Bloody Tears of a Sparkle

by Mossino

Loyalty is Corrupted.

Previous Chapter

Twilight and Twisted wake up.

“My dear Twilight…will you want to meet the rest of the gang? Or rather would you want to get breakfast?” Says Twisted smiling

“Can we go meet the rest of the gang?”

“Ok then follow me.” Chuckles Twisted gesturing to a ladder. He and Twilight go down the ladder and walk down a path. Twilight enters a room with about 20 earth ponies and pegasusi with weapons training and 10 unicorns training Black Magic.

“Are…are all these vamponys?”

“Yes Twilight and we…control them.”

“Cool… wait what ‘we’ control them?”

“Yes Twilight you’re my second in command”

“R-really?” Practically yells Twilight a starry expression in her eyes.

“Yes really….now let me take you to see our War General and our Black Magic master…” Twilight and Twisted walk over to the group of Unicorns. She sees a unicorn with a pure black mane a darkblue coat and black eyes. As Twilight looks closer her Cutie Mark is a pure black orb with 5 spikes coming out of it to form a star. This unicorn turns and sees them..

“Hello my liege” She said bowing.

“At ease Dark Star”

“Um hello..” Twilight says. This “Dark Star” notices Twilight.

“New scum to train I see” snarls Dark Star

‘Not very nice I see’ Thinks Twilight

“Now that I remember….I have to tell you. You have been replaced Twilight is second in command now…” Twisted scolds

“WHAT!!!! You can’t replace my just like that!”

“Yes I can….I’m the leader….remember?”

“At least let me fight for my position!”

“Ok fine! Start in 3…2….1… Go!” Twilight immediately fires a big bolt of magic at Dark Star. She not able to dodge in time is blown through the wall and into the other part of the training area.

“Not even using black magic and hit me that hard. And that was the weakest of aggressive magic…” Mutters Dark Star.

“Fine I’ll let you stay second in command…But it will be a honor to teach such a powerful unicorn the black arts”

“Good now let’s go see our War General…” Says Twisted chuckling. As they walk away Twilight looks back with Dark Star with a hint of don’t mess with me again look. They enter another part of the room with training dummies and live fighting. Twilight notices a heavy built stallion like Big Macintosh. He is a dark brown pony with a ivory mane and violet eyes. His Cutie Mark was apparently two bloody swords crossed in a X formation.

“Hello Razor Edge. I wanted you to meet our new student Twilight Sparkle.” This stallion turns away from commanding training.

“Ahh hello my lord…And this” He points to Twilight. “Is the pony that sent Dark Star through that wall?” He scowls as he looks at a hole in the wall.

“Erm….Yes I did…”

“Good work my friend! No one’s beaten Dark Star that quickly….well except Twisted.”

“Well I just wanted to show you the training area Twilight, come on I’m giving you private lessons…” He and Twilight went back upstairs to the house.

“But first are you hungry.”

“Yes a little.”

“Then let’s go grab some ponies from PonyVille”

(Now let’s see what happened with Rainbow and the rest of the ponies. Starting from when Twilight ran)

“You get Rainbow to the hospital! I’m going to get Twilight!” Yells Celestia

“Come hither and help me with Rainbow, Applejack.” Says Luna

“Comin Sugar Cube” Says Applejack

“The rest of thou go home. Thou shalt come see Rainbow in the morning.”

“Ok….” Mutters Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Rarity. Luna and Applejack take Rainbow to the hospital where she nearly dies.

In the middle of the night.

“So….thirsty…” Mutters Rainbow waking up. She gets up out of her hospital bed and goes into the hallway.

“Hey you, get back in bed!” Says nurse RedHeart.

“I’m sorry I just got up for a drink.”

“Well ill go get you a cup of water…just let me take this blood bag to a patient.” Rainbow stares at Redheart with a far away expression in her eyes.

“Hey are you ok Rainbow?” Says Redheart as Rainbow begins drool

“Uhm…Oh yeah I think there was somepony calling for help outside my window.”

“Oh dear lets go look.” They walk into Rainbows room.

“Hey there is nopony down there!” Says Redheart as Rainbow pounces on her.

“GET OUT OFF ME!” She tries to push Rainbow off but is not successful. The only instinct Rainbow had was the few words running through her head ‘Blood! Feast on her Blood!’ Rainbow bites her on the neck.

“AHHHH” She screams in agony as her blood splattered the entire room.

“REDHEART ARE YOU O---“ Yells Dr.Dimitri. As he sees the pale Redheart (Shes pale because Rainbow drank all her blood so RedHeart is dead happy?) Rainbow looks up blood dripping from her mouth. She smiles evilly at Dimitri. Her eyes like Twilights, slitted and now red. Rainbow flies over to Dimitri in milliseconds and knocks him over.

“GRAAAAAAH” Screams Dimitri as his blood is sucked dry. Rainbow stands up.

“I can see why Twilight….went into a frenzy… This blood stuff is excellent….maybe I should join her.” (YES Vampirism corruption is so strong it corrupts you even if your element of loyalty!

Rainbow goes searching for Twilight.

(Somewhere far away)

Twisted chuckles silently in his sleep. ‘Oh I just love tinkering with new vamponys minds. I just made the element of LOYALTY want to join me HA!’ He thinks. ‘This night can’t get better oh wait it did! I corrupted Twilight to join me…’ He laughs inside his mind ‘….and now with them on my side Celestias most powerful weapon is gone. What a wonderful night!’

(Back to Ponyville)

“What happened her darling.” Asks Rarity

“From what I now last night Redheart and Dimitri were killed.” Says Luna

“ Did D-dashie did this?” Moans Pinkie Pie

“Aye…from what I know thou friend Rainbow did this.”

“C-could….this be an outbreak of vamponys?” Mumbles Fluttershy

“It shalt most likely”

“This isn’t good…we need to find thou friends Twilight and Rainbow…before they….Become full vamponys!”

“Well the first place we should look is the Everfree forest…if that’s fine with you” Mumbles Fluttershy

“Guys guys!” Yells Applejack

“What Applejack?” Says Rarity

“There has been another attack! Mr. and Mrs. Cake were attacked and killed last night!”

“By vamponies again?” Mumbles Fluttershy”

“Yes…”

“We must find Twilight NOW!” Yells Luna using the royal Canterlot voice. The remaining mane 4 and Luna explore the Everfree forest trying to find any signs of Twilight.

(Now back to Twilight)

“Mmmm” Says Twilight licking blood off her lips.

“Well Twilight I must attend some business. I will be back tomorrow so make “Friends” with some of our minions.”

“Ok then….see you” As they leave Mr. Mrs. Cakes house.

‘Twisted….is so mysterious…I like him a lot’ Thinks Twilight as she walks to the Abandoned House. But that’s when she hears voices.

(End of chapter 3 Yes I’m leaving this at a cliffhanger)