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When the Silent Fall

by The Doctor Who
Shuur 'Makhanee was a Spec op, get in kill everything, get out. This was not the case as he finds himself on a different planet inhabited by colorful ponies. Now what?

The mission was simple, take a base on Reach, make sure the humans did not reclaim it, and wait for pick up. Shuur'Makhanee found it was not so simple. After receiving a knife to his brain, Shuur wakes up In a forest unlike any of which he had seen, that also comes equipped with a new undiscovered species, and the problem of contact with home. Now he must live in this world, and make some friends doing so.

But, earlier that day, the Cutie Mark Crusaders where out to get their cutie marks as forest mappers when they stumbled upon a funny looking red shiny thing. It turns out that it can talk, is a warrior, and can turn invisible at will. Unfortunately, they still did not receive their cutie marks, but made an alien friend instead. Which they decided was good enough; now what to do with it is another story.

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Teen
Complete
Slice of Life
Alternate Universe
Human
Crossover
 

33004 words: Estimated about 3 hours to read

8 Chapters:

  1. Chapter one - Planetary Problem 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2420
  2. Chapter two - Thing in the barn 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2404
  3. Chapter three - friendship for the un-educated 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2728
  4. Chapter four - Bigger problems 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    5097
  5. Chapter five - long day 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    3424
  6. Chapter six - battle of the gods. 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    3878
  7. Chapter seven - Awake 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    8904
  8. Chapter 8 - A day in the life of an alien. 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    4149