucky I caught him just in time.

"Thanks" said spike relief.

"No problem" I said.

But then their was trouble, the books on the top shelf starting to fall down. I pushed spike out of the way just in time before the books fell on me. Twilight hurried down to see what it happened. She saw spike knocked out and me appeared in the books.

"I knew you can't be trusted!" Twilight yelled angry.

"Wait! This it not how it looks, I was..." I tried to explain but twilight won't listen.

"No excuses! Get out of my house, NOW!" Twilight yelled hatefully as she used her magic to lift me and throw me out of her house.

"And don't come back!" She added and slammed the door.

I was very upset, so I run away somewhere that no pony will never see me again. I didn't know that Fluttershy, rainbow dash and the others have seen and heard everything.

****

It's been 6 hours of hiking and I was on the snowy mountains. It was was very cold out but I kept going. As I was on the half way on top of the mountains, I began to hear something or somepony.

"Tracy!" The voice cried.

I've must be hearing things or I'm losing my mind because of the cold.

"Tracy! It's me, twilight!" The voice yelled.

Oh great, twilight is here to harass me, I have no time for this. So I ignore her and kept going.

"I'm sorry Tracy, I really am! I didn't know that you saved spike from the fallen books!" Said twilight sadly.

"And that makes it alright, does it?" I asked crossly.

"No! I shouldn't chained you up when we first met and I should have been nice and be a better friend to you like princess celestia said! Tracy please! I'm sorry!" Twilight begged for forgiveness.

I stopped and thought for a moment. I can't believe that she apologizing to me.

"Do you really mean that twilight?" I asked.

"Yes Tracy, I do! Said twilight.

But then their was trouble, and avalanche was coming down on me and I was swept away and I was hanging on for dear life on the edge.

"Hold on Tracy! I'm coming!" Twilight cried as she got a rope from her sattle bag and tossed it to me.

"Ready?! I'm going to pull you up now, ok?" She asked.

"Are you sure twilight? Maybe you should wait for help" I said unsure.

"Don't worry Tracy! I've got us into this mess. I can do this by myself!" Said twilight as she pulled me to safety.

But then their was more trouble, more rocks underneath me and starting to give way and I was falling!

"TWILIGHT, HELP!" I screamed.

"I CAN'T HOLD YOU! HELP!" Twilight screamed.

As twilight was about to slip, her friends arrived to help just in time.

"Hold on! We're coming! We got you!" Applejack cried as she and her friends grabbed the rope.

And together, they manage to pull me to safety from the edge.

"Thank you girls, I owe you" I said.

"I'm glad we came along to help" said rainbow dash.

"Oh Tracy, I should not ever try to rescue you by myself, it was really dangerous. I needed help" said twilight.

"Everypony needed help sometimes twilight, even me and we're all save and sound" I said.

"And Tracy, I'm sorry for everything when we first met, can you forgive me?" Twilight apologized.

"I forgive you and I'm sorry too. So, are we friends?" I apologize too.

Soon we he hug it out and all of us headed back to twilight's home. And now our rivalry has ended.

I'm doing a sequel

Hi everyone and everypony, today I'm going to do a sequel to this. It's called "teenage girl in equestria"

About the story:
It's been 22 years since Tracy fondsworth had adventures in equestria and she has a daughter named misty fondsworth.

Misty noticed her mom's drawings of ponies. Later that night when she at a forest, she discovered Applejack. Soon Applejack took misty to equestria and meet her friends.

On the far side of equestria, there was an evil unicorn with a hydraulic claw name Alfred west, he along with his minions wants to take over equestria.

It's up to misty, her mother and her mother's old friends, even twilight sparkle to save equestria from the evil threat.

Coming soon to fimfiction on huskylover stories.