INSANITY

by Elk1

I WILL RETURN

Previous Chapter

The silence was absolute, broken only by the faint hum of magic that lingered in the stone shell encasing Twilight Sparkle. It was a stillness she could neither see nor escape, a void where time lost all meaning. She was frozen but not defeated. Her body was encased in stone, but her mind remained sharp, burning with purpose.

She didn’t bother asking herself anymore why she had faltered. Why she had hesitated. Those thoughts had run their course in the early days of her imprisonment. Now, there was only resolve. Twilight Sparkle, the mare who had once believed in friendship above all else, was gone. What remained was a force of will that refused to break.

I stopped asking myself why I even considered sparing Celestia, she thought bitterly. That coward… she couldn’t face the consequences, so she locked me away instead. She always was good at running from the truth.

Her mind replayed the scene again and again, like a nightmare she couldn’t escape. The look of fear on Flurry Heart’s face. The tears in Cadence’s eyes. The heartbreak in Luna’s voice. And above all, the cold, calculating indifference of Celestia as she cast her spell.

Coward, Twilight thought, the word searing like fire through her mind. You’ve won for now, but you won’t keep me here forever. No spell lasts forever. No prison is eternal.

She closed her metaphorical eyes, letting her thoughts swirl into focus. If she were to endure this timeless abyss, she would not do so passively. She would plan. She would prepare. And when the day came that the stone cracked and she emerged, the world would know her fury.

But before she let herself rest, there was something she needed to do. One final gesture, a small act of defiance to remind Celestia that she was not beaten. Not truly.


A faint spark of magic glimmered in Twilight’s mind. It was weak, barely enough to manifest beyond her stone prison, but it would suffice. Slowly, carefully, she shaped it into a single spell. A quill and parchment appeared in the void of her thoughts, floating weightlessly in the darkness.

The quill scratched against the paper, its strokes deliberate and venomous.


Dear Princess Celestia,

You defeated the threat again. You must be so proud. Or are you?

Are you proud of what you’ve done? Of how you’ve “saved” Equestria yet again? Or does it taste bitter, knowing the threat this time was your own student?

Are you afraid, Celestia? Afraid because I was stronger than you? Because I forced you to act in a way you never wanted your ponies to see? Does it haunt you that your precious mask of benevolence cracked, revealing the coward underneath?

Or are you ashamed? Ashamed because you only struck when I was at my weakest, too distracted to fight back. Ashamed because even then, you didn’t have the courage to face me alone.

I hope you’re ashamed. I hope it eats at you every day, the way your betrayal eats at me.

You are a coward, Celestia. Always have been, always will be. You hide behind others, sending ponies to fight your battles. You paint yourself as the noble leader, but when it comes down to it, you can’t even confront your own mistakes. Instead, you locked me away, thinking that would solve your problems.

It won’t.

I’ll be back, Celestia. One day, this stone will crack, and I will emerge stronger than ever. I will return, and when I do, you’ll know a world of hurt. You will pay for what you’ve done.

Until then, enjoy your hollow victory. I’ll be watching.

Your ~~faithful~~ hateful student,
Twilight Sparkle =)


The letter dissolved into a wisp of magic, vanishing into the void. Twilight knew it would find its way to Celestia. She could almost picture the look on her former mentor’s face when it arrived. The flicker of guilt. The flash of fear.

It brought a small, grim smile to her mind.

With that, Twilight allowed herself to retreat into the stillness. She would rest, but only for a while. She would dream, but not of happy memories. No, she would dream of her return, of the day when she would rise from the ashes and take back everything that had been stolen from her.

And when that day came, Celestia would regret the moment she chose to turn her back on her most faithful student.

The smoke sits before me, as if mocking my loss. It thinks it knows me. Well I think I know what it wants. Don’t worry… I’ll have a lot more when I’m back.

I will return.


Author's Note

It is done :duck:

Let me know if you would like to see more of this story (Prequel or sequel)

Also this is my tenth story, woohoo! I’ve had so much fun writing over the past couple weeks, although they have been short, the ideas that had been coupled up for so long finally flowed! And now I get to share them with you. Thank you!