Six Stallions (or so called)

by BroniesAUS

Rating: teen
Tags: Random, Princess Celestia, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Main 6, Romance, Princess Luna, Comedy, Queen Chrysalis, Other, Adventure
Length: 1319

Trouble is stirring up in Ponyville after six new stallions show up.

Trouble is stirring in Ponyvile when six new stallions and each of The Elements of Harmony is falling head over heels after the "New Mane 6".
Night Glint, Surprise, Yellow Cherry, Etiquette, Hoofstreak and Calm Demeanour are the Mane 6s equals, but when they start acting strange who know what'll happen.
When Pinkie and Applejack notice the suspicious activity they go and investigate, and the revelation they uncover will threaten the safety of Ponyville and all of Equestria.

Guys, be easy on me, this is my first story and I'm short on time at the moment.

Published 2012-11-06 05:30:02 UTC
Last updated 2012-11-06 05:30:02 UTC

Chapter 1-Love at First Sight

First chapter of my first story, let's do this!

(fillingfillinginfillingin Anyway, my next story shall be war in Equestria SPOILERS FOR MY NEXT STORY: Rainbow Dash goes insane because of the loss of Applejack and Fluttershy, then kills the rest of the Mane 6 and yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada something to do with the EoH.)

Chapter 1 - Love at First Sight

Six creatures tumbled out of the Everfree Forest.
"That manticore almost tore my wings off!"
"Shhhhh, we're doing this for her, if we don't, we die."
"Okay that still makes me wanna go rogue"
"Yeah, whatever."
"Sorry to interupt your pointless conversation, but are we all ready? Ya know, no wings or horns out of place."

-

The six mares (plus dragon) walked through Ponyville, each one having different thoughts on their mind.
Pinkie Pie was rambling on about something inaudible to the other mares.
Rainbow was bragging on about her new routine, involving backflips, barrel rolls and a last minute dive.
The sun shone bright as the ponies all blabbered about their days, gossip and many other things, but the six mares were interrupted by a "THUD" .
They had crashed into a group of six stallions.

-

Everypony got up with a slight aching throb in their skull.
Looking around they could see a brown stallion, a black one, a white one, a dark blue one, a green one and a beige stallion, all giving the Mane 6 strange looks.
They each had a grey mane, a dark blue mane, a yellow mane, an orange mane, a dark green mane and a white and orange mane respectively.
Recovering from their head on collision, Spike said "HAHA, return of Rainbow Crash!"
"Spike! That's not nice."
"Heheh, sorry Twilight", Spike apologised.
Pinkie shrieked, "EEEEEEEEEK! I've never seen you before! I need to throw you a party, a super dooper special one! Oh yeah, partying is my specialty!"
Pinkie Pie's head was about to explode with excitement.
"So who are y'all?" Applejack questioned.
The first one to speak up was wearing a dirty hat and vest.
"Oh yeah, I'm from the Cherry Hoof Ranch and I've came to taste Ponyville's fine apples."
Applejack replied, "Lemme show ya to tha barn, ya'll look a mighty lot like mah cousin Braeburn."

-

Back at the meeting between the rest of the ponies left behind, Twilight exclaimed "So, your names Night Glint huh? And your cutie mark's a book?"
"Defininitely, Uhhhhhh...-" "My name is Twilight, Twilight Sparkle", she explained.
"Can we go to the library to talk?" Twilight asked Night Glint.
"Sure", and they galloped off.
On their way to the giant tree the clip-clop of their hooves alerted a very dangerous creature in the forest.
Very dangerous.
The beast echoed an evil, horrifying and giddy laugh.

-

"So , Cherry Hoof Ranch, huh? You must know Cherry Jubilee, ah guess."
"Uhhhhhh... Ohhhhh... Um... Oh yeah I know her!", the gruff stallion replied, who's name was apparently Yellow Cherry.
His cutie mark was his namesake, a yellow cherry.
Applejack had thought about organising a date with this stallion, at least she wouldn't go out with Rainbow Dash (Big Mac and Granny Smith don't approve of Coltcuddling and Fillyfooling).

-

Surprise's cutie mark represented an orange and pink party hat.
Hmmmm... Kinda reminds me of someone.
"Surprise! That's an awesome name! So your special talent is partying too!? But I thought every pony had different special talents? Oh well.", the exuberant pink pony asked, not shouting for once.
"Uhhhhhh, yeah, I once threw a party so big in Ganderspot they had to close down the shop to clean up the place."
Pinkie Pie burst into laughter " Oh, silly pony. You mean Canterlot!"
"Ummm... Yeah that's exactly what I meant, Pinkie Shy" the now embarrassed stallion said.
"I'm watching you" Pinkie whispered, losing all of the happiness and cheery tone from her voice.

A nearby mare could swear he saw her hair deflate, and the pink one pullout a knife.

Dear Princess Celestia,

Night Glint is a fascinating pony I have just met and I admit, am extremely attracted to.
He used to go to Canterlot School for Talented Unicorns when he was younger.
He has a strange, yet beautiful black coat, a long horn and... (a shmexy shmexy plot hole that is as big as Twilight's head.)

-

Twilight couldn't think of anything else to write in her letter.
She couldn't get Night Glint out of her head, his long black silky coat, his long horn, "Imagine what he could do with that", Twilight thought to herself.
Twilight became lost in writing her letters again.
"I'm gonna go to bed now Twi ", Night Glint mumbled.
Twilight had allowed him to stay at her house for the time, and I mean sure, he had the whole package and perfect for a busy pony like Twilight.

-

Rarity woke up next morning to hear a "THUD THUD THUD" on her door.
"Welcome to Carousel Boutique, where every dress is chic, unique and magnifique! Oh, deary me, that must be Etiquette knocking on my door."
Rarity opened the door and she was right, and a beige Unicorn stallion let himself in.
"Hello, Charity", Etiquette said in a posh polite manner, his monocle cutie mark almost gleaming bright.
"Oh, it's Rarity darling."

-

Spike looked through the window of Rarity's boutique and almost began to cry.
"Rarity? With a stallion!? Why I better-"
Spike cut himself off and remembered Rarity deserves what she wants.
In fact, Spike almost wanted to punch himself, denying what a beautiful mare like Rarity wants.

-

"Wouldn't a handsome hunk of a pony like you deserve to stay here, perhaps even go on a date?" Rarity flirted.
"Heh heh heh, I would very much like that Lady Rarity", Etiquette (look I'm already running out of words so I'm just going to use)
said.
"Well, I think I could get Twilight to arrange a trip for us to Canterlot Cuisine."

-

"Twilight honey, are you home?" Rarity asked, or more or so yelled.
"Uhhhhhh, yeah are you home Twilight Glimmer?" Etiquette said, dumbly.
"Its Sparkle honey, common mistake." Rarity whispered to Etiquette.
"It's okay Rarity, I'll be out in a sec."

-

Rainbow Dash woke up next to Hoofstreak who she already proposed sex to, which he shot down, for now.
Rainbow thought his messy mane was so awesome,
"Wow. I think you came on just a little fast." the dark blue Pegasus told Rainbow.
"Hey, what can I say, I'm Rainbow Dash and I do everything quickly."
"Yeah, whatever I have a couple of stories to tell.

-

...so then I accelerated my wing speed as fast I could, the Royal Guard hot on my tracks, although I wasn't looking where I was going and crashed straight into this mare's plot!
"BWUHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH!!!", Rainbow Dash laughed so loud she coughed (even if it was a little bit put on).

-

Rarity walked into Twilight's treehouse, to see that parts of the floor were partially covered in scrunched up paper.
"Twilight, hun, are you okay", Rarity asked in concern.
"OH FINE, just fine",Twilight Sparkle said, staring Rarity daggers.
A few loose hairs popped up on Twilight's mane-do.

-

Everypony but Fluttershy was being all lovey-dovey, but she was just too shy to confess her attraction to Calm Demeanour.
Even if he was the same quiet, cute and nervous pony as Fluttershy.
Fluttershy stood in front of Angel Bunny, pacing around the room saying "You can do this, you can do this, he's your true love."
Fluttershy's door opened, and she screamed "OHMYGOSH I love you!", that said, she flew upstairs and cried under her bed.
Peeking down the stars she could see a confused pony, with a cutie mark that looked like a brohoof, representing kindness.
Next to him was an even more confused marshmallow white mare.