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The Price of Loyalty

by Silentpegasus
Rainbow Dash is having nighmares. But they're only dreams....... right?

Rainbow Dash has been plagued by nightmares for a week, but she is slowly starting to lose it. When her friends go to Canterlot to get Celestia's guidance the truth may shock them to their very core.

Rainbow's only hope seems to be in an ancient spell that can either save her or kill her.


This is my first fan fic and I am looking for honest feed back.
Let me know in the comments below.
If you find anything wrong with my Grammer please point it out.

Everyone
Cancelled
Sad
Romance
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
 
RPOPM

18009 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read
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16 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 2012-11-13 03:55:33 UTC
    1339
  2. Chapter 2 2012-11-12 19:58:10 UTC
    800
  3. Chapter 3 2012-11-09 12:13:54 UTC
    798
  4. Chapter 4 2012-11-09 12:12:33 UTC
    1237
  5. Chapter 5 2012-11-09 12:13:01 UTC
    886
  6. Chapter 6 2012-11-09 12:13:32 UTC
    910
  7. Chapter 7 2012-11-11 04:16:18 UTC
    616
  8. Chapter 8 2012-11-11 19:53:41 UTC
    548
  9. Chapter 9 2012-11-11 20:06:11 UTC
    1051
  10. Chapter 10 2012-11-13 04:02:10 UTC
    1927
  11. Chapter 11 2012-11-14 23:43:15 UTC
    1737
  12. Chapter 12 2012-11-16 00:44:53 UTC
    690
  13. Chapter 13 2012-11-20 21:51:01 UTC
    1255
  14. Chapter 14 2012-11-23 15:24:16 UTC
    2172
  15. Chapter 15 2012-12-01 02:19:20 UTC
    923
  16. Chapter 16 2012-12-09 15:55:26 UTC
    1120