What happens when I get bored and decide to World Hop

WOOBELEH! Hi all, 7x9000 here. This is just a side thing for me to do, hope you enjoy.

Note: Almost everything will be OOC.

     It was just another day in Ponyville. Everypony was happy and nothing bad was going on. That was true, until a giant vortex appeared in the sky and tons of strange cratures popped out. One looked like a Dragon, but had a strange upper body. It's upper body looked like an dragon that stood on two legs, and its lower body was feral. The other one was the same, but was a Fox of some kind. The strange thing was that the fox had large, white feathered wings.

   "Where are we now?" The dragon-creature said.

   "I DON'T KNOW, BRENT!" The fox-creature said.

   "WHY ARE WE YELLING?!" Dragon-creature.

   "I DON'T KNOW, WHY ARE THERE PONIES?" Fox-creature.

   "TO THAT FOREST" The dragon-creature said, pointing to the Everfree.

   "LET'S GO!!" The fox-creature yelled. The two creatures ran into the Everfree.

     All of the ponies stared in shock of what just happened.

   "WHAT JUST HAPPENED?" One pony yelled, causing everypony to faint.

Okay, short chapter, I know. Maybe one more short till it get's bigger chapters. If someone could proofread and give me tips, I would be very happy, message me if you want to help.  -7x9000