Umbra

by Babycord

Rating: teen
Tags: Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Tragedy, Violence, Death
Length: 1128

The fall of a foal

The creation of a monster

Published 2025-02-18 17:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2025-02-18 17:00:01 UTC

Hear me

I was cold and alone. The howling wind of the north bit through my fur as I huddled with the only family I had ever known. We were orphans, discarded by fate, forgotten by the kingdom that claimed to protect its own. Hunger clawed at our bellies, and the frost threatened to steal the life from our bones. But I refused to let the world break us.

Before I became the feared ruler of the Crystal Empire, before my name was spoken with dread, I was just a filly trying to survive. My life began in the slums of the outer reaches, where the light of the empire barely touched, and the only law was the law of the desperate. Food was scarce, warmth was a luxury, and trust was a dangerous gamble. Yet, in that darkness, I found my family—not by blood, but by bond.

There was Gale, a pegasus with wings as quick as his wit, who could move through the kingdom unseen, slipping past guards like a ghost. He was our eyes and ears, listening in on whispered secrets and planting rumors that worked in our favor. Ember, the heart of our group, had a fire in her that could never be extinguished. She was fierce, fearless, always ready to fight for us, whether with her hooves or her words. And then there was Ash, quiet and calculating, the one who saw the world as a chessboard. He had a mind sharper than any blade, capable of weaving plans with such precision that even the nobles, in all their supposed wisdom, never suspected our involvement.

I was their leader, not because I was the strongest or the smartest, but because I dreamed the biggest. I wanted more than just scraps of food and stolen warmth. I wanted a future. I wanted power. Not for selfish reasons—not then—but because I believed we deserved better. And I knew that the only way to rise above our station was through deception, through careful manipulation. So we crafted a plan, one that would change the fate of the kingdom itself.

I became the shining star, the prodigy of the Crystal Empire. While my friends worked in the shadows, I played the role of the gifted filly, rising through the ranks with seemingly endless potential. Gale would spread stories of my heroism, Ember would stage disasters only I could resolve, and Ash ensured no one ever found a thread leading back to us. And it worked. The Queen took notice.

She was regal, beautiful, and exuded a kindness I had never known. She called me her daughter, praised my intelligence and strength, and promised me a future within the walls of the palace. For the first time, I felt the warmth of a mother’s love, and yet, deep inside, I knew it was all built on lies. Still, I allowed myself to believe. I allowed myself to hope.

But hope is a dangerous thing.

The truth unraveled sooner than we anticipated. The Queen was no fool, and our carefully crafted illusion fell apart beneath her gaze. But instead of immediate punishment, she offered me a choice—renounce my friends and continue my life within the palace, or stand with them and face judgment. I hesitated, torn between loyalty and the warmth I had come to cherish.

But my hesitation did not matter. The decision had already been made.

They were dragged before me, bound and trembling, but their eyes still held trust. Trust in me. I begged. I pleaded. But the Queen was unwavering. One by one, my friends were hanged before my eyes. Gale, who had always been so fast, could not outrun the noose. Ember, whose fire had burned so bright, was snuffed out in an instant. Ash, the one who had always been five steps ahead, had no move left to make.

I watched them die, and something inside me broke beyond repair.

I screamed. I fought against my captors, but the chains held me firm. Their lifeless bodies swayed in the wind, their eyes empty, their dreams stolen. I had sworn to protect them, to lead them to something greater, and yet, all I had led them to was death. The Queen watched me with a cold, unreadable expression. She saw my pain. She wanted me to suffer. And suffer I did.

They threw me into the depths of the dungeon, left me in the cold, damp darkness to rot. Time blurred. I lost track of the days. Grief and rage consumed me. I was alone again, but this time, there was no warmth left in the world, no reason to keep going.

And then, it spoke to me.

A whisper in the abyss. A voice like silk and venom, curling around my mind like a serpent. It promised me power. It promised me revenge. It promised me that I would never be weak again.

I did not hesitate. I embraced the darkness. I let it consume me, fill the hollow shell I had become, twist me into something unrecognizable.

The shadows wrapped around me like a second skin, seeping into my soul, whispering secrets of magic long forgotten. They spoke of pain and suffering, of how power was never given but taken, how the Queen had stolen everything from me and how I could take it back. They whispered of vengeance, of making the empire tremble beneath my hooves, of reclaiming what was rightfully mine.

When I emerged from that prison, I was no longer the filly who had dreamed of love and acceptance. I was something else, something darker, something unstoppable.

I was Queen Umbra

And the Crystal Empire would know my wrath.

My first steps beyond the prison walls were not those of a pony seeking mercy or forgiveness. They were the steps of a ruler reclaiming her throne. The first guard that crossed my path barely had time to scream before the shadows engulfed him. The palace was bathed in red that night, the cries of those loyal to the Queen echoing through its crystal halls.

The Queen herself stood atop her balcony, watching as her empire burned. There was no fear in her eyes—only regret. But regret would not save her. It would not bring back Ember, Gale, or Ash. It would not erase the suffering she had carved into my soul.

I did not grant her the mercy she had denied my friends.

And as the throne crumbled beneath my hooves, as the city bowed to its new ruler, I whispered their names into the wind. Ember. Gale. Ash. The last remnants of who I had been, the only ones who had ever truly mattered.

They had died in the light.

And I would rule in the dark.