INSANITY

by Elk1

10,000 YEARS. ALONE.

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Celestia kept Twilight in her quarters as she recovered. Well, "recovered" was a strong word. Twilight would probably never be the same. She sat quietly on a pillow on the floor, staring at nothing. Celestia spoke to her often, but Twilight never responded. Occasionally, she would look up, her gaze hollow, as if she were looking past Celestia rather than at her. It was clear she wasn’t truly present, but Celestia continued to try.

“Twilight, please listen to me,” Celestia pleaded softly one evening. She sat close to her former student, her heart aching as she watched the broken alicorn. Twilight looked up at her, but her expression remained blank, her eyes unfocused. Celestia sighed, fighting the growing despair in her chest.

A knock at the door interrupted her thoughts. “Sister? Are you in there?” Luna’s voice called from the hallway.

“Yes, Luna. I’m trying to... help Twilight,” Celestia replied.

Luna entered cautiously, her gaze immediately falling on Twilight. The sight still unsettled her, though the initial horror had dulled over time. Twilight’s physical condition had improved slightly—her mane, though uneven, had been trimmed and cleaned, and her horn had been carefully filed to remove the jagged edges. Despite their best efforts, she still refused to eat or drink, leaving her frail and weak.

Luna sighed deeply as she approached. “She’s better than she was, physically at least. But...” She trailed off, unable to find the words.

Celestia nodded, her eyes never leaving Twilight. “But her mind is gone. She’s still trapped in that cell, even if her body isn’t.”

Luna hesitated before speaking again. “Sister, do you think...” She stopped, swallowing hard. “Do you think 10,000 years was too harsh?”

Celestia didn’t respond immediately. She didn’t need to. The guilt in her eyes said everything. Finally, she spoke, her voice barely a whisper. “I don’t think. I know. Nopony deserves this... not even Twilight. Her crimes were terrible, yes, but this? This was beyond punishment. It was cruelty.”

Luna lowered her head, her heart heavy. “What can we do for her now?”

“I don’t know,” Celestia admitted. “I’ve tried everything. Talking to her, playing music, reminding her of the good days... but it’s like she’s not there. Her body is here, but her soul... it’s somewhere else. Lost.”

Luna glanced at Twilight again, who hadn’t moved the entire time. Her once brilliant lavender coat was still dull, and her wings remained limp at her sides. The spark that had defined Twilight—her endless curiosity, her love for her friends—was extinguished.

“Do you think she knows who we are?” Luna asked softly.

Celestia’s voice was thick with emotion. “I don’t know. Sometimes I think she recognizes me. She looks at me like she’s trying to remember something, but it’s fleeting. It’s like trying to catch smoke.”

Luna stepped closer to Twilight, lowering herself to the mare’s eye level. “Twilight? Can you hear me?” she asked gently.

Twilight’s head tilted slightly, and for a brief moment, her eyes seemed to focus. She opened her mouth as if to speak, but no sound came out. Then, just as quickly as it had come, the moment passed, and her gaze drifted away.

Luna’s heart ached. She reached out a hoof, hesitating before lightly touching Twilight’s shoulder. Twilight flinched, a tiny movement, but enough to make Luna pull back. “She’s afraid,” Luna whispered.

“She’s more than afraid,” Celestia said. “She’s broken. And it’s my fault.”

Luna frowned. “Sister, you made a mistake. A terrible one. But wallowing in guilt will not help her. We must focus on what we can do now.”

“And what can we do, Luna?” Celestia’s voice was tinged with desperation. “Tell me, because I don’t know. I’ve tried everything I can think of, and nothing works. She’s slipping further away, and I can’t stop it.”

Luna was silent for a moment, her mind racing. Then an idea began to form. “What if we took her somewhere familiar? Somewhere that might remind her of who she was?”

Celestia looked at Luna, hope flickering in her eyes. “You think that might help?”

“I don’t know,” Luna admitted. “But it’s worth a try. Sitting here isn’t helping her. Maybe if we take her back to Ponyville... to the castle... it might spark something.”

Celestia hesitated. “Ponyville has changed so much. The castle is a ruin now. Do you think it will matter?”

Luna’s gaze was steady. “It’s not about the place itself, but the memories tied to it. If anything can reach her, it’s the connection she had to her friends and her home.”

Celestia looked down at Twilight, who remained unmoving on the pillow. She reached out with her magic, gently lifting the frail alicorn into the air. Twilight didn’t resist, but her body trembled slightly.

“Alright,” Celestia said, her voice firm. “We’ll try.”


The journey to Ponyville was somber. Celestia and Luna traveled in a quiet chariot, Twilight resting on a cushioned bench between them. She didn’t react to the movement or the change in scenery, her eyes remaining unfocused as the world passed by.

When they arrived, the town was unrecognizable. Modern buildings had replaced the quaint cottages, and ponies bustled about, unaware of the ancient history tied to their home. The Castle of Friendship stood in ruins on the outskirts, its once-glorious spires now crumbling and overgrown with vines.

Celestia and Luna guided Twilight toward the ruins, their steps slow and deliberate. As they approached, Celestia felt a pang of nostalgia. She remembered the day she had gifted the castle to Twilight, how bright her student’s eyes had been, filled with wonder and pride.

“Twilight,” Celestia said softly, “we’re here. Do you remember this place?”

Twilight’s eyes flickered, a faint glimmer of recognition passing through them. She blinked slowly, her gaze settling on the broken remains of the castle. Her lips moved, but no sound came out.

Luna stepped closer. “Take your time, Twilight. You’re safe here.”

Twilight took a shaky step forward, her hooves unsteady on the uneven ground. She looked around, her expression blank but her movements deliberate. Celestia and Luna watched in silence, their hearts pounding as they waited for a sign, any sign, that Twilight was still in there.

Finally, Twilight stopped in front of what had once been the throne room. She stared at the six stone thrones, now cracked and weathered by time. Her hoof lifted, trembling, as she pointed at one of the thrones.

“That... was mine,” she whispered, her voice hoarse and barely audible.

Celestia’s breath caught. “Yes, Twilight. It was yours. And your friends sat with you.”

Twilight’s eyes filled with tears, the first true emotion she had shown in millennia. She sank to the ground, her body wracked with silent sobs. Celestia rushed to her side, wrapping her wings around her former student.

“I’m so sorry, Twilight,” Celestia whispered, her own tears falling freely. “For everything. I’m so sorry.”

Twilight didn’t respond, but she leaned into Celestia’s embrace, her sobs gradually subsiding. Luna stood nearby, her heart heavy but hopeful. It was a small step, but it was a step nonetheless.

Perhaps, just perhaps, there was a way back from the darkness.

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