Bloody Tears of a Sparkleby MossinoChaptersBeing attacked.Embracing the changeLoyalty is Corrupted.Being attacked.A lavender pony opens the door her house. “I’m going to see Zecora, Spike!” “Be careful Twilight it is getting dark!” “I will I will” Says Twilight. She walks out of the house and closes the door behind her. As Twilight walks on the path to Zecora’s house she hears a scream. “Oh no some pony is in trouble!” She says barreling through the trees. As Twilight gallops through the trees she enters a clearing. She looks around and sees a dark blue pegasus with a dark red mane and red eyes. The stallion clearly looks like he is in pain. “Are you alright?” Says Twilight coming up to the pegasus. “C-come here…I need to tell you something” He says. As Twilight kneels down beside the pegasus he bites her on the neck sucking her blood. “AH!” Yells Twilight as blood splatters the ground around her and she passes out from blood loss. “Welcome to my legion” Says the pegasus before flying away. Hours later Twilight wakes up feeling weird and weak. “Ughhhh…what happened” Groggily says Twilight looking around. She gets up and walks towards a tree leaving bloody hoof marks behind her. Her vision starts to blur and she falls to the ground unconscious leaving a trail of blood. “She’s got to be around here somewhere!” Says some pony. “Is that…blood?” Another pony worriedly says. “And….THAT'S TWILIGHT!” Yells some other pony. “Oh no is she dead!!” Says pony number one. “We need get her to a hospital now!” Says the second pony. Three days later… “She’s waking up!” Some pony says “Ugh…”mutters Twilight looking around. She seems to be in a hospital bed with her 5 most beloved friends standing around her. “OH thank heavens we were so worried when Spike told us you hadn’t come home yet!” Says Rarity. “We saw you in the forest with blood everywhere it was a gruesome sight.” Mumbles Fluttershy “What happened back there Twilight?” Asks Rainbow Dash “Well I was going to go see Zecora—“ Starts Twilight but is interrupted by somepony coming into the room. Twilight notices the pony as a doctor with a green mane tan skin and purple eyes. “Ahhh it seems your awake.” Chuckles the pony that just came in. “Let me introduce myself I am Dr.Dimitri.” He says. Twilight notices he has a strong Russian accent (YES RUSSIAN PONIES =D) “I am quite surprised you survived my friend.” “Wha’ do you mean sugar cube?” Asks Apple Jack “Well when you brought her in.” he points to Twilight “She was almost completely drained of blood… not enough for organs to run or for the brain to function. It’s a miracle that she actually lived!” “Well she’s alive and well now.” Scolds Rainbow Dash “Excuse me for a second you have somepony here to see you.” Says Dimitri as he walks out the door. ‘I wonder who it is.’ Thinks Twilight. She hears someone coming and looks at the door. When it opens she sees a bright light as an alicorn enters the room. “Princess Celestia!” Every pony exclaims bowing except Twilight “Twilight are you ok? I got news from Spike that you were in the hospital.” She says “Can you tell us what happened?” “I was going to see Zecora when I heard a somepony scream. What would any pony else do? I went towards the sound of the scream to find what was going on. When I arrived there was this pegasus with the reddest eyes you have ever seen. He told me to come closer so I did. When I got close we grabbed me and… bit me I think. The next thing I remember I am here.” Twilight sees all her friends and Celestia looking shocked at her story. “That….that is interesting…” Mutters Celestia. “Can…I see your neck Twilight?” Twilight tilt’s her neck and Celestia sees fang marks on her neck. “This isn’t good I need Luna.” “Is something wrong with Twilight please tell me there isn’t?” Worriedly says Pinkie Pie. “I don’t know exactly but Luna will know. I will be back soon take Twilight home and keep her there and make sure she doesn’t get in sunlight understood!” Says Celestia with a panicked tone. “Ok we will!” Every pony says except Twilight and Celestia ‘What is going on…I wonder what Celestia knows that I don’t…and why she needs Luna?’ Twilight thinks. After Celestia leaves to Canter lot. Celestia sees her sister a Dark blue alicorn by the name of Luna. “Ah sis is thee well and Is Twilight well?” Luna says “She is but I need to know something.” “What does Thou need?” “Luna you created vamponys right?” Luna looks down sadly before responding “I did create vamponys to rival you a thousand years ago… Why does thou ask sister?” “I…I think Twilight has been bitten by a vampony…” “I thought thee told me that all of them were destroyed!” “I thought so but they weren’t apparently… Can you go to Ponyville and see if I’m just mistaken sister?” “I will sister.” Says Luna as she prepares to fly to Ponyville. Later once Luna arrives in Ponyville trying to find Twilights house. ‘Ugh I’ve got the worst headache and I’m so thirsty but water isn’t quenching my thirst…and my teeth feel sharper.’ Twilight hears a knock on the door ‘I wonder who that is’. Twilight goes downstairs and opens the door. “Princess Luna!” Twilight yells bowing “Can I come inside?” “Sure come on in Luna.” “Princess Celestia sent me to see if…you’re a vampony…” “A vampony from those old foals tells HA they can’t be real…” “Well then thee should know that vamponys have fangs and burn in the sun correct?” “Well yes and they don’t have a reflection.” “Has thou looked in a mirror…” “No…” “Then thee should go upstairs and look in a mirror…” ‘She can’t be serious vamponys are not real and they shall never be real… I was just attacked by some crazy psychopath.’ Twilight thinks as she and Luna go upstairs and enter the bathroom looking at the mirror. Twilight gasps at what she doesn’t see. “That’s impossible I don’t have a reflection!” “As I feared…thee certainly are a vampony then” “But still there just from a foals tell” “No there not Twilight. I created them with black magic to attack Celestia. They are harder, Better, Faster, and stronger than any pony else. But they have their weaknesses such as burning in the sun and needing blood to live” “But…It can’t be” “If thy wants we can step outside into the sun” “Ok let’s see the mirror could be just a trick.” Twilight and Luna go downstairs and open the door. Twilight walks outside and she screams in agony “Impossible…it can’t be!” “As I said thee are a vampony.” (End of chapter one) (Big thanks to my proofreader SoulPony) Embracing the change“Thee should tell your friends Twilight” Says Luna. “C-can you go get them.” “I will Twilight, thy should get some rest this is a lot to take in.” Twilight sat down as Luna left her house. ‘This is …NO this cant be true!’ She opens her mouth and touches a hoof to her fang. “OUCH!” Twilight yelps looking at her bleeding hoof. “I guess…it is true…” She picks up a rag and cleans up her blood feeling… suddenly hungry. She hears her door open as 7 ponies walk in. “Twilight, Luna got us and she said we all needed to talk. Is something wrong? “Says Rainbow Dash. “Luna says I’m a….what did you call it?” “Thy Twilight you are a vampony” “Wait wha’ Did you say sugar cube?”Asks Apple Jack. “What is a vampony Princess?” Rarity says. “A vampony is a creature of the night I created a thousand years ago. To make them requires…powerful black magic. But the result was a pony that was better than any other pony in every way except a few. These…vamponys are able to gallop faster they are stronger they have excellent vision but at a few minor drawbacks. Since the opposite of black magic is light magic vamponys burn in the sunlight. Also to use these powerful abilities they require drinking blood to sustain themselves between life and death.” Twilights friends are shocked at this but Twilight is just looking at them a lustful look in her eyes. “Can thou get Spike and tell my sister that you are a vampony?” She says looking at Twilight. “Huh? Oh ok…” Twilight goes upstairs and gets Spike. “It’s time to get up already let me sleep another five minutes” Says Spike “Oh come on and get up this is important!” Chuckles Twilight as she shakes Spike. “Oh alright I’ll get up…” “Spike take a note saying that: Celestia you were Right Twilight is a vampony. –Luna Spike nods and writes the message sending it to Celestia as Twilight walks back downstairs. “Oh come on Dashie why did you have to go and cut yourself” Says Pinkie Pie “It’s ok Pinkie” Mutters Rainbow Dash. Twilight see Rainbows blood dribbling to the ground. “Hey Twilight are you ok?” Twilight looks at Rainbow as she says this. Her pupils now dark red and eyes like slits. The mane 5 look at Twilight right before she pounces on Rainbow. “GET OFF ME TWILIGHT!” Yells Rainbow as Twilight sinks her fangs into Rainbows neck spewing blood onto the walls. A dark blue magic wreaths around twilight and picks her off the ground from Luna’s horn. Rainbow passes out from blood loose. “Somepony get Spike and send Celestia a message telling her to get to Pony-Ville quick!” Luna shouts using the royal Canter Lot voice. Apple Jack runs up to Twilights room while the other 4 just stare in shock. “Blood!” Shouts Twilight trying to struggle out of the magic holding her. (Twilight is now becoming what you see in the cover art…Have Fun) A bright light happens and Celestia appears. She is shocked at the scene. “Twilight…..why….” She says in a horrified tone. Twilight seems to come to her senses but her eyes stay the same. She looks around. “I-im…..Sorry….” She whimpers charging magic in her horn. “Twilight wait!” Celestia shouts as Twilight teleports away to the Everfree Forest. “Twilight….turning into a creature of the night…I would never have thought…” Celestia says sadly. “I can’t believe that darling Twilight would do such a thing” Says Rarity “She attacked Rainbow on her on accord” Mutters Fluttershy “Ah I reckon…killed her…” Says Apple Jack sadly “Dashie NO!” Yells Pinkie Pie starting to cry. “We need to get Thou” Says Luna gesturing to Dashie “To the hospital NOW!” (Now Back to Twilight) Twilight gallops through the trees crying crimson tears. She gallops to the clearing she found the pegasus at. She sits down in the middle of it crying. “No one in Ponyville will accept me now I am a monster now.” (To let everyone know Twilight is slipping into liking vampirism and stuff just a FYI) She curls up on the ground and goes to sleep. She wakes up later sensing someone is watching her. “Who’s there?” Yells Twilight looking around in the darkness. “Ill accept you for who you are” Says a silky alluring voice like Celestias. Twilight sees the dark blue pegasus that bit her. “You…” “Hehe yes me” He says “YOU TURNED ME INTO THIS MONSTER!” She yells charging at the Stallion. She suddenly sees the that he is gone. “Where did you go!?!?” “Foalish mare. Do you think you can beat me… I have gone through exactly what you did. But I accepted my new ways and got over it. I’ve been watching you….your friends don’t like you anymore definitely that “Rainbow Dash” she hates you now… Accept your ways and join me...” “I-I…” “Join me my dear Twilight and we can rule….overthrow Celestia and never have to fear the sun again…” “I-I…I wont join you!” “Hmmmm?” Says the stallion. He takes out a knife and cuts a small part of his flesh. Blood dribbles to the ground. “Will you join my now?” “I….” Twilight her mind being flooded by bloodlust and wanting nothing more than the sun to never come up again. “I will join you…” “Good….Good…” “Let me introduce myself I am Twisted Fang.” Twilight smiles at him “What do we do now.” “Celestia is looking for you….to try and purge you of your darkness….we need to leave the Everfree forest for now…go to a place more secluded. “Ok….where t---“ “Twilight? Twilight is that you?” From the Distinctive voice of Celestia. Celestia Turns a corner and arrives in the clearing. “Twilight! Come with me now!” Says Twilights mentor. “…No….I won’t!” Celestia looks stunned at the statement “Twilight…don’t…do this!” Celestia warns. “No! I’m a monster now….I won’t go with you!” Celestia is shocked by Twilight her perfect student disobeying her. Twisted laughs as Twilight teleports them away. “I didn’t think you would stand up to her like that Twilight” “Well… Look can we just find somewhere to stay I’m tired…” “Ok fine….follow me” Twilight follows Twisted to an Abandoned house that’s in pretty good shape. ‘I don’t know why but I like Twisted…a lot’ Twilight thinks “Come in Twilight, tomorrow you will meet the rest of the gang and start your training.” (End of chapter 2) (Another big thanks to SouPony for proofreading!) Loyalty is Corrupted.Twilight and Twisted wake up. “My dear Twilight…will you want to meet the rest of the gang? Or rather would you want to get breakfast?” Says Twisted smiling “Can we go meet the rest of the gang?” “Ok then follow me.” Chuckles Twisted gesturing to a ladder. He and Twilight go down the ladder and walk down a path. Twilight enters a room with about 20 earth ponies and pegasusi with weapons training and 10 unicorns training Black Magic. “Are…are all these vamponys?” “Yes Twilight and we…control them.” “Cool… wait what ‘we’ control them?” “Yes Twilight you’re my second in command” “R-really?” Practically yells Twilight a starry expression in her eyes. “Yes really….now let me take you to see our War General and our Black Magic master…” Twilight and Twisted walk over to the group of Unicorns. She sees a unicorn with a pure black mane a darkblue coat and black eyes. As Twilight looks closer her Cutie Mark is a pure black orb with 5 spikes coming out of it to form a star. This unicorn turns and sees them.. “Hello my liege” She said bowing. “At ease Dark Star” “Um hello..” Twilight says. This “Dark Star” notices Twilight. “New scum to train I see” snarls Dark Star ‘Not very nice I see’ Thinks Twilight “Now that I remember….I have to tell you. You have been replaced Twilight is second in command now…” Twisted scolds “WHAT!!!! You can’t replace my just like that!” “Yes I can….I’m the leader….remember?” “At least let me fight for my position!” “Ok fine! Start in 3…2….1… Go!” Twilight immediately fires a big bolt of magic at Dark Star. She not able to dodge in time is blown through the wall and into the other part of the training area. “Not even using black magic and hit me that hard. And that was the weakest of aggressive magic…” Mutters Dark Star. “Fine I’ll let you stay second in command…But it will be a honor to teach such a powerful unicorn the black arts” “Good now let’s go see our War General…” Says Twisted chuckling. As they walk away Twilight looks back with Dark Star with a hint of don’t mess with me again look. They enter another part of the room with training dummies and live fighting. Twilight notices a heavy built stallion like Big Macintosh. He is a dark brown pony with a ivory mane and violet eyes. His Cutie Mark was apparently two bloody swords crossed in a X formation. “Hello Razor Edge. I wanted you to meet our new student Twilight Sparkle.” This stallion turns away from commanding training. “Ahh hello my lord…And this” He points to Twilight. “Is the pony that sent Dark Star through that wall?” He scowls as he looks at a hole in the wall. “Erm….Yes I did…” “Good work my friend! No one’s beaten Dark Star that quickly….well except Twisted.” “Well I just wanted to show you the training area Twilight, come on I’m giving you private lessons…” He and Twilight went back upstairs to the house. “But first are you hungry.” “Yes a little.” “Then let’s go grab some ponies from PonyVille” (Now let’s see what happened with Rainbow and the rest of the ponies. Starting from when Twilight ran) “You get Rainbow to the hospital! I’m going to get Twilight!” Yells Celestia “Come hither and help me with Rainbow, Applejack.” Says Luna “Comin Sugar Cube” Says Applejack “The rest of thou go home. Thou shalt come see Rainbow in the morning.” “Ok….” Mutters Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Rarity. Luna and Applejack take Rainbow to the hospital where she nearly dies. In the middle of the night. “So….thirsty…” Mutters Rainbow waking up. She gets up out of her hospital bed and goes into the hallway. “Hey you, get back in bed!” Says nurse RedHeart. “I’m sorry I just got up for a drink.” “Well ill go get you a cup of water…just let me take this blood bag to a patient.” Rainbow stares at Redheart with a far away expression in her eyes. “Hey are you ok Rainbow?” Says Redheart as Rainbow begins drool “Uhm…Oh yeah I think there was somepony calling for help outside my window.” “Oh dear lets go look.” They walk into Rainbows room. “Hey there is nopony down there!” Says Redheart as Rainbow pounces on her. “GET OUT OFF ME!” She tries to push Rainbow off but is not successful. The only instinct Rainbow had was the few words running through her head ‘Blood! Feast on her Blood!’ Rainbow bites her on the neck. “AHHHH” She screams in agony as her blood splattered the entire room. “REDHEART ARE YOU O---“ Yells Dr.Dimitri. As he sees the pale Redheart (Shes pale because Rainbow drank all her blood so RedHeart is dead happy?) Rainbow looks up blood dripping from her mouth. She smiles evilly at Dimitri. Her eyes like Twilights, slitted and now red. Rainbow flies over to Dimitri in milliseconds and knocks him over. “GRAAAAAAH” Screams Dimitri as his blood is sucked dry. Rainbow stands up. “I can see why Twilight….went into a frenzy… This blood stuff is excellent….maybe I should join her.” (YES Vampirism corruption is so strong it corrupts you even if your element of loyalty! Rainbow goes searching for Twilight. (Somewhere far away) Twisted chuckles silently in his sleep. ‘Oh I just love tinkering with new vamponys minds. I just made the element of LOYALTY want to join me HA!’ He thinks. ‘This night can’t get better oh wait it did! I corrupted Twilight to join me…’ He laughs inside his mind ‘….and now with them on my side Celestias most powerful weapon is gone. What a wonderful night!’ (Back to Ponyville) “What happened her darling.” Asks Rarity “From what I now last night Redheart and Dimitri were killed.” Says Luna “ Did D-dashie did this?” Moans Pinkie Pie “Aye…from what I know thou friend Rainbow did this.” “C-could….this be an outbreak of vamponys?” Mumbles Fluttershy “It shalt most likely” “This isn’t good…we need to find thou friends Twilight and Rainbow…before they….Become full vamponys!” “Well the first place we should look is the Everfree forest…if that’s fine with you” Mumbles Fluttershy “Guys guys!” Yells Applejack “What Applejack?” Says Rarity “There has been another attack! Mr. and Mrs. Cake were attacked and killed last night!” “By vamponies again?” Mumbles Fluttershy” “Yes…” “We must find Twilight NOW!” Yells Luna using the royal Canterlot voice. The remaining mane 4 and Luna explore the Everfree forest trying to find any signs of Twilight. (Now back to Twilight) “Mmmm” Says Twilight licking blood off her lips. “Well Twilight I must attend some business. I will be back tomorrow so make “Friends” with some of our minions.” “Ok then….see you” As they leave Mr. Mrs. Cakes house. ‘Twisted….is so mysterious…I like him a lot’ Thinks Twilight as she walks to the Abandoned House. But that’s when she hears voices. (End of chapter 3 Yes I’m leaving this at a cliffhanger)
Being attacked.A lavender pony opens the door her house. “I’m going to see Zecora, Spike!” “Be careful Twilight it is getting dark!” “I will I will” Says Twilight. She walks out of the house and closes the door behind her. As Twilight walks on the path to Zecora’s house she hears a scream. “Oh no some pony is in trouble!” She says barreling through the trees. As Twilight gallops through the trees she enters a clearing. She looks around and sees a dark blue pegasus with a dark red mane and red eyes. The stallion clearly looks like he is in pain. “Are you alright?” Says Twilight coming up to the pegasus. “C-come here…I need to tell you something” He says. As Twilight kneels down beside the pegasus he bites her on the neck sucking her blood. “AH!” Yells Twilight as blood splatters the ground around her and she passes out from blood loss. “Welcome to my legion” Says the pegasus before flying away. Hours later Twilight wakes up feeling weird and weak. “Ughhhh…what happened” Groggily says Twilight looking around. She gets up and walks towards a tree leaving bloody hoof marks behind her. Her vision starts to blur and she falls to the ground unconscious leaving a trail of blood. “She’s got to be around here somewhere!” Says some pony. “Is that…blood?” Another pony worriedly says. “And….THAT'S TWILIGHT!” Yells some other pony. “Oh no is she dead!!” Says pony number one. “We need get her to a hospital now!” Says the second pony. Three days later… “She’s waking up!” Some pony says “Ugh…”mutters Twilight looking around. She seems to be in a hospital bed with her 5 most beloved friends standing around her. “OH thank heavens we were so worried when Spike told us you hadn’t come home yet!” Says Rarity. “We saw you in the forest with blood everywhere it was a gruesome sight.” Mumbles Fluttershy “What happened back there Twilight?” Asks Rainbow Dash “Well I was going to go see Zecora—“ Starts Twilight but is interrupted by somepony coming into the room. Twilight notices the pony as a doctor with a green mane tan skin and purple eyes. “Ahhh it seems your awake.” Chuckles the pony that just came in. “Let me introduce myself I am Dr.Dimitri.” He says. Twilight notices he has a strong Russian accent (YES RUSSIAN PONIES =D) “I am quite surprised you survived my friend.” “Wha’ do you mean sugar cube?” Asks Apple Jack “Well when you brought her in.” he points to Twilight “She was almost completely drained of blood… not enough for organs to run or for the brain to function. It’s a miracle that she actually lived!” “Well she’s alive and well now.” Scolds Rainbow Dash “Excuse me for a second you have somepony here to see you.” Says Dimitri as he walks out the door. ‘I wonder who it is.’ Thinks Twilight. She hears someone coming and looks at the door. When it opens she sees a bright light as an alicorn enters the room. “Princess Celestia!” Every pony exclaims bowing except Twilight “Twilight are you ok? I got news from Spike that you were in the hospital.” She says “Can you tell us what happened?” “I was going to see Zecora when I heard a somepony scream. What would any pony else do? I went towards the sound of the scream to find what was going on. When I arrived there was this pegasus with the reddest eyes you have ever seen. He told me to come closer so I did. When I got close we grabbed me and… bit me I think. The next thing I remember I am here.” Twilight sees all her friends and Celestia looking shocked at her story. “That….that is interesting…” Mutters Celestia. “Can…I see your neck Twilight?” Twilight tilt’s her neck and Celestia sees fang marks on her neck. “This isn’t good I need Luna.” “Is something wrong with Twilight please tell me there isn’t?” Worriedly says Pinkie Pie. “I don’t know exactly but Luna will know. I will be back soon take Twilight home and keep her there and make sure she doesn’t get in sunlight understood!” Says Celestia with a panicked tone. “Ok we will!” Every pony says except Twilight and Celestia ‘What is going on…I wonder what Celestia knows that I don’t…and why she needs Luna?’ Twilight thinks. After Celestia leaves to Canter lot. Celestia sees her sister a Dark blue alicorn by the name of Luna. “Ah sis is thee well and Is Twilight well?” Luna says “She is but I need to know something.” “What does Thou need?” “Luna you created vamponys right?” Luna looks down sadly before responding “I did create vamponys to rival you a thousand years ago… Why does thou ask sister?” “I…I think Twilight has been bitten by a vampony…” “I thought thee told me that all of them were destroyed!” “I thought so but they weren’t apparently… Can you go to Ponyville and see if I’m just mistaken sister?” “I will sister.” Says Luna as she prepares to fly to Ponyville. Later once Luna arrives in Ponyville trying to find Twilights house. ‘Ugh I’ve got the worst headache and I’m so thirsty but water isn’t quenching my thirst…and my teeth feel sharper.’ Twilight hears a knock on the door ‘I wonder who that is’. Twilight goes downstairs and opens the door. “Princess Luna!” Twilight yells bowing “Can I come inside?” “Sure come on in Luna.” “Princess Celestia sent me to see if…you’re a vampony…” “A vampony from those old foals tells HA they can’t be real…” “Well then thee should know that vamponys have fangs and burn in the sun correct?” “Well yes and they don’t have a reflection.” “Has thou looked in a mirror…” “No…” “Then thee should go upstairs and look in a mirror…” ‘She can’t be serious vamponys are not real and they shall never be real… I was just attacked by some crazy psychopath.’ Twilight thinks as she and Luna go upstairs and enter the bathroom looking at the mirror. Twilight gasps at what she doesn’t see. “That’s impossible I don’t have a reflection!” “As I feared…thee certainly are a vampony then” “But still there just from a foals tell” “No there not Twilight. I created them with black magic to attack Celestia. They are harder, Better, Faster, and stronger than any pony else. But they have their weaknesses such as burning in the sun and needing blood to live” “But…It can’t be” “If thy wants we can step outside into the sun” “Ok let’s see the mirror could be just a trick.” Twilight and Luna go downstairs and open the door. Twilight walks outside and she screams in agony “Impossible…it can’t be!” “As I said thee are a vampony.” (End of chapter one) (Big thanks to my proofreader SoulPony)
Embracing the change“Thee should tell your friends Twilight” Says Luna. “C-can you go get them.” “I will Twilight, thy should get some rest this is a lot to take in.” Twilight sat down as Luna left her house. ‘This is …NO this cant be true!’ She opens her mouth and touches a hoof to her fang. “OUCH!” Twilight yelps looking at her bleeding hoof. “I guess…it is true…” She picks up a rag and cleans up her blood feeling… suddenly hungry. She hears her door open as 7 ponies walk in. “Twilight, Luna got us and she said we all needed to talk. Is something wrong? “Says Rainbow Dash. “Luna says I’m a….what did you call it?” “Thy Twilight you are a vampony” “Wait wha’ Did you say sugar cube?”Asks Apple Jack. “What is a vampony Princess?” Rarity says. “A vampony is a creature of the night I created a thousand years ago. To make them requires…powerful black magic. But the result was a pony that was better than any other pony in every way except a few. These…vamponys are able to gallop faster they are stronger they have excellent vision but at a few minor drawbacks. Since the opposite of black magic is light magic vamponys burn in the sunlight. Also to use these powerful abilities they require drinking blood to sustain themselves between life and death.” Twilights friends are shocked at this but Twilight is just looking at them a lustful look in her eyes. “Can thou get Spike and tell my sister that you are a vampony?” She says looking at Twilight. “Huh? Oh ok…” Twilight goes upstairs and gets Spike. “It’s time to get up already let me sleep another five minutes” Says Spike “Oh come on and get up this is important!” Chuckles Twilight as she shakes Spike. “Oh alright I’ll get up…” “Spike take a note saying that: Celestia you were Right Twilight is a vampony. –Luna Spike nods and writes the message sending it to Celestia as Twilight walks back downstairs. “Oh come on Dashie why did you have to go and cut yourself” Says Pinkie Pie “It’s ok Pinkie” Mutters Rainbow Dash. Twilight see Rainbows blood dribbling to the ground. “Hey Twilight are you ok?” Twilight looks at Rainbow as she says this. Her pupils now dark red and eyes like slits. The mane 5 look at Twilight right before she pounces on Rainbow. “GET OFF ME TWILIGHT!” Yells Rainbow as Twilight sinks her fangs into Rainbows neck spewing blood onto the walls. A dark blue magic wreaths around twilight and picks her off the ground from Luna’s horn. Rainbow passes out from blood loose. “Somepony get Spike and send Celestia a message telling her to get to Pony-Ville quick!” Luna shouts using the royal Canter Lot voice. Apple Jack runs up to Twilights room while the other 4 just stare in shock. “Blood!” Shouts Twilight trying to struggle out of the magic holding her. (Twilight is now becoming what you see in the cover art…Have Fun) A bright light happens and Celestia appears. She is shocked at the scene. “Twilight…..why….” She says in a horrified tone. Twilight seems to come to her senses but her eyes stay the same. She looks around. “I-im…..Sorry….” She whimpers charging magic in her horn. “Twilight wait!” Celestia shouts as Twilight teleports away to the Everfree Forest. “Twilight….turning into a creature of the night…I would never have thought…” Celestia says sadly. “I can’t believe that darling Twilight would do such a thing” Says Rarity “She attacked Rainbow on her on accord” Mutters Fluttershy “Ah I reckon…killed her…” Says Apple Jack sadly “Dashie NO!” Yells Pinkie Pie starting to cry. “We need to get Thou” Says Luna gesturing to Dashie “To the hospital NOW!” (Now Back to Twilight) Twilight gallops through the trees crying crimson tears. She gallops to the clearing she found the pegasus at. She sits down in the middle of it crying. “No one in Ponyville will accept me now I am a monster now.” (To let everyone know Twilight is slipping into liking vampirism and stuff just a FYI) She curls up on the ground and goes to sleep. She wakes up later sensing someone is watching her. “Who’s there?” Yells Twilight looking around in the darkness. “Ill accept you for who you are” Says a silky alluring voice like Celestias. Twilight sees the dark blue pegasus that bit her. “You…” “Hehe yes me” He says “YOU TURNED ME INTO THIS MONSTER!” She yells charging at the Stallion. She suddenly sees the that he is gone. “Where did you go!?!?” “Foalish mare. Do you think you can beat me… I have gone through exactly what you did. But I accepted my new ways and got over it. I’ve been watching you….your friends don’t like you anymore definitely that “Rainbow Dash” she hates you now… Accept your ways and join me...” “I-I…” “Join me my dear Twilight and we can rule….overthrow Celestia and never have to fear the sun again…” “I-I…I wont join you!” “Hmmmm?” Says the stallion. He takes out a knife and cuts a small part of his flesh. Blood dribbles to the ground. “Will you join my now?” “I….” Twilight her mind being flooded by bloodlust and wanting nothing more than the sun to never come up again. “I will join you…” “Good….Good…” “Let me introduce myself I am Twisted Fang.” Twilight smiles at him “What do we do now.” “Celestia is looking for you….to try and purge you of your darkness….we need to leave the Everfree forest for now…go to a place more secluded. “Ok….where t---“ “Twilight? Twilight is that you?” From the Distinctive voice of Celestia. Celestia Turns a corner and arrives in the clearing. “Twilight! Come with me now!” Says Twilights mentor. “…No….I won’t!” Celestia looks stunned at the statement “Twilight…don’t…do this!” Celestia warns. “No! I’m a monster now….I won’t go with you!” Celestia is shocked by Twilight her perfect student disobeying her. Twisted laughs as Twilight teleports them away. “I didn’t think you would stand up to her like that Twilight” “Well… Look can we just find somewhere to stay I’m tired…” “Ok fine….follow me” Twilight follows Twisted to an Abandoned house that’s in pretty good shape. ‘I don’t know why but I like Twisted…a lot’ Twilight thinks “Come in Twilight, tomorrow you will meet the rest of the gang and start your training.” (End of chapter 2) (Another big thanks to SouPony for proofreading!)
Loyalty is Corrupted.Twilight and Twisted wake up. “My dear Twilight…will you want to meet the rest of the gang? Or rather would you want to get breakfast?” Says Twisted smiling “Can we go meet the rest of the gang?” “Ok then follow me.” Chuckles Twisted gesturing to a ladder. He and Twilight go down the ladder and walk down a path. Twilight enters a room with about 20 earth ponies and pegasusi with weapons training and 10 unicorns training Black Magic. “Are…are all these vamponys?” “Yes Twilight and we…control them.” “Cool… wait what ‘we’ control them?” “Yes Twilight you’re my second in command” “R-really?” Practically yells Twilight a starry expression in her eyes. “Yes really….now let me take you to see our War General and our Black Magic master…” Twilight and Twisted walk over to the group of Unicorns. She sees a unicorn with a pure black mane a darkblue coat and black eyes. As Twilight looks closer her Cutie Mark is a pure black orb with 5 spikes coming out of it to form a star. This unicorn turns and sees them.. “Hello my liege” She said bowing. “At ease Dark Star” “Um hello..” Twilight says. This “Dark Star” notices Twilight. “New scum to train I see” snarls Dark Star ‘Not very nice I see’ Thinks Twilight “Now that I remember….I have to tell you. You have been replaced Twilight is second in command now…” Twisted scolds “WHAT!!!! You can’t replace my just like that!” “Yes I can….I’m the leader….remember?” “At least let me fight for my position!” “Ok fine! Start in 3…2….1… Go!” Twilight immediately fires a big bolt of magic at Dark Star. She not able to dodge in time is blown through the wall and into the other part of the training area. “Not even using black magic and hit me that hard. And that was the weakest of aggressive magic…” Mutters Dark Star. “Fine I’ll let you stay second in command…But it will be a honor to teach such a powerful unicorn the black arts” “Good now let’s go see our War General…” Says Twisted chuckling. As they walk away Twilight looks back with Dark Star with a hint of don’t mess with me again look. They enter another part of the room with training dummies and live fighting. Twilight notices a heavy built stallion like Big Macintosh. He is a dark brown pony with a ivory mane and violet eyes. His Cutie Mark was apparently two bloody swords crossed in a X formation. “Hello Razor Edge. I wanted you to meet our new student Twilight Sparkle.” This stallion turns away from commanding training. “Ahh hello my lord…And this” He points to Twilight. “Is the pony that sent Dark Star through that wall?” He scowls as he looks at a hole in the wall. “Erm….Yes I did…” “Good work my friend! No one’s beaten Dark Star that quickly….well except Twisted.” “Well I just wanted to show you the training area Twilight, come on I’m giving you private lessons…” He and Twilight went back upstairs to the house. “But first are you hungry.” “Yes a little.” “Then let’s go grab some ponies from PonyVille” (Now let’s see what happened with Rainbow and the rest of the ponies. Starting from when Twilight ran) “You get Rainbow to the hospital! I’m going to get Twilight!” Yells Celestia “Come hither and help me with Rainbow, Applejack.” Says Luna “Comin Sugar Cube” Says Applejack “The rest of thou go home. Thou shalt come see Rainbow in the morning.” “Ok….” Mutters Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Rarity. Luna and Applejack take Rainbow to the hospital where she nearly dies. In the middle of the night. “So….thirsty…” Mutters Rainbow waking up. She gets up out of her hospital bed and goes into the hallway. “Hey you, get back in bed!” Says nurse RedHeart. “I’m sorry I just got up for a drink.” “Well ill go get you a cup of water…just let me take this blood bag to a patient.” Rainbow stares at Redheart with a far away expression in her eyes. “Hey are you ok Rainbow?” Says Redheart as Rainbow begins drool “Uhm…Oh yeah I think there was somepony calling for help outside my window.” “Oh dear lets go look.” They walk into Rainbows room. “Hey there is nopony down there!” Says Redheart as Rainbow pounces on her. “GET OUT OFF ME!” She tries to push Rainbow off but is not successful. The only instinct Rainbow had was the few words running through her head ‘Blood! Feast on her Blood!’ Rainbow bites her on the neck. “AHHHH” She screams in agony as her blood splattered the entire room. “REDHEART ARE YOU O---“ Yells Dr.Dimitri. As he sees the pale Redheart (Shes pale because Rainbow drank all her blood so RedHeart is dead happy?) Rainbow looks up blood dripping from her mouth. She smiles evilly at Dimitri. Her eyes like Twilights, slitted and now red. Rainbow flies over to Dimitri in milliseconds and knocks him over. “GRAAAAAAH” Screams Dimitri as his blood is sucked dry. Rainbow stands up. “I can see why Twilight….went into a frenzy… This blood stuff is excellent….maybe I should join her.” (YES Vampirism corruption is so strong it corrupts you even if your element of loyalty! Rainbow goes searching for Twilight. (Somewhere far away) Twisted chuckles silently in his sleep. ‘Oh I just love tinkering with new vamponys minds. I just made the element of LOYALTY want to join me HA!’ He thinks. ‘This night can’t get better oh wait it did! I corrupted Twilight to join me…’ He laughs inside his mind ‘….and now with them on my side Celestias most powerful weapon is gone. What a wonderful night!’ (Back to Ponyville) “What happened her darling.” Asks Rarity “From what I now last night Redheart and Dimitri were killed.” Says Luna “ Did D-dashie did this?” Moans Pinkie Pie “Aye…from what I know thou friend Rainbow did this.” “C-could….this be an outbreak of vamponys?” Mumbles Fluttershy “It shalt most likely” “This isn’t good…we need to find thou friends Twilight and Rainbow…before they….Become full vamponys!” “Well the first place we should look is the Everfree forest…if that’s fine with you” Mumbles Fluttershy “Guys guys!” Yells Applejack “What Applejack?” Says Rarity “There has been another attack! Mr. and Mrs. Cake were attacked and killed last night!” “By vamponies again?” Mumbles Fluttershy” “Yes…” “We must find Twilight NOW!” Yells Luna using the royal Canterlot voice. The remaining mane 4 and Luna explore the Everfree forest trying to find any signs of Twilight. (Now back to Twilight) “Mmmm” Says Twilight licking blood off her lips. “Well Twilight I must attend some business. I will be back tomorrow so make “Friends” with some of our minions.” “Ok then….see you” As they leave Mr. Mrs. Cakes house. ‘Twisted….is so mysterious…I like him a lot’ Thinks Twilight as she walks to the Abandoned House. But that’s when she hears voices. (End of chapter 3 Yes I’m leaving this at a cliffhanger)
