Lunar Requiem Intro

by Lunar-Reqiuem

Rating: mature
Tags: Tragedy, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Zecora, Sad, Main 6, Romance, Princess Luna, Original Character, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Sex
Length: 2025

Eternia is falling into chaos under their new ruler;Can the true rulers of the kingdom save the day?

Things are not well in the kingdom Eternia. The King has fallen and the Queen is too grieve stricken to take control. The kingdom is crumbling and only their offspring can save it.
With more and more twists involved and more deceit, how can Princess Hallow Skye save her family and her world as she knows it?

Published 2012-10-24 15:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-11-01 01:00:36 UTC

New Beginnings -GrimmDark-

Lunar Requiem
By Lunar-Requiem aka Princess-Hallow Skye
-Revamped version of Origins: The Tale of the Bat Ponies-

WARNING: This fanfiction is very unsettling, involving a lot of gore and realistic themes. This may make your stomach turn. VERY GRIMDARK!!!

The night's dark embrace swept over the world, Celestia's duty now finished and Luna's now starting. The stars burst into light and the moon glowed with it's natural beauty. The night's air filled with an awe-inspiring sensation as the residents of Eternia began to hustle about; Tonight was a very special time for the bat ponies. It was the Celebration of the Queen's return yet also it was the departure of their King from this world. Everypony put their hooves together and got to work with the decor. Glow lanterns were hung about the kingdom, their luminescent glow radiating a beautiful shade of azure. The banners were spun with gold and silver, hanging from the pillars and rooftops of Eternia. Candles of all colors sprout up, their wick burning with a fierce light. The preparations were complete and soon everypony gathered in the center of the kingdom, surrounding a casket overflowing with glow flowers and candles. A picture of the king was above the casket, a single white rose placed upon the photo's frame. He looked regal in his photo, his yellow eyes full of life and passion.

His locks were a bright red, contrary to his locks now which were a pale white. His coat was shined and glossy, the hues of blue and purple cascading throughout his dark coat. He was truly a mighty king. As he lay in his resting place, the Queen's tears fell upon his body, her body overwhelmed with despair. Her glowing mane was mangled and now a dull and lifeless green. Her coat that was once glazed with power was now rugged, the dark colors now faded into a odd shade of blue. She had thrown off her crown and her cowl unto the ground, not wanting to rule anymore. Nopony had understood her as well as her beloved husband. As she wept over his coffin, everypony gathered round and comforted her. She sniffed and nodded, standing to her full height. "Where....Where Are my kin? Dark Seer.....Hallow Skye....Shimmer Wing...Where Are they?" She muttered, her voice cracked with despair. She was staring at a young mare, her eyes dull. The mare's name was Shell Wing, and she bore a cutie mark of a clam shell with angelic wings. She had a light blue locks that were twirled every which way, and her coat was a gorgeous shade of midnight azure tipped with hints of white on her hooves and her eyes were a brilliant shade of purple.

She blinked and gulped shyly, circling her hoof in the ground as she hung her head down. "Um....Well....Seer Is in his chambers, he refuses to leave my Queen; Shimmer is also in her chambers. As for Hallow...She...Well, We can't find her.. I'm so sorry my Queen Nocturna!" A stallion in silver armor dashed to the Queen's side, a worried expression distraught upon his face. "My Queen, we know the last place your daughter Princess Hallow Skye was....She Has been captured but escaped with her life. We have a traitor in our midst my liege! It's Abyss Armor!" He cried, stomping his hooves in the ground. In rage she took flight, her anger fueling her high paced flight towards the forest nearby. In the forest dwelled the house of Abyss Armor, it's mighty walls supported by thick stone and metal. However, the walls, which usually was unharmed, was now cracked and broken within the right half of the wall. The Queen snarled and dashed into the building, her body lighting up with power.

Her aura was a dark shade of violet as she soared through the halls. She was in a blind rage as she crashed every room to find him. She finally reached the chambers of Abyss Armor, expecting to see him there but was disappointed to only to find it empty and ransacked. Snarling with disgust she let out a beacon of light surging passed the ceiling and into the heaven above. It's bright, radiating beam of light showed for miles, everypony in the kingdom could see it for miles. Everypony stopped and stared, knowing full well what it meant; Eternia was in peril. The knights rounded up their troops and stormed the kingdom, searching high and low for Abyss Armor. Posters were strung about Eternia as well. Photos of him were everywhere; He was unmistakable. He had locks of Silver that resembled ooze in a way, a black coat with red tipped hooves and wings larger than most which were more fluid and gel like. His eyes were a crimson and his armor was silver plated with rubies embedded within the metal. Finally, he bore a cutie mark of a skull like helmet upon his flank, and sharp canines resembling sabers protruding out of his muzzle. He would pay for what he did with the cost of his life. Meanwhile, in the forest towards the south of Eternia, lay an unconscious Hallow. Her body was covered in deep tissue gashes, fractures, and her face was bruised along with her left wing shredded. She was groaning but could not move. As she dizzily awoken from her slumber, she let out a choked yelp of pain as she tried to stand up. Her body was dense as a moutain, her breathing rigid from the condition her body was in. Mumbling out choked whimpers, she tried once more to stand upbut to no avail. "Uugh...My...My Wing..My kingdom...I Must get back.....I must..." She muttered. the wind began to pick up more and more, the whistling echoes of the currents sounding like screams.

Sounds of demented laughter soon became noticable, getting louder and closer by mere seconds. He was laughing like a mad man that got a new knife and play toy. With a grin on his face he landed before the mangled Hallow, trotting around her. "Did you really think you would get away my dear? You should show more respect to your new King dearest Hallow hahahahahaha~" He nickered teasingly. She growled, disgusted by his arrival. He cackled once more and forced her up, giving a sweet sincere look. "Oh Hallow....If only you would of said yes my dear mare. Now you must be punished for running~." Fluidly he through her into a nearby tree, impaling her other wing upon a branch. Tears streamed down her face as she cried out in agony, trying to pry herself off the branch. The more she pulled, the more the jagged branch shredded her wing bit by bit, blood seeping to the dirt below. Grimacing and whimpering, she finally gave the final tug and ripped her wing loose. Her wings were now useless to her but that didn't stop her. He just watched her as she stumbled about the ground before him, stretching his wings and flexing them back and forth. The winds current picked up even more, tree limbs snapping and flying around the both of them. He prctically skipped towards her, taking swift glides about the currents of wind.

As it soon turned into a minature gale, the tree limps swept closer and closer towards Hallow until she was finally impaled with them, her legs being the main targets. Howling with gut twisting agony, she finally collapsed, tears and mucus smeared upon her distraught face. He gave a loud cackle and jumped up and down on her mangled legs, enjoying her symphony of anguish. Nearly blacking out from this world, she let out a whimper, wishing for nothing more than for him to end her life. With a smile on his face he licked her swollen, bruised cheek, "Oh Hallow, don't be sad. This is only the beginning, just wait and see my little mare. Your going to be my favorite toy!". Amused as he noticed her slipping, he gave a low whistle like tune, his eyes glowing a bright red. The shadows began to stir, creak and move, glowing orbs of white appearing from the midst of the darkness. More and more appeared, the eerie lights resembling eyes now. After a few moments, the shadows formed into pony like creatures, their bodies resembling black slime. Groans and screams shattered the empty sounds of the forest as they all circled the young princess. "I want you all to break her, mentally and physically. Make her beg for a swift death my army and then bring her to me. Is that understood?". The army all echoed yes, closing in on Hallow. She was helpless to stop them as they spread her body out, her delicate stomach and mound now exposed. As her legs were spread more and more, her body began to snap and crack, her eyes shooting open as she let out a ear shattering scream. Soon, her fragile body was overcome by the army, her body now their toy for their lust driven desires.

One, two even three or more at a time, they raped her, tearing at her flesh for more. All she could do was choke out her cries as she drifted slower and slower into insanity. As time passed, her mind was shot as the finally stopped their assault. All she could mumble was 'kill me' over and over again as one final creature stepped forth, much larger and more grotesque then the others. 'This would be it' was her last words before she went blank, her spirit finally crushed as the creature tore into her stomach and mound, forcing it's body into hers. Blood began to drip onto the ground around her broken body as it thrusted more and more, tearing and shredding her body up. As the climax arrived, the creature forced itself all the way into her body, seeping into her body. Her wounds began to glow, closing up and mending as she let out a final scream. The creatures vanished from the forest, heading towards the kingdom. She was still alive, her stomach now bulged to the point of exploding. Choking from her own saliva, tears and mucus, she closed her eyes, going limp. She had given up. She knew she was going to die tonight. She wanted it to happen now for the pain would stop and she would be relieved from this world. Moments passed and soon her body began to twitch, her stomach pulsing and stirring. She let out a gasp as her stomach suddenly tore apart, black tendrils surging out of her body and wrapped around her from the inside.

They began to push into her mouth and delicate parts below the belt, thrusting in and out over and over, causing more and more blood to spill out of Hallow. Hours passed and as she was brutally raped, the kingdom was finally taken over, Abyss Armor becoming the new king of Eternia. Prince Dark Seer had faced an even worse punishment for attempting to harm Abyss. His body had been forcibly chained up and spiked, his life only hanging on by a thread. His loins were gashed, his chest exposed and his left arm gone. His ribs were shattered and protruding out of his bruised flesh and his throat was badly shredded. He could hardly breathe as his punishment started once more, several stone like creatures having their way with his body once again. As Seer was punished, in the next room rest Shimmer Wing, her body chained to bed posts of a silken red bed. She was the only one that was unharmed, her body only being chained. The last thing involving the Queen was a swift end, her head being sliced off by the fine gulliatine. The kingdom was no more, only tyranny remained. The Queen was dead, and the fates of the kin were unknown. As the sun began to rise, the shadowed figure of a pony was at the top of the hill outside of Eternia, a young dragon beside the pony. The future of Eternia was unknown but maybe it could be saved.

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