Eclipsed Truth

by omicron14728

Chapter 0: The mysterious visitor

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Title: Eclipsed Truth
Chapter 0: A Mysterious Visitor

The night air was crisp and still in Ponyville, with the stars twinkling in a serene display of cosmic beauty. Twilight Sparkle sat comfortably in her castle’s library, immersed in her latest studies, when a sudden knock at the castle doors broke her concentration. Spike had already gone to bed, so she trotted over to answer it herself.

When she opened the door, a cloaked figure stood before her, their face hidden beneath a deep hood. Something about them felt… off. Not threatening, but undeniably strange. Before she could say anything, the figure produced a thick, weathered book bound in deep blue leather, embossed with an unknown sigil on its cover.

“This belongs in your hooves now, Princess Twilight,” the figure said, their voice distorted, as if multiple ponies were speaking at once. “The truth must be known.”

Twilight reached out with her magic to take the book, but the moment her aura grasped it, the figure vanished into thin air. No teleportation flash, no sound—just gone.

Her heart pounded as she stared at the book. Who were they? Why deliver something like this in such an ominous manner?

Closing the door, she hurried back inside and sat at her desk, running her hooves over the book’s ancient cover. The sigil didn’t match any known magical symbols she’d studied. Curiosity and concern gnawed at her as she carefully opened the tome to its first page.

The ink, though faded, remained legible.

"I, Nightmare Moon, record these words so that my thoughts will not be lost to time. Let the truth be known, even if the world may never see it…"

Twilight’s eyes widened. A personal diary… written by Nightmare Moon?

As she continued reading, what she discovered made her breath hitch.

The legends claimed that Nightmare Moon had rebelled against Celestia immediately after her transformation, but this diary told a different story. Nightmare Moon had waited—planned—for nearly a year, amassing power, testing her new form, and plotting her eternal night. But during one of her hidden preparations, something unexpected happened.

She had encountered a stallion.

Not a noble warrior or a cunning strategist, but a rough and battle-hardened earth pony, referred to only as Big John. According to her writing, he had stepped in when she found herself surrounded by a gang of lecherous, drunken rogues who had not realized whom they had cornered. Before Nightmare Moon could even cast a spell, John had leapt into action, thrashing them without hesitation.

Her writings became… sentimental. Conflicted.

Against all logic, Nightmare Moon found herself drawn to this stallion, a pony unlike any she had encountered before. He didn’t fear her. He didn’t bow before her power. Instead, he saw her—not just as a creature of darkness, but as a pony.

The diary chronicled their time together, fleeting but passionate. And then, to Twilight’s utter shock, it revealed something that had never been spoken of in history.

Nightmare Moon had given birth to a daughter.

A foal named Eclipse.

Twilight read faster, her hooves trembling as she turned the pages. Eclipse was described as having Nightmare Moon’s dark coat, slitted turquoise eyes, and ethereal mane, but with streaks of silver that shimmered like moonlight. Nightmare Moon had loved her daughter dearly, though she feared what Celestia might do if she ever found out.

But the story took an even darker turn.

An unknown order, nameless within the diary’s pages, had discovered Nightmare Moon’s secret. Not only did they believe Eclipse to be an abomination, but they viewed Big John as an obstacle. Without mercy, they descended upon him, overwhelming him with sheer numbers. The diary did not spare the details—John had fought bravely, refusing to back down, but in the end, they beat him to death in front of Nightmare Moon’s eyes.

And as for Eclipse…

The order had used forbidden magic to open a portal to Tartarus itself, casting the helpless foal into the abyss.

Nightmare Moon’s grief and rage had turned into an all-consuming fury, shattering what little control Luna still had within her. It was this loss—this cruel and senseless act—that pushed her beyond reason, leading her to her final confrontation with Celestia.

The rest was history.

Twilight sat frozen in place, her breath shallow. If this diary was authentic, then everything she had learned about Nightmare Moon was incomplete. Nightmare Moon wasn’t simply driven by jealousy—she had been a mother who had lost everything.

She needed to act fast.

Grabbing a fresh scroll, Twilight hastily wrote a letter to Princess Celestia, detailing the events that had just transpired. She wrapped the diary carefully in a protective spell and sent both the book and letter through a teleportation spell, directly to the princess.

She could only hope that Celestia would know what to do with this revelation.


In Canterlot, Celestia sat in her chambers, going over documents when the burst of teleportation magic startled her. Recognizing Twilight’s magic signature, she caught the book mid-air, her eyes drawn to the urgent letter.

As she read, her normally calm demeanor faltered. Her hooves tightened around the parchment. Then, hesitantly, she opened the diary.

Minutes stretched into hours. By the time she finished, her usually radiant face was pale with shock.

A truth long buried had resurfaced.

There was only one pony who needed to know this now.

Summoning her magic, Celestia closed her eyes and reached out through the dream realm.

"Luna," she whispered. "We need to talk."


End of Chapter 0.

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