Was it Destiny?

by Elk1

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Rarity, Tragedy, Death, Alternate Universe, Sad, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1067

Maybe she should’ve taken this life a little more seriously

Rarity staggered back as she watched the home intruder walk away. The stallion scoured the house, but that wasn’t the problem. Sweetie Bell had gotten away, but Rarity wasn’t so lucky. She looked at the knife that punctured her chest as she laid back against a wall.

(I felt like writing sad stuff sooooo)

Published 2025-01-20 23:40:00 UTC
Last updated 2025-01-20 23:40:00 UTC

The Curtain Falls

The moon cast a pale, silvery glow over Ponyville, its light spilling through the delicate curtains of Carousel Boutique. Inside, Rarity stirred from a restless sleep, her dreams interrupted by the faint, unmistakable sound of something shifting downstairs. It could have been Opalescence—the mischievous feline often found her way into trouble during the night—but this sound was different. It was deliberate. Intentional.

Rarity frowned, turning over in her bed, but then a faint creak echoed through the house. Her heart quickened as the realization began to set in. Before she could dwell on the thought, the door to her bedroom cracked open, and Sweetie Belle’s pale face appeared in the dim moonlight.

“Rarity,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “I think someone broke in.”

For a moment, time seemed to stand still. Rarity took a deep breath, pushing away the wave of dread rising in her chest. She couldn’t let her fear show. Not in front of Sweetie Belle.

“Don’t worry, darling,” she murmured, sliding out of bed. Her hooves touched the floor silently. “I’ll check it out. You stay here. Keep quiet.”

Sweetie Belle’s eyes filled with tears, but she nodded. Rarity gave her sister a reassuring smile, though her heart pounded in her chest. She tiptoed to the door, each step careful and deliberate. As she descended the staircase, the source of the disturbance came into view.

A masked figure stood in the boutique, their silhouette stark against the faint light filtering through the windows. They rifled through a drawer with hurried, jerky movements, oblivious to Rarity’s presence. A glint of steel caught her eye—a knife held tightly in the intruder’s hoof.

Her breath hitched. Fear rooted her to the spot for a fleeting second before adrenaline took over. She turned and rushed back up the stairs, her heart racing.

“Sweetie Belle,” she hissed, her voice low but urgent. “We need to leave. Now. Be as quiet as possible.”

Sweetie Belle’s lip quivered, but she obeyed. The sisters crept downstairs together, Rarity’s protective instincts guiding every move. When they reached the ground floor, Rarity glanced toward a window and quickly unlatched it. She helped Sweetie Belle climb through, her hooves trembling as she pushed her sister to safety.

“Run to the neighbors. Don’t stop until you’re safe,” Rarity whispered. Sweetie Belle hesitated, her wide, fearful eyes locked on Rarity’s, but she nodded and disappeared into the night.

Relief flooded Rarity for a brief moment before a sharp, searing pain erupted in her chest. She gasped, staggering back. Her eyes darted downward to see the knife buried deep in her chest, the crimson stain spreading across her pristine coat. The intruder loomed over her, their eyes cold and calculating behind the mask.

Rarity’s legs buckled, and she collapsed against the wall. The masked pony didn’t spare her another glance as they returned to ransacking the boutique, greedily searching for anything of value.

She pressed a hoof against the wound, trying to stanch the flow of blood, but it was futile. Her body felt heavy, her breaths shallow and uneven. The world around her blurred as tears welled in her eyes.

How could this have happened?

Her mind raced with unfinished dreams and broken promises. The dresses she hadn’t yet created. The friends she hadn’t seen enough of. The sister she wouldn’t be there to watch grow up. Her lips trembled as a sob escaped her.

It can’t end like this.

She clutched at the fabric of her memories, trying to find solace. She thought of her friends: Twilight’s determination, Applejack’s steadfastness, Pinkie’s laughter, Rainbow’s bravery, Fluttershy’s kindness. She thought of Sweetie Belle’s smile, the way her sister’s face lit up when she sang.

A warmth spread through her chest, not from her wound but from the love she held for them all. It was this warmth that gave her strength. Her trembling hoof wrapped around the handle of the knife. She gritted her teeth and pulled. The pain was excruciating, but she bit back a scream. The blade clattered to the floor, slick with her blood.

Her vision swam, but she forced herself to move. She crawled across the floor, each inch a battle against the darkness threatening to consume her. Her gaze locked onto the intruder, who had turned their back to her, too engrossed in their looting to notice her struggle.

With a surge of determination, Rarity gripped the knife. Her movements were sluggish, her strength waning, but she pressed on. She raised the blade and plunged it into the intruder’s leg. They screamed, staggering and dropping the valuables they had gathered. Their wild eyes met hers, filled with a mixture of pain and shock.

The intruder shoved her away, sending her sprawling onto the bloodied floor. They clutched their injured leg and limped toward the door. Rarity watched as they fled into the night, their cries fading into the distance.

She lay there, her breaths shallow and labored. The world around her grew quieter with each passing moment. Blood pooled beneath her, warm and sticky against her coat. She stared at the ceiling, her vision darkening at the edges.

“You won’t… get away with this,” she whispered, her voice barely audible. “I’m sorry, girls… I wish I could stay for an encore… but…” She coughed, a weak smile tugging at her lips. “Nevertheless, I had a good run.”

Her eyes fluttered shut as she exhaled one final, shuddering breath. Warmth enveloped her, a comforting embrace that eased her pain. She saw flashes of light and color, the faces of her loved ones smiling at her from a distance. Sweetie Belle’s laughter echoed in her ears, a sound so pure and sweet that it brought tears to her eyes.

And then, there was silence.

The moon continued its slow journey across the sky, its light spilling into the boutique. Outside, Sweetie Belle ran through the streets, tears streaming down her face. She pounded on the nearest door, her cries waking the neighbors. Help would come. Justice would be sought. But for Rarity, the curtain had fallen.

Her story had ended, but her love remained—a quiet, unyielding force that would linger in the hearts of those she had touched. Was it destiny that brought her to this moment? Perhaps. But even in her final act, she had protected what mattered most.

And that, she thought as the darkness claimed her, was enough.