TeRroR iN pONyviLle

by Zh3sh1re

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 991

A thousand years aren't good for your sanity....

A man is found in Equestria during the time before Nightmare Moon. His evil was indescribable back then. Celestia locked him in the forgotten Ponyvilled Catacombs. His body were enchanted by the mysterious powers of the catacomb, and granted him unusually long life.

A thousand years aren't good for your sanity….

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-01-04 20:02:59 UTC

Out of the Darkness

"DeAtH.. ReJEcteD. NoTHInG ElsE tO eAT. MuST fINd LiGHt. NoTHinG ELsE MaTtErS. ReVEngE! MuST HaVE ReVenGe!"

His skinny arms reached upwards. Towards the only source of light. A drainage intake, probably where the water came down here when it rained.

The man it hide underneath. Evil. Pure evil.

"UrGE tO KiLl RiSINg!"

His frail body could barely stand. His sight almost gone after all the years in the dark. His eyes, permanently used to the darkness. Nothing could hide. His mismatched pupils scanned over his thousand year home. He could never get out. Not without help from the outside. He lost his sanity many years before. The only thing his mind was on right now, was revenge. He would RIP out Celestia's heart and eat it. Then he would take her intestines and skip rope with them.

Hatred was the only feeling in his black stone heart.

The sound of ponies were heard outside.

"I know right? It was so immature of her!" Lyra said.

"I mean, i was making her pancakes, and then all of the sudden shes storming out with Mrs. Cake!"

"I guess i know how you feel. I'm sure shes going to make it up to you though." Twilight said.

"Alright, i guess ill see you later. I need to go practice. See you later, OK?" Lyra said

"Alright, i guess i will." Twilight said with a smile

Lyra trotted off down the road.

Twilight sighted and sat down on a nearby park bench and closed her eyes.

She heard a faint scratching sound, followed by the words "HeLP! hElP!".

She came to her senses and looked around, still hearing the scratching sound.

"Is there anybody there?" She asked cautiously

"DoWN HeRE!" The mysterious voice said

Twilight trotted over to the drain and looked down. She couldn't see anything, but she hear a small voice say.

"HeLP mE oUT oF HerE! I dO nOt ReMEmbeR hOW lOnG i HaVE bEEn HErE!"

She lifted the drain and quickly glanced around for something to pull up the poor pony with.

Applejack slowly trotted down the road, whistling a happy tune.

"Applejack! Get over here!" Twilight called

"Hiya Twilight. Mighty fine day we got here. Why are you looking down that  drainage for?" Applejack asked curiously

"Somebody is down there! He sounds hurt!" Twilight said with panic in her voice

"Calm down there missy. Hello? Is anybody there?" Applejack called down the drain

"hElP mE!" The weak voice called

Applejack got a shocked look on her face. She remembered her rope in her saddlebag.

She reached over, opened on of them and pulled out the rope and sank it down into the darkness.

A pair of dirty... Claws? took a hold of the rope.

She looked even more shocked by this, but pulled hard upwards.

"This is way to light! A pony is much heavier than this!" She thought.

Twilight just stood there frozen as she saw the claws reach up out of the dark hole, then placing on the sides.

Applejack moved forward and grabbed his claw and pulled hard.

Twilight let out a quick scream as she saw the strange, hairless creature laying on the road. It smelled a million times worse than she ever thought a smell could smell.

The creature was out cold.

"What the hay do you think it is?" Applejack said with a confused look on her face

"I have no idea, but it looks like it haven't eaten in weeks. We should bring it to a doctor." Twilight responded

Applejack put the weird creature on his back and began walking off towards the Ponyville Clinic, with Twilight walking beside her.

A few minutes later they were at the Clinic. The doctor nearly had a heart attack when she saw the strange creature, but she quickly regained her composure and told them to lay it in one of the hospital beds.

Applejack nodded and lay the creature down on one of the beds and pulling the covers over it, leaving only the head exposed.

Applejack and Twilight backed up and looked as the strange dirty creature continued to sleep.

"I have to ask you to leave so it can rest." The doctor said

"Of course" Twilight said and trotted off with Applejack behind her.

Many Hours Later

His eyes slowly opened. He pressed himself out of the bed and looked around. A scalpel was sitting on a medical tray beside his bed. He grabbed it and slowly opened the door out to the corridor. He didn't see anything, so he walked out the door, closing it behind him. He reached the end of the corridor, and looked around the corner. The young doctor mare was reading a book while facing a window.

He hid his footsteps as he snook up behind the mare. His hand with the scalpel was shaking.

He quickly grabbed the poor mares head who screamed in fear. His other hand reached around and slit her throat.

Her voice became a gurgling sound more than a scream.

"fIRsT bLOoD!" he whispered into her ear before he took the scalpel and did another cut, which cut of her entire head.

He threw away the head into the wall and did a fine cut over her stomach, letting her intestines pour out.

He grabbed one of them and quickly bit into it, getting blood all over his mouth and already dirty clothes. He chewed happily while getting a smile on his face for the first time in a thousand years.

A/U

I know this story is VERY sick. I almost choked while writing it. Again, give me critique so i can better my fics. Also, I'm not some sort of sicko. I just wanted to see if i could write another kind of fic than the one I'm writing currently. I will also be not continuing on this because it made me VERY sick. So cheers.