With The Best Intentions

Now, i have a few things for the even fewer who read this story.

1. I am planning on rewriting this, working on my showing and not telling, to see how far ive come. It is the same story but with more details.
   
2. Now, be serious, Who would like another story related to this? I intended for this to be a one shot, but i had an idea that grew too big to not use, turst me, it will be more than two ponies running away from a pursuer.