Nocturnal Savage

by Boxcar Racer

Chapter 1,2,3

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Here i am, sitting in Equestria, but not really in the place I wanted to.

I have been sitting in this cave for about 3 years now. When I got here, I expected to be welcomed, but all I remember that I was knocked unconscious, then probably left here.

They never said that they were THIS unfriendly in the show! I didn't even know that there was an deep and dark cave anywhere  near Ponyville!

When I woke up, I remember hearing Twilight say, "He could be a threat" to somepony else. When I heard it, I started to yell : "HEY! LET ME OUT!", but they didn't listen. Since then, I have been living on any animal that has been stupid enough to fly or walk in this deep and dark cave and fall next to me.

The cave was really dark. I barely even saw my own hands! Someday, i will become INSANE if I don't escape. I had never felt like this before. I WANTED to revenge. I NEEDED to revenge.

I didn't care how i would do it, i just wanted to revenge. I would have escaped a long time ago if there was ANY other way out than climbing. The ledges were REALLY sharp and the wall looked really unfriendly. I decided to do it because I was sick sitting here in this goddamn cave almost starving to death and just waiting to go insane.

It was really hard to climb because you always hit your finger on a sharp ledge or slip. I climbed for 32 minutes and FINALLY got up. I headed back to Ponyville. My fingers were bleeding and I was hungry but i didn't care. I was angry. I wanted my revenge. I just need the tools for it.

After i got to Ponyville, I hid behind a tree near the edge of the town. All the ponies were busy doing whatever they were doing.

I was searching for a better place to hide and saw a small warehouse near the library where Twilight lives. It was really hard to sneak past all the ponies there, but I managed to do it. I went inside and saw all these tools from Earth.

I was really surprised for a while, then I guessed Twilight has been taking random objects from our universe to study and use them. There were tools like hammers, chainsaws, sledgehammers, saws, pickaxes... Wait, PICKAXES?

When I saw them, I was surprised and happy at the same time. I was a huge fan of 80's slasher films, and My Bloody Valentine was one of my favorite ones. It really reminded me of that movie so i took it with me.

I was lucky and found an old miner's outfit and gardening scissors. The gardening scissors reminded me of The Burning, so I took them too. It was quite hard not to make noises while taking them or while walking around.

I searched for some more goodies, but I couldn't carry any more tools. I took the pickaxe and gardening scissors, put on the outfit and left the warehouse. Once again, it was really hard to sneak past  the ponies but now even harder, because i had all the tools. I heard somepony say : "Did you see something moving there" while pointing with his hoof where I was a few seconds ago.

Luckily, he though to himself that it was only his imagination and i got past them all. I have found a way to get my revenge. Stalk Twilight and her friends like any other slasher movie villain and murder them. They will never see it coming! I WILL get my revenge.

After I got my supplies out from the warehouse, I waited for night to arrive. After the night fell upon Equestria, I was seeking for a target.

Tonight, I would drain my first blood. Pretty much everypony was asleep by now, except Caramel. I wasn't sure what he was doing up so late and i couldn't care less. I guess he was cleaning the town or some crap that i didn't care about.

I went closer to see if there were any other ponies around. Nope, its only Caramel. I started to make loud breathing noises with the gas mask to creep him out. He was scared and asked " Who's there?". Before he was able to do anything else, I ran to him and hit him with my pickaxe in the gut.

It seemed to be effective, he was bleeding heavily and finally passed out from the blood loss. I dragged his body to the forest and hang it in a tree in a hope that somepony would follow the blood trails and find his body. Also, just for fun, i went inside the library and wrote : " I know when you are sleeping " on the wall to scare Twilight. I'm waiting for the next night to get my next target...

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