Spa Treatment

by Starswirls Beard

Rating: mature
Tags: Fluttershy, Sex, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rarity, Romance
Length: 1144

Fluttershy shows Rarity that she can be assertive.

Fluttershy fantasizes about being more assertive with Rarity, and puts a plan together to make it happen.

Written as a request by Rar1ty.

Published 2012-10-26 10:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2012-10-26 10:10:02 UTC

Chapter 1

Fluttershy examined herself in the full length mirror in the bedroom of her tiny cottage. She tried to take in every detail about herself; her long flowing mane and tail, her freshly preened wings that shone in the light, her slim body and delicate features. By all definitions, she was a textbook example of smoking hot. Rarity commented at least twice every spa trip how envious she was of the butter yellow Pegasus' natural beauty and grace. She was aware of how she looked, and as she stood in the mirror admiring her looks she felt the familiar tingle in her nether regions. In her minds eye she could see Rarity looking at her through the steam in the sauna, telling her how attractive she was. The white mare complimented her demure nature and kind personality. Her gaze was lidded, beckoning the Pegasus toward her from the other end of the room. She trotted closer and Rarity smiled in the gentle way that reserved for Fluttershy only. She treated the yellow mare like precious porcelain. Fluttershy wanted nothing more than to wipe that look off of her face and show her that she wouldn't break.

She trotted over to her bed and lay down, the tingling sensations spreading warmth throughout her body. In her mind Rarity reached out and caressed her cheek and spoke of how she loved to look at her. The unicorn ran her manicured hoof through the pink tresses lightly, almost as if she were afraid to put pressure. The yellow Pegasus fought the instinct to hide behind her mane and leaned into the touch, nuzzling the other mare lovingly.

“Its okay Rarity, I won't break if you touch me.”

“Oh darling, how I wish I could believe you. I just know how delicate you are...I'm afraid I may damage you in some way.”

Fluttershy frowned, feeling a heat inside her that wasn't there before. Despite what others may have felt she could take care of herself. She lived at the edge of the most dangerous and untamed forest in Equestria for Celestia's sake! She could hear Iron Wills voice echoing in the back of her mind now. If you want to insert, YOU HAVE TO ASSERT! The butter yellow mare felt new resolve welling up within her. She had to show Rarity that she wasn't the fragile little thing that everypony thought she was. She needed to take charge. She needed to be assertive.

She leaned forward and pressed her lips to the startled white fashionista. They tasted vaguely of the sweet violet lip gloss she normally wore. Rarity was almost to stunned to react but quickly picked up, leaning in and deepening the kiss. The feeling was divine; Fluttershy had never known that a kiss could hold such feeling, let alone make her so wet.

Back on her bed a hoof snaked down her body, running along the slim stomach making her wings live up to her name. They fluttered briefly as it continued to make its way down, resting lightly over the glistening lips of her love. Her hips twitched of their own accord, making her need known. She began to stroke them gently, turning her focus back to her minds eye.

Running her fore-hooves over the soft white coat, she coaxed the other mare down onto the bench on her back. She pressed her lips forcefully onto Rarity's and let her tongue snake out. Pushing into the hot wet mouth beneath her Fluttershy could feel the other mares resolve breaking down. She would show her that she wasn't a pushover, she would show her just how assertive she could be. The Pegasus broke the kiss and moved down to the deliciously exposed neck. She nipped and kissed along the perfumed skin and each action drove a pant from her partner. It wasn't enough. She bit down hard, causing the mare beneath her to squirm and moan loudly. She repeated the motion on the other side, making sure to leave her mark.

Moving downward, she licked and caressed the erect nipples that presented themselves for her attention. Fluttershy took them in her fore-hooves and massaged in circles, bringing a string of unladylike curses from the fashionista. It was time to move on.

In reality, her hoof stroked faster and harder. Her head turned side to side as she continued her mental and physical assault of her senses, immersing her mind in the feel of Rarity's coat hair dragging along hers. The sweet moans and sighs as she found all of the other mares favorite spots filled her with a power she didn't know she could possess. It made the fire in her core that much hotter, lubricating her slit under her stroking hoof.

Rarity's head also turned from side to side on the bench as Fluttershy breathed cool air onto her aching need. She shuddered and shivered as a feather drew along her slit and tickled it gently.

“Oh come now darling, please don't make me wait any longer...” The white fashionista moaned desperately.

“The only one coming right now is you Rarity.” With those words, she dove in.

The taste was like nothing she had ever had in her life. The sweet taste of violet petals mixed with the spiciness of Rarity's natural taste was amazing, she could drink it in forever. She ran her tongue up and down the slit with reckless abandon making the other mare moan and shiver. Two manicured hooves pushed her closer and she obliged, plunging into the depths of her lover. She worked her tongue for all it was worth, dominating the soaking pussy before her. Diamond covered hips rocked back and forth as Fluttershy's tongue pounded in and out in a rhythm only they could hear.

Fantasy and reality synched together as the yellow hoof stroked over her pussy, squelching almost lewdly as it rubbed. She could feel the orgasm building, but she had to hold out for her mare. With a free hoof she reached for Rarity's nub and pressed. The other mare came hard. She screamed the Pegasus's name and squirted her juice down the yellow ponies chin as she tried to lick it all up in vain. Her own orgasm was not far behind and she felt the explosion rock her to her core, spreading warmth throughout her body and soaking her hoof.

Rarity looked up at her as she climbed up on the bench. The look in her eyes was completely satisfied and the yellow mare could hardly believe that she had done that. She smiled and placed another kiss on the soft painted lips. Even after making love the other mare managed to look absolutely beautiful. Pulling out of her fantasy, Fluttershy rolled over and out of the wet spots on her sheets.

Tomorrow was her spa day. She would be assertive.