Moonshine's Confused Love

by J-Devil

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Romance, Princess Luna, Original Character, Comedy, Random, Princess Celestia, Sex, Main 6
Length: 2092

She was a captain of the Equestrian guard. Was.

Twilight and Rainbowdash, chatting in the late of night when a loud bang arrives on the doors. A mysterious mare named Moonshine is on the other side. A removed Captain of the Equestrian Guard with no where to go looking for a book to read. Twilight lets her move in and Moonshine gets a bit frisky. So begins the tale of Moonshine confused love.

This story does not belong to me. It belongs to http://www.fimfiction.net/user/MoonShine it didnt do so well so im re writing it to see if it does any better. With his permission of course. The story line and characters all belong to him. Im just say..an editor/collaborator.

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Published 2012-10-22 20:50:02 UTC
Last updated 2012-10-22 20:50:02 UTC

A New Life

"So then i did a double sonic rainboom." Rainbowdash blared out motioning the double rings to give twilight a idea of what it looked like. "Oh... oh.. oh, then everyone on the ground looked up and gasped. They pointed in amazement one of them was so amazed he yelled 'What does it Mean?'" Twilight was trying to block her out.

"Im sure it was a moment that they will never forget." Twilight giggled.

"Yeah. Im sure it will be, I bet i went so fast i gave the CMC puberty." Rainbowdash began to laugh out rolling on the floor.

"Now rainbow you know that's not how you reach puber-..."

A loud crash at the door. The both of them looked at the door. Nothing happened. Twilight opened her mouth to continue talking when a knock on the door sounded.

Knock knock knock

They didn't move. "Probably somepony going around asking for donations leave it be."Rainbow said.

"Probably. hey remember that falling star two years ago?" Twilight said asked trying to change the subject.

"Of course it almost hit me you know."

"What? Now i know that's a lie." Twilight said turning from her book.

"No its the total truth. There i was napping on a cloud, just above the Everfree forest, When the falling star came down and ran straight through my cloud. I woke up at the incoming sound and slide off of it. I thought it was somepony trying to be funny so i decided to follow it. It hit the ground hard and i pulled up hiding in a tree expecting a alien or something, but then a pink mare walked out of the smoke, and trotted away."

Twilight stood from her place mat she had been laying down on and walked to a book shelf. "Really now? That is extremely curious."

The Knocking continued. They continued ignoring it.

"Twilight what are you reading?" Rainbowdash asked.

She sighed pushing the book back into its spot on the shelf. "Nothing."

The knocking continued. "Uggg." She rushed to the doors, and opened them "Yes?"

A pink mare rushed inside. "Thank you. Its to cold out there. Im not used to it, im sorry for pushing you aside it was just...so cold." She shivered. Twilight, looked over the mare, she had never seen her before. Pinkie would have fun with that.

"Twilight can you come over here for a second?" Twilight heard her name called and turned to face Rainbowdash.

"Yes Rainbowdash?" She trotted over to the cyan pony.

She whispered to her. "That's the pony from the falling star" Twilight backed her head and raised her eyebrow.

"No it can't be" she said out loud.

"Umm excuse me? This is a library correct?" Twilight looked back at the pink pony.

"Of course what do you need?" She trotted to the center of the room where a log book laid.

"Anything on Equestrian History." Twilight looked over at the pony now looking at her features. A light lavender coat, long teal hair, straight as the wooden boards, parted like Fluttershy growing straight down the center and falls to a side but straight like a saddened Pinkie Pie, with a thick dark pink stripe in the middle. Her nose was black, faded as it goes in. Her nose was thin and pristine like her body, her tail long like Fluttershys, her wings as skinny as her body, leading edge of the wings had a deep black color on them, and on on top of her head it looked like...a horn.

"Im sorry what was that?" Twilight asked.

"Equestrian History. Anything really. I won't be busy tonight. Ive got no where to go after all." She began to chuckle to herself then looking down to the floor she sighed and let a tear fall. She shook her head and looked up with her smile back. "Im sorry, again." She looked out to books on the wall and then swung her head back to Twilight. "I am sincerely sorry again. But i must have left my manors in Canterlot." Twilights ears perked up at the sound of a Canterlot and the sound of a Canterlopian mare. "My name is Moonshine." She said under her breath.

"Your from Canterlot?" Twilight asked just to make sure she heard Moonshine right.

"Yes i was a captain of the Equestrian Royal Guard. I worked under a colt named Shining Armor."

"You know my brother?" Twilight said shocked. Moonshine looked back equally shocked

"Your brother?"

"Yes, but why did you say 'was a captain'?"

"Ohh well after a little...incident i was removed from duty."

Twilight began to wonder what could one do to be removed from the post of captain of a guard. They were treated with the utmost respect. They must have a strong mind and a even stronger will. Usually a captains cutie mark would be a shield and something else, something that represented the pony. She glanced at the pony's flank to find it...blank.

"Anyway heres a book for you." A book flew out of a shelf covered in a magical light. It was titled ' Equestrian Conquest. Discords Fall.' "One of my favorites actually."

"One thanks you miss...miss?"

"Twilight."

"Thank you Miss Twilight. When should it be back?"

"Do you even have a place to go too?" She didn't reply. "You can stay here until you get on your hooves." Moonshines eyes open wide and a huge smile came across her face.

"No no no, i can't."

"Really its no trouble there's an extra room. right up the stairs."

From a room above the staircase a loud thump sounded. Moonshines training kicked in and her head turned to the door which would be hers. Her wings bolted and she flew hoof first into the room. “Moonshine! It’s ok.” Just then Moonshine knocks the door open.

“Freeze criminal!” she pounces at Rainbow pinning her to the ground, “How dare you intrude on this fine mare’s property.” Moonshine angrily shouts out whilst applying more pressure onto Rainbow’s legs. Twilight then enters, runs to Moonshine and pulls at her tail with her mouth. Moonshine instantly shouts out in pain, getting off Rainbowdash and turns to Twilight. “What is wrong with you? Do you not realize this criminal has trespassed on your property?” Moonshine barked at Twilight. She then looks at Twilight's mouth and notices her tail is still in her mouth. Twilight releases her tail, Moonshine then looks at with a face of disgust, “Now I’ll have to get that washed.”

"Don't hurt her, shes a friend who was here before you arrived. I keep my collection of her favorite books in here."

"Oh. Im so sorry for my actions miss." She states quickly looking over at the cyan rainbow maned mare, hopping for forgiveness, were there is none to be found.

"Ohh yeah!? Well im not sorry for mine." She quickly turns and bucks Moonshine while her eyes where closed and her smile was large. Her hoof connects with Moonshines leg and a bone snaps. Moonshine screams in pain at the unexpected break. Rainbowdash rushes past the falling pink mare and tries to get out of the room. Moonshine tries to fly in front of the door but when she lands her legs buckle under the pain and she falls. Rainbow gets out and bursts through the lobby and gets out.

Twilight runs to Moonshine "Dammit Rainbow! Stay here." As if she was going anywhere with a snapped in half femur. Minutes later Twilight came back in with a strip of thick leather, a stump of wood, and a med kit. "Now this is going to hurt allot please bare with it. Bite hard on this." She stuck the leather into her mouth. Moonshine did as she was told. "I read in a book once when a bone is broken without breaking the skin its allot more painful to heal. I've never done healing magic either. I'm sorry." She places the stump of wood on the part of her leg that looked deformed. She wrapped the leg in a bandage then used magic and a hoof to force the bone back into place. Moonshine screamed, most likely cursing. Her words cut off by the leather. A tear ran down her face. "Almost done. Twilight broke the piece of wood in two, and used them to make a splint. She bent down into touching her horn to the leg. Moonshine flinched in pain.

A warm sensation filled her leg. Her bone began to heal. The skin became her normal shade of candy pink and she stood. Twilight released her magical grip and took a step back all her magic pool drained.

***

Her hoof connected with her leg. A pop sounded and Moonshine hit the ground screaming in pain.The rainbow maned pegasus took off to the door and Moonshine pushed through the pain to intercept her, but when she touched down she buckled and screamed under the pain of pressure. The cyan mare got away and was able to wound a former captain of the Equestrian Guard. How did i not see that coming she thought to herself laying down on the floor Twilight said something but she barely heard it. Her mind screaming at her to find that cyan pony. She left the room and left Moonshine with her pain stricken thoughts. Not many were there, but they were there. 1. Im going to mame that mare. 2. I need to get this leg fixed 3. Where did Twilight go? To get the cyan pony? Good il wring her throat. 4. Twilight was actually really hot. 5. I shouldn't be thinking that, that's what got me kicked out of the guard. 6.Why do i feel like somethings in my mouth? The sixth was what brought her to open her eyes.

Twilight was saying something but she couldn't here her own thoughts ragging through her head. A leather Stip and a wooden block had been place on her. One in her mouth another on her leg. The magic began and her leg slid back to the way it was supposed to look. An even sharper pain stuck through her. She began to cry and scream into the leather strip, which she now knew was placed there so she wouldn't bite down to hard and break her teeth or bite her tongue. Is she hitting on me already......well she is helping me with my hoof and she’s pretty. No, no. I will not be like that. That’s what got me kicked out of the guards. Moonshine though to herself, looking down at Twilight with an affectionate look on her face as she gets the wrong impression about Twilight and assumes that Twilight now loves her.

When twilight finished Moonshine planted a soft kiss on her lips. "Thank you." She kissed her again, then again, then again. Twilight looked taken aback but she didn't move away. Moonshine planted one last kiss on Twilight's lips but this one was a long and passionate one. She forced Twilight down onto her back and continued to kiss her. Twilight begins to kiss back holding the pink pegasus, her wings out stretched and there coats rubbing against each other. Moonshine began to get a little more risky and moved a hoof down towards Twilight's lower lips. Her back arched as she felt a cool touch hit her clit. She moaned and squeezed Moonshine tight. But Moonshine did't stay with her upper lips for long. She soon lowered herself so that her face was now in Twilight s crotch.

She began to lick furiously and Twilight moaned, louder and louder each passing minute from her new house guest down licking her pussy. She swore twilight came once but she didn't know. Once Moonshine got enough of the taste of Twilight's juices, she slowly lifted her bad leg up over Twilight's body and her good leg under Twilight's leg. She pushed her own dripping twat onto Twilight's and she rubbed them together holding onto Twilight's knee for support. And there on the wooden floor, they both rubbed each other until moonshine came.

Moonshine took it app-on herself to make sure twilight was all nice and finished. She removed her Pussy from Twilight's twitching cunt. She pressed a hoof to hers and hoofed her as fast as she could go, Twilight screamed in both pain and pleasure as her hole stretched to fit in. But she began to love the feeling and she tightened around her hoof, cumming yet again. Then she passed out.