Dance of Love

by Brony-wan-kenobi

Rating: mature
Tags: Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Tender Taps, Porn, Sex
Length: 4189

Twilight is in love with a colt named Tender Taps

A forbidden love between a princess and a dance student. That is the situation that Twilight finds herself in as she visits the home of the one who has stolen her heart. Will things proceed the way she hopes? Or will their relationship be put on pause?

Commission for anon
Edited by the great Javarod, tips appreciated

Published 2025-01-18 12:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2025-01-18 12:00:01 UTC

The story

“Thank you for agreeing to meet with me,” said Twilight Sparkle, one of the four Princesses of Equestria and resident of Ponyville, as she sat down within the home of Tender Taps, her young coltfriend.

Said young colt was seated next to her, though she would have liked to have him be a bit closer and a bit more affectionate like he normally was. To have his orange coat pressed against her own, to feel the tickle of his slicked back purple mane as it brushed against her fur. Or what it felt like to look down at those wide purple eyes filled with admiration and love for her alone. Of course, if she were in that position right now, it would have been hard to control the urge to lean down and kiss him. Now wasn’t the right time.

For a moment, Twilight felt the sides of her lips curl upwards into a smile as she thought about how this had all begun. If you had asked her a year ago if she would ever fall in love with a pony the same age as her friends’ little sisters, Princess Twilight would have called them crazy! Though, back then when Tender Taps had approached her to volunteer to help her in the library since Spike was going to spend more time in the Dragon Lands those eyes only held admiration. Well that and a bit of a crush. Honestly, it was kind of funny when the situation happened. She was so used to seeing it from the outside whenever Spike looked at Rarity. But to have it happen to her? It honestly flew her through one of Rainbow Dash’s loop tricks.

…Minus needing to use her magic to avoid crashing into the ground. Long story there.

Keeping with the Rarity comparison, Twilight had allowed Tender Taps to help. Though, unlike the prim and proper unicorn, she wasn’t making Tender Taps do anything that would put a strain on his body. Nor did she have any intention of leading him on for longer than she necessary. She would allow him to spend time with her and, hopefully, as he saw more of her, whatever fantasy version of her he held would be destroyed. Especially when he saw her eating habits. That had been enough to scare away her last couple romantic partners. But, if he still seemed oblivious to it all, she would sit him down before explaining why this wouldn’t work in the best way she could.

There was only one problem with this plan: she began to develop feelings for the colt. And not like an older sister! She found him to be very dutiful, hard working, and more mature than his actual age let on. And the way he looked at her, not as somepony to bed just so they could laugh about it with their bros or to elevate themselves into royalty but rather somepony precious, was a welcome change. Not to mention that Tender took all her little faults without a single eye roll. Including a certain dish that shall not be named!

When their relationship began, it was mainly kept behind closed doors. Sure, Twilight would head out to see Tender Taps whenever he was giving an onstage performance in the town square or in some of the larger neighborhood using the excuse that she’s a friend and mentor to the colt. But when it was just the two of them with the doors locked (as well as a special anti-Pinkie Pie barrier that Twilight had created with the help of Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, and Princess Cadence to ensure private moments wouldn’t be ruined by the random pink pony), they could be more open with their feelings. Like how Twilight could give Tender Taps a nice, long kiss as a reward for doing such a good job with his dance moves. Or how Tender could express how beautiful he thought she was. Even going as far as saying that Twilight’s beauty outshined Princess Celestia. A bit cheesy in her opinion, but still very sweet.

Yet, as time grew, the two knew that they wanted more than these secret and private moments. Neither one wanted to act in a way that might suggest that they were ashamed of loving the other. To no longer keep it a secret. That, as well as move on to the next logical step.

Which was why Twilight was here in Tender Taps home, sitting across from his parents ready to knock down two hydra heads with one stone.

“It’s no trouble Princess,” said the colt’s father: Rhythm Step. He was a slender stallion with a yellow coat and a purple mane that reminded Twilight of his son’s. But despite his slender build, he had well defined legs that were very impressive.

“Now, what do we owe this honor to?” cooed a slightly plump mare with a red coat and a curly white mane as she walked over to her seat. Or, tried to as she seemed to stumble on her own hooves more than once. Though, from what Twilight had seen before, that was common for Twinkle Toes. Then, as she sat down, a sudden look of worry appeared on her face. “Unless this isn’t an honor! Dear, what if we did something wrong to offend the Princesses?!? Or did something happen? Did nopony like the dish I prepared for the Summer Sun Festival? I’m sorry it was store bought but I was just too busy to make something myself!”

“No, no. Nothing is wrong!” exclaimed Twilight, raising a hoof while extending her wings as it looked like Twinkle Toes was about to have a full on meltdown. Thankfully, the mare seemed to recover quickly with a small ‘Oh’ being her only words before the tears receded back into her eyes. Seeing that one crisis had been nipped in the flank, she looked down at Tender Taps. After all, these were his parents and they were in this together. So she wanted him to participate as well.

“Well, ah,” began Tender, looking a little bit nervous as the eyes of his parents fell on him. For a moment, Twilight feared that her coltfriend would get cold hooves but he managed to gather his courage quickly enough. “I brought Twilight here because I wanted to tell you both something. I’m…I’m in love with a mare and she loves me back.”

“Oh isn’t that nice!” exclaimed Twinkle Toes as she began clapping her forehooves together with a joyous look. Though, as she did this, Rhythm Steps eyes began to move from his son to Twilight clearly putting the pieces together. And as his wife continued to talk, the stallion of the home remained silent as if waiting for them to confirm what he had already figured out with a neutral expression on his face. “It’s so wonderful that you found a darling filly all of your own. Oh, where did you two meet? I bet it was in Twilight’s castle since you seem to spend so much time there these days. Oh, I can’t wait to meet the little darling. But, Tender, you should have brought her here rather than the Princess. I know how important it is to have moral support but-”

“Actually, mom, Twilight is the mare I’m in love with,” interrupted Tender Taps.

“…What?” was all Twinkle Toes could say, her mouth hanging open as she looked between Tender and Twilight.

“It’s true,” replied Twilight as she extended a wing to wrap around the colt seated next to her. “We wanted to let you know as well as asking for permission for Tender to live with me from now on.”

“That…That…What?” was all Twinkle could say while Rhythm closed his eyes and nodded in understanding. Then, Twinkle seemed to recompose herself. “Princess, please I’m…I’m flattered that you’ve taken an interest in our colt. But, ah, there is a bit of an age difference between the two of you.”

“Yes, we are aware,” replied Twilight with a nod. “However, neither of us believes it’s an issue in the long run.” It was a simple statement, but the tone Twilight carried held its own weight. She had considered this back when they developed feelings for each other yet, in the end, neither of them found that it mattered.

“Dear,” said Rhythm, speaking for the first time in a while. “Remember, we had moved in with each other when we were Tender’s age.” At that, Twinkle’s cheeks became bright pink as she looked away while Tender did his best not to shudder while keeping out thoughts of what they had done back then.

Then, Rhythm took a deep breath before focusing his attention on Twilight who stiffened slightly. “Princess, I first want to say that I trust you,” he began. “Since the day you came to Ponyville, you have defended this town from just about every threat imaginable. You didn’t always succeed, but you still put your life on the line for us. So I know you would never do anything that would hurt my son.” The stallion then held up his hoof when he noticed Tender beginning to smile. “But with that said, can you promise that our son will be safe when the next threat comes? I’m sure you are aware that as time has gone on, these threats to our town and Equestria either do or will eventually target you. Once word gets out that you have somepony special in your life, and believe me it will get out sooner rather than later, that you’re next foe may target our son to get to you.”

Twilight was silent for a moment, chewing on her bottom lip as she decided how best to answer this. This was a factor in another previous relationship breakup she had in the past, when his paranoia about being attacked at any moment by beings who could drain you of all your magic and manipulate reality like it was silly putty became too great. He had left, only leaving a two sentence note. Thankfully, she and Tender had spoken about this. So, in the end, she guessed the best she could do was telling Rhythm the truth.

“I wish I could say there is nothing to worry about,” replied Twilight. “But, the truth is that no matter what I do, no matter what spells I learn or how many guards I acquire, there will always be a chance that it won’t be enough. All I can do is promise that when that day comes I will be by his side and do everything in my power to make sure Tender will be ok. That as well as being there for him when the danger passes as I’m sure he’ll be there for me.”

Rhythm let out a hum before turning his gaze over to his son. “And you are ok with this Tender?” asked the stallion.

“I am,” replied Tender without missing a beat nor without a hint of doubt in his voice.

“Alright then,” said Rhythm with a nod, a smile slowly appearing on his face. “As long as you both know what you’re getting into, you have my permission and blessing. Besides, there has to be some perks to having a princess as a daughter in law.”

“Ah, future daughter in law,” corrected Twilight with a blush while Tender nodded quickly. “We’re not ready to make things that official with a ceremony at Canterlot Castle and-”

“By Celestia, we’re going to be related to nobility!” exclaimed Twinkle Toes with a gasp. “Oh this is…I never thought about it like that! I mean, who wouldn’t be proud of their son for getting engaged to a Princess! Not that it’s that important, but still. Maybe after you two tie the knot we can come over for tea with Princess Celestia. And we’ll have to meet with your brother and Princess Cadence. I’m sure you’re planning on telling them next!”

“Oh, we already told them,” said Twilight as she looked away, seeming a little abashed as she recalled the conversation. Thankfully, her parents were more than thrilled to know that Twilight had found somepony she was willing to settle down with. Heck, with Cadence there, she was able to confirm just how strong the love Twilight and Tender shared which put so many worries to bed before they could even be brought up. Thus making the whole reveal go all the more smoothly.

The only problem was Shining Armor.

Meanwhile, at the home of Twilight’s parents…

“NNOOO TWILY! YOU CAN’T BE GETTING MARRIED!” wailed Shining Armor. Said stallion had his forehooves pressed against his head as he rolled back and forth on the living room floor of his parent’s house. His eyes were bloodshot and his voice, despite being so loud, showed signs that his throat was getting a little sore. No doubt due to all the screaming he had been doing for the last couple of days when Twilight brought Tender to meet them.

“Maybe one of us should stop him,” said Velvet from the other room, looking down at her son with a frown.

“Oh, just leave him be,” replied Cadence with a wave of her hoof. “He has to get over this sooner or later. Trust me, it’s best just to let him get it out of his system otherwise he might do something crazy.” The pink alicorn then blushed. “Er, crazier.”

It took a few days for the move to be finished. Normally, Twilight could have done it in an instant using her magic to just teleport everything to her castle. Or asked her friends and it would have been done in maybe twenty-four minutes. However, the couple went slowly to give Tender’s parents the time they needed to say their goodbyes while not feeling like they were rushing to get him out. This meant having a few family dinners together with Twinkle Toes sobbing how her ‘little colt’ was growing up so fast as well as a few stallion to colt conversations from Rhythm. Of course, Twilight had been invited to all of these dinners so they could ask her some more questions as well as getting to know her more personally.

Not that Twilight minded. While she was perfectly capable of cooking meals for herself, what she made didn’t even compare to what Spike made while he was still here.

But, eventually, Tender’s things were moved into the castle. Once they were, the pair spent a small portion of the afternoon figuring out where to put them. Not that it was hard as Twilight had more than enough room. She barely even used half of her closet! So placing a few things here and there was not that much of a big deal.

What had been a big deal was the surprise waiting for Tender after they moved everything in. Since Twilight had so much free space and rarely used her own royal funds, she had commissioned one of the rooms to be turned into a dance studio of the colt so he could practice on his own. To say Tender was excited by this was an understatement as he had to try it out as soon as possible, pulling a laughing Twilight along with him. There they danced, er, Tender danced and Twilight thrashed around like an enraged bull for what seemed like hours.

“That was fun,” exclaimed Tender once the dancing was done as he and Twilight returned to their now shared chambers.

“It was,” agreed Twilight as she watched her coltfriend jump right up onto the large bed. While they were both a little sweaty, Twilight didn’t mind as its scent was not at all unpleasant. In fact, breathing it in within this now enclosed space was stirring parts of herself.

Slowly, Twilight got onto the bed next to Tender. “I’m really glad you’re here,” she then whispered, her voice turning a little husky. “And that we don’t have to say goodbye.” As she spoke, Twilight saw how Tender shuddered slightly due to her words yet kept his gaze locked with her own. Then, without a word, their eyes softly narrowed to become half lidded as they shortened the distance between them. All too soon they could feel the other’s warm breath on the others lips before the first kiss of the night began.

The kiss began with them just pressing their lips against the others. Then, Tender made the first move as he opened his mouth so that his tongue could press against the older mare’s lips and teeth. Asking for permission without ever needing to say a word and break the comfortable silence that they shared. Twilight obliged him, opening her mouth to feel his tongue slide in slowly. The alicorn let out a throaty moan as she heard his tongue making slick noises within her mouth as he moved it along her own before pressing it against the roof. Needy noises escaped them both, wrapping their forehooves around the other while their bodies began to grind against the other in pure need. Pure desire for the other.

Twilight could no longer hold back as her tongue joined his in a dance. Her jaw opened just a little wider, making it so that should anypony enter they would be able to see the two tongues thrashing around the other. They would be able to see them coiling around as pants and moans escaped from the couple’s throats. How her tongue dwarfed his own before entering his mouth.

As this went on, Twilight’s horn lit up and a moment later a purple aura surrounded Tender’s cock. She had felt the stiff member pressing against her belly since they had begun making out, filling her with glee that she could arouse him like this. Even his pre-cum which was now sticking to her coat was just another turn on. But, she knew she could make him feel better. Using one of the skills she had learned in one of her past relationships, she used her magic to stroke Tender’s rod. If this bothered him or set off alarm bells, the colt didn’t show it. In fact, he just deepened the kiss as much as possible.

Without deactivating her magic, Twilight broke the kiss. Slowly she pulled away Tender, allowing a couple strands of saliva to connect them and watched them break before positioning them so she was on top. She stared at him with those half lidded eyes, his similar expression focused right back on her, as the alicorn’s mouth moved to his neck. Tender let out a shuddering breath as he felt her lips press and suck there before moving down. The colt had to crane his neck up as she moved downward, kissing and licking the underside of his coat while her magic continued to gently stroke him. It was enough to make the young colt thrash a bit.

With agonizingly pleasurable slowness, Twilight made her way to her target. With her hooves she spread the colt’s hind legs apart so she could be in between them, looking at Tender’s member. Slowly she lowered her head towards his balls, running a tongue along the surface to taste the saltiness they provided and causing her eyes to flutter. At the same time she could feel Tender’s forelegs pressing against the bed as he did his best to hold on for as long as possible. It was sweet of him doing his best to hold on and not explode.

“Just do your best to hold on,” whispered Twilight, her breath felt on Tender’s dick.

“I’ll…I’ll try,” gasped Tender before his hooves pressed against the bed once more as Twilight’s tongue moved to action once more. With a slow lick, she started at the base of his balls, taking in that mouth watering salty flavor that made her moan. She then made her way upwards along Tender’s shaft causing the colt to moan more loudly than before. She could see the muscles in his legs tensing more as she paused, wrapping her tongue around to lick the sides in smaller and quicker licks. Pre-cum was flowing more readily, signaling his need for release but still he held on with all his might.

When Twilight got to the head of his cock, she did not twirl her tongue around the flat surface as she could tell he would blow sooner than she wanted to if she did that. Instead she took the member into her mouth. It was an impressive cock of a colt, certainly bigger than she expected and would only grow more in time. But, with that said, it was still the cock of a colt who just got his cutie mark. Meaning that it could easily fit in her mouth. Not that this fact dis-swayed her from giving it her all as her mouth bobbed up and down while sucking. And, in a few minutes, Tender could hold on no longer and shot a heavy load into her mouth.

Smiling at her coltfriend who was still on his back panting, Twilight pulled her mouth off the already deflating cock while doing her best to not swallow or let a drop of the precious gift leave her. When she did, she slowly moved up his body again, allowing the white seed to sway along her tongue as a blissful expression remained on her face. It wasn’t until her marehood was right above his face that she swallowed.

“How about you return the favor?” she asked softly.

“But I don’t,” began Tender.

“It’s ok,” whispered Twilight, feeling extra horny as she felt the eyes of her lover staring at her most intimate spot. “Just treat it like you would my mouth. We’ll have more time to practice later.”

That seemed to do the trick as Tender’s head leaned upwards so that his lips pressed against her dripping folds. The princess let out a sigh of delight as she felt his tongue probing her, pushing past her lower lips to enter her passage. Like his cock, his tongue was small and still growing making it less impressive than some of the toys she had over the years. But, that did not distract from the fervor and passion he put in that those toys lacked. It moved around, searching with all its might trying to fight a spot that would bring pleasure to the mare. And when Twilight moaned or ground her sex against his face a little more, he knew he had found what he was looking for. In those moments, Tender pressed and twirled his tongue more in those areas doing his best to bring Twilight the same level of delight that he had.

Well, before he drowned in mare juices.

After a while, Twilight looked back to find that Tender’s cock was rock hard once more. Seeing this, she knew Tender had recovered enough for the big event. Something she was ready for as well, denying it from herself for far too long. If they were both ready, why wait any longer.

With this, Twilight slid off Tender’s face as she moved to the head of the bed. Before she got to her pillow, she turned around to see Tender had rolled over and was just staring at her. Smiling, Twilight raised her tail so he could see her twitching, winking sex while also sending a whiff of her aroma towards him. That got that young colt on his hooves. As he approached her. Twilight laid down with her head on her pillow and her tail moved to the side giving him the best access she could.

Twilight didn’t have to wait long as she felt his cock pressing against her folds mere moments later. A sultry groan escaped her, closing her eyes as she felt his member pressing into her doing its best to gain entry. His hard work paid off as she then felt his cock move past her lower lips and entered the birthing passage.

She could feel Tender throwing back his head as he entered her, the walls of her sex pressing against his member. The warmth that surrounded his cock was no doubt intense, something she knew from experience when she used that one futa spell on herself to fuck Applejack. His hips then began to buck wildly, all of his previous self control gone as he instead embraced his primal wants. And soon, he came.

“Sorry,” he said as he pulled out, the small amount of cum he had deposited inside her dripping out. “I couldn’t make you.”

Twilight silenced him as her magic aura pressed against his lips. “I enjoyed every second of it,” she said honestly. “It’s your first time and, trust me, you did much better than most.”

“Thanks,” replied Tender as he moved next to her, smiling a little.

“And it’s not like you’re never going to get another chance,” continued Twilight, a slight smile on her face. “In fact, we’re going to keep going at this for a long time to come.” That made the colt extra happy.