Good deeds never goes unpunished

by Leouch

Rating: teen
Tags: Comedy, Tragedy, Slice of Life, Human
Length: 1959

I'm not normal per say but i don't think i belong in a world of magical talking ponies.

I have a few weird things about me but who doesn't? It all started when i went to pick things up for my friends and i stop to help someone i thought was hurt. Well a good deed can't go unpunished i guess. But me and my bunny Usa chan ended up some place where there's magic, monsters, and rainbow ponies. i just hope they have lots of candy here.

this is my first try at a fan fic like ever. i hope at least a few people will find it and enjoy it.
thank you for reading!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-11-04 00:20:01 UTC

Well didn't think that would happen

{{{Authors notes. well this is my first attempt at a fanfic. i hope some people will enjoy it! please point out anything wrong with it and i will try to fix it. i am looking for an editor if anyone would like to help me. i will say though I'm not much of a grammar person so please forgive me. enjoy!}}}

So today was an awesome day so far! It’s Saturday and I’m at Anime Boston. My friends and I got an awesome hotel room for it and everything. I’m cosplaying as Honey Chan from Ouran high school host club. My best friend Dylan is cosplaying as Kyoya Otori while my friend mike is dressed as Ritsu Kasanoda and the last member of the cosplayers is Moria who cosplayed as Haruhi Fujioka. We also had two others but they were lame and did match with me and the others. Joel being the first dressed as Edward Elric from full metal alchemist and the other being

Jerry who was too lazy to cosplay at all.

We had our usual contest of who can get the most hugs. And it seems for the 5th year in a row I will win again. I have panhypopituitarism or in simpler terms I’m going to look like as if I am 12 for the rest of my life. I’m naturally blonde so I fit the part of Honey quite well. The only thing that doesn’t match up with me and him is the fact I have purple eyes and my lack of monstrous strength.

I was sitting down talking with some girls over some chocolate cake when my friend Dylan shows up and says “Hey Lulu can you do me and others a favor?”

“Sure what do you need?” I always wondered what got my parents to name me such a weird name I mean I have enough weird things about me already.

“Well you know the gaming store across the bridge?”

“Yeah…” I didn't like where this was going.

“Well there a sale going on, everything 50% off, well I and the others want you to go get a bunch of stuff for us. Here’s the money and the list of stuff we want.” Dylan said with a shit eating grin.

“Oh come on why can’t you guys go instead of sending me like a delivery boy to get it!?” I said with great frustration.

“Well we have our schedule full for today and I know that you cleared yours for today to just walk around and do random things and  well this is a random thing.” Dylan said while still smiling. How I wanted to just kidney punch him and make him piss himself. Heh. See if he’s still smiling after that.

“What do I get out of this? I mean you know I hate walking alone in the city.” I knew I wasn’t getting out of this but I might as well see if I can get something for my trouble.

“I knew you’d do something like this so we have a little bit extra. 200$ to be precise, after all we are saving a lot of money because this deal.” He said while passing me a big wag of cash.

“Fiiiiine I’ll do it. But you guys better not just use this as an easy chance of getting ahead of me in the hug contest.” I smiled because I knew Dylan hated that I always won.

I choked down the last of my cake and apologized to the girls that I had to go but they seemed to understand and said thanks for the cake then hugged me and went their separate ways.

I went to my room to get two backpacks to carry various things I’ll be getting from the store. As I cleared the bags of all my cloths I grabbed one of Dylan’s bags as well. I stuffed his bag full to the brim with my candy.

“Well it’s just you and me Usa Chan.” I pouted as I opened the door to go. When I stepped outside I felt how cold it was and was beginning to believe it was a huge mistake not packing my big fluffy coat with me. So in order to heat myself up I hugged Usa hard and began running. Now when it comes to running I can run fast and for long periods of time. I was tempted to join the track team but went against it as it wasn’t really my style.

I got to the store in about 45 minutes. I went in and got what was on the list. It was just Dungeons and Dragons stuff like a few pathfinder book sets. When I left the store I have to admit the stuff was heavy as hell. So before embarking on the journey back I went to a candy store that was next to the place.

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Now I’m going to be honest here. I think I may have a problem with my sweet tooth because after leaving the play I had 3 huge bag of candy, 15.2 pounds worth of candy. I left the shop and I realized the trip back was going to be hell for me but the candy will be worth it! I mean the nice lady who ran the store helped me with all the stuff I had by getting some rope from the back and fasting all the bags on me so I would be like a human pack mule. The candy bag was on the front so I could grab some candy when I wanted and Usa is in the bag with his head popped up.

“Well Usa we’re going to have a huge candy banquet! None of those meanies that made us come here will get any of it.” I said to Usa.

When I found Ouran high school host club I fell in love with honey chan. I seemed to have his mind set a lot. It also improved my social life by a lot. I became the cute younger brother of all the girls when I was in high school.

As I was walking along the bridge I saw a guy sitting against the rails and he seemed to be in bad shape. So I made my way over to him as fast as I could, which by the way in my pack mule form is not that fast. As I got to he seemed to be breathing hard.

“What’s wrong? Do you need help? Want me to call an ambulance for you?” I always try to help people out when I can because it’s just the right thing to do.

“…run…” he mumbled something but I didn’t quite here it.

“What? Do you want me to get the ambulance?” I asked while pulling out my cell. I got up and walked over to the opposite rails while talking to the cops. When I was told they would be here in about 10-15 minutes I heard the man give off a blood curdling scream.

“I’ll KILL YOU! I’m going to CUT you up and add you with the others!” he was screaming as he got up to charge me.

I did what any normal person would do in that situation. I ran. I ran as fast as I could. But with all this stuff on me he was gaining on me quick. I took a quick glance behind me and I noticed he had a huge knife in his left hand. He thrust the knife at me and it hit my shoulder. I screamed in pain and fell on the ground.

But what happened next seemed like the heavens were saving me. I was sliding on a patch of ice quite fast. I was so happy because I thought I was going to live! Until I looked ahead and saw the end of the path before it turns to the left and goes up the stairs. I on the other hand never made it to those stairs of life. Instead I slipped off the edge of the bridge. Right under the guard rails I went.

As I fell it seemed my life flashed before my eyes. Only really the good things and the bad things I did. It felt as though the world was moving in slow motion. When the trip down memory lane ended things seemed to go back in to their normal tempo. I just couldn't believe that I was going to die for trying to help someone out. Kind of fucked up when you think about it. I guess it’s the world we lived in Usa chan.

As I neared the ground I thought I saw a huge rainbow. ‘He he he I’m about to die and I see a rainbow.’ The memory of when me and my mom used to go out in the rain just to see the rainbow come back to me and I just couldn't help but ask like when I was a crybaby ‘Please save me mommy’ as I hit the ground.

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Total darkness is all I see around me. I felt paralyzed as I couldn't move. Then the thought came to me what if this is the afterlife? What if you had to just float around forever with whatever killed you? I started to freak out. Is this all that there is? Am I truly alone forever? I just couldn't hold back now. ‘Mommy please save me! Please save me mommy! Please save me mommy! Please save me mommy! Please save me mommy! Please save me mommy!’ until I heard something.

“Oh my… what happened here?” A random voice said.

With all my will power I was able to force out just the last thing that just kept looping in my head over and over again.

“…Please Save me mommy” I let out.

I heard a gasp as I was taken into nothingness.

All I could feel was being taken by something soft and warm. I thought to myself maybe this was an angel guiding my soul to the afterlife.

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Fluttershy a very kind hearted but quite timid Pegasus was walking back to her home when she saw something fall from the sky. The timid yellow Pegasus was a little scared but went to go see what in case an animal was hurt.

As she approached the area she saw all the animals gathered around something. She quickly rushed over there thinking an animal might be badly injured. what she saw horrified her. A small creature that looked like a monkey with clothing and sacks tide on it but that’s not what made her feel slightly sick to her stomach. What made her sick was the fact that it was badly injured. It seemed to have its arms broken and a lot of blood was accumulating around the creature.

“Oh my… what happened here?” she said wondering how this happened.

She noticed that something else seemed to be on this creature. As she took a closer look what she saw made her heart ache. It was a stuffed pink bunny that had its arms around its neck as if it was hugging the creature. She also noticed that the creature seemed to look very young.

“…Please Save me mommy” the creature weakly let out.

Fluttershy was in complete shock. This thing was in fact a child and it could speak. She immediately rushed towards it and carefully got it on her back with the help of her animal friends. Her motherly instincts taking over and she ignored how heavy this animal was. She just had one strong thought as she carried him. ‘I will protect you no matter what.’