REGRET (Good Ending)

by Elk1

STUDENT OF THE SUN

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I found the castle.

It was worse than I had imagined.

The Castle of Friendship, my once-pristine sanctuary, was a ruin of its former glory. The crystalline walls were cracked, their once-dazzling luster dulled by centuries of neglect. Vines and moss crept up its jagged sides, reclaiming the structure for the wilderness. Windows were shattered, their colorful depictions of harmony and friendship lost to time.

But it was still standing. Barely.

I stepped through the crumbling doorway into what was once the main hall. Dust swirled in the air, catching the faint sunlight that filtered through broken panes. The air was heavy with the scent of decay and abandonment, but beneath it all, there was something… familiar.

The memories came rushing back—laughter, lessons, the warmth of my friends by my side. I could almost hear their voices echoing through the empty halls. It was overwhelming, and for a moment, I couldn’t move. My chest felt tight as the weight of everything I had lost crashed over me.

I took a deep breath, forcing myself to steady. No more tears, Twilight. Not anymore.

This castle, broken as it was, could be fixed. It would be my project, my sanctuary, my penance. I couldn’t undo the past, but I could at least rebuild this one piece of it.


For the first time in what felt like forever, I made a decision not rooted in vengeance. I would stay here, in the ruins of my old life, and try to live again. I would learn about this strange new world that had grown and changed in my absence.

But I would do it alone.

I had no right to walk among others, to seek connection or forgiveness. Not yet. Maybe not ever. I would banish myself to this castle, not as punishment, but as an opportunity to reflect. Guilt weighed heavily on me, an unbearable force that no amount of magic could dispel.

Celestia.

She had done this to me.

Even in death, she left me broken and lost, without a path forward. She had put me in a position I could never recover from, and for that, I cursed her name.

“Damn you, Celestia,” I whispered to the empty hall. “Damn you.”

But my words rang hollow. Deep down, I knew the truth: my downfall was my own doing. Celestia may have played her part, but my choices had led me here. My anger, my obsession, my refusal to listen to reason.

I sighed, my shoulders sagging as the fire within me dimmed. It was time to rest.

I would gather what I needed—food, books, supplies—and return to this castle. I would repair it, piece by piece, and in doing so, perhaps I could begin to repair myself.


Luna sat alone in the throne room, staring out at the night sky. Twilight’s sudden return had shaken her, but for now, all was quiet. Twilight had vanished into the world, and as long as she remained docile, Luna decided she could wait.

But waiting wasn’t enough.

Twilight’s return was a reminder of how easily the past could resurface, how fragile the peace they had worked so hard to build truly was. Luna couldn’t afford to be complacent. She needed to prepare, not just for Twilight, but for the challenges the future would undoubtedly bring.

“I know what to do,” she whispered to herself, a flicker of determination igniting in her chest.

She needed a student.

Someone to carry on the lessons of harmony, someone to help guide Equestria in this uncertain era. A new generation of leaders was emerging, and they would need guidance—guidance Luna could provide.

“She will be trained by me,” Luna continued, her voice gaining strength. “And hopefully, Cadence will help as well.”

Cadence had retired from her royal duties years ago, leaving the Crystal Empire in the capable hooves of Princess Flurry Heart. She rarely visited Canterlot these days, preferring the quiet life she had built for herself. But Luna was hopeful that her old friend could be persuaded to lend her wisdom, even from afar.

Luna rose from her seat, her mind racing with possibilities. She would find a worthy student, someone who could be the beacon of hope and harmony Equestria needed. Someone who could carry the lessons of the past into the future.

But as she left the throne room, a shadow of doubt lingered in her mind.

Twilight Sparkle was still out there, and her intentions were unclear. Could she truly remain docile? Or was her silence merely the calm before the storm?

Luna couldn’t say for certain, but she knew one thing: she would be ready.


Author's Note

So, I’m doing something I have never done before. I want you to comment below if you would like to see your OC in the story, in the next chapter. In chapter 4: STUDENT OF THE MOON, Your character will be the student of Luna, like Twilight was to Celestia. I will check in on the comments tomorrow afternoon. (Send name and short description of the character you would like to see.)

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