The stars in the sky.

by Dr-J33

Chapter 2

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Comet tail woke up on the roof of the observatory next to his telescope. Falling asleep during his stargazing was not uncommon for him.

"Oooohhhh....." Groaned Comet tail.

He rubbed his head with his hoof.

"I gotta stop sleeping on the roof."

Comet tail grabbed a nearby notebook with magic.

"Least i found that meteor shower heading my way." Said Comet tail.

Comet tail walked down the stairs back into the observatory.

"What do i have planned for today?" Thought Comet tail.

Comet tail felt his stomach growl.

"Guess breakfast is the first thing." Chuckled Comet tail.

He loaded his notebook into a saddlebag that was lying by the front door.

"Maybe i"ll run into Twilight." Thought Comet tail.

He levitated the saddle bags onto his back and walked out the door.


Comet tail sat at an outside table to a cafe that he often visited. His waiter was taking awhile so he took out his notebook and started drawing in it.

"Just needs a horn..... There."

Comet tail finished drawing a picture of Twilight.

"Not bad." Thought Comet tail.

Comet tail looked up from his drawing and noticed Caramel walking his way.

"Caramel!" Yelled Comet tail.

Caramel walked up to his friend.

"Morning comet." Said Caramel.

"Morning." Said Comet tail. "Care to join me?"

Caramel smiled and sat at the seat across from Comet tail.

"Whats with the notebook?" Asked Caramel.

"Im going over some notes from last night's star watching." Replied Comet tail.

A waiter walked up to them.

"Ready to order?"

Comet tail looked at the waiter.

"Just a hay omlet and some coffee." Said Comet tail.

"Ill have some pancakes." Said Caramel.

The waiter nodded and walked inside.

"How was last night?" Asked Comet tail.

"Never happened." Said Caramel. "I overslept."

Comet tail set his notebook onto the table.

"Caramel you cant just keep procrastinating on this." Said Comet tail. "Your loosing time-"

Comet tail was cut off when a Twilight Sparkle walked by, a saddlebag on her back as she hummed a tune to herself. Comet tail stopped talking and watched as she passed by. Caramel raised a confused eyebrow.

"Comet?"

Comet tail shook his head and looked back at Caramel.

"Sorry, got distracted." Said Comet tail.

"Right......" Said Caramel. "Any interesting finds last night?"

"Not really." Replied Comet tail. "But by the looks of it, theres going to be a meteor shower within the next two months."

Comet reached for his notebook, but accidentally knocked it on the ground. Caramel picked it off the ground and glanced at the page it was on.

"........ Comet."

A smug look grew on Caramel's face.

"You like Twilight, dont you?" Said Caramel smugly.

Comet tail blushed a bright shade of red.

"What-...... No..... Er.... Well."

Caramel chuckled.

"Comet you cant just keep procrastinating on this." Said Caramel. "Your loosing time-"

The waiter walked out and set their meals on the table.

"Enjoy your meal."

The waiter stepped back inside.

"Lets just eat." Said Comet tail, taking his notebook back.


Comet tail walked away from the cafe. After he had finished his meal and paid, he decided to see what Noteworthy was up to.

"Maybe i can hang with Noteworthy today." Thought Comet tail.

Comet tail reached the marble building that served as Noteworthy's place of business, as well as his home. He stepped inside and saw Noteworthy at the front desk, brainstorming lyrics to a song.

"Hey Note." Said Comet tail.

Noteworthy looked up from his work.

"Hi." Said Noteworthy. "Sorry but i cant hang right now. I have to finish an important commission."

Comet tail frowned slightly.

"Oh..."

"Maybe next time." Said Noteworthy.

Comet tail walked out and Noteworthy resumed his work.


Comet tail walked down the streets of ponyville.

"Guess ill see what Twilight is doing." Thought Comet tail. "Maybe grab a book while im there."

Comet tail could see the library in the distance.

"Comet fail."

Comet tail stopped and turned around. Standing behind him was Goldengrape.

"And where are you off to?" Demanded Goldengrape.

"You trying to start something?" Asked Comet tail, irritated by Goldengrape.

"Actually im here to finish what started last night." Said Golden grape.

Goldengrape then pushed Comet tail rather hard, causing him to stumble and hit a home.

"Thats real mature Goldengrape!" Yelled Comet tail.

Goldengrape laughed and walked away, pleased with his actions. Comet tail got up and dusted himself off.

"Jerk." Thought Comet tail.

Comet tail walked up to the library and opened the front door fast. As he opened the door, he heard a loud thump.

"Hm!?"

Comet tail stepped inside and looked down. Lying on the floor unconsious next to the door was Twilight.

"Sweet celestia!" Thought Comet tail.

"Nice move bro." Said a sarcastic voice

Comet tail looked and saw Spike, Twilight's dragon companion looking at him.

"You nailed her with the door." Said Spike.

Comet tail panicked.

"Oh celestia! Is she going to be alright?!"

"Its not the first time this has happened." Said spike.

Spike grabbed one of Twilight's hooves and began pulling her towards the stairs.

"Uh i can take her upstairs." Said Comet tail.

Spike stopped.

"Great!" Said spike.

Spike let go and walked into another room.

"Lets get you upstairs." Said Comet tail.

His horn gave off a blue glow as he lifted Twilight onto his back. Surprisingly she weighed less than he thought she would.

"Here we go."

Comet tail began to walk up the stairs. He reached Twilight's room and set the unicorn on her bed.

"Hope she forgets the part about me knocking her unconsious." Thought Comet tail.

Comet tail looked around the room. He noticed a picture frame on the wall. Comet tail decided to take a closer look. In the picture was a blue stallion and a grey mare.

"Must be Mr Sparkle and Velvet." Muttered Comet tail.

Comet never met Twilight's parents, however Comet's mother was good friends with Twilights mom, Twilight Velvet.

"Should get going." Thought Comet tail.

Comet tail walked down the stairs and walked out the front door. He didnt get far until a realization hit him.

"I just knocked Twilight Unconscious." Thought Comet tail.

The unicorn looked back at the library, worried.

"Please dont hate me."

Comet tail needed to talk to somepony. He ran towards the home of the only pony who knew about his feelings toward the purple unicorn.

Caramel.


Lets hope Twilight doesn't hold a grudge.

Yeah. If you didnt hear, Im going to be updating less. Ive been picked to write the script for a Slenderman fanmovie.

But i will still try to make at least one more chapter this month.

Right in front of you will be updated once i get this story to the point where Comet tail sees Caramel run off.

And there will be surprises in the next few chapters.

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