Eclipsed Truth

by omicron14728

Chapter 9: The Queen’s Choice

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Title: Eclipsed Truth
Chapter 9: The Queen’s Choice

A Prisoner, or Something More?

Eclipse let out a long, tired sigh as she lay against the cold stone floor of the ruined changeling hive. Queen Chrysalis had said nothing for what felt like an eternity. She simply paced around Eclipse, her expression unreadable.

The silence was unbearable.

“…Are you going to kill me?” Eclipse finally asked, her voice hoarse.

Chrysalis stopped mid-step and let out an amused hum. “Now, why would I waste such an… interesting opportunity?”

Eclipse closed her eyes. “Then what do you want?”

Chrysalis tapped her chin with a hoof. “That depends. I could ransom you back to your mother. I could use you to lure those foolish princesses into a trap.” Her emerald eyes gleamed in thought. “Or… I could do nothing at all, simply let the Order take you back and watch them fight Luna like rabid dogs.”

Eclipse clenched her jaw. “Then make your choice. Just don’t… don’t toy with me.”

Chrysalis tilted her head, watching the weak alicorn’s barely suppressed exhaustion. “…You truly expect the worst, don’t you?”

Eclipse let out a bitter chuckle. “Can you blame me?”

Chrysalis merely smirked. “I suppose not.”

But before she could decide Eclipse’s fate, the sound of hooves echoed through the hive tunnels.

The Order Strikes Again

Twelve figures in dark robes emerged from the shadows, their presence turning the air heavy with the sickening aura of their fanaticism.

“You can’t hide her, Queen of Vermin,” one of the Order’s members sneered. “She belongs to us.”

Chrysalis scoffed. “And who exactly do you think you’re speaking to?” Her wings buzzed, her horn crackling with sickly green magic. “You barge into my domain and make demands?”

“She is an abomination,” another Order member hissed. “The alicorns may have reclaimed her, but she will not remain free.” His gaze turned to Eclipse, filled with pure, unrelenting hatred. “She belongs in Tartarus.”

Eclipse gritted her teeth.

Not again. Not ever again.

Summoning what little strength she had left, she forced herself to stand. Every bone in her body screamed in protest, her muscles weak from years of starvation and torture. But she refused to crumble.

She would not let them drag her back.

She lit her horn—only for it to flicker and sputter.

Too weak. Too drained.

The Order moved in, their eyes filled with righteous cruelty.

Eclipse tried to dodge, but her body was slow, her balance off. One of the fanatics lunged forward, slashing out with a hidden blade—

SLASH!

Eclipse screamed.

A burning pain tore across her right eye, and she collapsed, clutching her face as warm blood trickled down her cheek.

Chrysalis’s eyes narrowed.

The Order turned to the Queen. “Move aside, Chrysalis. This does not concern you.”

Chrysalis growled.

“Oh, you idiots,” she hissed.

Eclipse, despite the pain, tried to push herself up. Her vision was blurry, her breath ragged, but she refused to go down so easily.

“Chrysalis…” she gasped, barely able to speak through the agony. “I’m sorry.”

The Queen turned toward her, brow raising. “Oh?”

Eclipse winced, her injured eye barely able to open. “For… bringing trouble to your doorstep. You should get away. They won’t stop until they either kill me… or drag me back.”

For a moment, Chrysalis said nothing.

Then, she did something that shocked the Order.

She laughed.

“Run?” she purred, stepping toward the fanatics with slow, deliberate steps. “You dare break into my hive, attack a guest, and expect me to flee?”

Her gaze darkened, her fangs glinting. “No, little worms. You have made a very grave mistake.”

But before she could strike—

A deep, ancient fury awakened within Eclipse.

The Frost of the Moon’s Wrath

Something primal surged inside her.

It was a feeling she had never known—something far beyond the dark magic of Nightmare Moon, something even the Order had never faced.

Her horn ignited with a burst of pure power, frost-white and filled with an ancient, otherworldly rage.

The temperature in the hive plummeted.

Chrysalis stepped back, her eyes narrowing. “What—?”

Then—

BOOM!

A blinding explosion of Primordial Frost erupted from Eclipse, filling the chamber with an unnatural, chilling howl.

The Order members didn’t even have time to react. Eight of them were instantly encased in thick, unbreakable ice, frozen in the middle of their movement, their faces forever twisted in shock and horror.

Only four remained.

Eclipse stood at the center of the devastation, her mane billowing like a blizzard, her injured eye now glowing with an eerie, frost-blue energy.

But her victory was fleeting.

The magic drained the last of her strength.

Her knees buckled. Her vision swam.

And then, before she could even feel the impact—

Darkness took her.

The Queen’s Decision

For a long moment, the chamber was silent.

Chrysalis stared at the unconscious alicorn, her expression unreadable.

The four remaining Order members were shaken, stepping back in unease. “She… she is unnatural,” one whispered. “That power—”

Chrysalis’ horn flared.

Begone.

The Order members hesitated, but the fury in her eyes made it clear—if they stayed, they would suffer far worse than mere ice.

With sneers of frustration, they vanished into the shadows, leaving behind their frozen comrades.

Chrysalis slowly approached Eclipse’s unconscious form, staring at her for a long moment.

Then, for reasons she did not yet understand, she sighed and lifted Eclipse onto her back.

“She truly is a disaster waiting to happen,” she muttered.

And yet…

As she carried Eclipse deeper into the hive, her mind raced.

This alicorn—this child—had suffered at the hooves of fanatics for a thousand years.

She had been thrown away. Tortured. Forgotten.

And yet, even in her broken state, she had still fought.

Chrysalis wasn’t certain why, but something in her burned at the thought.

Perhaps it was because she knew what it was like to be hunted. To be seen as a monster.

Or perhaps…

Perhaps she was simply curious.

Either way, the Queen of Changelings had made her choice.

Eclipse was hers now.

To Be Continued…

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